[Romance] Forever Lasting

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Forever Lasting

Me and her, together forever,
that was the way I wanted it for me and her,
we loved each other more than anything else,
I wanted to be with her, always,
to have that feeling of eternal love, forever.

All her and I wanted, was to have the fleeting moments,
last forever more, to be in each other’s arms.
to forever be there for each other,
and for the first time before any other,
I felt truly alive, I felt true love.

I gave us our all, so too did she,
I always thought we were inseparable,
to have anything come between us was intolerable,
though this experience had proven to be educational,
as the love I had was torn from me soon after.

All I had wanted, was to have my time with her last forever,
but I now know that those thoughts were that of a foolish idiot,
the thoughts of a boy who had yet to experience pain,
the thoughts of one whose heart, not yet frozen,
now, my pain, my sorrow, is forever lasting.
 
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<div class="bbWrapper">That's deep, also so sad.<br /> Good job on this. I enjoyed reading it.</div>
 

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I just read you are only 14. So if this is about a real love story don't let it get so hard to you man. As said, you are only 14, pain is temporary. you haven't even expierenced a quarter of your life yet.
 

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being dramatic much? lol
The point of poetry is to put feelings to paper. This isn't about you, this poem is written about me.

I just read you are only 14. So if this is about a real love story don't let it get so hard to you man. As said, you are only 14, pain is temporary. you haven't even expierenced a quarter of your life yet.
If the pain was temporary, then it would've left me years ago.
 
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