[Gentle Fist Training] Foxnaruto

[Scorps]

Hum, thats an average move. From what i'm seeing you'd be best training harder in visualization and reading through other trainings.

I'll exemplify *i make two clones*

Hey sexys!!!

*Creates 2 clones. As i approach my first clone i'm charging chakra into my Left Palm and focusing strength into my whole left arm, unleashing a lower open palm hit into the Left Upper Quadrant of the Abdomen, releasing chakra into the body of the clone. This would bruise the spleen and pancreas, which are easily bruisable and fragile, leaving the clone with an internal bleeding. As i stroke this area, the clone instinctively curves forward. As he does this i already anticipated it and i focused chakra into my Right Palm but this time i aim for the throat, delivering a Palm Thrust directly into the throat and releasing chakra into it. As i do this, the carotid arteries and traquea are severely bruised internally, blocking the passage of blood to the brain and the passage of air to the lungs*

Ohh...clone puffed already!

*I face the other clone and rush to him at full speed. As i'm approaching him i slide into his feet, knocking him into the air. As i slide beneath him i trust my left hand into the ground, getting up, while spinning to the left, and thrusting my Right Palm to deliver a strong palm thrust into the clone. As i get him from behind i actually aim at the lower back region which would now be exposed. By releasing my chakra into him on point of contact i bruise and fracture the kidneys of the clone, leaving him in pain, internally bleeding and with toxins and fluids quickly building on his body, poisoning from within. This would make him fall to the ground flat face. As he is on the ground i focus chakra into my legs to jump above the clone while focusing chakra into my left hand which i have retracted into a lower position. As i descent upon the clone i aim for the middle of his back. I strike him with a strong palm slam that releases a large amount of chakra into his spinal cord. This conducts itself through his nervous system leaving him paralyzed, numbed, unable to move (in a tetraplegic state) and gasping for air as his voluntary muscles are unable to expand and contract his lungs perfectly, leaving his breathing shallow and ineffective. Another side effect is the stimulation of the lower vagus nerve which leads to low heart rate and low blood pressure, losing to lost of conscience*

Hum...did you understand it?


You mustn't forget to make sure that your blows don't cut, that your blows affect large areas, etc.


Anyway, you can aim for the heart and lungs directly, collapsing lungs, causing hearts to stop. And you can also hit the brain, causing a butt load of effects but the most efficiently being instant knock-out.

Moving on, this are the technique that employ this 1st Form. I'm teaching you like this because the combos you just did can be achieved with description alone, you don't need any technique, thus conserving the 3 Jutsus per battle. The techniques will allow you to enhance the power of your strikes in order to run through higher ranked jutsus.

List time:

But this actual jutsus use this same form:

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(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their heart.

Use this by palming the heart and releasing your chakra.

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

Use this by throwing several palm strikes at your opponent. You can aim anywhere you want, by describing your movements correctly.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.

This will work similarly, but it projects the punch. It will do more external damage than internal damage, as it is mainly to blow your opponents away, yet areas like the neck, the belly, the sternum, the face, etc are tender areas and will still cause damage, even with external damage. (Such as asphyxiation, blindness, etc)

(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.

Use this with palm strikes and you'll have a clear path to the kidneys, the lungs and the back of the head (occipital ridge/brain)

(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.

Emty Palms, palm strikes, it's the same thing. Btw, a burst of fire of empty palms doesn't mean you palms catch fire, so don't even think about using this jutsu to burn your opponents.

(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style: White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high-speed strikes before charging they chakra into their hands and releasing it in a burst.

Use palm strikes for the series, and then final blow with more chakra, to affect several organs at once and blow your opponent backwards.

(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may jump from a high distance and palm the foe continually until all chakra points blast.

Same thing...

(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike with a powerful hit with their palm.

(Hakke Saikou Kaze) – Eight Trigrams Ultimate Wind
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user will strike the enemy with Eight Trigrams Empty Palm three times, sending them crashing into a plateau of stone, before using it again to collapse the plateau onto the enemy.

(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralyze an opponent.

Same thing...

(Hakke Hazangeki) - 8 Trigrams Mountain Crusher
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A(+65 if used as an attack)
Description: An up close attack were the user pushes a huge amount of chakra into there opponents body that destroys the internal organs and can level any wall.

(Hakke Kūhekishō) - Eight Trigrams Air Wall Palm
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A variant of the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm. Where two gentle fist users attack alongside each other sending a wave of chakra from their palms with great force.
Note: Can be used with a clone to make the second user.

Same thing, just more powerful. Remember if you touch the opponent, no matter the characteristic of the technique, it will affect the opponent internally (and may also affect externally). If you don't touch, it will most likely only affect externally.

(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

You know where all the gates are? Tell me.

(Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms two large lion-shaped shrouds of chakra around their hands, then thrusts them forwards at the opponent in a spinning motion to confuse and throw off the opponents aim before striking them.

(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.

(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.

This are all basically the same as others above, just more flashy and more powerful. Btw, draining the chakra means your opponents' chakra is cut short, it doesn't mean you suck them like Zetsu.

(Hakke Hazan Hogeki) – Eight Trigrams Crumbling Mountain Crusher
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user strikes the enemies vital area whiles discharging chakra within the enemies body until it bursts from his back into the form of a small thin beam that rapidly enlarges into a massive mountain-destroying wave of chakra.

Nice, eh?

Most are the same basic principle. Your free form palm strikes can be considered D and C ranks and you can perform them in free form to avoid spending a move. Or you can do them by spending a move, using the more complex ways. Up to you.


Questions? ^^

 

[Lysander]

No questions.Yeah they are nice
So i guess you can use like 6 moves but only three count as jutsu since the rest are advanced free form?

Gate 1 in the brain
Gate 2 in the Brain
Gate 3 in the Spinal cord
Gate 4 in the Spinal cord again
Gate 5 in the Abdomen Just above middle of stomach
Gate 6 in the Stomach
Gate 7 just below stomach
The last gate.Gate eight in the heart.

 

[Scorps]

No questions.Yeah they are nice
So i guess you can use like 6 moves but only three count as jutsu since the rest are advanced free form?

Gate 1 in the brain
Gate 2 in the Brain
Gate 3 in the Spinal cord
Gate 4 in the Spinal cord again
Gate 5 in the Abdomen Just above middle of stomach
Gate 6 in the Stomach
Gate 7 just below stomach
The last gate.Gate eight in the heart.

you misunderstood me. You can use free form Gentle Fist like we are doing, describing everything, using palm strikes and etc and it won't spend a move from your 3 however, the maximum strenght of these free form moves is C-Rank/D-Rank. When you want more complex moves or to cause more damage you need to use the techniques. But its all up to you. Gentle fist allows you to use it the same basic way Strong Fist (normal taijutsu) is used, basically in free form or with preset moves.

These are the gates:

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1st Gate - Left hemisphere of the brain
2nd Gate - Right hemisphere of the brain
3rd Gate - Center of the chest
4th Gate - Center line below the 3rd gate
5th Gate - Center line below the 4th gate (top of solar plexus area)
6th Gate - Center line below the 5th gate (bottom of solar plexus area)
7th Gate - Center line below the 6th gate (near the waist)
8th Gate - Left side of the chest (located in the heart)

Now, Second Gentle Fist Form: Needle Strike/Razor Chakra.

Now you will focus chakra on your hands, but instead of releasing it all at once through the palm, I want you to keep releasing it steadily through your ring and index fingertips. I want you to create a tiny but sharp chakra knife from your fingers. With this form, your chakra will be more localized, and thus will have more physical power. It will be able to cut through the skin, though harmlessly, and affect the Chakra Points inside which you can see with your Byakugan. With this technique, you will not be able to affect organs, but you will be able to aim for thin nerves and veins, especially in weak parts of the body such as the inside of the elbow, the wrists, the armpits, etc.

I want you to imagine that an opponent is throwing all his weight into a right hook. I want you to lean to the left, to dodge his fist, and hit his wrist with your chakra knife. Then step forward and hit his arm pit as you place yourself behind his right shoulder, and then I want you to slam your palm on the back of your head.

You know the drill, I want to know the exact nerves you're aiming for (and area on the brain), and the consequences of such hits. You can compliment this move with a couple of knife fingers to the chakra points around his arm and shoulder, to close the chakra system of his right arm.

 

[Lysander]

*I hold out my ring and index fingers on both hands and create a fist with the other fingers so just them two are pointing out.I then channel my chakra into the ends of my finger tips making the chakra on the end sharper and thinner so i will be able to hit pin point locations.As i see your clone pulling his arm back getting ready to right hook me i predict his movement quicker due to my byakugan and lean to the left.As the punch just misses me i use my right hand and two fingers and thrust them straight up aimed at your clones wrist.When i strike his cephalic vein and his median vain on the back of his wrist.Ihen quickly follow up and strike his artery/his radial collateral.Due to me striking all of these point and one of the main artery in his arm it would stop chakra flow to the hand.It would also stop the chakra flow since i aimed for the two veins sending the chakra flow to the hand.Also since i hit the artey it would also affect his blood flow and cause allot of main and cause blood to spew out.As i strike his wrist and arm i step forward and use my left hand and fingers and strike his cephallic just above the arm pit followed by me using the momentum of bringing my right hand forward from after striking his wrist i strike his Brachail under the arm pit which is a main artery again causing alot of pain and stopping the blood flow and causing him to bleed.After i have striked these points i bring my right leg behind the clone and swing my left one around to which spins me around behind his right shoulder.As i am behind him i open up my right palm and channel chakra onto my palm and slam my palm on the occiptal on the center of the back of the head causing him to lean forward and also adding pressure to the brain and almost knocking him out.As he leans forward i open my palm on my left hand and strike the side of his head hitting his temple knocking him out.

summary:I hit his veins in his wrist then arm then striking arterys in his arm pit.I then spin around him and strike the centre of the back of his head and then the temple.

 

[Scorps]

*I hold out my ring and index fingers on both hands and create a fist with the other fingers so just them two are pointing out.I then channel my chakra into the ends of my finger tips making the chakra on the end sharper and thinner so i will be able to hit pin point locations.As i see your clone pulling his arm back getting ready to right hook me i predict his movement quicker due to my byakugan and lean to the left.As the punch just misses me i use my right hand and two fingers and thrust them straight up aimed at your clones wrist.When i strike his cephalic vein and his median vain on the back of his wrist.Ihen quickly follow up and strike his artery/his radial collateral.Due to me striking all of these point and one of the main artery in his arm it would stop chakra flow to the hand.It would also stop the chakra flow since i aimed for the two veins sending the chakra flow to the hand.Also since i hit the artey it would also affect his blood flow and cause allot of main and cause blood to spew out.As i strike his wrist and arm i step forward and use my left hand and fingers and strike his cephallic just above the arm pit followed by me using the momentum of bringing my right hand forward from after striking his wrist i strike his Brachail under the arm pit which is a main artery again causing alot of pain and stopping the blood flow and causing him to bleed.After i have striked these points i bring my right leg behind the clone and swing my left one around to which spins me around behind his right shoulder.As i am behind him i open up my right palm and channel chakra onto my palm and slam my palm on the occiptal on the center of the back of the head causing him to lean forward and also adding pressure to the brain and almost knocking him out.As he leans forward i open my palm on my left hand and strike the side of his head hitting his temple knocking him out.

summary:I hit his veins in his wrist then arm then striking arterys in his arm pit.I then spin around him and strike the centre of the back of his head and then the temple.

This is close but i need a bit more refinement before we can proceed. Remember, you aim for minor things such as nerves or vessels but you don't sever them completely, you only injure them. For example, if you target a blood vessel, you'd compromise the blood flow of the affected area, making the enemys movements slower while he experiences great pain. To actually hit chakra flow and produce that effect you need to open or close tenketsu and/or hit the chakra flow itself.

With this method you can open a tenketsu, close a tenketsu and/or produce damage to tissue.

If you open a tenketsu, chakra flows out of it. If you close it, chakra can't flow through it.

I'm going to explain something that most people don't understand and i think you might not have been explained this.

When you perform ninjutsu, it has 2 steps: Focusing and Molding your chakra.

Focusing is willing a portion of your chakra to gather and separate (in a manner of speaking) from your main chakra in order for you to mold it. Your chakra flows passively, without conscious control of your part. However, to use it you need for will it to do something. Its like breathing. You can breathe without consciously thinking "inhale, exhale, inhale" however, if you want to dive underwater you need to hold your breathe and thus your brain takes control of that and halts the breathing.

After you've focused some of your chakra, you mold it. Now, this molding of chakra is done as you release it from your body. This release is done through your tenketsu. As the chakra poors you can mold it without or without the aid of hand seals (according to your rank, mastery of the element, the technique itself, etc etc), making it take the form and nature you want to produce the technique.

Now, taking tenketsu into the main issue here, you voluntarily and willingly open your tenketsu to produce techniques. Because its your will, you won't damage yourself. However, if you do it forcefully to your enemy, the chakra will burst out uncontrollably and will damage the tissues as they come out from the tenketsu.

One thing we can do is open and close tenketsu at random on an arm for example, and them do a final palm strike inserting copious amounts of chakra in your enemies chakra flow, making an overload that makes chakra burst from the open tenketsu, damaging him.

Now, questions? Try one more combo. Also, please try and make it a bit easier to read. lol

 

[Lysander]

Sorry most of the time when i reply to your training its on my ipod.Its not easy to write on it xd.One quick question i know the concept of opening tenketsu but you can open yours if they were blocked by a gentle fist user right?.I thought this since neji blocked all of Narutos in the chunnin exams but since he had the Kurama chakra he released a sudden burst of chakra.But was this because it was the foxes chakra not his.

*I hold out my ring and index fingers on both hands and create a fist with the other fingers so just them two are pointing out.I then channel my chakra into the ends of my finger tips making the chakra on the end sharper and thinner so i will be able to hit pin point locations.As i see your clone pulling his arm back getting ready to right hook me i predict his movement quicker due to my byakugan and lean to the left.

As the punch just misses me i use my right hand and two fingers and thrust them straight up aimed at your clones wrist.When i strike his cephalic vein and his median vain on the back of his wrist.Ihen quickly follow up and strike his Brachial vain just next to it hitting some of the main nerves at the arm.As soon as i have strike these points i step forward with my left foot and use my left hand in the same position as the right and aim for his cepahlic vein.

As i strike this vain i quickly bring my right leg forward and with my right hand still in the same positon strike his Right Innominate Vein.As soon as i strike all these points i have targeted some of his main chakra points restricting chakra throughout his right arm fully

As soon as i strike the last point i swing my right leg around the back of your clone and let the momentum of the swing carry the left one positioning me directly behind the clone.I then open up both of my palm fully and use my left palm and strike the back of his head in the centre releasing chakra from my palm into the centre of the head.As the clone leans forward i use my right palm and strike his left temple releasing the chakra from the palm into the temple*

 

[Scorps]

Sorry most of the time when i reply to your training its on my ipod.Its not easy to write on it xd.One quick question i know the concept of opening tenketsu but you can open yours if they were blocked by a gentle fist user right?.I thought this since neji blocked all of Narutos in the chunnin exams but since he had the Kurama chakra he released a sudden burst of chakra.But was this because it was the foxes chakra not his.

*I hold out my ring and index fingers on both hands and create a fist with the other fingers so just them two are pointing out.I then channel my chakra into the ends of my finger tips making the chakra on the end sharper and thinner so i will be able to hit pin point locations.As i see your clone pulling his arm back getting ready to right hook me i predict his movement quicker due to my byakugan and lean to the left.

As the punch just misses me i use my right hand and two fingers and thrust them straight up aimed at your clones wrist.When i strike his cephalic vein and his median vain on the back of his wrist.Ihen quickly follow up and strike his Brachial vain just next to it hitting some of the main nerves at the arm.As soon as i have strike these points i step forward with my left foot and use my left hand in the same position as the right and aim for his cepahlic vein.

As i strike this vain i quickly bring my right leg forward and with my right hand still in the same positon strike his Right Innominate Vein.As soon as i strike all these points i have targeted some of his main chakra points restricting chakra throughout his right arm fully

As soon as i strike the last point i swing my right leg around the back of your clone and let the momentum of the swing carry the left one positioning me directly behind the clone.I then open up both of my palm fully and use my left palm and strike the back of his head in the centre releasing chakra from my palm into the centre of the head.As the clone leans forward i use my right palm and strike his left temple releasing the chakra from the palm into the temple*

Combo is okaish.

As for the question, what happened with naruto is different. Naruto, as a jinchuriki has 2 sources of chakra: his own and kurama's. The special seal that bound kurama inside him let kuramas chakra leak passively into him. So, although neiji blocked his tenketsu, naruto still had chakra flowing inside him: kuramas. But his tenketsu were blocked still.

You can open your tenketsu except if they are ALL closed. If someone closes all of your tenketsu you can't do ninjutsu as you can mold your chakra and you are on your way to death as chakra will now flow properly as the pathways will be closed. Now, what hyuugas can do is pressure chakra inside them and force it to come out (a technique you'll learn in a few posts) from all tenketsu. If the user had face a weaker or same rank gentle fist technique this will be enough to open all tenketsu that were closed.

Questions?

 

[Lysander]

No questions.

 

[Scorps]

No questions.

Now i wanted to explain something about the different between this "blade" you create and the Chakra Scappel technique. In essence its similar but severely toned down in both power and in size. Instead of severing the nerves and tendons, it rather injures them, achieving the same or similar results, but without being permanent, whereas chakra scapel would allow you to severe the tendons/nerves and even muscles completely, if aimed properly. This is so because the nerves and tendons are protected by muscles flesh and skin, so the tiny blade isn't enough to severe through them completely.

This technique is most suitable to hit the chakra points, injecting a little bit of chakra there to open them or close them. You do not require profound knowledge over this, nor has it been revealed in the manga, so you are allowed a certain freedom and creativity over the effects this technique does to the chakra and chakra pathway. So you can say you open a few select chakra points, without specifying much, forcing the body of your enemy to surge a blast of chakra through the arm of your opponent, which would make him loose control over a jutsu he could be holding at the moment, numbing or actually injuring his hand as the chakra bursts through the opened chakra points and damages the tissues on its way out ( Failed Chidori or Rasengan, for example). Likewise, you can close the chakra points, making such jutsus vanish and preventing or limitating your opponent from releasing chakra through that arm for a couple of turns (max 2 without a technique), and thus preventing handseals. No chakra should mean a bit of exhaustion whereas a burst of chakra would leave an uncomfortable tingling sensation, I'd say.

These can be allying to injures to the tendons and nerves, limiting movement and causing physical exhaustion, turning the arm useless.

Whoever says arm, says any other limb, it's up to your creativity.

Also, when we limit the chakra to half for example (in something techniques you'll see that) it means your opponent is limited to B-Rank, if limited to 75% it disables use of S-Rank and above, meaning that your enemy can only use up to A-Rank. Etc etc. When we speak about draining or limiting chakra on your enemy the effect is regarding to the power of Ninjutsu or Genjutsu that your enemy can use (elemental or not).

If you do not have questions, I want you to give me 2 combos with the second form only and a 3rd combo with a mixture of both forms.

 

[Lysander]

First combo
*As your clone runs towards me he raises his right leg aiming to hit me in the face.Before the kick can connect i raise my left hand and grab the leg before it hits me.I then thrust the leg around causing him to spin and land with his back turned to me.As soon as his back is turned i place three fingers out and make a fist with the rest in both hands.I then channel chakra to the tips of both of my hands and with my right hand i strike just below his right arm pit hitting the musculo cutaneus.As soon as i strike that vain i aim for the same spot of his musculo cutaneus on his left arm pit.
Second combo:
with the clones back turned to me i run up to him and his grab his left arm and lift it into the air showing all the underneath of hit.I then use my right hand and quickly strike his anasstromis of radial and ulnar followed by striking his radial deep veins and the interosseous veins right next to it.With all these vain striked most of the chakra flow would of been stopped in his right arm causing pain in his left arm the clone grabs his left arm with his right.I then spin around the clone now facing him i use my left hand and strike his internal jugular vein and bring my right hand up and strike his external vein located on the opposite side of the neck.

Third combo
As i am facing your clone i open up my whole palm in my right hand and channel chakra into my palm.I then thrust my chakra into the clones stomach hitting his abdomanol muscles by sending chakra from my palm into the muscles.With me stirking there it causes him great pain making he hold his stomach and leaning forward.Once he has leant forward i hold three fingers out in bold hands and close the rest making a fist just with the other three out.I then channel chakra into the tips of my finger and strike the external jugular vein with my right hand and then quickly hit the internal jugular vein on the other side of the neck.blocking the chakra flow*

 

[Scorps]

First combo
*As your clone runs towards me he raises his right leg aiming to hit me in the face.Before the kick can connect i raise my left hand and grab the leg before it hits me.I then thrust the leg around causing him to spin and land with his back turned to me.As soon as his back is turned i place three fingers out and make a fist with the rest in both hands.I then channel chakra to the tips of both of my hands and with my right hand i strike just below his right arm pit hitting the musculo cutaneus.As soon as i strike that vain i aim for the same spot of his musculo cutaneus on his left arm pit.
Second combo:
with the clones back turned to me i run up to him and his grab his left arm and lift it into the air showing all the underneath of hit.I then use my right hand and quickly strike his anasstromis of radial and ulnar followed by striking his radial deep veins and the interosseous veins right next to it.With all these vain striked most of the chakra flow would of been stopped in his right arm causing pain in his left arm the clone grabs his left arm with his right.I then spin around the clone now facing him i use my left hand and strike his internal jugular vein and bring my right hand up and strike his external vein located on the opposite side of the neck.

Third combo
As i am facing your clone i open up my whole palm in my right hand and channel chakra into my palm.I then thrust my chakra into the clones stomach hitting his abdomanol muscles by sending chakra from my palm into the muscles.With me stirking there it causes him great pain making he hold his stomach and leaning forward.Once he has leant forward i hold three fingers out in bold hands and close the rest making a fist just with the other three out.I then channel chakra into the tips of my finger and strike the external jugular vein with my right hand and then quickly hit the internal jugular vein on the other side of the neck.blocking the chakra flow*

Your combo was okaish. I'd grade your performance so far as a B-Rank (using our grading system)


These are the techniques that can be used if you understand the second form (you will notice that I'll repeat some of the jutsus I gave you on the first form. This means that you can describe the way you preform said techniques every way you want, choosing to use the techniques as a palm strike or a finger blade):

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(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

Instead of doing 16 palm strikes, use 16 finger thrusts. Likewise, you can mix palm strikes and finger thrusts, like the combo I made you preform.

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.

Randomly thrust your fingers on 64 chakra points.

(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.

same.

(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.

Though more efficient with palm strikes, you can also try to preform 3 finger thrusts on the shoulder or neck area, for more localized damage which would still be quite usefull. Though with palms strikes the fatality is easier and you don't have to think as hard (Back of the lungs, back of the heart, back of the head etc).

(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128 Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after the opponent is hit by it.

(Hakke Sanbyakurokujyuuisshisa) - 8 Trigrams 361 Strikes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack that closes 361 tenketsu and seals chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.

You can preform finger thrusts for the initial barrage. Or combos, of course.


(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.

Same, initial barrage can be preformed anyway you like. As in the previous technique, only the final blow must be done with the palms.

Questions? Afterwards we move to the 3rd and final form.

 

[Lysander]

Nope no queastions.

 

[Scorps]

Nope no queastions.

Right, so one more thing to add:

in our RP its not defined exactly the significance of reducing the chakra of your enemy since in our RP chakra is pretty much not counted.

However, in my opinion and lili's its more about making the enemy feel Weakness, slow handseal and jutsu making speed, it should remove the "speciality" bonus of less handseals for a certain element, etc etc. Basically any bonus the user may have in terms of chakra control and specialty. In my opinion, it should also reduce the rank one can use, such as no Forbidden and maybe S rank, but that part is a stretch, for it should prevent the opponent from using complex jutsus. Go with your reasoning.

The third form is the complete control over every chakra point of your body: if you gain enough chakra mastery, you'll be able to release chakra from all chakra points of your body. With this knowledge you'll be able to release chakra burst not only from your palms, but from every part of your body (being so that extremities will always be easier to be controlled).

Once you've gained control over your chakra points, you can release chakra from all of them at once. If you spin, you will be able to create a chakra barrier that will protect you from physical invasions. Applying chakra control you can make it more sharp or more thick, etc.

The techniques are:

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Typeefence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Typeefence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly Spin
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.

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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.

Once you've mastered those techniques, you'll be able to create more localized burst of chakra, like you did in the First Form, but releasing the chakra from other parts of your body, besides your hands.

So you can punch someone and release a burst of chakra, and then retract your arm and strike with your elbow backwards, releasing another chakra burst. The same with your ankles and knees. Eventually all parts of your body will be able to repel someone physically. If someone touches your back, you can send a chakra burst to repel the hand. The stronger you are, the stronger the bursts are.

 

[Lysander]

Okay.So they wont be able to form jutsus which have been shown to take up alot of chakra?

 

[Scorps]

its more about making the enemy feel Weakness, slow handseal and jutsu making speed, it should remove the "speciality" bonus of less handseals for a certain element, etc etc. Basically any bonus the user may have in terms of chakra control and specialty. In my opinion, it should also reduce the rank one can use, such as no Forbidden and maybe S rank, but that part is a stretch, for it should prevent the opponent from using complex jutsus. Go with your reasoning.

Self explanatory i think. There is no fixed rule about this. Questions?

 

[Lysander]

No sensei

 

[Scorps]

Right, give me one last combo that entails all of what you learned so far please. After that, and if no issues arise, you mastered Gentle Fist.

 

[Lysander]

As i see three clones which you have made all line up and face me i watch as one of the three clones run at me.As the clone gets close to me he pulls back his right arm and tries to punch me in the face.I then side step to the left and push his arm away.He know has his whole right side of his body open so i channel my chakra into my open right palm and slam my hand again his right lung.Once i have done this he leans forward from the pain so i him and spin him around so i can see his back.

Now i can see his back i make a fist but keep three fingers out and channel my chakra into those three fingers.Once i have done this i stike his occipital vein located on the back of his neck and then with my other hand making the same shape i strike his jugular vein on the other side.Once i have done this the clone poofs away.

The other two clones then begin to run at me and jump into the air and both throw ten kunai each at me.So i then focus on all the chakra points in my body and spin.While my speeds begins to increase i focus on pushing chakra from each point in my body and when the kunai hit the barrier they deflect away.

 

[Scorps]

Good to pass. You are not the best free form gentle fist user but you understand the basis. Be sure to fight using techniques (the jutsus themselves) more than using free form (description only) to make sure you use it right. You do show an above average knwolegde of how Gentle Fist can be used best in close combat and that is something you must use. You've mastered Gentle Fist. Congrats and sorry for the long wait.

 

[Lysander]

No problem and thank you.