[Genjutsu]-Neilson

[neilson]

Waits for mathias sensei...

Thanks....i'm glad being your student again.

 

[Mathias]

Mathias slowly approaches his student..If it isn't my dear student Neilson! Welcome back my friend. Mathias suddenly disperses into a pack of Ligers as he Neilson then finds himself surrounded.

Within the emptiness of the environment around him, Neilson hears Mathias' voice overshadowing the slight roars of each individual Liger. So you're interested in learning about illusions correct?. What can you tell me about them? Why would you like to learn these arts? What are some known users from the manga that specialize in genjutsu? And what are some strengths and weaknesses? (Pros and/or Cons regarding illusions)

 

[neilson]

Using zeta uchiha in sig.

Zeta smiles as he see's his former teacher to become yet again his current sensei...zeta pushes away the blonde hair in his face as he walks towards mathias sensei, only to see mathias sensei disperse into ligers, zeta tells himself as always mathias sensei amazes him :T_T: zeta watches on as the ligers surround him, knowing the ligers to be mathias summons zeta ignores them...zeta stands still and starts to hear mathias sensei's voice, already wondering if he is in a genjutsu...hearing each question and answering...

1.Yea mathias sama I would like to learn the art of gen/illusions

2. illusions/genjutsu is a jutsu which happens due to a disruption in the chakra flow of someone, to be specific the chakra flow in the brain of a person, when this happens the user of the genjutsu has full control over their victims 5sensese, being hearing, seeing, smelling, feeling,(I forgot the last sense). Genjutsu is differenciated into 2 by me ofcourse, there is the sharingan genjutsu and then the normal genjutsu....a sharingan genjutsu isnt what i'm learning now so I won't go into it. Almost all shinobi can use genjutsu it depends on their contorol of chakra...I think that's all I need to say about genjutsu.

3.I personally like the feeling of power in the sense that I have full control of someone's senses and for a split second I can control someone with it. Being commrade:snickfor jokes ofcourse) and enemy:devilfor their deaths) and also because I want to be able to create very good genjutsu customs and be known on the base as one of the genjutsu experts. .

4. there's kurenai sensei. Itachi(god of genjutsu i'm a fan although he shouldn't be included since he is a sharingan user), 2nd mizukage, tayuya.

5.strengths
Like I said earlier takes control of a persons 5 senses, it can be used to interrogate someone, cause mental pain, create illusions of the users choice.

weakness
Just like kenjutsu u don't need a jutsu to break out or avoid a genjutsu, since its like ninjutsu, causing oneself enough pain...will make them snap out of the jutsu, but one must first realize that they are in a genjutsu.

Good enough mathias sama.

 

[Mathias]

Using zeta uchiha in sig.

Zeta smiles as he see's his former teacher to become yet again his current sensei...zeta pushes away the blonde hair in his face as he walks towards mathias sensei, only to see mathias sensei disperse into ligers, zeta tells himself as always mathias sensei amazes him :T_T: zeta watches on as the ligers surround him, knowing the ligers to be mathias summons zeta ignores them...zeta stands still and starts to hear mathias sensei's voice, already wondering if he is in a genjutsu...hearing each question and answering...

1.Yea mathias sama I would like to learn the art of gen/illusions

2. illusions/genjutsu is a jutsu which happens due to a disruption in the chakra flow of someone, to be specific the chakra flow in the brain of a person, when this happens the user of the genjutsu has full control over their victims 5sensese, being hearing, seeing, smelling, feeling,(I forgot the last sense). Genjutsu is differenciated into 2 by me ofcourse, there is the sharingan genjutsu and then the normal genjutsu....a sharingan genjutsu isnt what i'm learning now so I won't go into it. Almost all shinobi can use genjutsu it depends on their contorol of chakra...I think that's all I need to say about genjutsu.

3.I personally like the feeling of power in the sense that I have full control of someone's senses and for a split second I can control someone with it. Being commrade:snickfor jokes ofcourse) and enemy:devilfor their deaths) and also because I want to be able to create very good genjutsu customs and be known on the base as one of the genjutsu experts. .

4. there's kurenai sensei. Itachi(god of genjutsu i'm a fan although he shouldn't be included since he is a sharingan user), 2nd mizukage, tayuya.

5.strengths
Like I said earlier takes control of a persons 5 senses, it can be used to interrogate someone, cause mental pain, create illusions of the users choice.

weakness
Just like kenjutsu u don't need a jutsu to break out or avoid a genjutsu, since its like ninjutsu, causing oneself enough pain...will make them snap out of the jutsu, but one must first realize that they are in a genjutsu.

Good enough mathias sama.

The last sense you were missing was taste. As far as the two different types of genjutsu, that is simple yet correct. However we can not forget about the Kurama Clan that can turn illusions into reality. And when I say types, I mean a branch within genjutsu. Going further into genjutsu would be sub-categories that include types of genjutsu like realistic, mind damaging, deceiving etc etc.

Any questions regarding what I said or about genjutsu before we continue?

 

[neilson]

The last sense you were missing was taste. As far as the two different types of genjutsu, that is simple yet correct. However we can not forget about the Kurama Clan that can turn illusions into reality. And when I say types, I mean a branch within genjutsu. Going further into genjutsu would be sub-categories that include types of genjutsu like realistic, mind damaging, deceiving etc etc.

Any questions regarding what I said or about genjutsu before we continue?

No I don't think I have any questions....o remember the kurama clan deadly sets of people those clan members are.

 

[Mathias]

No I don't think I have any questions....o remember the kurama clan deadly sets of people those clan members are.

Let's get started then!

( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.

A very useful illusion. I want you to start out by releasing your chakra outwards, inserting inside my clone's brain. You will then manipulate said chakra, influencing my clone's chakra flow, successfully disrupting it without his knowledge. Utilizing that to your advantage, I want you to manipulate your chakra and cause an illusion to take place by manipulating his sight by changing the current plain grass field into something completely up to you.

 

[neilson]

Zeta sterts to build his chakra, zeta then focus on his chakra directly into my mathias clone, pouring/releasing his chakra he built out of him and into the clone's brain, taking control and thus manipulating the clone's senses and his mind. Zeta manipulate the clones mind and senses to the point where zeta pretends to form hand seals and then the ground where mathias clone stands turns into a deeep water, causing the clone to think he has fallen in the water and therefore drowning

How did I do mathias sensei?.

 

[Mathias]

Zeta sterts to build his chakra, zeta then focus on his chakra directly into my mathias clone, pouring/releasing his chakra he built out of him and into the clone's brain, taking control and thus manipulating the clone's senses and his mind. Zeta manipulate the clones mind and senses to the point where zeta pretends to form hand seals and then the ground where mathias clone stands turns into a deeep water, causing the clone to think he has fallen in the water and therefore drowning

How did I do mathias sensei?.

You did good.

OOC: Now I would like you to incorporate my training template, please fill it out with the technique you've just learned ^_^

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Strong points

• This technique can be used to distance one's self from their opponent, by the gust of wind being strong enough to force them back. The strength of the wind could be used to not only force your opponent back away from you, but it could push them into objects like a rock or a tree, or get you out of range of a jutsu you may be in range of (primarily close or mid ranged)
  
  
• The dust this jutsu could pick up from preforming this jutsu could also cloud the sight of your opponent, giving you the opprotunity to get out of sight and used ambush based attacks (if that's your game plan) or escape from a situation you feel is out of your immediant range of thinking. Also the diversion it could play for the moment, blinding your opponent could give you the immediant go ahead to follow through with another jutsu that they wouldn't expect.
  
  
• Lastly, this jutsu comes in handy for deflecting and enhancing projectiles. When in terms of your opponent throwing projectiles towards you, you could use this jutsu, the gust of wind, being stronger then the natural strength of a shinobi's thrust in throwing projectiles like basic kunai or shuriken, would force them back towards one's opponent or simply render their attack towards you uselses by neutralizing the velocity at which it travels and they'll fall to the ground prematurely. In terms of you throwing your own projectiles, shooting your gust of wind in conjunction with the direction of your projectiles would increase the speed of the weapons and also how much force is behind them, meaning they head quicker to your opponent (harder to evade) and if they hit, the force behind it will cause more damage (via deeper wounds from penetration).
  
  

Weak points

• For larger projectiles like fuma Shuriken or anything with a greater density, the wind may have a harder time deflecting them if thrown by your opponent.
  
  
• Since this is a relitave lower level jutsu, any fire technique would be able to make it's way through the winds and that would be an easy counter for this jutsu as well.
  
  
• Also considering the territory, if in a territory where there is a lot of dust. When this jutsu is preformed, just as you could use it as cover for another attack or an escape, your opponent could use it in the same way. The dust being between the two of you (if enough is gathered that is) could block your sight of your opponent, which is always a flaw that could be used against you.
  
  

Combinations-strategies Primarily I see this jutsu as being a great use with simple projectiles like shuriken or kunai. You could toss your weapons and the wind traveling in conjunctin could add speed and penatration power. You. Also a wind-fire combination, using a fire based jutsu (if you have the training that is) and then using this jutsu to enhance the potency and range of the flames. However if both jutsu exhale from the mouth, this jutsu may need to be used by another party such as a shadow clone or summon. I could also see this technique useful for getting off the ground, shooting the flow of wind dowards and that could set you up for an arial attack to use against your opponent.

Ways to counter this technique Using a fire jutsu to force through the flames, making it useless, or using a more powerful wind technique to render their winds useless and also to dispell the sand/dust. Also a jutsu of any kind that could provide a mass of movement in the opposite direction with strong enough force to combat the winds like a powerful/large flow of water or large amounts of earth (via earth jutsu) that would prove to be to dense for the winds to move, also if the earth is moving at it's own velocity towards their opponent, the winds could be useless. Also blocking the winds with some sort of barrier works just as good too.
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Tori!

*I make the bird seal and I begin to inhale through my nose. I breath in from my diaphram, feeling the wind chakra deep inside my body. I feel the flow channeling from my diaphram into my lungs and I exhale through my mouth. The air coming out of my mouth, fused with my chakra creates a gust of wind, gathering the minirals from the ground (the dust) and creating a large gust of dusty wind, which disperses from a steady stream into the air after s certian distance*

Sensei is this good? ^^

I hope Reborn doesn't mind me stealing his place. It was foreseen, I am an Iwarian.

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Strong points

• Well lets start with the most basic string point of this technique, the technique is a highly compressed orb of water, the key word here is compressed, meaning the space is tightly packed with water molecules thus giving it an amazing density and speed. The orb itself somewhat receives the property of a bullet, thus giving it a title of rain bullet.
• A very, very interesting point in the jutsu that i managed to point out is that this technique says; "user will be knocked back", if you notice that part it is one of the most amazing use of this low ranked jutsu. What if something requires you to push yourself back, and channeling chakra into the ground is not possible to bring pillars or likes. This jutsu can be shot in one direction and due to its compressed space property it exerts equally opposite force at the user thus sending him backwards, can be used to dodge certain jutsus or avoid direct hits.
• Last but not the least is the main purpose of this justu, the two actions that states the main offensive side of it; "If it hits the enemy the enemy will be sent away flying or unbalanced." It can have two effects, one is it may send the opponent flying away AS user flies back too, and given the range as short it can be a good way to increase distance between the two ninjas. Second is throwing the opponent off-balance and using it to develop a counter position and get hold of the battle.

Weak points

• Well, like everyone else I noticed the rank as a weak point. Event with all those uses a weak technique is a weak technique. Its given rank is D, thus making it the lowest, so even a direct hit won't be enough to sieze the victory in the battle, however it may give more opportunities to attack, but that does not change the fact that it is the lowest possible rank. (excluding E)
• The range, the second weakness is that its range is way too limited. Although I found that fact absurd because it seems to be a compressed ball like bullet, it should be at-least midrange to fully use it to your advantage, but since it isn't it can only be used in close range, and will fail if used at distance of mid/long. It can be used as a supplement way of throwing yourself back even if it doesn't reaches the opponent.
• The third and last weak point is the advantage I stated earlier, it can also back fire; "the user will be knocked back", the technique has a condition of high pressure forces on either side, so what if you do not want to change your position, no matter what you try you have to make sure your stability stays unaffected when using this technique.

Combinations-strategies; A very amazing combination strategy is using it as a distraction or use as speed boost in a freeform battle. So, what if my character needs a sudden boost, I release the jutsu on the ground facing back, I then turn around slicing or performing a free form action move. But not only that, lets look at another way, it can be used as some jutsu that attacks the user from behind, so this justu can be used to lure the opponent or push them back to that certain location to attack from the back.

Ways to counter this technique; A very easy and fun counter against this technique is earth shields and earth pillar. To make a dramatic fight one can use a simple shield or cover the body part that is being attacked. There is another earth technique which not only adds an armor but also increases your Taijutsu skills, but since its heavy it decrease users speed, but since its heavy it may be able to counter the pressure of this rain technique.

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Blizzard after completely describing the technique, he closes his eyes, and gathers the spirit that he had earned in the past long hours of meditation, using his mastery over wind and water he gathers both elements, water to form the orb and wind to compress it to such level that its compression forms a very high density water orb/ bullet, he then aims for the tree that stood infront of him, keeping a constant chakra supply in the orb and having ful control over the orb's shape using chakra manipulation he extends his arms and releases a sudden pressured chakra behind the orb to make it act and fire as a bullet, its strength so amazing that tears the ree back bending it and making it roots sprout out of the ground, while Blizzard had his feet dragged backwards scraping the soil which helped him balance his heel on the ground. "Phew that was fun."

If you have any questions regarding this method, please feel free to ask me anything.

 

[neilson]

Forgive me mathias sensei I totally forgot about the time we used templates(I thought you would go with a different method of study) and I have no problem with it.

Strong points

• - this jutsu changes the terrain to the users wish, which is good cause the user can scare his opponent, like lemme say the user changes the terrain to water and then tell the opponent that he is a water specialist and that he would surely loose in this terrain.-
• - the user can also just change the terrain just to confuse his opponent, you know just to make his opponent be in chaos -
• - I believe it can be used to evade a jutsu, lemme say that the opponent is about to use an earth jutsu, turning the terrain into water will cause the opponent to think that his earth jutsu would be impossible, therefore causing the user to evade a jutsu -

Weak points

• - this jutsu is easily discover able, therefore the opponent can easily cast himself out of this jutsu. A change of terrain if not skillfully done will be easily noticeable. -
• - using this jutsu might even be harmful to the user, cause some opponent will just ignore the terrain and still attack the user of this jutsu and sonce it changes just the terrain I believe the opponent would still be standing where he/she was. -
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Combinations and strategies
I would use this as a secondary jutsu having the first be a jutsu that actually changes the terrain like water exploding waves, or I would use this genjutsu and then I would immediately use a jutsu that turns the terrain into the terrain I picked while using the genjutsu
ways to counter this technique
Its a d rank genjutsu, all I have to do is to describe how I realised it was a genjutsu.

 

[Mathias]

Forgive me mathias sensei I totally forgot about the time we used templates(I thought you would go with a different method of study) and I have no problem with it.

Strong points

• - this jutsu changes the terrain to the users wish, which is good cause the user can scare his opponent, like lemme say the user changes the terrain to water and then tell the opponent that he is a water specialist and that he would surely loose in this terrain.-
• - the user can also just change the terrain just to confuse his opponent, you know just to make his opponent be in chaos -
• - I believe it can be used to evade a jutsu, lemme say that the opponent is about to use an earth jutsu, turning the terrain into water will cause the opponent to think that his earth jutsu would be impossible, therefore causing the user to evade a jutsu -

Weak points

• - this jutsu is easily discover able, therefore the opponent can easily cast himself out of this jutsu. A change of terrain if not skillfully done will be easily noticeable. -
• - using this jutsu might even be harmful to the user, cause some opponent will just ignore the terrain and still attack the user of this jutsu and sonce it changes just the terrain I believe the opponent would still be standing where he/she was. -
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Combinations and strategies
I would use this as a secondary jutsu having the first be a jutsu that actually changes the terrain like water exploding waves, or I would use this genjutsu and then I would immediately use a jutsu that turns the terrain into the terrain I picked while using the genjutsu
ways to counter this technique
Its a d rank genjutsu, all I have to do is to describe how I realised it was a genjutsu.

OOC: No need to apologize, it was my fault for not posting the template sooner. And yeah, generally I do a different approach with taijutsu, ninjutsu and genjutsu regarding my template. However, I've decided to incorporate it because I still see my students make some mistakes when learning techniques. Thus, the template allows me to see what they are miss-understanding.

Very good overall. However, you would be unable to escape a technique this way. Although it may aid you in doing so, it wouldn't be able to do it directly. As far as countering goes, you are still required to describe how you know its a genjutsu AND produce physical pain or chakra surge. Unless of course, you have a special biography that allows you to release genjutsu like Sharingan or Deidara's eye gear.

( Genjutsu: Kahen Tonsou ) - Illusion Technique: Flower Petal Escape
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, appearing to dissolve into a shower of cherry blossom petals. These petals surround the opponent, blocking his vision. This allows the user to mask his movement effectively.

After performing the necessary five hand seals, you will manipulate my clone's brain my inserting your chakra, focusing on his visual sense once more. The clone will believe that you seem to suddenly dissolve into a swamp of cherry blossom petals. These petals then head towards the opponent and block his view as they circle around his location and mask your real motives.

 

[neilson]

Zeta starts to build his chakra, having his sight already on mathias clone, zeta releases his chakra towards the clone especially the brain disrupting the chakra flow it has, zeta focuses on the clones sense of sight and messes with it a little by making the clone see zeta dissolve into flower petals, cherry blossom petals to be precise, causing the clone to not be able to see zeta, zeta having done then throws a kunai at the clone to kill it...or make it poof.

Strong points

• - it allows the user to temporarily hide his presence from the opponent-
• - the user can do an immediate attack to kill his opponent while he is in the genjutsu -
• - the opponent can be classified as being blind since he can't see the user of the genjutsu -

Weak points

• - the formation of 5Hand seals can be intercepted therefore this jutsu can be stopped before it happens -
• -this jutsu iant very good being as its obvious that one can realize this is a genjutsu being that there are no known elemetal techniques that allow one to dissolve into flower petals. -
• - simply biting the lip and having it bleed will make the opponent seal off this genjutsu(break out of it)-

Combinations and strategies
Once I use this genjutsu I would use the s rank false lightning spear teachnique, to kill my opponent immediately...no time to waste
ways to counter this technique
I would state that its impossible to fade into flowers since there are no know elemental techniques that does that....and then bite my lip, or use chidori nagashi incase my opponent has. Used a secondary attack.

 

[Mathias]

Zeta starts to build his chakra, having his sight already on mathias clone, zeta releases his chakra towards the clone especially the brain disrupting the chakra flow it has, zeta focuses on the clones sense of sight and messes with it a little by making the clone see zeta dissolve into flower petals, cherry blossom petals to be precise, causing the clone to not be able to see zeta, zeta having done then throws a kunai at the clone to kill it...or make it poof.

Strong points

• - it allows the user to temporarily hide his presence from the opponent-
• - the user can do an immediate attack to kill his opponent while he is in the genjutsu -
• - the opponent can be classified as being blind since he can't see the user of the genjutsu -

Weak points

• - the formation of 5Hand seals can be intercepted therefore this jutsu can be stopped before it happens -
• -this jutsu iant very good being as its obvious that one can realize this is a genjutsu being that there are no known elemetal techniques that allow one to dissolve into flower petals. -
• - simply biting the lip and having it bleed will make the opponent seal off this genjutsu(break out of it)-

Combinations and strategies
Once I use this genjutsu I would use the s rank false lightning spear teachnique, to kill my opponent immediately...no time to waste
ways to counter this technique
I would state that its impossible to fade into flowers since there are no know elemental techniques that does that....and then bite my lip, or use chidori nagashi incase my opponent has. Used a secondary attack.

Good, however it is not necessarily impossible to dissolve into flower pedals. There are several substitution customs out there that allow the user to turn themselves into a variety of things. Also, there is a specific wind technique that is shape manipulated in such a way that it resembles cherry blossoms, aka flower pedals. So the reality of this technique is not so out there. That being said, yes, you are partially correct in terms of how real this genjutsu is.

( Genjutsu: Kasumi ) - Illusion Technique: Servant
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user does one handseal and throws a paper bomb at the enemy. The enemy, trapped in a genjutsu will see a clone of the user advancing upon him. As the paper bomb reaches the enemy, it explodes

I want you to perform a single hand seal as you then place my clone in an illusion where he sees a clone being created and then advancing towards him. In reality, you have thrown a paper bomb towards the clone that is pretty much hiding in the presence of the clone. You will then proceed to detonate the paper bomb, dispersing my clone.

 

[neilson]

Zeta starts to build his chakra just like before expelling it towards mathias clone, disrupting the chakra flow in his brain his and focusing on the clones sight Sense, after forming the tiger hand seal kefa throws a paper bomb at the clone, zeta already having his chakra disrupting mathias clone's chakra flow, makes the clone see the paper bomb as a clone of himself,then mathias clone see's a clone of zeta walking towards him

Strong points

• - this jutsu seems like one that would hit, but at a very close proximity, since confusion might be the first thing(is it a real clone or not, which type of clone?, water, earth? Lightning?), and the opponent might not even realize that he is in a genjutsu-
• - the damage isn't from mind stress its actually physical so there is no way the opponent /victim wouldn't be injured in order words handicapped. -
• - the formation of one hand seal will actually make the opponent think that it was used to form the clone.-

Weak points

• - the clone would be walking rather than running because of its movement is based on the paper bomb and since the paper bomb is so thin it relys on air/wind for its movement its a different case if the bomb is tagged with a kunai (I hope u understand) it moves slowly-
• - this genjutsu can be brokn out of because of how slow the clone moves(like the opponent will realize its a genjutsu because of how slow the clone moves -
• - the opponent can even ignore the fact that he is in a genjutsu an attack either with a wind tech, causing the paper bomb to be blon back to the user of this tech-

Combinations and strategies
If I can tag the paper bomb with a kunai knife to make it travel faster(can I do that), I would rather make 2 clones, causing him to think its more of a combination attack, like the real clone I make will run side ways and the genjutsu clone will still advance to him, the real clone will get his eye cause its moving rather quickly.
ways to counter this technique
If I can still attack ignoring the genjutsu then i'll use a wind tech, like hurricane fist. I'd I can I would state how slow the clone is moving and.then bite my lip.

 

[Mathias]

Zeta starts to build his chakra just like before expelling it towards mathias clone, disrupting the chakra flow in his brain his and focusing on the clones sight Sense, after forming the tiger hand seal kefa throws a paper bomb at the clone, zeta already having his chakra disrupting mathias clone's chakra flow, makes the clone see the paper bomb as a clone of himself,then mathias clone see's a clone of zeta walking towards him

Strong points

• - this jutsu seems like one that would hit, but at a very close proximity, since confusion might be the first thing(is it a real clone or not, which type of clone?, water, earth? Lightning?), and the opponent might not even realize that he is in a genjutsu-
• - the damage isn't from mind stress its actually physical so there is no way the opponent /victim wouldn't be injured in order words handicapped. -
• - the formation of one hand seal will actually make the opponent think that it was used to form the clone.-

Weak points

• - the clone would be walking rather than running because of its movement is based on the paper bomb and since the paper bomb is so thin it relys on air/wind for its movement its a different case if the bomb is tagged with a kunai (I hope u understand) it moves slowly-
• - this genjutsu can be brokn out of because of how slow the clone moves(like the opponent will realize its a genjutsu because of how slow the clone moves -
• - the opponent can even ignore the fact that he is in a genjutsu an attack either with a wind tech, causing the paper bomb to be blon back to the user of this tech-

Combinations and strategies
If I can tag the paper bomb with a kunai knife to make it travel faster(can I do that), I would rather make 2 clones, causing him to think its more of a combination attack, like the real clone I make will run side ways and the genjutsu clone will still advance to him, the real clone will get his eye cause its moving rather quickly.
ways to counter this technique
If I can still attack ignoring the genjutsu then i'll use a wind tech, like hurricane fist. I'd I can I would state how slow the clone is moving and.then bite my lip.

OOC: Apologies for missing a reply yesterday, I had a busy day. That being said.. I tried to reply multiple times today but the day dragged on once again ~_~..

The clone isn't specific to any element, its simply a "clone". Also, don't drown yourself on the slow pace of the paper bomb. Specially because this is a short range technique which means you would be throwing/casting the technique from short range away from your opponent. That tells us that the "clone" wouldn't have to run/walk that far, and thus further confusing the opponent, as well as giving him less time to deduce the situation due to the range and speed of the technique. As far as the knife combo goes, lets keep it description oriented, so no.

( Kasumi Jūsha no Jutsu ) - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This illusion creates numerous illusionary clones of the user that appear to emerge from the ground, trees, rocks, etc. If these clones are attacked, they appear to multiply. The user can co-ordinate his attacks with the clones to make it appear as if they are real.

I want you to disrupt my clone's senses, placing him under an illusion. In the illusion the clone will see several of your clones emerging from the ground, trees, rocks, any physical structure that lays within your current terrain.

 

[neilson]

eta starts to build his chakra just like before expelling it towards mathias clone, disrupting the chakra flow in his brain his and focusing on the clones sense of sight and feel, zeta makes the clone see hands are digging out of the ground, and some people are coming out of trees, some leaving water sources while some emerge from rocks and then zeta makes it that those people coming or emerging out of the various places to look like himself, zeta, further disrupting the clones chakra flow by making the clone feel like they are all real.

Strong points

• - at first glance it will seem like a clone, if it cones out from earth, it maybe an earth clone, comes out from water, a water clone, comes out from the tree a wooden clone....so I think at first glance they will seem like a clone(that Is if the user doesn't make so many illusionary clones of himself)-
• - to make your opponent believe they are real clones is when the user co-ordinates attacks with the clones..(ninjutsu or simply throwing a kunai) -
• - -

Weak points

• - the moment I attack a clone and it multiplies I would start to think i'm in a genjutsu, cause when someone is attack they are mostly dead or badly injured.-
• - once too many clones are made, I would know that its a gen cause its a limit of 4 clones. I think -
• --

Combinations and strategies
I would most likely use this technique making just 2 Or 3 clones and then I will be coordinated with them as we attack, and also of I get hit I would say its one of th clone being that my opponent is still under a genjutsu...and then have it multiply since it was hit.(making my opponent realize its a gen but still It will work for sometime.)
ways to counter this technique
Its very simple do an attack that will surely hit...and once the clone multiplies....u should be wondering how.

 

[Mathias]

eta starts to build his chakra just like before expelling it towards mathias clone, disrupting the chakra flow in his brain his and focusing on the clones sense of sight and feel, zeta makes the clone see hands are digging out of the ground, and some people are coming out of trees, some leaving water sources while some emerge from rocks and then zeta makes it that those people coming or emerging out of the various places to look like himself, zeta, further disrupting the clones chakra flow by making the clone feel like they are all real.

Strong points

• - at first glance it will seem like a clone, if it cones out from earth, it maybe an earth clone, comes out from water, a water clone, comes out from the tree a wooden clone....so I think at first glance they will seem like a clone(that Is if the user doesn't make so many illusionary clones of himself)-
• - to make your opponent believe they are real clones is when the user co-ordinates attacks with the clones..(ninjutsu or simply throwing a kunai) -
• - -

Weak points

• - the moment I attack a clone and it multiplies I would start to think i'm in a genjutsu, cause when someone is attack they are mostly dead or badly injured.-
• - once too many clones are made, I would know that its a gen cause its a limit of 4 clones. I think -
• --

Combinations and strategies
I would most likely use this technique making just 2 Or 3 clones and then I will be coordinated with them as we attack, and also of I get hit I would say its one of th clone being that my opponent is still under a genjutsu...and then have it multiply since it was hit.(making my opponent realize its a gen but still It will work for sometime.)
ways to counter this technique
Its very simple do an attack that will surely hit...and once the clone multiplies....u should be wondering how.

VERY VERY good, you basically covered all the points I was looking for. Usually I have to include our RP's clone limit to my students but you surely picked up on it quite easily. As well as where the clones are coming from and which element they might be. Good job!

( Magen: Narakumi ) - Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs two handseals causing it to appear as if a swirl of leaves surrounds the opponent. The swirl eventually falls away, and after a few seconds, the opponent sees the image of whatever they fear the most, shocking them and potentially causing them to faint.

After performing the Snake → Rat hand seals you will place my clone inside of an illusion. As they are placed within the illusion they will notice a swirl of leaves surrounding around themselves, thereafter subsiding and leaving and leaving the image of whatever they fear the most, shocking them and possibly causing them to faint.

 

[neilson]

zeta starts to build his chakra again and releasing it towards the clone that mathias sensei made, zeta disrupts the free flowing chakra in the clone by making his own affect it, zeta takes control of the clone sense of sight by making the clone see leaves which swirl around him and the zeta also takes control of the clones hearing by making the clones hear the sound leaves make when blown by air, zeta takes control of the clones feeling, by making the clone feel chilly and then by taking cintrol of all senses at the same time zeta makes the clone see his worst night mare, due to so much happening at the same time the clone faints.

Strong points

• - once the opponent faints the user is allowed to kill him with even taking his time -
• - even if the opponent breaks out of this genjutsu, the user should have enough time to perform a jutsu thats good enough to kill the opponent before the opponent breaks out of the genjutsu -
• - -

Weak points

• - the can be easily understood to be a genjutsu being that where did the swirl leaves come from -
• - the user of this genjutsu would leave the vicinity once this genjutsu is activated also another reason why one would think that this is a genjutsu -
• - some bios are made to be emotionless causing this jutsu to be useless since they care and fear nothing -

Combinations-strategies
i would probably use this jutsu as a decoy and then get in close, then when my opponent breaks out of it, i would have used the other genjutus where i throw a paper bomb but it looks like a clone of me is advancing at the opponent.
Ways to counter this technique
probably stating where the leaves came from, why i could not see my opponent and also biting my lip till it bleeds.

thanks for the complement sensei, i try my best sometimes

 

[Mathias]

zeta starts to build his chakra again and releasing it towards the clone that mathias sensei made, zeta disrupts the free flowing chakra in the clone by making his own affect it, zeta takes control of the clone sense of sight by making the clone see leaves which swirl around him and the zeta also takes control of the clones hearing by making the clones hear the sound leaves make when blown by air, zeta takes control of the clones feeling, by making the clone feel chilly and then by taking cintrol of all senses at the same time zeta makes the clone see his worst night mare, due to so much happening at the same time the clone faints.

Strong points

• - once the opponent faints the user is allowed to kill him with even taking his time -
• - even if the opponent breaks out of this genjutsu, the user should have enough time to perform a jutsu thats good enough to kill the opponent before the opponent breaks out of the genjutsu -
• - -

Weak points

• - the can be easily understood to be a genjutsu being that where did the swirl leaves come from -
• - the user of this genjutsu would leave the vicinity once this genjutsu is activated also another reason why one would think that this is a genjutsu -
• - some bios are made to be emotionless causing this jutsu to be useless since they care and fear nothing -

Combinations-strategies
i would probably use this jutsu as a decoy and then get in close, then when my opponent breaks out of it, i would have used the other genjutus where i throw a paper bomb but it looks like a clone of me is advancing at the opponent.
Ways to counter this technique
probably stating where the leaves came from, why i could not see my opponent and also biting my lip till it bleeds.

thanks for the complement sensei, i try my best sometimes

Good, just remember that there are other techniques out there that revolve around leaves and pedals like in a specific wind technique and ninjutsu technique.

Okay, so you've finished D-ranks, however we are not done yet. I now want you to perform a three jutsu combination, utilizing at least one of the genjutsu you've learned thus far. You are welcome to use free-form taijutsu, kunai throwing, etc etc. But please try to use three jutsu all together in a creative combination.

A clone of Mathias suddenly emerges from the ground medium range from you.

Begin!

 

[neilson]

Zeta stares at the clone that mathias made and forming 5 hand seals, zeta dissolves into a cherry petals in order to hide his movement, zeta then runs fast towards the clone, into the close range 1m away from him, and then forms one hand seal(by now the clone should have broken out of the first genjutsu) zeta and casts a genjutsu on the clone again, Making the clone(mathias sensei clone) see a clone of zeta advancing towards the clone, zeta moves back a little(4meters from the clone, with one jump step) zeta forms 4 hand seals while he moves back, after the explosion of the paper bomb, a wind tornado forms around the clone, the wind mixes with the fire from the explosion and kill the clone

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, appearing to dissolve into a shower of cherry blossom
petals. These petals surround the opponent, blocking his vision. This allows the user to mask his
movement effectively.

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user does one handseal and throws a paper bomb at the enemy. The enemy, trapped in a genjutsu
will see a clone of the user advancing upon him. As the paper bomb reaches the enemy, it explodes

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description:The original version of the Wind Release: Slashing Tornado technique. The user, flapping their
Giant Fan, creates a minor tornado, which ensnares the opponent, damaging and cutting the opponent, leaving them
crashing into the ground after the tornado subsides. This technique can be performed by ninja who do not wield the
Giant fan but require to make a small 4 sequence of hand seals to perform the technique.

 

[Mathias]

Zeta stares at the clone that mathias made and forming 5 hand seals, zeta dissolves into a cherry petals in order to hide his movement, zeta then runs fast towards the clone, into the close range 1m away from him, and then forms one hand seal(by now the clone should have broken out of the first genjutsu) zeta and casts a genjutsu on the clone again, Making the clone(mathias sensei clone) see a clone of zeta advancing towards the clone, zeta moves back a little(4meters from the clone, with one jump step) zeta forms 4 hand seals while he moves back, after the explosion of the paper bomb, a wind tornado forms around the clone, the wind mixes with the fire from the explosion and kill the clone

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, appearing to dissolve into a shower of cherry blossom
petals. These petals surround the opponent, blocking his vision. This allows the user to mask his
movement effectively.

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user does one handseal and throws a paper bomb at the enemy. The enemy, trapped in a genjutsu
will see a clone of the user advancing upon him. As the paper bomb reaches the enemy, it explodes

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description:The original version of the Wind Release: Slashing Tornado technique. The user, flapping their
Giant Fan, creates a minor tornado, which ensnares the opponent, damaging and cutting the opponent, leaving them
crashing into the ground after the tornado subsides. This technique can be performed by ninja who do not wield the
Giant fan but require to make a small 4 sequence of hand seals to perform the technique.

Very good, I liked how you paid close attention to the usage of ranges, just wanted I wanted to see.

( Kori Shinchū no Jutsu ) - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion on the opponent that makes them believe they are travelling in a straight line, when instead they are moving in circles. This is only effective on moving opponents. If the opponent travels in the circle for hours, they will be exhausted.

As my clone starts to charge towards you, I want you to focus your chakra into his brain and cast an illusion. Inside in the illusion, my clone will believe that he is still traveling straight towards you, while in reality he has begun moving around in circles.