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The third form is the complete control over every chakra point of your body: if you gain enough chakra mastery, you'll be able to release chakra from all chakra points of your body. With this knowledge you'll be able to release chakra burst not only from your palms, but from every part of your body (being so that extremities will always be easier to be controlled).
Once you've gained control over your chakra points, you can release chakra from all of them at once. If you spin, you will be able to create a chakra barrier that will protect you from physical invasions. Applying chakra control you can make it more sharp or more thick, etc.
The techniques are:
(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Typeefence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation
Rank: C
Typeefence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.
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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.
Once you've mastered those techniques, you'll be able to create more localized burst of chakra, like you did in the First Form, but releasing the chakra from other parts of your body, besides your hands.
So you can punch someone and release a burst of chakra, and then retract your arm and strike with your elbow backwards, releasing another chakra burst. The same with your ankles and knees. Eventually all parts of your body will be able to repel someone physically. If someone touches your back, you can send a chakra burst to repel the hand. The stronger you are, the stronger the bursts are.
Once you've gained control over your chakra points, you can release chakra from all of them at once. If you spin, you will be able to create a chakra barrier that will protect you from physical invasions. Applying chakra control you can make it more sharp or more thick, etc.
The techniques are:
(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Typeefence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation
Rank: C
Typeefence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.
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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.
Once you've mastered those techniques, you'll be able to create more localized burst of chakra, like you did in the First Form, but releasing the chakra from other parts of your body, besides your hands.
So you can punch someone and release a burst of chakra, and then retract your arm and strike with your elbow backwards, releasing another chakra burst. The same with your ankles and knees. Eventually all parts of your body will be able to repel someone physically. If someone touches your back, you can send a chakra burst to repel the hand. The stronger you are, the stronger the bursts are.
Cool! These are so cool for so many reasons. I always believe those rotation ones (the kaitens) were higher ranked. Shame.
Anwywho... These bursts of blunt chakra are strong as what? a direct full strength Strong Fist Punch? Meaning that this form does external damage instead of internal one right?
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(I'm copy pasting most steps of this training from an old training thread. It is possible that some techniques have been updated. xD Check the Jutsu List xd)
And nope, they're exactly the same as the ones we did for the first Form, remember the first part of the training, right? They are as strong as a punch, as strong of a punch as your character can punch, but they are inflicted directly to the internal organs. It produces little to no damage externally, unless the technique states otherwise, but usually, even the techniques that burst through walls are more like collapsing the wall from within.
Of course, if you punch someone, and in addition to that you use gentle fist, you will cause damage both internal and external.
Let's put this to march. I want you to create 3 different and long combos, using whatever you wan (1st Form (Palm Strikes), 2nd Form (Finger Razor Blade) and 3rd Form (Heavenly Rotation, Elbow Strikes, Knee Strikes, Fist Strikes, Headbutts, Etc).
*Creates 3 clones*
Ok...lets see if i got this right!
*I charge at the first clone and side step at him, facing him from my Left, doing a half rotation to the left while holding my right palm low, targeting his lower abdomen, right above his pelvic belt. As i touch him i release a burst of blunt chakra into his abdomen, contracting his intestinal track with such strength that he immediately gasps for air and leans forward in pain as his guts are bruised and bleeding internally. As you lean forward, i use my enhanced agility and speed to use my Left hand in an upwards fast but light trust, creating a small blade of chakra with my index and middle fingers. I hit very shallowly your jaw from below, inserting my chakra into the base of your cranium, disrupting your chakra flow in your skull, blocking most of your senses and numbing your mouth. As you are skill close to me i rotate to the Left only to deliver a double palm thrust into your upper chest, channeling a burst of chakra through your torax and chakra system, bruising your lungs and sending you backwards*
One down.
*I charge at the second clone and focus my targeting on the tenketsu on his upper body and abdomen, and, with blades formed into my index and middle fingers in both my arms. I start by doing quick jabs on his shoulders, pectoral muscles, abs and end only slightly above his pelvic belt. I hit all tenketsu within that area in a downwards sweep of a total of 20 jabs (10 with each hand, one at a time) closing and opening tenketsu randomly. As i end this and with the clone unable to mold chakra properly, i focus chakra into my right palm and do a strong palm thrust into the middle of his torax, targeting his heart. As i insert chakra into his body, it compresses and bruises his heart directly while overloading his chakra network and making chakra poor from the opened tenketsu, burning its way out. The clone is left with his heart beating randomly and incapable of properly work*
Two down
*My other clone decides to defend himself and throws a barrage of shuriken and kunais at me. Noticing them with my ample vision, i start pooring chakra from all my tenketso and do a strong rotation, creating a dome of raw chakra around me, that acts as a shield, protecting me from the weapons while carving a small crater on the ground. As the rotation is going i insert more chakra into it, increasing its diameter until the clone is caught in it. As he's send flying backwards i end the rotation and jump to him, caughting up to him in mid air above him. As he's closer to the ground, i do a simple palm thrust while focusing chakra and releasing it. Even without touching him, the release of chakra has the same effect as a blunt punch, sending him slamming towards the ground while i do a flip to land only a few cms away*
There...i think they're all decent. ^^
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They're decent, but the first 2 only use the 2nd and the 3rd form. You're being judge on the 3rd form, remember that. But I did like them, of course.
You will, unfortunately, have to repeat.
(Btw, I've dropped all of my students, I'm just posting here because your training is almost finished (And because my method of teaching Byakugan is simple as hell)
You will, unfortunately, have to repeat.
(Btw, I've dropped all of my students, I'm just posting here because your training is almost finished (And because my method of teaching Byakugan is simple as hell)
Right! I'll repeat those two!
*I face the clone and i do a rotation to my left lowering and delivering a low sliding leg sweep to his right leg, knocking him over his feet and continuing my rotation i quickly pick up speed and release large amounts of chakra from all of my tenketsu, creating a barrier dome of spining chakra that sends him flying backwards. As he falls on his back in the ground i already finished the rotation and i'm runing towards him, facing him from above. I charge chakra into my Left open palm and target his middle-left upper chest, delivering a powerfull palm trust that releases such a massive burts of chakra into his body that his heart (my initial target) stops in shock.*
*I face the other clone and run towards him at full speed, using my nehanced vision to set my eyes on all my targets and coming up with my move. I face him and deliver a jab to his troat with my left hand, creating a thin blade of chakra between my middle and index fingers. This is done more to take his focus away from my main move but also if it connects, it will bruise his traquea internally, leaving him gasping for air and in severe pain and distress. As he reacts to my jab i charge chakra into my left knee and deliver a hit into his right abdomen. This hit charges chakra into his gut, brusing his intestinal track and his kidney. The moment he's hit i retract it and prepare for a counter move, taking a step backwards and charging chakra into my right foot, delivering a full right foot stomp on his middle chest, releasing such a burst of chakra that his lungs flood with blood and contract themselves, leaving him unable to breath and eventually without senses.*
How were those ^^
*I face the clone and i do a rotation to my left lowering and delivering a low sliding leg sweep to his right leg, knocking him over his feet and continuing my rotation i quickly pick up speed and release large amounts of chakra from all of my tenketsu, creating a barrier dome of spining chakra that sends him flying backwards. As he falls on his back in the ground i already finished the rotation and i'm runing towards him, facing him from above. I charge chakra into my Left open palm and target his middle-left upper chest, delivering a powerfull palm trust that releases such a massive burts of chakra into his body that his heart (my initial target) stops in shock.*
*I face the other clone and run towards him at full speed, using my nehanced vision to set my eyes on all my targets and coming up with my move. I face him and deliver a jab to his troat with my left hand, creating a thin blade of chakra between my middle and index fingers. This is done more to take his focus away from my main move but also if it connects, it will bruise his traquea internally, leaving him gasping for air and in severe pain and distress. As he reacts to my jab i charge chakra into my left knee and deliver a hit into his right abdomen. This hit charges chakra into his gut, brusing his intestinal track and his kidney. The moment he's hit i retract it and prepare for a counter move, taking a step backwards and charging chakra into my right foot, delivering a full right foot stomp on his middle chest, releasing such a burst of chakra that his lungs flood with blood and contract themselves, leaving him unable to breath and eventually without senses.*
How were those ^^
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Normal ninja.Yes i did mistress...
One only: when its not activated, which is the vision field of the Byakugan eyes? = to that of a normal ninja? I never understood that one ^^