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[Ray Edge]

Basic Information
Name: Ray Edge
Nickname: Red
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Clan: N/A

Looks: (like my profile picture) Have serious but kind eyes, 1,78 meters and a tatoo on the left arm. On his right arm is the protector, over a scar. His weapon hidden on the back, carried all the times. Looks shy from afar, when in places he's not used to be.

Personality: Have a bit of sense of humor that keeps to himself. Knows the dangers a ninja life carries and treat it seriously. Usualy is hard on others, to get things done properly and expect to be treated the same way, but keep a gentle and friendly atittude to his closest friends. Have a strong sense of duty and companionship. With a cool head, accomplish missions and never exitate to defend a comrade.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Chunin
Specialty: N/A
Elements: Fuuton (yet to learn)
Your ninjutsu:
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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



Background Info.
History: Red had a tipical boy's life. Tipical for Konoha, at least. His parents where good folksthat survived the Kiuubi's attack, years ago, and raised him properly. Red always seemed to look for different ways to do the same shores, no matter how simple they where. During Orochimaru's attack, bolth his parents lost their lives in defence of Konoha, something sad and proudful at the same time for him. That set him on a personal mission to bring Orochimaru's plans to an end. Something happened in his last mission and Red was found barelly alive, with great memory loss as his ninja experience. Today he makes his first steps to gain his life back to his own hands, equiped with his weapon of choice and most prized memory, a family heirloom Kusari-gama made of a special material.

Other

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music:
Ich Will - Rammstein
Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0

~Approved~

 

[Zerabitu]

Rare to see a bio made correctly by the template. You have clearly read the rules
Maybe adding a picture or two wouldn't.
Other than that, I think it looks good!

About that weapon your bio carries on his back.
You can make it to a Custom Weapon if you wish and try and get an apploval for that aswell. But I suggest without confusing you more,
you let it be a normal weapon for the time being and work on it later on ^^

Here's a link to the

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part anyway for the future.

Good luck to your bio and have fun Roleplaying ​

 

[Hansom]

nice

 

[Ray Edge]

Thanks for the tips and cumpliments.
For the weapon, i just wish to "unlock it's hidden power" someday, when I learn (a lot) more about the game.