Good good. It's also worth mentioning that frostbite tends to cause infection extremely easily. As for its relation to Gentle Fist, I'd say that fbf is stronger in terms of the harm that it causes, though because of the Byakugan's power, Gentle Fist holds certain advantages over it.
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(Tōshō no Ken: Furosutonippu)-Frostbite Fist: Frostnip
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will gather and focus ice chakra into their fists and quickly strike at a target with a series of open palmed attacks, similar to the way one would attack when using Gentle Fist. Much like the Gentle Fist, the movements of this technique focus on speed rather than strength, and as such, they tend to be quite quick. As they make contact with the target, the user will push an amount of ice chakra into the target's body in the form of a cold 'wave.' The wave will be about the size of the user's fist. This wave of chakra rapidly freezes the tissues of the surface skin in the area that the punched. The result of the skin being frozen is initially itching and considerable pain, however, after a full turn of feeling pain, the afflicted area will go numb, which can make using this body part to fight difficult. After four turns of numbness, the skin and tissues thaw, allowing the body part to function normally once more.
Note: A maximum of three touches can be performed per time this jutsu is used.
Note: Punching the same location multiple times will yield no additional affect.
Note: Can only be used by Frostbite Fist Users.
Analyze it and provide examples of what will happen when you use this on different body parts.
Hmm.. looks quite similair to the previous one aside from the fact that this one also affects deeper tissue, perhaps able to actually push the wave through to freeze nerves and like part of an organ directly infront of the wave? What makes this alot better though seems to be that it doesn't simply cause a temporary freeze but after the numbness will actually inflict more pain. I suppose it's best to use this technique on the opponent's hands, preferably their palms as it would cause quite some trouble for them to make handseals then, not just during the numbness but also afterwards due to the pain inflicted by the blisters.Precisely. And yes, this is only going to have significant effects on the surface of your opponents skin. It's really going to be best served to strike at an opponents hands, as making handseals/gripping things/using your hands in general with any skin being frozen is exceptionally difficult. The trick is striking at hands when in vulnerable positions, ie kenjutsu and taijutsu users mid attack. Don't forget that fbf grants you enhanced agility, which imo compensates for the lack of Byakugan.
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(Tōshō no Ken: Furosuto no Sunappu) Frostbite Fist: Frost Snap
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will gather and focus ice chakra into their fists and quickly strike at a target with a series of open palmed attacks, similar to the way one would attack when using Gentle Fist. Much like the Gentle Fist, the movements of this technique focus on speed rather than strength, and as such, they tend to be quite quick. As they make contact with the target, the user will push an amount of ice chakra into the target's body in the form of a cold 'wave.' The wave will be about the size of the user's fist. This wave is more powerful than the one used in Frostbite Fist: Frostnip. The area that this wave passes through will have its tissues within the surface skin will be frozen, as well as some of the deeper tissues. As a result, there will be greater pain than there was in Frostnip. In addition to this pain, the skin is frozen and hardens. After a full turn of dealing with this pain, the location will become numb, making usage of the body part difficult. Two turns after this jutsu was used, the skin hit will form painful black blisters, although, the target will be unable to feel the pain until the numbness wears off. After four turns of numbness, the skin will thaw, and the target will be inflicted with great pain due to the blisters.
Note: A maximum of two touches can be used per time this jutsu is used.'
Note: Punching the same location multiple times will yield no additional affects.
Note: Can only be used by Frostbite Fist users.
Note: Can only be used three times
Same thing please.
Waoh, this one indeed makes the other two seem pointless xD hmm.. striking the opponent in the heart with it would probably be instant kill u-u but yeah, this one would be pretty awesome to use on any of the opponent's limb just to see them try and fight while one of their limbs is completely useless. Pretty much the same as the other two only lots stronger so.. not much else to add xDMore or less, yes. As this one has further penetration, you can aim closer to the opponent's core and still have a larger effect. Shoulders, for example, are a good target, though a hand would work just as well.
Unfortunately, these last two jutsu are more or less invalidated by the final one as it's just a fart superior version. Whenever I made these originally, there were no limits on jutsu in a fighting style. t.t
(Tōshō no Ken: Tōshō)-Frostbite Fist: Frostbite
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather and focus ice chakra into their fists and quickly strike at a target with a series of open palmed attacks, similar to the way one would attack when using Gentle Fist. Much like the Gentle Fist, the movements of this technique focus on speed rather than strength, and as such, they tend to be quite quick. As they make contact with the target, the user will push an amount of ice chakra into the target's body in the form of a cold 'wave.' The wave will be about the size of the user's fist. This wave is more powerful than the one used in Frostbite Fist: Frost Snap. As a result of this, the muscles, tendons, blood vessels and nerves that were hit by the wave all freeze. Because of this, the skin in this area will turn hard and feel waxy, and the body part will become temporarily unusable, and the user will lose all feeling in said body part. After two turns, the afflicted area will form large purple blisters where the wave originally passed through. After three turns of being unable to use said body part, the target will once more be able to use it, though they will feel an extreme amount of pain in the inside of the afflicted area due to the freezing, though they will still have no feeling on the outside sections of the body part. Unless the target is treated by a medical ninja, they will have loss of feeling in the afflicted area due to nerve damage for the rest of the fight.
Note: A maximum of one touch can be used per time this jutsu is used.
Note: Can only be used by Frostbite Fist users.
Note: The user will be unable to perform any Frostbite Fist jutsu for the following turn.
Note: No A rank or above ice ninjutsu the following turn.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Do the same thing you did for the last two. z.z