[Approved] First bio

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Basic Information
Name: Unmei Bureka
Nickname: Swoma (Sword Maniac)
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Clan: N/A

Looks: Brown short spiky hairs and blue eyes. 1.83 meters and ripped. Wears his headprotector with the headprotecter on the right side of his face. Always has his wakizashi on his back. Wears short sport pants and a red shortsleave with no pictures or text on it. He has a seal on the back of both hands

Personality: Beruka is a nice and gentle person to his friends, family and the konoha villagers. He always tries to help and please anyone. But when in battle, this kindness of his can turn into a feriociouse hate of anyone who tries to harm his village, friends or family. Beruka is very nationalistic and sees Konoha as the best hidden village of them all. After his journey, he was definitely sure about this. Beruka is also a bit clumsy. He knows this and can get realy angry at himself when he does something clumsy. When there is a situation that doesn't need to happen, Beruka's always the first to state that it doesn't have to go this way and that there are other alternatives.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: N/A
Elements: Raiton (need to learn)
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background. Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
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(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.
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Background Info.
History: As a little boy Bureka liked katanas. He'd go to the woods to find sticks and fight with them against his friends. When he was 10 he had been kidnaped while playing with his friends. No one knows how or even why, but three days later he was found again. The only thing strange were the seals on the back of both of his hands. Bureka's had been brainwashed and didn't know what hapened while he was kidnaped. Nobody knew what the seals were containing or how the seals could be released. While his parenst worried, the hokage said that if there might be any problems in the future concerning the seals on both hands, they had to contact the hokage and the hokage would do all in the hokage's might to help Bureka. Up to now there haven't been any problems, but it still stays a mystery why the seals were placed.
Nevertheless 2 months after Bureka had been kidnaped he forgot about fear and played again outside, always trying to become good at wielding a katana. At age of 12 he saw a ninja trainingbattle while playing hide and seek. While he sat hidden in the bushes the ninjas were using taijutsu to defeat eachother. Bureka was fascinated and wanted to be as good as these two ninjas, but he also had his love for fighting with katanas. From that day Bureka chose to become a master in taijutsu in combination with a wakizashi. At age of 14 he had become a genin. Since then he laid back for a while though. He went to different villages to learn more and more about katana use with taijutsu. At age of 18 he returned to konoha to rise in the ninja ranks and become an excellent ninja. At this moment he is training hard to do so.

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Theme Song and Background Music: Thousend Foot Krutch - Phenomenon

Battles

Won: 0
Lost:
0

~Approved~ however you can't use those seals atm for anything
 
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(Shunshin no Jutsu) - Body Flicker Technique

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement, the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
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(Utsusemi no Jutsu) - Empty Cicada Shell Technique

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Forming the needed hand seals, a shinobi can project his voice to a different area to hide their location and the number of allies at their side. It is an excellent complement to stealth tactics.
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Remove these jutsu's.

Remove everything related to the wolf contract. The wolf contract is in the possession of Roku, even saying that you might sign it one day is not allowed.

What do you mean by the seals on his hand? Does it have a purpose or not?

Btw a short katana is called a wakizashi.
 

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Remove these jutsu's.

Remove everything related to the wolf contract. The wolf contract is in the possession of Roku, even saying that you might sign it one day is not allowed.

What do you mean by the seals on his hand? Does it have a purpose or not?

Btw a short katana is called a wakizashi.
Okay, did it. And thank you for mentioning the wakizashi.
Well, I had this idea of letting those seals release at a higher level (cause on a mission someone recognised it and could release it) and then let some sort of power rise or something like that. Or isn't that alowed?
 

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Okay, did it. And thank you for mentioning the wakizashi.
Well, I had this idea of letting those seals release at a higher level (cause on a mission someone recognised it and could release it) and then let some sort of power rise or something like that. Or isn't that alowed?
It's a bit complicated. In theory it isn't really forbidden, however in your case it is.

Sealing (fuuinjutsu) is a skill that's only taught to people who are experienced in the RP system and even then it's not certain that they will get the approval to be taught it.

Then when you would have learned fuuinjutsu, you still would have to submit that as a custom jutsu in the Custom Jutsu Submission thread and get it approved. This doesn't only count for fuuinjutsu but for every custom jutsu you have in mind. Only after you would get it approved you would be able to do what you're saying.

But at this point that's completely impossible for you.
 

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Don't you need pictures ^_^? Haha, good job man. Hope to see you on the battlefield someday or on the training grounds when i become a sensei :)
 

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Ermm, it took me around 2weeks? 4weeks top? My first bio was jiraiya :) Don't worry, have patience, there are 100's more people like you waiting for their bio to get approvd you know ~.^
 
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