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Okay

While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activated as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: while you make your way through the woods, you are secretely put in a genjutsu where your sense of direction is taken away. You byakugan is not activated and as you move through the forest thinking you are going home, you are unknowingly to you moving towards a cliff which bottom is full of hot lava. You will fall into the creamy magma and melt away. Find a way to bring yourself out of the situation, ofcos you need your byakugan but you should find a way to activate it creatively without God-modding.^^

Scenerio 4: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair?
 

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No rotation? :sweat:.
Hinata walking joyfully back home, eager to show her father what she had learnt today when


Scenario 1:
A kunai was throw at a close mark to hinata, she jump forward a short distance from the kunai as she jump forward she does a 360 spin in mid air, she would land facing the direction the kunai was throw from.
*Hinata prepare fr the next attack*
Hinata hear noise of flying kunais from a distance in front of her, with this she deduce that some random projectiles was heading her way, she begin to gather her raw chakra in both her hand.
As the kunais appear she stretch both her hand in front of her toward the kunais, she place her hand apart then released a mass chakra from both her hands, the released chakra would be capable of blowing away the thrown kunais.
Jutsu used ="(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Tri-
grams Air Palm"


No I don't have tai training yet


Scenario 2:
Four ninja emerge from hideout and surround hinata. Hinata quickly activate her byakugan to ensure there wasn't some trickery behind the ninja appearance and also to get better view of her environment.
The two ninja behind hinata were first to attack, as they got close to strike, hinata quickly leap into the air performing a back flip over them,
*the ninjas miss*,
As hinata land now behind them, she raise her left leg to match the knee of the ninja by her left side then setting her palm into a gentle fist, she strike the ninja to her right side with three successive jab to his back, releasing her chakra into the ninja upon contact then she resume to kick the previous ninja twice on the face with her right leg.
As the other two ninja saw how easily she took down the two ninjas, they ran off in fear xD.
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Scenario 3:
Hinata is placed in a really nasty genjutsu, a type of genjutsu were she lose sense of direction
. As she move closer to the cliff she begin to smell burning earth, hinata worried by this cease movement and think to herself, after some deep thought she dismiss the matter, still walking closer to the edge of the cliff, the heat of the lava would be felt, hinata stopped again "this is strange she thought to herself" as she look around for any burning trees or mountain, she sees none in sight.
Hinata been so excited about today's progress in training decided to overlook this detail and continue walking, at the edge of the cliff she would be able to hear the bubbling sound produced by the lava as carbon smoke escape from it
, now hinata is more curious than ever, she stop again to listen to the bubbling sound, “there it is again“ she thought, “something is not right here“, now the smell and heat is intense, with this worried feeling she turn around scared and move away from the heat and smell “who is there?!“ She called out “show yourself“, with no response she quickly make a series of hand seal and activate her byakugan. Everything becomes clear and she is able to see through the genjutsu, she immediately distort her chakra expelling out any foreign chakra.
*gen cancelled*



Scenario 4:
A clone of Nel appear in front of hinata, hinata was happy at first to see her but soon her attitude change as she take note of the madness in nel's expression, "finally the sake has gotten to you" she teased.
*The clone attack with a swing punch*
Hinata effortlessly evade the attack by manipulating her water chakra to form a shield, she quickly bend down, getting into a squat position, she concentrate her chakra on her fingertips and strike nel on the stomach three times, this would make nel stagger back. Hinata once more take advantage of her current position by using her left hand to grab nel's right ankle, hinata pull the ankle upward toward her making nel fall on her back,swiftly hinata move her right hand upto nel chest and place it just around were her heart would be located. “Unless you don't want to grow old to see your grandchildren I will advice you stop sake soon". She release a little chakra into nel's chest, the chakra would attack her heart muscle casing mild heart shock.
*the clone poof*
jutsu used=
" water release : water shield"
"Byakugan three strikes"
"Chakra point pound"


Hinata continue her walk home.
 
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hmmm. Grading...

the first scenerio, you air wall did not happen since you did not activate your byakugan. Oops what a mistake.

the second scenerio, after you disabled the 2 ninjas and did nothing more, the other two Ninja who happens to come from the scary bloody mist slit your throat and you died, again!
You could use freeform tai if you have no tai

Third, you can't see through the gen with your byakugan but you can view your chakra pathway and see that they are disturbed conoting you are in a genjutsu.

others are okay but careful how you try to be creative and not put yourself in danger.
 

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Okay, you have proved enough to move to the next rank


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4
Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an
object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.

A larger version of the palm thrust blast, but this is fast and multiple can be done with both hands. Each hand is weaker but the potency is the blasts combined.
 

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I am honoured

how to perform it hinata channel raw chakra from her body toward her left and right hand. She continue until she had gradually set up a compressed mass of chakra around her individual hand, she stretch out both hand in front of her,placing both hand such they are joined together along the limb.
Hinata focus on the chakra as she release it with full force out of her arm through her palm toward the target (a tree maybe oh wait she destroy all the trees xD) in front, the force of the chakra would be more powerful than the previous air blast she did.
Best utilised
- against thrown projectiles
- against air borne attacks
other ways to use it
Separating the hands apart would ensure the work is done faster.
It could be used to elevate or change direction in mid air
pros
- no hand seal
- more damage
- it is faster than the previous technique similar to it
cons
- it is not long ranged
 

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next time, Add these into the templates
*How to defend against it
*Picture if any

Now to the next.

(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128
Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after
the opponent is hit by it.

You simply increase your number of strikes compared to the 64 strikes you did before.
Also describe how you will creatively do this and its effect on your opponent.
 

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*clone formed*
How to perform it.
Hinata get close to her target, when in close proximity she get in a gentle fist stance, in this stance she channel her raw chakra from her body toward her hand, she focus majority of the channelled chakra on her fingertips.
All set she proceed to strike the clone twice with both of her palm, this strike will render the clone unease.
Without wasting time hina proceed to strike the clone twice again, this time the jabs are slower than the first one, she strike the clone again this time 4 times with her left and right palm, she strike again placing 8 strike on the clone without rest then a series of 16 strikes followed by 32 strike then 64 strike.
These strikes would make a total of 128 strike, by the 128th tap on the clone, hinata would have successfully closed 128 chakra nodes on the clone causing it to poof.
Best utilised
- in a tai battle.
- good as prep for a finishing blow.
- against several thrown projectiles
Other ways to use it.
- sharing the 128 hits among two opponent that 64 hit each
- focusing the hits on one part of the opponent body would result in the opponent temporary paralysed in that region
Pros
- good to disable an opponent from performing chakra based techniques.
- no hand seal
- the initial jab ensure all 127 jab are successfully.
- inflict more damage.
- it is done at a faster pace.
Cons
- it is short range
- the user need physical contact to do this technique
How to defend against it
:
Basically keeping your distance from it.
And any element shield or wall such as wind wall would successfully counter.
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question
- Is the starting point of this skill faster than a one hand seal, assuming both fighters are short range from each other.
 

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for your question, I'll say Yes

Now for the next three, you will be dealing powerful strikes that is able to damage tenketsus and organs at the same time.

(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high- speed strikes before charging they chakra into
their hands and releasing it in a burst.
You will do two forms of Jyuken here, precision and blast. Strike continously the chakra points of the opponent then at the end charge blunt chakra into one of your hand and blast him to oblivion damaging his entrails.

(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the
foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may
jump from a high distance and palm the foe
continually until all chakra points blast.
You will run at full speed towards your opponent(when he is open) then jump and as you land, jab one of his vital organ severing it completely with one hit, otherwise after you run(compulsory), jump and jab continously the tenketsus until they burst.
Quiz: What is the reason behind the bursting of the tenketsus?

(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit
Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike
with a powerful hit with their palm.
Grab you enemy on the chest(clothes) with one hand while charging chakra into the other, then sink the chakra into him to damage his internals and send him flying.
 

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*clones formed*


(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) -
Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release
How to perform it
hinata make the 12 hand seal and activate her byakugan then proceed to take note of the position of the various chakra nodes on the clone in front of her.
She move close to the clone and make a gentle fist stance then channel raw chakra from her stomach to her left and right hand.
All set she strike the clone twice aiming at two different chakra point around the stomach then proceed to lay eight strike concurrently aiming Fø̲̣̣я̅ different chakra point on the clone at each contact she made.
At the eight strike, hinata channel more of her raw chakra to her free hand and release the chakra with force and speed at the clone blasting it away.
Best utilised
- During a counter attack
- in mid air close battle
- to end a battle in a cool way.
- to increase the damage of the air blast technique
Other ways to use it
- Throw the enemy into mid air and as they fall proceed with the strikes and blast away :cool:
Pros
- it is fast
- no hand seal needed
Cons
- it is short ranged
How to defend against it
- a dojutsu user would be able to read the user movement and evade well.
- taking on the defensive role would reduce the chance of the user performing this technique

Picture
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(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) - Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
How to perform it
Hinata squat down, setting herself in a take off position, that is her upper body lowered and her legs apart, the front leg is bent well enough for the knee to emerge completely. She use this stance to support her starting speed as she proceed to run toward the clone.
She run as fast as she could until she got to a satisfactory distance from the clone then jump into mid air still travelling toward the clone, she would get close to the clone from above.
Hinata channel her raw chakra to the tip of her fingers in mid air preparing for her attack.
*Got close*
she strike the clone with both of her hand in a slash pattern across the clone upper body, her chakra would travel into the clone and cause fatal damage to the heart.
Best utilised
- outside a cave or enclosed space.
Other ways to use it
- aim Fø̲̣̣я̅ the centre of the skull.
- can be done from behind the opponent
Pros
- it can prove to be a fatal blow if the user is lucky to hit a major organ like the heart.
- it is fast so a normal speed ninja has less chance of evading it
Cons
- it is short range
- require physical contact
How to defend against it
- earth release: stone spikes would stop the user while running.
- an offensive fire technique like blazing shuriken dance would prove a great deal of trouble for the user.
Picture
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(Hakke Seirei Hirate) - Eight Trigrams Spirit Palm
How to perform it
Hinata grab the clone by the shoulder with her right hand firmly to make sure the clone doesn't move then channel a mass of raw chakra to her left hand.
She make the chakra more concentrated on the surface of her palm, then she use her left hand to strike the clone hitting the stomach region. As her left palm come in contact with the clone she forcefully release the concentrated chakra on her palm into the clone, the chakra would travel into the clone and damage organs designated there. The force she use to release the chakra would be powerful enough to blow the clone away
Best utilised
- In a non-elemental close battle.
- against a weakened opponent.
Other ways to use it
- When the opponent is against the wall or lying on the ground.
- And from behind the opponent
Pros
- no hand seal
- other gentle fist tai techniques can easily be fuse with this technique.
- deal a great amount of damage to the opponent.
Cons.
- it is short range
- require physical contact with the opponent
How to defend against it.
- a lightning body armour would electrocute the user.
- wind release: great vacuum cannon
would prevent the user from getting close.
- a water user can turn their body into water making the palm strike go through.
Picture
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Quiz answer:
- the tenketsus would burst could of the inferior chakra the user inject into the opponent. X___X
 

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okay, moving on

(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an
opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist
techniques, it sends chakra into the target to
cause internal damage which will temporarily
paralyze an opponent.

This is a special palm thrust where you release chakra sinking it into your victim's body damaging his internal organ. You don't have to be close, but the full effect is achived when you make contact with the enemy.
Also name an organ you will strike if you are to perform this and what would be the effect on your opponent.
 

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How to perform it
Hinata begin by activating her byakugan then she channel chakra from her main body toward her left hand, she concentrate more of her raw chakra at the surface of her palm, she proceed to make a gentle fist with her right and left palm.
She place her right leg behind her and left leg in front of her Fø̲̣̣я̅ support. Been quick and with force; hinata tap the clone on the right section of its chest with her left palm, as she tap the clone her raw chakra travel from her fingertips into the clone body, the chakra would travel into its chest and hit the lung, the chakra would damage the lung this would result in the clone having difficult to breath then eventually collapse due to lack of oxygen and intense pain.
*Poof*
Best utilised
- in a close range battle
Other ways to use it
- from the behind the opponent.
- as an air strike
Pros
- no hand seal
- the legs are free so the user can always move about at the same time.
Cons
- it is short range
- it occupy the hands such no immediate hand seal based tech unless the user can do one hand seal.
- high chance of a counter
attack
How to defend against it
- do not get close to the user.
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By goodluck you mean get ready to be beat down 'O_O'
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*byakugan actived*
Hinata run toward nel in a semi circular pattern that is she move in a semi-circle from her left to right then right to left continuously, she time her movement to get to nel at her right side (nel's left side).
As she get close to nel, she go down low and perform a horizontal swing kick with her left leg attempting to clear nel off the ground, Nel would proceed to fall on her back as hinata's left leg return to back to previous position.
By description; hinata would be in a crouch position as nel fall to the ground. Hinata took advantage of this by using her palm to swiftly strike nel 16 times at her shoulder down to her stomach just below her bosom, the final strike would push nel away from hinata, making nel slam into the ground.
Hinata jump into the air from her current position toward nel and perform a mid-air drop kick hitting nel on the stomach and further pushing her into the earth.
Hinata proceed to grab nel's leg and throw her off toward a long distance, hinata quickly channel chakra toward her leg and hand then run at full speed toward the flying lady.
Due to her speed, hinata would get to nel in seconds, she jump to met nel and strike her on the stomach then release raw chakra into nel from her palm, the inserted chakra would attack her liver causing nel pain.
Hinata cease movement allowing nel travel further away from her.

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) -
Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of
gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) –
Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at
the enemy at full speed before
jumping and hitting one of the
foe’s vital organs. Alternatively
the user may
jump from a high distance and
palm the foe
continually until all chakra
points blast.


 

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as you come towards nel, Nel also activates her byakugan, then she see you drop down with an incoming sweeping kick, Nel using her lower body while pressing on the floor with both her feet, she leaps up a little though her body is not tensed but free and light. She uses that to her advantage acrobatically changing to attack the moment she evades you sweeping kick and you upper body is vulnerable. She spins from right to left while her right legs is raise, knee bent and stretched at the same time so that as she spins, her right foot will connect with you right cheek and sends you spiralling to your right. She completes a full spin(360) because of her angular momentum from her spin and lands immediately and assumes a generic Neji Hakke stance.
 

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apologises Fø̲̣̣я̅ taking too long sensei :flowers:

Hinata with the aid of her byakugan became aware the moment nel jump and thus notice nel extending her right leg. Hinata quickly bend her head down to escape the kick then with the aid of her limbs, she jump backward and land on her feet with both knees bent to the ground. She is still in close proximity to nel.
Hinata watch as nel majestically set a pose, she follow suit by mimicking nel's movement.
With both ladies in a stance, hinata push forward with the first strike, she send her right palm to slide through nel's left shoulder, she release a flush of chakra as it come in contact, the chakra would alter the tenketsu point there then she move her palm upto nel's throat and grip hold of her cloth, almost immediately she push her left knee up to hit nel's stomach.
Hinata keeping a close watch on nel's chakra flow, as her left leg return, she use her right hand to perform a to and fro movement three times hitting nel around her abdominal region, each time releasing sufficient amount of chakra to cause her abdominal pains. Hinata step back, releasing her left hand from nel throat then jump into the air, she perform a double mid air spin, on the last spin she use her right leg to hit nel on the face.
 

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Good! Moving on.

(Hakke Sanbyakurokujyuuisshisa) - 8 Trigrams 361 Strikes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack that closes 361 tenketsu and seals chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

We've tried this before, just that this is 361 strikes..lol
don't forget you gimme comprehensive details.
 
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