Gamer seeks Fire and Water training... Any sensei?

[gamerelite2008]

good now for
Suiton:Suigandan)-Water Style:Water Fang Bullet
? Type:Attack
? Range:Short-Mid
? Chakra cost:15
? Damage Points:30
? Descripton: Small tendrils of water attack user form the water sources surface in a circular formation.
*does hand seals*
concentarte your chakra into the water to create water tendrils that attack in a circular motion

OK
Suiton:Suigandan)-Water Style:Water Fang Bullet
? Type:Attack
? Range:Short-Mid
? Chakra cost:15
? Damage Points:30
? Descripton: Small tendrils of water attack user form the water sources surface in a circular formation.

 

[Hellsbadass]

good lets try it again

 

[gamerelite2008]

good lets try it again

Ok but after this has to be my last tonight because I need sleep sorry sensei.
Suiton:Suigandan)-Water Style:Water Fang Bullet
? Type:Attack
? Range:Short-Mid
? Chakra cost:15
? Damage Points:30
? Descripton: Small tendrils of water attack user form the water sources surface in a circular formation.
How was that?