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This one does not gather Francium, this one uses the one you already have. Imagine this like Pervy's Carbon covering technique. Or was it caramel? You coat the field, your surroundings in Francium. With this you can prevent the usage of B-rank and below Earth techniques.
But you need the passive technique and 2 turns before you can use this one, right? Can't you merge the techniques and say that the covered field expands with each turn. Like 1st turn D/C and short range, etc. You get the point. It's a waste. Come on, you see all those complex and bible long customs with who knows how much exploitable stuff in there and they get approved, yet you stick with max. 1 or 2 sentences long repetitive jutsus.
I'm not attacking you here, just giving you advice because I love what you did so far, but I think your baby has much more potential.