[Genjutsu] - Better

[Better]

sorry :T_T:

Gin starts out with reaching his senseis clone chakra reserves and manipulating it so that the clone sees Gins clone, which in actuality is an illusion clone. Gin manipulates the chakra further by making the clone see that the illusion clone is charging right towards him and then jumps right above after reaching close distance, the clone seemingly explodes in a cloud of blossoms and it leaves the clone confused and a prime target for shinso. I say the words Shoot to Kill shinso and release my sword and it extends quickly piercing your clone and killing it.

Spoiler

Shinsō: God Spear
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: "Shinso" looks like an ordinary wakizashi. Though from its appearance it may look normal, it actually carries a unique ability like none other before.
The sword's ability focuses around the user sending a tremendous amount of chakra into the blade of the sword. As soon as the chakra is stored inside the sword the use says "Shoot to kill Shinso", as soon as the user says the last words the sword releases a large amount of chakra outwards from the blade straight forward at such a enormous speed that one without a dojutsu would find it hard to track (but not impossible). The chakra released from the blade is white in color, and is incredibly sharp. As the chakra is released from the blade, the user is capable of swinging the sword, sending the chakra still attached to the sword around as if it was a blade. The blade also carries tremendous force when extending. So much force that it can destroy any B-Rank defense or below. Shinsō is capable of reaching a maximum length equivalent to 10times its original length, Thus making the chakra shoot up to mid range. As soon as the chakra hits something it disperses after a few seconds, though if the chakra comes into contact with nothing, the user could swing his blade around in that turn, while it reverts back as soon as the next turn starts. The chakra blast strength is S-Rank.
The chakra has the same cutting power as the blade, and the time it takes to release Shinso to its full length is the same amount it takes to form a single handseal.

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Combo: see above, it basically leaves your opponent open for projectiles, underground attacks and gives you an opportunity to do something supplementary if you so wish.

Counter: The Original can't be too far off from the path the clone started from, so just act like you're attacking the clone, while in actuality your attacking the user.

 

[Mathias]

sorry :T_T:

Gin starts out with reaching his senseis clone chakra reserves and manipulating it so that the clone sees Gins clone, which in actuality is an illusion clone. Gin manipulates the chakra further by making the clone see that the illusion clone is charging right towards him and then jumps right above after reaching close distance, the clone seemingly explodes in a cloud of blossoms and it leaves the clone confused and a prime target for shinso. I say the words Shoot to Kill shinso and release my sword and it extends quickly piercing your clone and killing it.

Spoiler

Shinsō: God Spear
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: "Shinso" looks like an ordinary wakizashi. Though from its appearance it may look normal, it actually carries a unique ability like none other before.
The sword's ability focuses around the user sending a tremendous amount of chakra into the blade of the sword. As soon as the chakra is stored inside the sword the use says "Shoot to kill Shinso", as soon as the user says the last words the sword releases a large amount of chakra outwards from the blade straight forward at such a enormous speed that one without a dojutsu would find it hard to track (but not impossible). The chakra released from the blade is white in color, and is incredibly sharp. As the chakra is released from the blade, the user is capable of swinging the sword, sending the chakra still attached to the sword around as if it was a blade. The blade also carries tremendous force when extending. So much force that it can destroy any B-Rank defense or below. Shinsō is capable of reaching a maximum length equivalent to 10times its original length, Thus making the chakra shoot up to mid range. As soon as the chakra hits something it disperses after a few seconds, though if the chakra comes into contact with nothing, the user could swing his blade around in that turn, while it reverts back as soon as the next turn starts. The chakra blast strength is S-Rank.
The chakra has the same cutting power as the blade, and the time it takes to release Shinso to its full length is the same amount it takes to form a single handseal.

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Combo: see above, it basically leaves your opponent open for projectiles, underground attacks and gives you an opportunity to do something supplementary if you so wish.

Counter: The Original can't be too far off from the path the clone started from, so just act like you're attacking the clone, while in actuality your attacking the user.

See? That wasn't so hard was it? It was lovely u_u

NOW! I its time for a battle combination again ^_^
Oh.. and the best part is....*drum roll* YOU CAN'T USE WHAT YOU JUST USED ABOVE

Readdyyyy...settt..... GOOO!!!

 

[Better]

Gin stands there as you create a clone and it begins to run at me. (yes i'm controlling your clone xD) As he does Gin sends his chakra into the mind of the clone and it begins to run in circle. Although to him it seems like he's still running at me. Gin waits till he gets tired and then takes advantage. He runs at the clone and disappears, appearing under him, and kicking him up into the air with his left foot. He then jumps up and appears behind your clone, tapping him to turn him around and then the assault happens. Continuous kicks going back and forth with his left leg starting off. Then to finish him off with a final kick to the chest sending him down to the ground and causing him to disperse.

( Kori Shinchū no Jutsu ) - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion on the opponent that makes them believe they are travelling in a straight line, when instead they are moving in circles. This is only effective on moving opponents. If the opponent travels in the circle for hours, they will be exhausted.

(Shishi Rendan) - Lions Barrage
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:15
Description: A variant technique of the Front Lotus, It is an ultra-fast combo attack that requires an advanced physical condition and a certain knack for it. The opponent is first kicked into the air and shadowed with the Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Upon inflicting a blow, one takes advantage of said opponent's counterattack to spin around and rise again for further assaults. Since the fall is increased in velocity with each blow, the damage when one is eventually struck to the ground is inconceivable. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest.

 

[Mathias]

Gin stands there as you create a clone and it begins to run at me. (yes i'm controlling your clone xD) As he does Gin sends his chakra into the mind of the clone and it begins to run in circle. Although to him it seems like he's still running at me. Gin waits till he gets tired and then takes advantage. He runs at the clone and disappears, appearing under him, and kicking him up into the air with his left foot. He then jumps up and appears behind your clone, tapping him to turn him around and then the assault happens. Continuous kicks going back and forth with his left leg starting off. Then to finish him off with a final kick to the chest sending him down to the ground and causing him to disperse.

( Kori Shinchū no Jutsu ) - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion on the opponent that makes them believe they are travelling in a straight line, when instead they are moving in circles. This is only effective on moving opponents. If the opponent travels in the circle for hours, they will be exhausted.

(Shishi Rendan) - Lions Barrage
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:15
Description: A variant technique of the Front Lotus, It is an ultra-fast combo attack that requires an advanced physical condition and a certain knack for it. The opponent is first kicked into the air and shadowed with the Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Upon inflicting a blow, one takes advantage of said opponent's counterattack to spin around and rise again for further assaults. Since the fall is increased in velocity with each blow, the damage when one is eventually struck to the ground is inconceivable. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest.

HOW DARE YOU CONTROL MY CLONE!!! xD very good u_U

( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 35
Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.

A pretty neat canon genjutsu. I want you to take out your sword, custom or not. You will then proceed to channel your chakra throughout your sword as you wave it back and forth in front of you, releasing all that focused chakra onto my clone's brain, placing him under an illusion. Inside the illusion the clone will see a countless number of copies of the arm holding your sword all scattered throughout his view. During this confusion, you will utilize the moment to slash him down in your desired way.

 

[Better]

HOW DARE YOU CONTROL MY CLONE!!! xD very good u_U



A pretty neat canon genjutsu. I want you to take out your sword, custom or not. You will then proceed to channel your chakra throughout your sword as you wave it back and forth in front of you, releasing all that focused chakra onto my clone's brain, placing him under an illusion. Inside the illusion the clone will see a countless number of copies of the arm holding your sword all scattered throughout his view. During this confusion, you will utilize the moment to slash him down in your desired way.

Gin takes his sword and focuses his chakra throughout his sword. He then wave it back and forth in front of him releasing all the built up on chakra into my opponents head. This cast an illusion that will make the clone see a bunch of copies of Gin's arm holding out the sword everywhere. This confuses him. Afterwards Gin reaches the clone and swings his sword left to right across the clones neck. Slicing his head and causing it to disperse.

(Kumo-Ryū Omotegiri) - Cloud-Style Front Beheading
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage: 25
Description: The user slashes forwards in front of them with their sword to strike the enemy target.
Note: Can only be used by a Cloud Member bio or be trained by one.

Combo: Above, the time for this technique is pretty short since someone could easily figure genjutsu.

Counter: Pretty easy to tell it's a genjutsu. With the bunch of arms and everything xD Nagashi will work.

 

[Mathias]

Gin takes his sword and focuses his chakra throughout his sword. He then wave it back and forth in front of him releasing all the built up on chakra into my opponents head. This cast an illusion that will make the clone see a bunch of copies of Gin's arm holding out the sword everywhere. This confuses him. Afterwards Gin reaches the clone and swings his sword left to right across the clones neck. Slicing his head and causing it to disperse.

(Kumo-Ryū Omotegiri) - Cloud-Style Front Beheading
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage: 25
Description: The user slashes forwards in front of them with their sword to strike the enemy target.
Note: Can only be used by a Cloud Member bio or be trained by one.

Combo: Above, the time for this technique is pretty short since someone could easily figure genjutsu.

Counter: Pretty easy to tell it's a genjutsu. With the bunch of arms and everything xD Nagashi will work.

Try to be more creative in terms of countering from now on please. Nagashi has been abused as a counter for long enough u_u

( Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō Sakkaku ) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to strike. In reality, the opponent is immobilized by the illusion, allowing the user to strike.

After performing the Dog → Hare → Snake → Ram hand seals, I'd like you to release your chakra outwards and manipulate my clone's brain once again, placing him inside an illusion. Inside of the illusion, the target will see the user vanish as several bean vines grow from the ground beneath him. The vines suddenly start to bind the target in place whilst lifting them into the air. As the vines rise, the target will proceed to see a bean pod rise near his location, revealing the user as the pod grows and opens up, showing the user ready to strike.

 

[Better]

Lawl, i agree but it's simple XD

Gin focuses his chakra a bit longer this time. He than forms the hand seals Dog → Hare → Snake → Ram. He than releases his chakra into the clones brain, causing them to go into a genjutsu. In the genjutsu, Gin disappears and vines start to rise up and trap the clone. Than in a bean pod, Gin rises up and strikes him the genjutsu. In reality, Gin is making his way around the clone and when the clone sees Gin rise up in front of him, Gin is behind him, and stabbing him in the back with a kunai. The stab causes the clone to disperse.

Combo = Gemjutsu combos are hard <_<, well the opponent will be immobilized, so a quick jutsu like earth spikes will work, or gushing water imprisonment to stop the use of nagashi. Or like how i did, with free form.

Counter: Since i'd be immobilized, my option for pain is out the door. Full body surges like Nagashi, or a weight variant tech.

 

[Mathias]

Lawl, i agree but it's simple XD

Gin focuses his chakra a bit longer this time. He than forms the hand seals Dog → Hare → Snake → Ram. He than releases his chakra into the clones brain, causing them to go into a genjutsu. In the genjutsu, Gin disappears and vines start to rise up and trap the clone. Than in a bean pod, Gin rises up and strikes him the genjutsu. In reality, Gin is making his way around the clone and when the clone sees Gin rise up in front of him, Gin is behind him, and stabbing him in the back with a kunai. The stab causes the clone to disperse.

Combo = Gemjutsu combos are hard <_<, well the opponent will be immobilized, so a quick jutsu like earth spikes will work, or gushing water imprisonment to stop the use of nagashi. Or like how i did, with free form.

Counter: Since i'd be immobilized, my option for pain is out the door. Full body surges like Nagashi, or a weight variant tech.

OOC: Sorry for the long delay. I wasn't expecting my new job to take out so much out of my free time and such. Add motocross during the weekends and it almost became impossible to log in xD (I know it must be getting old to hear D: I'll try my best!) Although.. I'm going on vacation this weekend and coming back mondayish LOL .-,

Yeah some genjutsu combos are hard, however some are amazing to make xD as far as countering goes... its pretty universal as well. That's why I don't very much like to use my template for genjutsu. At least not the full version.

( Magen: Hanarasui ) - Demonic Illusion: Flower Head Death
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40 due to stress on the mind
Description: The user will trap the target within an illusion where the opponent appears to be trapped in a large flower bud which then explodes. The opponent is made to believe that an explosion actually occurred and collapses, believing himself to be injured. The resulting stress on his mind causes damage.

I want you to focus your chakra inside my clone's head whilst performing the snake hand seal followed by a hand seal specific to this technique. Once the clone is placed under the illusion, you will manipulate his senses, causing him to see himself being trapped inside a large flower bud. The bud explodes shortly after. The clone would believe feel himself collapsing against the floor as he is "injured" by the explosion, resulting in mental damage from the stress.

Note, this does not immobilize the clone in any way, it simply draws his attention as he believes himself to have "exploded"