[Approved] First Bio constructive critism welcome! (also for approval)

[Aizen Tono]

also, you should use "SPOILERS"
Its basicallysomething that shortensyour sentence. Like you should use one in history,or personality, Etc.
This is a spoiler --->

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If you cannot find it, just type in [SPOILER ] (without space) then type in your sentence, then at the end, type in [/SPOILER]

So it should look like:

Spoiler

(Insert Data Here)

I hope this helped

THANK YOU I have been trying to figure that out for a couple of days xd

 

[Aizen Tono]

Remove an element, you haven't learend two elements so only post the one you first want to learn. Also bumping in this section is useless or do you think it's normal to keep posting bump on the same day you posted it while the threads in this section are organized on date they were posted?

LOL I guess I didn't think about it that way...sometimes I can be borderline retarded