[Approved] Getsuga Takeshi

[wonderwho]

ok. and the jutsu, when can I learn them?
Do u think the story is good enof?

sorry for the grammatical errors, im portuguese...

 

[wonderwho]

like that? and how can I insert a utube video?

 

[Dean Kaguya]

to make things easier, copy and paste the code "Coyote Starrk", posted in the 1st page

 

[Phantoz Uchiha]

wrong sec

 

[wonderwho]

wrong sec

how can it be in the wrong section?

 

[Zenryoku]

Add picture, and second element being chuunin rank, then add more information to the background history

 

[wonderwho]

I cant think of more story to it. Is the story that bad?

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

thanks but im thinking about my story yet...





If my bio doesnt got aproved then i can edit it to try again?

I was being sarcastic lol. What i was trying to point out to you is that the Appearance of your character isn't good enough. We should be able to picture your character in our minds the way you do. Pictures help alot

 

[wonderwho]

I was being sarcastic lol. What i was trying to point out to you is that the Appearance of your character isn't good enough. We should be able to picture your character in our minds the way you do. Pictures help alot

but its okay now?

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

but its okay now?

That's for the Mods to decidebut IMO i say it's a good improvement from your last attempt.

 

[wonderwho]

so whats up? aproved or not?

 

[wonderwho]

hey, there is no edit button... why?