[Katon] fire with akasha

[Akasha]

Great! This next technique is a variation of fire release, flammable gas. Basically user will perform a sequence of four hand seals (Snake, which is followed by Ram, followed by Monkey and finished with Tiger) as they focus katon chakra within their upper body, mouth and gullet. As they are releasing the said chakra they would apply nature manipulation to create flammable gas and shape manipulation so to form a stream. Now once this flammable gas comes in contact with a spark of sorts (from some fire source, lighter, or even lighting) the gas will ignite creating a large fireball. Use it in combination with a lighter. As you release the flammable gas from your mouth, use fire from lighter to set it afire. *Throws you one*

( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

 

[Asmodai]

Great! This next technique is a variation of fire release, flammable gas. Basically user will perform a sequence of four hand seals (Snake, which is followed by Ram, followed by Monkey and finished with Tiger) as they focus katon chakra within their upper body, mouth and gullet. As they are releasing the said chakra they would apply nature manipulation to create flammable gas and shape manipulation so to form a stream. Now once this flammable gas comes in contact with a spark of sorts (from some fire source, lighter, or even lighting) the gas will ignite creating a large fireball. Use it in combination with a lighter. As you release the flammable gas from your mouth, use fire from lighter to set it afire. *Throws you one*

( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

shikamaru catch the lighter then put it into his pouch.

shikamaru perform Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger handseal while focusing his chakra from his lung into his mouth. he then releases the chakra while apply nature manipulation to change it into flammable gas also he apply shape manipulation to release a stream of flammable gas from his mouth. he take the lighter from his mouth then ignite it after that he throw the lighter into the flammable gas causing the gas to ignite into a large fireball.

 

[Akasha]

Amazing job Asmodai! Let's get going onto the last technique of D ranks. It is quite versatile on one hand, however the issue which comes with it is its rank. When I say versatile, I mean that it is able to be released from any part of your body which can be quite useful in battle. Now, as you've already released fire from your mouth in form of a stream as well as a projectile I would like for you to release a small powerful flame from your fist and then from your legs whilst simultaneously making a taijutsu free-form movement of sort. Don't forget nature and shape manipulation!

( Katon no Jutsu ) - Fire Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will release a small but powerful flame of fire at their opponent from either their limbs (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls or fire streams or simply aid in taijutsu.

 

[Asmodai]

Amazing job Asmodai! Let's get going onto the last technique of D ranks. It is quite versatile on one hand, however the issue which comes with it is its rank. When I say versatile, I mean that it is able to be released from any part of your body which can be quite useful in battle. Now, as you've already released fire from your mouth in form of a stream as well as a projectile I would like for you to release a small powerful flame from your fist and then from your legs whilst simultaneously making a taijutsu free-form movement of sort. Don't forget nature and shape manipulation!

( Katon no Jutsu ) - Fire Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will release a small but powerful flame of fire at their opponent from either their limbs (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls or fire streams or simply aid in taijutsu.

shikamaru run towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his right hand as he reach the opponent he apply nature manipulation to change it into fire he also apply shape manipulation to make the fire burst around his hand then he throw a punch into his opponent face then he continue to focuses his chakra into his left hand than apply nature and shape manipulation to create fire a round his left hand then he puch into his fiery fist into the opponent stomach he then proceed to focuses his chakra into his left leg then apply nature and shape manipulation to create fire around his feet then he kick the into upper part of his opponent sending the opponent flying backwards while his opponent in mid air he quickly run towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his feet he then jump towards his opponent while apply nature and shape manipulation to the chakra in his feet creating a fire around his feet then proceed to spin 360 degree while strething his fiery feet kicking his opponent in the rib sending it flying further.

 

[Akasha]

Ok, I will kinda pause this training for a moment so I help you out when it comes to describing. It is quite good overall, although I would advise you to start using dots to separate your sentences. This will help both you and your opponent to understand the move. This way, there will be less arguments and people won't be able to use it against you as they understood something differently due to non-existence of punctuation. Big letters at the begining of the sentences, dots, comma etcetc. Basically I will re-write what you just wrote just with a punctuation as an example. It is not something that is hard, although it is something which will help you out grow as a role-player.

shikamaru run towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his right hand as he reach the opponent he apply nature manipulation to change it into fire he also apply shape manipulation to make the fire burst around his hand then he throw a punch into his opponent face then he continue to focuses his chakra into his left hand than apply nature and shape manipulation to create fire a round his left hand then he puch into his fiery fist into the opponent stomach he then proceed to focuses his chakra into his left leg then apply nature and shape manipulation to create fire around his feet then he kick the into upper part of his opponent sending the opponent flying backwards while his opponent in mid air he quickly run towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his feet he then jump towards his opponent while apply nature and shape manipulation to the chakra in his feet creating a fire around his feet then proceed to spin 360 degree while strething his fiery feet kicking his opponent in the rib sending it flying further.

Shikamaru runs towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his right hand. As he reaches the opponent he applies nature manipulation to change it into fire and he also applies shape manipulation to make the fire burst around his hand. Then he throws a punch into his opponent face and then he continues to focus his chakra into his left hand. Applying nature and shape manipulation he creates fire around his left hand and then he puches his fiery fist into the opponent stomach. He proceeds to focus his chakra into his left leg and then applies nature and shape manipulation to create fire around his feet. He makes a kicking motion directed towards upper part of his opponent, sending the opponent flying backwards. Now, while his opponent is in mid air he quickly runs towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his feet. He then jumps towards his opponent while applying nature and shape manipulation to the chakra in his feet creating a fire around his feet. He proceeds to spin 360 degree while strething his fiery feet kicking his opponent in the rib sending him flying further.

I didn't make any chages to the text itself except few grammer fixes and addition of punctuation. Tell me if you see any difference between the two and which sounds better when reading out loud. Which one is easier to understand and continue on from. Hope this helps a bit. If you don't have any questions we can continue!

 

[Asmodai]

Ok, I will kinda pause this training for a moment so I help you out when it comes to describing. It is quite good overall, although I would advise you to start using dots to separate your sentences. This will help both you and your opponent to understand the move. This way, there will be less arguments and people won't be able to use it against you as they understood something differently due to non-existence of punctuation. Big letters at the begining of the sentences, dots, comma etcetc. Basically I will re-write what you just wrote just with a punctuation as an example. It is not something that is hard, although it is something which will help you out grow as a role-player.



Shikamaru runs towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his right hand. As he reaches the opponent he applies nature manipulation to change it into fire and he also applies shape manipulation to make the fire burst around his hand. Then he throws a punch into his opponent face and then he continues to focus his chakra into his left hand. Applying nature and shape manipulation he creates fire around his left hand and then he puches his fiery fist into the opponent stomach. He proceeds to focus his chakra into his left leg and then applies nature and shape manipulation to create fire around his feet. He makes a kicking motion directed towards upper part of his opponent, sending the opponent flying backwards. Now, while his opponent is in mid air he quickly runs towards his opponent while focusing his chakra into his feet. He then jumps towards his opponent while applying nature and shape manipulation to the chakra in his feet creating a fire around his feet. He proceeds to spin 360 degree while strething his fiery feet kicking his opponent in the rib sending him flying further.

I didn't make any chages to the text itself except few grammer fixes and addition of punctuation. Tell me if you see any difference between the two and which sounds better when reading out loud. Which one is easier to understand and continue on from. Hope this helps a bit. If you don't have any questions we can continue!

''sorry , I never care about my punctuation will try to fix it. my grammar pretty much suck , i'm struggling to explain my move(really bad in tai and freeform>_>) but I will try to improve.

question: I pretty much focus on one part then the other part and not focusing it on all part at the same time so does this mean I have use this jutsu 4 times? other than that no question.''

 

[Akasha]

It will just help you develop in RP faster and be understood easier. Which can be a great advantage. You will have to use it each time individually. Keep in mind that you can use up to 3 jutsus per move in battle and also time-frame. Anyhow let's get going onto C ranks. It is quite similar to the last one. Basically user will focus katon chakra within their upper body, mouth and gullet before releasing it from it. Applying nature manipulation to create fire and shape to form a stream they will direct it in their intended direction. It is pretty basic. You will notice that fire techniques kinda repeat, just each time of higher rank.

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

 

[Asmodai]

It will just help you develop in RP faster and be understood easier. Which can be a great advantage. You will have to use it each time individually. Keep in mind that you can use up to 3 jutsus per move in battle and also time-frame.

''so each punch did count as one jutsu? sorry I not really understand what are you saying sensei''

Anyhow let's get going onto C ranks. It is quite similar to the last one. Basically user will focus katon chakra within their upper body, mouth and gullet before releasing it from it. Applying nature manipulation to create fire and shape to form a stream they will direct it in their intended direction. It is pretty basic. You will notice that fire techniques kinda repeat, just each time of higher rank.

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

shikamaru focuses his fire chakra on upper part of his body starting from his gullet to his mouth then releasing it through his mouth while applying nature and shape manipulation to change it into fire then forming into stream of fire that come out from his mouth.

''Im trying to describe it a little different from before even though it basically just the same but I don't know it better or worse >_<''

 

[Akasha]

I will help you out a little bit using what you wrote. And looking that as an example try and write something similar for the next technique! Alright?

shikamaru focuses his fire chakra on upper part of his body starting from his gullet to his mouth then releasing it through his mouth while applying nature and shape manipulation to change it into fire then forming into stream of fire that come out from his mouth.

Shikamaru focuses his chakra on upper part of his body, starting from his gullet to his mouth. He then releases it through his mouth while applying nature manipulation to create fire and shape manipulation to form a stream which continues on moving towards his inteded target.

Few dots and a comma make a lot of changes although good job overall! Now try and do next technique similar to that ^. First of all user will start off by focusing chakra within their mouth and performing a sequence of 6 hand seals (Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger). With last hand seal performed they would create a ring with index finger and thumb of their dominant hand placing it in front of their mouth and releasing previously focused chakra through it (from their mouth). Applying nature manipulation they would create fire and shape manipulation they would form a stream which has kinda of a solid state, taking shape of a gigantic ball of flames which can be sustained in short range of them. However, keep in mind that there is another way for this technique to be used, and that is to apply shape manipulation so to create a fire ball which is slightly smaller in size, however which can travel to mid range. The second way is a projectile type of way, whereas the first one stream.

( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally. The fire ball can present itself in 2 forms: it can either be created by a stream of fire and sustained as a gigantic ball of flames in front of the user spanning up to short range or be released as a slightly smaller ball of fire which will travel towards the enemy up to mid range.

 

[Asmodai]

I will help you out a little bit using what you wrote. And looking that as an example try and write something similar for the next technique! Alright?



Shikamaru focuses his chakra on upper part of his body, starting from his gullet to his mouth. He then releases it through his mouth while applying nature manipulation to create fire and shape manipulation to form a stream which continues on moving towards his inteded target.

Few dots and a comma make a lot of changes although good job overall! Now try and do next technique similar to that ^. First of all user will start off by focusing chakra within their mouth and performing a sequence of 6 hand seals (Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger). With last hand seal performed they would create a ring with index finger and thumb of their dominant hand placing it in front of their mouth and releasing previously focused chakra through it (from their mouth). Applying nature manipulation they would create fire and shape manipulation they would form a stream which has kinda of a solid state, taking shape of a gigantic ball of flames which can be sustained in short range of them. However, keep in mind that there is another way for this technique to be used, and that is to apply shape manipulation so to create a fire ball which is slightly smaller in size, however which can travel to mid range. The second way is a projectile type of way, whereas the first one stream.

( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally. The fire ball can present itself in 2 forms: it can either be created by a stream of fire and sustained as a gigantic ball of flames in front of the user spanning up to short range or be released as a slightly smaller ball of fire which will travel towards the enemy up to mid range.

Shikamaru focuses his chakra into his mouth, then he perform Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger handseal. After done performing the last handseal he shape his right hand into ring with his index finger and thumb, then he place it in front of his mouth while inhaling air into his mouth. After that he exhale the air while releasing the chakra in his mouth, then he apply nature manipulation to change the chakra into fire and also shape manipulation to form the fire into stream of giant fireball that moving towards his opponent.

'' I hope that's good enough, it's the best I could done so far >_<''

 

[Akasha]

Amazing job Asmodai. Let's get going onto the next technique. It is kinda weirdly described but what you need to use as to perform it is a lighter. Focus katon chakra within the hand with which you are holding the lighter and release it further into it. Lighting up the lighter throw it in the air as you mold the chakra you previously focused with the fire from the lighter. Applying shape manipulation make the small source of fire combust into a flame which takes shape of a wall which can easily burn down small objects. Hehe. *Throws you a lighter*

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

 

[Asmodai]

Amazing job Asmodai. Let's get going onto the next technique. It is kinda weirdly described but what you need to use as to perform it is a lighter. Focus katon chakra within the hand with which you are holding the lighter and release it further into it. Lighting up the lighter throw it in the air as you mold the chakra you previously focused with the fire from the lighter. Applying shape manipulation make the small source of fire combust into a flame which takes shape of a wall which can easily burn down small objects. Hehe. *Throws you a lighter*

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

*catch the lighter

Shikamaru focuses his chakra into his right hand, then he channel the chakra into the lighter in his right hand. Shikamaru continue by lighting up the lighter then throw it into the air in front of him, Then he apply shape manipulation on the chakra that he focuses on the lighter before to make the fire on the lighter combust into wall of flame in front of him.

 

[Akasha]

Nice. Next technique can be use in multiple ways. User would perform a single hand seal, Tiger as they gather katon chakra within their upper body. This would be followed by release of that chakra whilst applying nature and shape manipulation to form a stream which will be directed so to spread in a circle shaped form around target. Alternative way of using this technique is to apply shape manipulation to create circle of flames which will hover in air before reaching the target. One more thing that you must keep in mind is that you can perform this technique by focusing chakra within one of your feet and stomping that foot on the ground and releasing the chakra whilst applying nature and shape manipulation to make the fire spread in a way whereas it encircles the target as it runs across the ground.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno. The stream of fire can be created by stomping the ground (running across the ground in this case) or by spewing the flames (which will form an airborne ring of flames that will travel towards the enemy).

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[Asmodai]

Nice. Next technique can be use in multiple ways. User would perform a single hand seal, Tiger as they gather katon chakra within their upper body. This would be followed by release of that chakra whilst applying nature and shape manipulation to form a stream which will be directed so to spread in a circle shaped form around target. Alternative way of using this technique is to apply shape manipulation to create circle of flames which will hover in air before reaching the target. One more thing that you must keep in mind is that you can perform this technique by focusing chakra within one of your feet and stomping that foot on the ground and releasing the chakra whilst applying nature and shape manipulation to make the fire spread in a way whereas it encircles the target as it runs across the ground.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno. The stream of fire can be created by stomping the ground (running across the ground in this case) or by spewing the flames (which will form an airborne ring of flames that will travel towards the enemy).

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''ok, so I just release my chakra into the ground at my opponent spot then apply nature and shape manipulation to make fire appear around them

or

I release my chakra then apply nature and shape manipulation to make a fire stream move to my opponent(from my location) then circle around them as it reach my opponent location.''

which one is the right one?
for other variable I think I got it.

 

[Akasha]

The fire would spread from position where you initially released it to around of your target. It is a progressive motion of fire. So the second one is right. However I would have to ask you to re-do it. Write step by step how you did it, as you did in your previous post when explaining performance of technique.

 

[Asmodai]

The fire would spread from position where you initially released it to around of your target. It is a progressive motion of fire. So the second one is right. However I would have to ask you to re-do it. Write step by step how you did it, as you did in your previous post when explaining performance of technique.

that's just a question >_<

Shikamaru focuses his chakra in his upper part of his body, Then he apply nature manipulation to turn the chakra into fire then releases it while applying shape manipulation to form the fire into stream that move towards his opponent then circle around them making his opponent trapped in ring of fire.

 

[Akasha]

Amazing job! Much better. Let's get going with a next technique. It requires usage of a cord and imo pretty hard to pull off in a midst of the battle, especially in our RP, unless prepared beforehand. User would use a cord (or some other type of long object) so to envelop their target (or however they wish to use it) and perform a sequence of few hand seals (Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger) as they focus katon chakra within their upper body. With last hand seal preformed they would release previously focused chakra from their mouth whilst applying nature and shape manipulation causing for fire to spread along the cord and rush forward along it catching their target on fire.

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.