[CJ] Forbidden Fruit
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( Fuuton: Fūryoku ryūshi bīmu ) - Wind Style: Wind Particle Beam
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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to the user)
Description:
This technique is a simple yet powerful wind technique which focuses purely on destructive power. The user draws blood from his and like a summoning technique then weaves together three hand seals (Tiger - Dragon - Snake) whilst gather a massive amount of chakra directly in the center of his chest. When the three hand seals are finished the user moves his hands from out of the path of his chest and releases from the chest a condensed circular beam of glowing wind chakra. The beam begins as a circular, 3 foot in radius beam until it reaches five meters away from the user. Once it leaves close range the chakra can no longer be controlled and it suddenly expands outwards into a large half dome like explosion that moves outwards 30m in every direction except back at the user. The concentrated wind expanding so quickly leaves everything in its path cut up on a small scale, so being hit with it is Certain death. The aftermath of the attack is very identical to that of the mini tbb that the 4tails naruto did when fighting Orochimaru, though due to so much powerful wind chakra being blasted from the users chest, it leaves his chest cut up with 1inch deep cuts that leaves him bleeding moderately.
- Usable one time
- No wind techniques in the same or next turn
- The user can't use A-rank or lower Tai for 3 turns due to the body being worn out - Cannot use techniques above S-Rank for 2 turns afterwards
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to the user)
Description:
This technique is a simple yet powerful wind technique which focuses purely on destructive power. The user draws blood from his and like a summoning technique then weaves together three hand seals (Tiger - Dragon - Snake) whilst gather a massive amount of chakra directly in the center of his chest. When the three hand seals are finished the user moves his hands from out of the path of his chest and releases from the chest a condensed circular beam of glowing wind chakra. The beam begins as a circular, 3 foot in radius beam until it reaches five meters away from the user. Once it leaves close range the chakra can no longer be controlled and it suddenly expands outwards into a large half dome like explosion that moves outwards 30m in every direction except back at the user. The concentrated wind expanding so quickly leaves everything in its path cut up on a small scale, so being hit with it is Certain death. The aftermath of the attack is very identical to that of the mini tbb that the 4tails naruto did when fighting Orochimaru, though due to so much powerful wind chakra being blasted from the users chest, it leaves his chest cut up with 1inch deep cuts that leaves him bleeding moderately.
- Usable one time
- No wind techniques in the same or next turn
- The user can't use A-rank or lower Tai for 3 turns due to the body being worn out - Cannot use techniques above S-Rank for 2 turns afterwards
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Wth.....why do i have to do this??
Anyway...
Strong points
-It is quick, albeit requiring seals. If done smoothly, it makes it difficult to counter
- It has a large potential for combinations. I can combine it with a flaming profectile to make it an easy fire and wind combo, releasing a flaming burst of wind that expands easily.
- Due to its wide size, it makes it hard to counter quickly unless fire is used. But if used in the right situation, it makes even fire a liability. If I use this with a eath jutsu either behind or in conjunction with this, it leaves little room for fire without it being a drawback.
Weak points
-For all intents in purposes, its a burst of expanding wind. Even with the multiple ways to use it, its still just that
- If I use an equally strong wind jutsu, then I can either halt the movement or reverse the flow of it via a cj.
-If I am forced forward out of short range, I risk injurying myself as well.
Combinations-strategies
-I have a jutsu that increases the power of wind jutsus so i can easily make it strronger and I can also limit my enemy on what he can use so I can make it even harder on what he can use with against it.
Ways to counter this technique
-Simply release a stronger fire or attack the enemy after the initial burst is released
Questions
-None at all really.
Anyway...
Strong points
-It is quick, albeit requiring seals. If done smoothly, it makes it difficult to counter
- It has a large potential for combinations. I can combine it with a flaming profectile to make it an easy fire and wind combo, releasing a flaming burst of wind that expands easily.
- Due to its wide size, it makes it hard to counter quickly unless fire is used. But if used in the right situation, it makes even fire a liability. If I use this with a eath jutsu either behind or in conjunction with this, it leaves little room for fire without it being a drawback.
Weak points
-For all intents in purposes, its a burst of expanding wind. Even with the multiple ways to use it, its still just that
- If I use an equally strong wind jutsu, then I can either halt the movement or reverse the flow of it via a cj.
-If I am forced forward out of short range, I risk injurying myself as well.
Combinations-strategies
-I have a jutsu that increases the power of wind jutsus so i can easily make it strronger and I can also limit my enemy on what he can use so I can make it even harder on what he can use with against it.
Ways to counter this technique
-Simply release a stronger fire or attack the enemy after the initial burst is released
Questions
-None at all really.
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Okay, now find my jutsu, post it and analyze it like i had to do and give me a detailed explanation as well on how you would use it and counter it and the best ways to combo this with each element. :| Make me use anotherr template....
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Poseidon's Tsunami|Poseidon's Tidal Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (N/A in long range) (-20 to user from chakra strain)
Description: The user channels water chakra into his sword and swings it in the manner of a arc, in any direction (from the ground up; From up to down, left to right, etc.). While swinging the sword and forming the arc, the user will release the water through means of the sword, releasing a blast in water in the form of either a compressed crescent of water, or a large wave of water which will be released in the pathway of the swing of the user's sword. The crescent is strong enough to put out any flame projectile and continue through it (with the power of an A-rank water jutsu) and can cut through large boulders with relative ease (earth up to A-rank) The wave of water would have enough force behind it to crush small and medium sized buildings and uproot trees ( at short range). The further it goes, the less damage and wider the damage will be so by the time it reaches long range, the only thing that would happen to the target is they would get soaked and pushed back a few feet.
*Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*After using, no Water jutsus can be used for two turns*
*If used, no other sword related jutsus can be used that same turn*
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (N/A in long range) (-20 to user from chakra strain)
Description: The user channels water chakra into his sword and swings it in the manner of a arc, in any direction (from the ground up; From up to down, left to right, etc.). While swinging the sword and forming the arc, the user will release the water through means of the sword, releasing a blast in water in the form of either a compressed crescent of water, or a large wave of water which will be released in the pathway of the swing of the user's sword. The crescent is strong enough to put out any flame projectile and continue through it (with the power of an A-rank water jutsu) and can cut through large boulders with relative ease (earth up to A-rank) The wave of water would have enough force behind it to crush small and medium sized buildings and uproot trees ( at short range). The further it goes, the less damage and wider the damage will be so by the time it reaches long range, the only thing that would happen to the target is they would get soaked and pushed back a few feet.
*Can only be used by Lord of Kaos*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*After using, no Water jutsus can be used for two turns*
*If used, no other sword related jutsus can be used that same turn*
Strong points
Simply be fighting a normal close combat fight and bam, out of nowhere I unleash this bad boy to destroy someone..
Ways to counter this technique
High rank earth techniques could stop this
Wind techniques that move you out of its way.
Water techniques that move you out of the way.
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- No hand signs needed
- Can be done quickly and hold ALOT of killing potential at close range
- Is used with a sword
- Loses strength as it reaches certain ranges, and once it goes long range It's useless.
- No water for two turns after It's used
- Can only be used once
Simply be fighting a normal close combat fight and bam, out of nowhere I unleash this bad boy to destroy someone..
Ways to counter this technique
High rank earth techniques could stop this
Wind techniques that move you out of its way.
Water techniques that move you out of the way.
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I definitely did.. That's what the template was; analyzing and evaluating the jutsu thriugh the template.
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This is why you suck at training. templates shouldn't be how you evaluate a jitsu, that's just pointing out weaknesses and strengths, which is obvious as its a water projectile. Just by knowing that I can say that fire is weak against it and a just that moves you out the way will be good, that's common sense. Evaluating is telling how it can be used in ways outside the norm, how you would force an enemy into allowing you to use it, and even going as far as telling how you would combine a jutsu with every element to get a better combo. You have much to learn about teaching, young Nekura.
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>.> that's why you're here to teach me about teaching and such. T.T
So, what's up with that floating rock technique?
So, what's up with that floating rock technique?
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I'll let you slide for now... You'll learn to respect my rp, sir.
In the meantime, I'll be in the shadows until you're called back here.
And Ofc you're my personal sensei. You dropped Ramon and Corey and I replaced them both. >.>
In the meantime, I'll be in the shadows until you're called back here.
And Ofc you're my personal sensei. You dropped Ramon and Corey and I replaced them both. >.>
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Ciberr = Senpai
Broly = PS
Shady = Personal Student/Senpai
I'll beat Broly............... One day..
Broly = PS
Shady = Personal Student/Senpai
I'll beat Broly............... One day..
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