[Fire with McRazor] The 4th Raikage

[McRazor]

Aye Sir!

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Jutsu 1
I concentrate katon chakra within me yet again. The channeling the chakra to my throat. I take a deep breath, i then focus on creating a ball of fire that resembles a ghost. I perform the tiger handseal and then exhale focusing on creating horns and yellow eyes. O_O

Jutsu 2
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I build up a large amount katon chakra in my chest I take a deep breath in and focus on chakra control and shape manipulation a release a burst of fire from my mouth. Once it leaves my mouth i focus on manipulating the flame into a large cylinder shape pillar f fire.

Good. Now hope you fight someone who's scared of ghosts. You might win that immediately. Joking, ofc. Let's move on.

( Katon: Kaen Senpū ) - Fire Release: Flame Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required four handseals Monkey → Bird → Dog → Ram, fire erupts around the user's body and then launches towards the target in a spiraling-manner. The target is then incinerated as the flames erupt upwards.

Channel your chakra throughout your whole body. Concentrate on its temperature and quantity. You need to collect a lot of chakra to make it burst from your body. After it bursts, using shape manipulation, make it spin towards your opponent. What do you think, could you use this as a shield to protect you from wind jutsus for example? Of course, according to the weaknesses and strengths.

( Katon: Benijigumo ) - Fire Release: Crimson Earth Spider
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing five handseals Tiger → Horse → Rat → Dog → Tiger , the user spews out fire that both surrounds the enemy and then transforms into a spider that attacks the enemy. This technique effectively traps and attacks an opponent at the same time, and can be used to force them into another attack.

Spew out fire that will encircle him and then use shape manipulation to create a spider out of the existing fire.

 

[Gèckö]

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Jutsu 1
I begin to channel katon chakra throughout my body. Focusing on keeping the chakra hot and points where the flame can escape from my body. I then perform the Monkey → Bird → Dog → Ram hand seals, then fire emerges from my body. I then focus my chakra into the shape or movement of a whirlwind. After its shape has been formed i direct it at my opponent.

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Jutsu 2
I build up katon chakra within me. I channel the chakra up to my throat, take a deep breath. The i perform the Tiger → Horse → Rat → Dog → Tiger handseals then exhale. After exhaling a fire ball emerges from my mouth, it makes contact with the ground and forms a circle. Once the circle is formed, i apply chakra to the circle and shape it into the form of a spider.

 

[McRazor]

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Jutsu 1
I begin to channel katon chakra throughout my body. Focusing on keeping the chakra hot and points where the flame can escape from my body. I then perform the Monkey → Bird → Dog → Ram hand seals, then fire emerges from my body. I then focus my chakra into the shape or movement of a whirlwind. After its shape has been formed i direct it at my opponent.

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Jutsu 2
I build up katon chakra within me. I channel the chakra up to my throat, take a deep breath. The i perform the Tiger → Horse → Rat → Dog → Tiger handseals then exhale. After exhaling a fire ball emerges from my mouth, it makes contact with the ground and forms a circle. Once the circle is formed, i apply chakra to the circle and shape it into the form of a spider.

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( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.

Same as a few previous jutsus. Simply breathe out a powerful fire stream at them.

 

[Gèckö]

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Jutsu 1
i build up a fair amount of katon chakra within me. I then channel that chakra to my throat. I take a deep breath in, then let out a smoothe yet deadly stream of fire.

 

[McRazor]

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Jutsu 1
i build up a fair amount of katon chakra within me. I then channel that chakra to my throat. I take a deep breath in, then let out a smoothe yet deadly stream of fire.

Alright. So, mind if we make a recapitulation of what you learnt so far? What I thought was, I give you 5 jutsus and you tell me their strengths and weaknesses and then we have a small battle. Just to check how you handle. Sounds good?

 

[Gèckö]

Alright. So, mind if we make a recapitulation of what you learnt so far? What I thought was, I give you 5 jutsus and you tell me their strengths and weaknesses and then we have a small battle. Just to check how you handle. Sounds good?

sounds fine with me

 

[McRazor]

sounds fine with me

( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

Alright, I need you to write down any advantages and disadvantages you can think of for these techniques. Take your time. You can also use narutowiki and youtube, in case you want to see how the technique completely works.

 

[Gèckö]

Jutsu 1
Adantage
once it comes in contact with anything solid it blows:|

Disadvantage
the gas can easily be blown back at the user

Jutsu 2
Adantage
the flames are extremly accurate do to the cord which is completly straight

Disadvantage
its direction is controlled by the cord, i.e if the opponent is moving the cord can't change directions so the flame would continue in a straight path

Jutsu 3
Adantage
can be used as a distraction and the flames can be controlled individually

Disadvantage
hella handseals, its short range

Jutsu 4
Adantage
the flames are coming from three different directions, the jutsu sstarts off as one then splits up causing confusion

Disadvantage
even more handselas then the jutsu before, due to the amount of handseals this jutsu would take a while to actually start

Jutsu 5
Adantage
no handseals, and once it hits the ground it erupts into a geyser. Also its incredible range

Disadvantage
the jutsu is aerial based so the opponent would have time to react

 

[McRazor]

Jutsu 1
Adantage
once it comes in contact with anything solid it blows:|

Disadvantage
the gas can easily be blown back at the user

Jutsu 2
Adantage
the flames are extremly accurate do to the cord which is completly straight

Disadvantage
its direction is controlled by the cord, i.e if the opponent is moving the cord can't change directions so the flame would continue in a straight path

Jutsu 3
Adantage
can be used as a distraction and the flames can be controlled individually

Disadvantage
hella handseals, its short range

Jutsu 4
Adantage
the flames are coming from three different directions, the jutsu sstarts off as one then splits up causing confusion

Disadvantage
even more handselas then the jutsu before, due to the amount of handseals this jutsu would take a while to actually start

Jutsu 5
Adantage
no handseals, and once it hits the ground it erupts into a geyser. Also its incredible range

Disadvantage
the jutsu is aerial based so the opponent would have time to react

Excellent. Nothing to add. Let's try the battle typed training now. I will make a move and I expect you to defend just by using fire techniques you learned so far.

As I notice you at mid range from me, I quickly channel wind chakra into my left hand and swing it in order to release a crescent wind blade towards you. I immediately follow up with a water vortex that I shoot out of my palm towards you.

(Fūton: Kaze No Yaiba) - Wind Style: Wind Blade

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Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent

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Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

 

[Gèckö]

Will get this either tommorrow or thursday i am on my tablet unless you want to skip and go back to jutsus

 

[McRazor]

Will get this either tommorrow or thursday i am on my tablet unless you want to skip and go back to jutsus

I want to make sure you understood everything that I taught you so far, and I want to see your skills in battle. All you have to do is counter my move by using fire techniques that you learned so far.

 

[Gèckö]

alright i will edit this post with my counter later

 

[Gèckö]

As i see you swinging your arms i quickly let out a stream of fire from my mouth. As the fire is coming out of my mouth i
manipulate a small portion of the flame into a wall in which i hide behind

( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

 

[McRazor]

As i see you swinging your arms i quickly let out a stream of fire from my mouth. As the fire is coming out of my mouth i
manipulate a small portion of the flame into a wall in which i hide behind

( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

Alright. This is the exact reason why I did this, to see if you understand the weakness/strength relation. This, what you did was not bad, but not enough.

First thing I suggest is, reading

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thread. As you can see, fire beats wind but gets beaten by water. This of course has its limits. 1 rank up/down which means that a B rank fire technique could beat an A rank wind technique after which they'd both cancel out. However, a C rank water would easily extinguish a B rank fire technique. It would probably create a mist in between, but due to their small power it wouldn't be a big deal. Stronger jutsus, bigger mist.

So, what you should've done was just add 1 more B rank fire technique. A technique that would first cancel out the wind and then the wall combo to defend from the water. Please ask if you have any doubts.

 

[Gèckö]

Alright. This is the exact reason why I did this, to see if you understand the weakness/strength relation. This, what you did was not bad, but not enough.

First thing I suggest is, reading

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thread. As you can see, fire beats wind but gets beaten by water. This of course has its limits. 1 rank up/down which means that a B rank fire technique could beat an A rank wind technique after which they'd both cancel out. However, a C rank water would easily extinguish a B rank fire technique. It would probably create a mist in between, but due to their small power it wouldn't be a big deal. Stronger jutsus, bigger mist.

So, what you should've done was just add 1 more B rank fire technique. A technique that would first cancel out the wind and then the wall combo to defend from the water. Please ask if you have any doubts.

yep i see it was just i misunderstanding my badness xd
i was thinking of using that running flame technique but didn't know if i was allowed to use a third technique

 

[McRazor]

yep i see it was just i misunderstanding my badness xd
i was thinking of using that running flame technique but didn't know if i was allowed to use a third technique

Of course you are. It was a regular battle scenario thus you're allowed to use 3 jutsus per turn. If you understood anything of the above and give me your word that you'll be able to defend in case I decide to test you once more, we can proceed.

 

[Gèckö]

you have my word
i will try my best to defend properly

 

[McRazor]

Alright. A rank.

(Katon: Gamayu Endan) - Fire Release: Toad Oil Flame Bomb
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with Toad Oil Bullet to launch a streaming fireball toward the opponent after performing the following hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger. This jutsu can cover a huge area with fire.

Well, there are no notes for this technique so I'll teach it to you. Unfortunately you won't be able to use it without the toad summoning since you need it for the Toad Oil bullet. Here is the technique:

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(Fūton: Gamayudan) – Wind Release: Toad Oil Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Wind Release: Toad Oil Bullet is a synchronized elemental combination technique with the user and Gamatatsu. It is a wind natured upgrade to Toad Oil Bullet technique. To set up for this technique the user must stand behind or atop Gamatatsu and focus their wind chakra whilst Gamatatsu focuses his chakra with oil in his mouth and then releases the oil combined with the user channeling the wind chakra through Gamatatsu, creating a powerful and fast stream of toad oil, which then spreads to cover a larger area but maintaining a powerful striking force due to the wind chakra.
Note: Can only be used with Gamatatsu and know toad-summoning contract.

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind and Earth Release: Mud Fall

I'll perform the other 2 techniques for you.

I create sixteen pillars around my clone in order to trap him and I proceed with a mud fall that would completely reduce his movements.

 

[Gèckö]

Jutsu 1
* As the toad oil bullet has been fired, i build up an enormous amount of chakra within me. Channeling it towards my throat then I take a deep breath in and perform the Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger before exhaling. The to elemental jutsus combine with each other before striking a large tree on our far right.

Advantages its huge range/ radius and it is two jutsus in one
Disadvantages takes alot of time to perform due to the handseals from both jutsus.

Jutsu 2
* As i see your clone being trapped within the 16 lightning pillars, I quickly build up chakra then jump high into the air. WHile in the air i hastily perform three handseals Rat → Dragon → Boar while inhaling. ONce i am done making the handseals i release a massive fireball into the pillars burning your clone to a crisp.

Advantages three jutsus in one with little handseals.
Disadvantages requires 3 jutsus in order to be performed

 

[McRazor]

Jutsu 1
* As the toad oil bullet has been fired, i build up an enormous amount of chakra within me. Channeling it towards my throat then I take a deep breath in and perform the Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger before exhaling. The to elemental jutsus combine with each other before striking a large tree on our far right.

Advantages its huge range/ radius and it is two jutsus in one
Disadvantages takes alot of time to perform due to the handseals from both jutsus.

Jutsu 2
* As i see your clone being trapped within the 16 lightning pillars, I quickly build up chakra then jump high into the air. WHile in the air i hastily perform three handseals Rat → Dragon → Boar while inhaling. ONce i am done making the handseals i release a massive fireball into the pillars burning your clone to a crisp.

Advantages three jutsus in one with little handseals.
Disadvantages requires 3 jutsus in order to be performed

They're not more jutsus in one. They're one jutsu, and you need to perform all of them if you want the combo. For the first one, you need to summon a toad (Gamatatsu) and he will use the toad oil bullet. Then you use your fire and ignite the oil.

The second one is also a combo. One, alone, wouldn't probably be able to succesfully pull it out. But for example, with clones you could make it. One makes the lightning pillars (oven) while the other one creates mud falling from the sky. You finish with fire.