[Romance] Forever Lasting

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Forever Lasting

Me and her, together forever,
that was the way I wanted it for me and her,
we loved each other more than anything else,
I wanted to be with her, always,
to have that feeling of eternal love, forever.

All her and I wanted, was to have the fleeting moments,
last forever more, to be in each other’s arms.
to forever be there for each other,
and for the first time before any other,
I felt truly alive, I felt true love.

I gave us our all, so too did she,
I always thought we were inseparable,
to have anything come between us was intolerable,
though this experience had proven to be educational,
as the love I had was torn from me soon after.

All I had wanted, was to have my time with her last forever,
but I now know that those thoughts were that of a foolish idiot,
the thoughts of a boy who had yet to experience pain,
the thoughts of one whose heart, not yet frozen,
now, my pain, my sorrow, is forever lasting.
 

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Amazing XD
 
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That's deep, also so sad.
Good job on this. I enjoyed reading it.
 

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I feel ya bro, hearthache is real shit.
 

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No but seriously it was good :D nice work +rep
 

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I just read you are only 14. So if this is about a real love story don't let it get so hard to you man. As said, you are only 14, pain is temporary. you haven't even expierenced a quarter of your life yet.
 

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being dramatic much? lol

The point of poetry is to put feelings to paper. This isn't about you, this poem is written about me.

I just read you are only 14. So if this is about a real love story don't let it get so hard to you man. As said, you are only 14, pain is temporary. you haven't even expierenced a quarter of your life yet.

If the pain was temporary, then it would've left me years ago.
 

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The point of poetry is to put feelings to paper. This isn't about you, this poem is written about me.



If the pain was temporary, then it would've left me years ago.
The first cut is the deepest.
 

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The first cut is the deepest.

This was the second. The first was a little while before and we weren't nearly as serious. If you wish to further converse, take it to my VM wall.
 
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