[CJ] Geets n' Pervy - Burning Ring of Fire!

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Ish here but you don't have to bro
Everyone gets one xD j/k, I have faith you could utilize this and only offer it to those I think could pull off a moonsault or top rope elbow drop or whatever else you could imagine

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(Katon/Futon - Sukueasākuru) - Fire/Wind Release - The Squared Circle
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 per turn to maintain)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The squared circle, where men become men. This jutsu is made to keep opponents from simply running away when confronted in cqc. The user begins by performing the Dragon seal, gathering Katon chakra thru their body and releasing it 360 degree's around themselves (Does no damage till it forms) forming 3 ropes of dense fire roughly 2 inches in diameter and spaced 1ft > 3ft > 5ft off the ground in the shape of a square roughly 7 1/2 meters away from the user in the epicenter (15 meters squared). The ropes while burning anyone that touches them also are dense and elastic enough to spring someone back off of them if thrown into them hard enough. As the ropes form, the user then molds his wind chakra, releasing to the ground at the 4 corners, creating 4 posts a 1/4 meter wide to form from the ground to just above the last rope, The user dulls the chakra on the top of the pillars, making it solid enough to stand on without being cut by the user or anyone else, but the sides of the pillars from the ground up will cause slicing damage equal to B rank if touched. If an opponent attempts to run and jump out of the ring, the wind chakra in the corners can released outwards from their respective positions, setting the 3 ropes of fire ablaze sending flames shooting upwards 5 meters into the air, burning for the remainder of that turn causing a combined 90 damage, but costing an additional 20 chakra as well as a move, then ending the jutsu completely at the end of that turn.

~Notes~
-Uses 2 moves of the 3 moves allowed per turn to activate
-Can only be used once per battle, however can be maintained as long as chakra is put into it every turn by the user
-If the jutsu is ended by sending the wind pillars into the ropes, no other Katon jutsu's or any Forbidden ranked jutsu can be used that turn
-Must be taught by -Vegeta

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Maaaan...it was the first submission to the cj thread I ever made. When it was declined cause "We say no to technology" I totally understood......then I saw the Mandalores and was like "WTF?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!" xD

How about just Makankōsappō (SBC). I appreciate this, you really didn't have to
 
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Geets flies back in, tossing a scroll to Pervy..
Fuuinjutsu: Do~ūmu no bodi (Sealing Arts: Body of Doom)
Type:Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short
Chakra: 20 (-10 per turn)
Damage:N/A
Description:This seal may be passively applied to the users bio, or it can be applied in the form of the Kanji for "Repeat" forming on the user's body in mid battle. When this seal is applied it remains active until the end of the battle. When active, it forms an almost skin tight barrier over the user and any weapons he may holding at the time, the color of such barrier being dependent on the user. This barrier is basically dormant and does absolutely nothing until 2 conditions are met. The first is that the user must be using a taijutsu or kenjutsu technique. The second is that while using the aforementioned type of technique, the user is touching an elemental technique made up of another being's chakra. When these two conditions are met, the barrier will absorb 10 chakra (note that this doesn't meant it takes anything away from its rank or power) from the jutsu it is touching and immediately use that chakra to passively infuse itself with whatever type of chakra that it absorbed. It should be noted that this gives the barrier no inherent power nor defenses, but what it does do is combine the chakra absorbed with the power of the Taijutsu or Kenjutsu move in order to give it an elemental infusion, making it play on equal terms with the whatever element it is touching at the time. This will also allow the users Tai/Ken techniques to interact with an opposing elemental jutsu without the user getting hurt, as again, the raw power of these types of techniques from the user now have the same elemental infusion as a type of coating over them against the technique they would be used against. For example, due to having an elemental coating over it, the user could the D rank Slap technique to slap a D rank fire ball out of the way. And again, the barrier is merely providing protection, the users tai or kenjutsu is providing the power to truly compete. If the barrier absorbs chakra from an opposing technique, it will negate the cost of 10 chakra for that turn due to the chakra absorbed fueling it. To clarify, the barrier itself does no damage and provides no defense. It only coats the users taijutsu and kenjutsu techniques in the same opposing element that the user is touching at the time, allowing the user to interact equally with an element he normally wouldn't be able to using those fields (such as fire) without being hurt. Without a taijutsu or kenjutsu move used with this barrier, the barrier is pretty much useless.
-The activation may be passively done but counts as a move slot
-Only works on the Basic Five Elements
-Can only be used four times per battle
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Geets flies back in, tossing a scroll to Pervy..
Fuuinjutsu: Do~ūmu no bodi (Sealing Arts: Body of Doom)
Type:Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short
Chakra: 20 (-10 per turn)
Damage:N/A
Description:This seal may be passively applied to the users bio, or it can be applied in the form of the Kanji for "Repeat" forming on the user's body in mid battle. When this seal is applied it remains active until the end of the battle. When active, it forms an almost skin tight barrier over the user and any weapons he may holding at the time, the color of such barrier being dependent on the user. This barrier is basically dormant and does absolutely nothing until 2 conditions are met. The first is that the user must be using a taijutsu or kenjutsu technique. The second is that while using the aforementioned type of technique, the user is touching an elemental technique made up of another being's chakra. When these two conditions are met, the barrier will absorb 10 chakra (note that this doesn't meant it takes anything away from its rank or power) from the jutsu it is touching and immediately use that chakra to passively infuse itself with whatever type of chakra that it absorbed. It should be noted that this gives the barrier no inherent power nor defenses, but what it does do is combine the chakra absorbed with the power of the Taijutsu or Kenjutsu move in order to give it an elemental infusion, making it play on equal terms with the whatever element it is touching at the time. This will also allow the users Tai/Ken techniques to interact with an opposing elemental jutsu without the user getting hurt, as again, the raw power of these types of techniques from the user now have the same elemental infusion as a type of coating over them against the technique they would be used against. For example, due to having an elemental coating over it, the user could the D rank Slap technique to slap a D rank fire ball out of the way. And again, the barrier is merely providing protection, the users tai or kenjutsu is providing the power to truly compete. If the barrier absorbs chakra from an opposing technique, it will negate the cost of 10 chakra for that turn due to the chakra absorbed fueling it. To clarify, the barrier itself does no damage and provides no defense. It only coats the users taijutsu and kenjutsu techniques in the same opposing element that the user is touching at the time, allowing the user to interact equally with an element he normally wouldn't be able to using those fields (such as fire) without being hurt. Without a taijutsu or kenjutsu move used with this barrier, the barrier is pretty much useless.
-The activation may be passively done but counts as a move slot
-Only works on the Basic Five Elements
-Can only be used four times per battle
Any questions?
Basically all my F rank tai customs can now slap away any F rank... no matter the power? o_O

Also:

(Katon: kensei no doragon ) - Fire Release: Power of the Ash Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their fire chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their fire chakra around a part of their body covering them in a cloud of molten hot ash that's as hot as fire, till glowing with an ember but doesn't touch the users skin nor burn them. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by these ash cloud created by the user, it will great a burst of molten hot ash on impact from the user, to burn the target more and producing some additional concussive force. This ash will be released forwards in a wave/blast like a fireblast but the ash will burn on contact and stick to what it touches and continues to burn up to the end of the users next turn.

Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
Note: Can't use water jutsu at the same time
Note: Can be used once every 3 turns.

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Basically all my F rank tai customs can now slap away any F rank... no matter the power? o_O

Also:

(Katon: kensei no doragon ) - Fire Release: Power of the Ash Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their fire chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their fire chakra around a part of their body covering them in a cloud of molten hot ash that's as hot as fire, till glowing with an ember but doesn't touch the users skin nor burn them. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by these ash cloud created by the user, it will great a burst of molten hot ash on impact from the user, to burn the target more and producing some additional concussive force. This ash will be released forwards in a wave/blast like a fireblast but the ash will burn on contact and stick to what it touches and continues to burn up to the end of the users next turn.

Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
Note: Can't use water jutsu at the same time
Note: Can be used once every 3 turns.

Any questions?
Indeed you can, and no questions ^^
 
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