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I look at you annoyed.
Did I ask you to "save" me!?

More like medium because of the hand seals.
Disadvantage:It is easy for this technique to backfire.
Note:I didn't explain it well,you can light the gas with a lighter,match etc.you don't need the use of a technique.
As for your question,it all depends on the rank if you have a higher rank fire,but has less width,than this technique,even when it ignites the gas it will have enough power to go through the newly created fireball,while most of the fireball will remain in place,however if you use a higher rank technique of same or bigger width than the fireball,it will just overpower it and blast away all of it,while it continues.

Now as we finished D rank,you ask any questions on these techniques you may have,and then make a battle move.Make the best combination you can with these techniques and attack me.Remember,you can use only three jutsu per move.

Also it is Easter so I doubt I will reply more for now.
 

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Senpai scolds me a little before offering some good advice.

I take it all in and nod.


Now as we finished D rank,you ask any questions on these techniques you may have,and then make a battle move.Make the best combination you can with these techniques and attack me.Remember,you can use only three jutsu per move.

Yay, D Rank was finished and now I got to attack my Senpai again. I was looking forward to this.

However, I did have a question before I went on,

"Senpai, can I only use these Fire Jutsu to attack you ? Or can I combine them with other element jutsu?"
 
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"Okay Senpai, But I want you to know, my combination will suck as I have never actually tried hitting anyone with a combination before."

I am full of doubts which isn't a very good attitude to have for a fight and I am also very nervous. I want to get this over with so I take a deep breath, face my Senpai and proceed with the task at hand.

. . .

I am going to wing this bro xD

. . .

( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique

Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

I gather up my fire chakra in my stomach and then channel it to my mouth, heating it up as it goes through my throat. As this is happening I perform the required hand seals.
Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger
Afterwhich I then transform the fire chakra into flammable gas using nature manipulation when it reaches my mouth and I exhale it.

I then direct this gas towards my Senpai and use shape manipulation to make the gas surround him completely.

I channel some more fire chakra to my mouth and superheat it as it passes my throat and yell,

( Katon no Jutsu ) - Fire Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will release a small but powerful flame of fire at their opponent.

I then release the fire chakra from my throat which becomes a flame due to my use of shape and nature manipulation, which I send at the gas surrounding my Senpai. It strikes the gas and ignites it.

To follow this technique up I take several of Senpai's Shuriken from my pocket that I had put there after I had last used them, and throw them in Senpai's direction. At the same time I release further fire chakra from my mouth and using nature manipulation make this chakra into fire which engulfs the shuriken.


( Kaen Shuriken Ranbu ) - Blazing Shuriken Dance

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken at the enemy and then inflames them with fire to cause extra damage.
 

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Well yeah,there's not much of a combo that can be done with these.xD
I would do it without the blazing shuriken,I think they're to much and that they don't offer any advantage to the combination,whats more,if you throw them to early they will be stopped by your own fireball.
One question:I don't suppose you have a Kankuro bio or Toad summons do you?

Onto the C ranks!!
( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.
Very similar to the one we already learned.Gather and focus your katon chakra and once you have gathered enough,stream it towards your mouth.On the way through the throat,super-heat the chakra and upon entering the mouth,use nature manipulation to transform it into fire,then exhale the fire from your mouth while using shape manipulation to form a small,continuous stream of fire that you can direct at your opponent.

As this fire stream is coming towards me,I exhale a stream of water that collides with it,the water is evaporated and but the fire is stopped,leaving only some steam.Is this ok?
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
 

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lol yah, Idk, I just wanted to use my 3 jutsu limit xD
And nope I do not.

. . .

Onto the C ranks!!
Yup Senpai, I am as happy as you. My fastest training progress yet I believe.

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

Very similar to the one we already learned.Gather and focus your katon chakra and once you have gathered enough,stream it towards your mouth.On the way through the throat,super-heat the chakra and upon entering the mouth,use nature manipulation to transform it into fire,then exhale the fire from your mouth while using shape manipulation to form a small,continuous stream of fire that you can direct at your opponent.


Well, this was a good way to get into my C Rank training. Starting off with something familiar.

I move myself so that I am positioned in a good place where I can perform the technique in front of my Senpai. I then proceed to gather my katon chakra in my stomach and while doing this analyze the technique.

Think of some advantages L ..

A pro for the technique was the fact that it required no hand seals to perform. This means that the technique can be executed faster than your average technique that needed Hand seals. This can prove especially beneficial when you need to suddenly perform a technique when you find yourself in a tricky situation and want to get out of this predicament fast.
Additionally, another pro for the technique was because it was a continuous stream of fire, this meant that if an opponent was struck with the flames, the fire would continue to strike them until the jumped out of the way or performed a counter to relieve them of the flames. As say an opponent was struck with a blast of fire, the flame hits them, then is gone almost straight away, where as a stream of fire continues to burn an opponent after it strikes them, until the stream runs out or the opponent stops the stream from striking them in someway.
Also, another advantage for the technique is it does not require much chakra use, but still can cause enough damage as it can still potentially knock someone unconscious. This proves beneficial, if you simply want to capture an opponent and not kill them.
Furthermore, because it is a continuous stream, you have more control over the technique. For example, an opponent tries to dodge out of the way, you have enough time to make your head follow their movements before the stream runs out, which in turn means that your fire stream can follow them wherever they go for the duration of the technique.

Now what were some disadvantages..

Well a con for the technique was because it was a continuous stream of fire that came from my mouth, this leaves me vulnerable for the duration of the technique as it requires my full concentration the whole time. For example, it is not like a technique where I can spit a small fire ball fast and move onto the next technique. While I am focused on this technique, and controlling it, an opponent could capitalize on my vulnerability.
Also, due to the flame being small, you have a lesser likelihood of actually getting your target as opposed to if the technique covered more surface area where you have more chance of getting them. Also, being small, it may not cause as much damage as you would like on an opponent, only a small burn.

As I had been thinking my fire chakra had begun channeling from my stomach to my mouth. Upon passing through my throat it had became superheated fire chakra that was now starting to collect in my mouth, burning my taste buds.

I couldn't have that, as I feared never tasting cake again.

It was time to perform the technique,

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

I use nature manipulation to transform the fire chakra to fire and then I exhale this fire at my Senpai, using shape manipulation to make this fire a small, continuous, stream of fire.

As it hurtles towards my Senpai he yells,

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

And he spits out a stream of water, similar to my stream of fire.

I am confused. I actually wonder what the result would be. Since we are disregarding rank and only thinking about the properties, I was stuck.

This stream of water had similar properties to my stream of fire. Since my stream of fire wasn't much bigger than this stream of water I was kind of conflicted as to whether the fire would actually go out, or if it would overcome the water.

The stream of fire had long left my mouth, so I was free to watch the spectacle.

As I watch this and wait for the result, I note that this technique was rather fast as it required no hand seals, and was ready to go as my chakra reached my mouth pretty much. It didn't require me to gather my chakra for too long.


 

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Valid,that would happen.

Next,the famous:
( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.
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This one is a little different than the other fireballs.Gather and focus your fire chakra and stream it towards your mouth.While you do so perform the hand seals:Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger and then inhale a large amount of air,and then make a ring of sorts with your index finger and thumb and put it in front of your mouth.As you do so exhale the chakra from your mouth and as it exits,super-heat it and use nature transformation to turn in into fire and shape manipulation to form a fireball.The fireball will grow as it travels to the opponent.

As this fireball comes at me,I slam my hands to the ground while releasing my wind chakra against it and propel me into mid range,away from the fireball.
(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.
 

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Holy crap - where did you come from ? Ahaha, I never even knew you were online xD

. . .

Next,the famous:

(Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

I could barely contain my excitement. I couldn't tell which I was looking forward to most, Bashing my Senpai with this, or actually learning it.

This one is a little different than the other fireballs.Gather and focus your fire chakra and stream it towards your mouth.While you do so perform the hand seals:Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger and then inhale a large amount of air,and then make a ring of sorts with your index finger and thumb and put it in front of your mouth.As you do so exhale the chakra from your mouth and as it exits,super-heat it and use nature transformation to turn in into fire and shape manipulation to form a fireball.The fireball will grow as it travels to the opponent.

"Haha, are you ready Senpai?"

I begin to gather my fire chakra in my stomach and as I do so I analyze the technique.

Some advantages..

Well some advantages for this technique was obviously the fact that the fireball only grows bigger as it travels towards the opponent. This proves beneficial as it means an opponents likelihood of dodging/avoiding the technique only becomes slimmer as time passes as because the technique covers more surface area, this reduces the amount of area an opponent can escape to.
Additionally, because it gets bigger, an opponent could miscalculate and attack you with a technique that would deal with the fireball when it was at a size that was manageable for this technique. However, by the time this technique reaches it, it may not be adequate enough to handle the fireball anymore as it had increased in size.
Furthermore, it literally incinerates everything in range and due to its size, you could potentially take out two opponents with this technique and cause some real damage to the landscape, which can prove beneficial if you are in an enemy village and want to cause as much damage as possible.

Now what were some disadvantages..

It appeared that a great disadvantage was the fact that it required some small prep time. Nothing major, but little things like having to perform hand seals and move your fingers in front of your mouth. A skilled Shinobi would recognize these movements before you could even get fireballin' and already find a method to avoid it, whether this be to get out of range or perform some kind of counter for the technique.
Another disadvantage was it required you to gather a bit more chakra than other techniques which also added to the additional prep time, and also because you had to inhale air in order to perform the jutsu, this further indicates that the technique would take a slower time to perform and in turn give your opponent time to anticipate the technique and react.

Okay, enough thinking, I wanted to perform this technique.

(Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

I begin to stream my gathered fire chakra to my mouth. As I do so, I perform the necessary handseals.

First was Snake.
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Second was Ram.
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Third was Monkey.
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Next was Boar.
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Preceded by Horse.
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And last was Tiger.
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As I finish the sequence I inhale a large amount of air, I then make a ring with my Index finger and thumb in front of my mouth. At the same time I exhale the chakra from my mouth, super heating is as it exits my mouth. Upon its exit I also use nature and shape manipulation to turn this chakra from fire chakra to fire and a large fire ball. I direct this fireball at my waiting Senpai. It grows bigger as it advances towards him, to which he responds,

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

I watch as he punches the air and as a result a giant whirlwind appears.

I sigh. Seemed he was going to ruin my first try at this famous technique.

I assumed that my fireball, despite growing bigger, would strike the whirlwind and get caught up in it. But because the whirlwind was was bigger than my fireball, instead of strengthening the flames, it would actually suffocate them as it spun the flames with it and extinguish them.

I decide to watch and see what happens. If the fireball did go out, I better get out of the way of the oncoming whirlwind.

I note though, that my Senpai probably had a lot of time to think of a counter as this technique was rather slow to initially perform due to the small prep requirements so I'd give this jutsu a slow-mid speed.
 

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Another disadvantage is it's short range.
And it blocks both out and the opponents view of each other so it's both an advantage and a disadvantage.
Note:I didn't fire a whirlwind at your fireball,the hurricane fist can also be used toget quickly one range back when you release it by slamming your hands to the ground this why it's so massively used,so I got into mid range and the fireball is short ranged.

Next up:
( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

I first give you my lighter.Now then,light it up and focus your chakra in your body and then channel it into the lighter and into it's flame.Once you do so use shape manipulation to grow the lighter's flame into a big wall of flames that can protect you.

As you create this wall,I slam my hands to the ground and make an enormous boulder come from underneath you to jag you.

(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.
 

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Sorry about the late reply, I had to go to bed. Back to school so no more all nighters xD
lol I obviously didn't read the technique properly. I was under the impression that it was mid range for some strange reason. o_o
. . .

Another disadvantage is it's short range.
And it blocks both out and the opponents view of each other so it's both an advantage and a disadvantage.


I nod.

Again words of wisdom from my Senpai. I was learning greatly under his Senpaiship.

Next up:

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

Wall of flames ? This would come in handy.

I watch as my Senpai pulls a lighter from his pocket before he continues. He hands me this lighter and says,

Now then,light it up and focus your chakra in your body and then channel it into the lighter and into it's flame.Once you do so use shape manipulation to grow the lighter's flame into a big wall of flames that can protect you.

"Okay Senpai, seems simple enough.."

I walk off to about short range from my Senpai, flicking the lighter as I go. My Senpai snaps at me to stop mucking around, it was his 'special lighter'.

God Sake Senpai.. everything was your Special something.. >_>

I turn to face my Senpai when I get to a suitable position. I light up the lighter, but don't flick it off this time.
I begin to focus my chakra in my stomach, and as I do so I evaluate the technique.

Huuuummm.. what were some advantages here ?

It seemed that an advantage was the obvious fact that it could turn a small flame into a large wall of flames that could protect you from danger and even small weapons like Kunai thrown at you.
Additionally, the fact that it could successfully be used in conjunction with the Hurricane Fist was a further advantage. Again, because of this, you could easily perform this combination with a comrade. This would take less time as one could do hurricane fist and the other the fire wall.

I personally hate my own pro's and con's, I liked hearing other peoples, so I hoped Senpai had something to add. . .

Now onto Disadvantages ..


A clear disadvantage I see is the fact that it would take a moment for you to actually perform the technique.
Firstly, if you didn't have a lighter on you, you wouldn't be performing the technique. Secondly, even if you did have a lighter, it would take you a moment to retrieve the lighter from your pocket, and by the time you do, it may be too late, knowing how fast Kunai fly. And say you do get a lighter out in time, it does take a moment for you to channel your chakra into the lighter and create this wall from its flame, and because of this, it may prove of no protection as a technique/weapon could already reach you before the flame is large enough or adequate enough to actually protect you.
Oh and Senpai's fav, another disadvantage was it was short ranged.

My chakra was tickling my stomach, so I guess it was time to get going.

( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

I begin to channel my fire chakra from my stomach to my hands which was holding the lighter. I let my fire chakra circulate my hands, then into the lighter where it circulates for a moment before it channels into the lighters flame. It circulates through the flame and soon is infused with my chakra and I know now that I can control it.

I use shape manipulation to make the flame grow, I throw the lighter out in front of me as the flame gets really big (the flame won't go out even though I have released the lighter's switch as I can control the flame now.) and I continue to make the flame grow larger until it is a large wall of flames that can protect me.


As I make my wall larger, rather impressed with myself, I hear my Senpai yell,

(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.

*since we are only taking the properties of techniques into account here, I believe the following happens. Well I am unsure if it is right so meh. *

Immediately after he yells this, I feel myself begin to rise and realize that the earth beneath me had risen and was now falling just as fast.

I lose my balance, as I hadn't expected this, and immediately my flame wall shrinks.. as my concentration had been interrupted. My chakra had stopped channeling into the flames to keep them alive. As a result the fire wall disappeared quicker than it appeared.

I notice that fact rather grudgingly. This technique took me about medium speed to perform, and could have been longer had I had to find a lighter of my own. And yet, it disappeared rather fast (-_- )

I pull myself up off the ground, and glare at my Senpai.

'Gee, thanks a bunch for pushing me on the ground like that."
 

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One more disadvantage is that you can't see through the flames,duh.
Note:This technique has a believe it or not,forbidden rank variation.Which is performed by putting the lighter near your ass and then fart while screaming fire fart.o-o

Give me my special lighter back now,my challenged special student!

NEXT:
( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.
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Ok,first start focusing your katon chakra and while doing so perform the Tiger hand seal.And the channel the chakra into your mouth on the way through the throat,super-heat it and then as it enters your mouth,use nature manipulation to turn the katon chakra into fire,then exhale it and use shape manipulation to create several rings of fire that fly towards the opponent.Or you can exhale it to the ground and form a stream of fire which forms a circle around the opponent.Perform whatever variation you like more.

As I'm encircled by this circle of fire,I move the ground that is between me and the fire,with me on it,the fire not on it upwards to a hight of about seven meters.
(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.
 

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One more disadvantage is that you can't see through the flames,duh.

We gotta cocky guy over here <_<
xD

. . . .

"Give me my special lighter back, my cha- special student."

"Yes yes Senpai. Don't worry, I don't want to keep this heap of junk." I say, tossing the lighter at Senpai. I was tempted to throw it at him while using the wall of flames technique from it, then I thought,

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But maybe the next technique, I could get him..

Next up,

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

Ok,first start focusing your katon chakra and while doing so perform the Tiger hand seal.And the channel the chakra into your mouth on the way through the throat,super-heat it and then as it enters your mouth,use nature manipulation to turn the katon chakra into fire,then exhale it and use shape manipulation to create several rings of fire that fly towards the opponent.Or you can exhale it to the ground and form a stream of fire which forms a circle around the opponent.Perform whatever variation you like more.

"Okay Senpai, sounds manageable."

I walk mid range from my Senpai and begin to gather up my Katon chakra. As I do so, I evaluate the technique.

Okay L think, what were some advantages.

Well it appeared an obvious advantage was the fact that it could encircle your opponent. This pretty much means that an opponent gets trapped. They have no option of escaping forward, back, left or right.
Additionally, because it can temporarily trap your opponent this could allow you to escape from them, as it keeps them busy for a while so you can make an emergency get away.
Also, because it makes a ring around an opponent, you could actually trap more than one individual inside the ring at a time. This would prove useful if you found yourself out numbered.
Furthermore, you could actually make this ring encircle yourself if you wanted to stop an enemy getting to you. But then you would have to concentrate hard and control it so you weren't injured by your own technique.
Lastly, this technique had another advantage as it could be used in combination with a suitable wind technique and in turn this would increase the inferno. This means you could pull of a successful combination technique with an ally, one does the flames and the other does the wind.

That was all I could think of for now.. so onto some disadvantages..

One disadvantage I could think of was that despite the technique being hard to escape by going left, right, back, or forward, nothing was stopping you going up or down. An earth technique could easily elevate you or send you travelling under the ground and out of harms way.
Being left in the middle of the circle for a moment before the flames reached them, an opponent easily has time to summon a creature to help them escape or perform a suitable technique to extinguish the flames.
Additionally, this technique has the potential to unintentionally get your own comrades caught up in it.

Okay, that was all I could come up with for now. Senpai could fill me in afterwards on what I missed, in the meantime, my stomach was tickling again.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

I perform the Tiger hand seal.
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As I finish this, I begin to channel my fire chakra from my stomach to my mouth. As usual, as it passes through my throat, I warm the chakra so that it is superheated when it reaches my mouth. As it enters my mouth, I use nature manipulation to turn my Fire chakra into fire and after doing this, I exhale it at the ground. I use shape manipulation to make this fire turn into a stream of fire which I direct towards Senpai. I then further manipulate it by making it form a ring around him.

As the flames encircle him, and lick the air, my Senpai yells,

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core

Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

And soon rises high above the inferno on the earth inside the circle that he had raised beneath his feet.

I look up at him annoyed.

Dam Senpai. He never let me win.

There was no way my fire was tall enough to reach him, nor hot enough to melt the earth he stood on and cause it to crumble or melt away. Senpai was nice and safe up on his little earth sanctuary,

I release the technique.

I note that it was a rather fast jutsu to perform, the only thing that potentially slowed it down was the fact that it had to make a circle around an opponent before it could be executed, which takes a moment. So in the end , I rate it medium speed.

"Okay Senpai, you can come off your special rock."
 

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*Cleans his special lighter as it was held by someone else.*
It's also good because of it's second variation.
Now here is a technique that along the Dragon Flame Blitz and Great Fireball was one of the most used in the series:
( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.
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I take out my special ninja wire and tie it around myself,I throw you the other end.Ok,put that in your mouth and focus your Katon chakra while you do so perform the following hand seals:Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger then stream the previously focused chakra towards your mouth and on the way,super-heat it.When it enters the mouth,use nature transformation to make fire out of it.Then release the fire from your mouth while using shape manipulation to make it follow the cord.

As I'm tied by this technique and the fire is coming at me,I substitute with a log.Altho nobody sane would ever let you tie him in the first place.Note that every technique that lets you cut or escape the wires before the fire gets you is valid.
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
 

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It's also good because of it's second variation.
Now here is a technique that along the Dragon Flame Blitz and Great Fireball was one of the most used in the series:

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

Oh I remember this one..

I watch as my Senpai takes out his special ninja wire and ties himself up. He really did look an idiot doing it. He chucks me the other end of the wire and I am shocked he was letting me touch his special wire without complaint this time.

Ok,put that in your mouth and focus your Katon chakra while you do so perform the following hand seals:Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger then stream the previously focused chakra towards your mouth and on the way,super-heat it.When it enters the mouth,use nature transformation to make fire out of it.Then release the fire from your mouth while using shape manipulation to make it follow the cord.

I examine the situation.
"Okay, sure thing Senpai, your death wish."
I begin to gather my katon chakra in my stomach and I place my end of the wire in my mouth. I am half tempted to chew it as I analyze the technique.

What were some Advantages..

I guess some advantages for the technique would be that you could take out multiple enemies with it. Furthermore, the wire that is wrapped around the opponent can prove troublesome to free yourself of, so that even if you cut the wire connecting you to the user of the technique, you could still be momentarily tied up which could prove beneficial for your enemy as they can captivate on this moment of delay as you try and free yourself of the wire. Also because the wires are wrapped around an opponent, this means the technique would cause thorough damage to them, as the flames will follow the wire and in turn follow it right around the opponents body.

That was all I could think of for now..

Now for some disadvantages. . .


It appears that the technique has a few disadvantages. A victim of the technique has time to free themselves of the wire as the fire is travelling down the wire. Also, the fact that you have to tie your opponent up in the first place with the wire is another disadvantage, as they could easily see this coming and prevent themselves from being caught up. Additionally, since the technique requires hand seals and you to put your end of the wire in your mouth, this actually delays the technique slightly and can allow extra time for an opponent to anticipate and in turn counter the technique.

That was all I could be bothered thinking for now.. my stomach was tingling and my teeth had begun nibbling ..

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

I perform the required hand seals.

First was Snake.
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Second was Dragon.
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Third was Rabbit.
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Last was Tiger.
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When I finish the sequence, I channel my chakra from my stomach to my mouth. As it passes through my throat, I superheat it. Upon entering my mouth, I use nature manipulation to convert this chakra to fire. I then proceed to release this fire from my mouth, and using shape manipulation, I make this fire travel along the wire from my mouth to my Senpai.

The flames travel over it towards my Senpai, rapidly. As this is happening, my Senpai yells,

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

What ?!

I try to see whether this actually worked out for him, but I couldn't, the flames obstructed my view as they consumed whatever the wire was tied around.

I have a sick feeling that it was Senpai, but an even sicker feeling that he had managed to escape and my flames were only eating the log.

As I wait to see the result of my technique, either a dead Senpai, or firewood, I note that the technique was overall rather slow maybe just medium speed. All the prep time and the fact that the flames travel slow enough along the wire to get to the target that he could escape, gives me this impression.
 

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I would rate it slow.

Next:
( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one handseal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.
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Focus your Katon chakra while performing a hand seal*shows you it*and then channel it towards your mouth.On the way through the throat super-heat the chakra and then as it enters your mouth use nature manipulation to convert the chakra into fire and shape manipulation to form a flame breath.Be a dragon.You can also use it with that earth technique if you learned earth.

As this fire stream comes at me,I slam my hands to the ground,creating a dome of earth around me for protection.

(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user creates a dome of earth, which protects them from external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls. That creates a half face dome.
 
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Firewood >_O
I would rate it slow.


"I very much agree with you Senpai."

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( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one hand seal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.

Focus your Katon chakra while performing a hand seal -*shows me it*- and then channel it towards your mouth.On the way through the throat super-heat the chakra and then as it enters your mouth use nature manipulation to convert the chakra into fire and shape manipulation to form a flame breath.Be a dragon.You can also use it with that earth technique if you learned earth.

"Okay Senpai, wish me luck. Oh and good luck yourself."

I walk about mid range from my Senpai and begin to gather my fire chakra up in my stomach. As I do so, I analyze the technique.

What were some advantages..

Well it appeared that some advantages for the technique was the obvious fact that it could be used in combination with Earth Dragon Bullet and even perhaps other techniques such as the latter, however probably not as effectively as it works with Earth Dragon Bullet. This is good as it increases the lethality of the attack, as well as allows you to work in collaboration with a comrade. One person could fire the earth bullets, the other light these bullets up, in turn meaning the technique is performed a lot faster.
I guess another advantage for the technique would be that it only required one hand seal, so in comparison to other C Rank techniques that required hand seals, this one would be performed a lot faster and still inflict the same amount of damage, even more potentially, as because of its speed it actually allows less time for an opponent to react, meaning they cannot defend themselves as well or at all.
Also because the flame comes out as a breath, like a dragon exhaling fire, this means that the flames have the potential to cover a fair amount of area and this means that it will be harder for your opponent to avoid/dodge, it will inflict more damage to an opponent and their surroundings (if you are in an enemy village this is beneficial) and you can actually strike multiple opponents at once.
Additionally, the requirement of one hand seal means it should be relatively fast to perform when you find yourself in a tight situation - it would allow you to escape fast.

Now that was all the advantages I could think of at this present time of the day .. but what were some disadvantages..

Despite the requirement of one hand seal actually being seen as an advantage in some views, it can also be seen as a disadvantage. It is only seen as an advantage in comparison to other C Rank techniques that use hand seals as they require a lot more that this technique did. However, one hand seal is still enough to slow you down and allow time for an opponent to react/anticipate the technique and manage to avoid/dodge/escape/counter it just in time.
Additionally, the technique's flames being a lot more fierce as they are exhaled out of the user in a dragon like fashion means that the flames cover a lot more area and as a result you have a higher chance of catching your own comrades up in the technique. Especially if you were planning on collaborating the technique with the Earth Bullet technique, as you would expect them to be close by.

That was all for now.. I forgot a good idea I had as I was thinking (-_- )

My stomach was as usual tingling , and so it must be time to perform the technique.

( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one handseal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.

I perform the hand seal Senpai had shown me and channel my fire chakra from my stomach to my mouth. As it goes through my throat, I superheat this chakra. Upon reaching my mouth, I then use nature manipulation to convert this fire chakra into fire.
I then take a deep breath and shut my eyes. I imagine myself as a dragon, his chest was warm and getting increasingly warmer as the moments went by. Soon his chest was boiling and he begins to send this heat from his chest to his mouth. He then opens his big jaws to release this heat from inside himself and as he does this, the heat actually becomes flames that flicker as with menace at my Senpai.
I open my eyes. I would become the dragon. I exhale the air I had inhaled and also exhale the fire from my mouth and use shape manipulation to make this fire a large breath that hurtles towards my Senpai.

As this is happening, Senpai yells,


(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique

Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user creates a dome of earth, which protects them from external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls. That creates a half face dome.


He slams his hand onto the ground and an earth dome appears and surrounds him.

To my dismay, my flames strike this dome, but can not reach my Senpai.

As I watch my flames slowly dissipate into the air, I note that the technique was probably medium for a C Rank technique due to the required hand seal.

"Okay Senpai, you can come out of your little dome." I sigh.
 
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Good.
I remember using this one a lot,fairly useful technique:
( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.
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Start focusing your fire chakra and while you do so perform these hand seals:Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger.Once done channel it towards your mouth and super-heat it on the way.Then as it enters your mouth,use nature manipulation to transform it into fire and then exhale that fire while using shape manipulation to form it into several fireballs that travel towards your opponent in an unpredictable manner.You can use your chakra to control their movement which is very good,you can also hide shuriken in them,which can also be controlled by chakra,which is also very good.

As these come at me I form a shield of water in front of me and stand behind it.Will you be able to hit me with the fireballs now?
( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
 

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. . . . .

I remember using this one a lot,fairly useful technique:

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

Wow, I have always wanted to perform this one..

Start focusing your fire chakra and while you do so perform these hand seals:Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger.Once done channel it towards your mouth and super-heat it on the way.Then as it enters your mouth,use nature manipulation to transform it into fire and then exhale that fire while using shape manipulation to form it into several fireballs that travel towards your opponent in an unpredictable manner.You can use your chakra to control their movement which is very good,you can also hide shuriken in them,which can also be controlled by chakra,which is also very good.

Seems simple enough ..

"Okay, Senpai , watch out."

I stand in a suitable position away from my Senpai and begin to gather my fire chakra up into my stomach. As it gathers, I analyze the technique.

What were some advantages here. . .

Well, some obvious advantages for the technique was the fact that you could conceal weapons inside the fireballs created, which can actually be controlled using your chakra and used as a surprise attack, which is awesome. Additionally, another advantage for the technique was the fact that the fireballs traveled towards your opponent in an unpredictable manner. This means that it will be harder for an opponent to anticipate and in turn avoid/dodge the technique. Also, you could send the fireballs at an opponent in quick succession of one another, which also makes it harder for an opponent to avoid the attack or even counter it. What is more, the level of control you have over the fireballs makes it even harder for an opponent to avoid, as you can control the balls using your chakra and keep them oncourse.
Now, short range is usually considered a disadvantage, but because of this, this could actually mean an opponent has even lesser time to react/escape/dodge as the fireballs would reach them rather quickly as it has less distance to travel.

That was all I could think of for now .. Now what were some disadvantages ..

I couldn't actually think of many disadvantages, probably only the fact that it was short range and potentially the fact that the fireballs could be extinguished more easily. On top of that, 6 hand seals are needed, which is a fair bit. An opponent could figure out what was going on and manage to escape/form a counter the technique.

My stomach was tingling, my mind had no more disadvantages, so I guess it was time to perform the technique..

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

I perform the 6 required hand seals.

First was Rat.
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Second was Tiger.
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Third was Dog.
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Following Dog was Ox.
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Then came Rabbit.
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When I finish the sequence, I channel the fire chakra I had gathered in my stomach to my mouth. As it passes through my throat, I superheat it. As the chakra enters my mouth, I use nature manipulation to transform the chakra into fire. Once I do this, I exhale the flames, and use shape manipulation to split the flames into several parts which I shape into fireballs. I then direct them one at a time, at my awaiting Senpai, using my chakra to keep them on course.

As the fireballs hurtle towards him, my Senpai yells,

( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.


A water shield forms from his arm which he holds out in front of him. It is too late for one fireball, which hits the water shield and disappears, but not for the rest. I manage to use my chakra to change their movements slightly so that one went high up and started to hurtle down towards my Senpai , a few turned so that they now travelled towards my Senpai from his left, and also another pair to his right. I also let a few simply keep their course straight towards him. He would be only able to prevent the fireballs hitting him from one side with this shield, not a wise choice in my opinion. However, it could still be used had I not changed the course of the fireballs.

As I wait to see what my Senpai would react like when he got struck by my incoming fireballs, I note that the technique would be medium speed. Mainly due to the 6 hand seals that were needed to perform the technique. However, I admit that the formation of the fireballs were rather efficient, but nevertheless, the hand seals slow the overall technique down.
 

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Why can't all students be like this =_=
I have mistaken when I told you about that there we have elemental chakra apart from the regular in our body.

Chakra is chakra. Then you mold it using shape manipulation and sometimes nature manipulation. But until its molded, its just chakra. Once molded, yes...you can say that is "earth chakra" but thats just an expression. In your body you simply have chakra...nothing more.

Chakra however can have an inclination towards one element or the other but that isn't called "X elemental chakra"(C)Scorps

I'm sorry.I saw that a sensei said what I told you,so I told you before checking with someone else.

The next one is kinda useless.But not completely xD
( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.
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While gathering,you chakra,run towards the opponent and once you get close,jump into the air,while channeling you chakra towards your mouth.Once you are in mid air,close to the opponent,above him,use nature manipulation to convert the channeled chakra into fire and then exhale it,while using shape manipulation to form a few fire shoots that rain down upon the opponent.

As you release the fire shoots at me,I quickly push my hands forwards,in the direction of the fire shoots,releasing a torrent of water just in time to stop the fire from hitting me.
( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.
 
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I think you are complimenting me, so okay .. thanks :-D

And okay that does make sense, however, how does Scorps fit into this ~_~ And lol I think you mean Senpai told me this, I have only one Sensei and it is Adachi, he wouldn't give me false information ;)

Joking, it is fine man, At least you figured out what you were doing wrong and fixed it ^^

And I am sorry about these slow replies, I should pick up now since it is the end of the week. Thanks again for being so fast, I really appreciate it.

Btw, what is my Senpai's name, like what bio are you using to train me?
. . . . . . .

The next one is kinda useless.But not completely xD

"Well this really motivates me Senpai .. <_< "

( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.

While gathering,you chakra,run towards the opponent and once you get close,jump into the air,while channeling you chakra towards your mouth.Once you are in mid air,close to the opponent,above him,use nature manipulation to convert the channeled chakra into fire and then exhale it,while using shape manipulation to form a few fire shoots that rain down upon the opponent.

"Okay Senpai, this sounds simple enough."

I walk around short range from my Senpai, remembering that I need a decent run up and must jump into the air, and begin to gather my chakra in my stomach. As I do so, I evaluate the technique.

Firstly, think of some advantages for the technique L ..

It appeared that an advantage for the attack was it attacked the opponent from above. This proves beneficial as it becomes a lot harder to defend from above - an opponent tends to be more vulnerable there.
I guess the technique could work well as a combo technique. You or a comrade could attack them front on and to the sides and behind, before you or a comrade attacks him from above. However, this could easily backfire if you did this combo technique with another person if not thought through, as whoever attacked from above could find themselves landing in the firing line of their own comrades technique
I guess the technique can also mislead an opponent. The run up and jump style is very similar to how one would begin a Taijutsu technique. This can make your opponent expect a taijutsu technique as a result and be caught off guard and ill prepared for the technique you were actually planning on doing.
Additionally, the technique actually gets you close to your opponent once you land, this could actually allow you to follow up the attack with a close combat technique such as a Taijutsu technique or even some kind of elemental technique that requires physical contact between you and your opponent to be effective.

That was all the advantages I think .. I knew already that there would be a lot more cons than pros for this technique.

Before I start listing the disadvantages for the technique, I begin to mould the chakra in my stomach into fire chakra.

Okay, well it seems that a stand out disadvantage for the technique was it required a run up and jumping. This is a disadvantage as the run up makes it very easy for an opponent to anticipate/predict your actions and think of a way to counter/avoid/dodge the technique before you even get off the ground. This also goes for the jump. However, the jump has an even worse disadvantage than just letting your opponent anticipate your actions, it actually leaves you more vulnerable. You become more of an easy target high in the air in open space, and what's more you tend to be hovering there for long enough ( as you only perform the technique at about the peak of your jump - which would be the middle of the total jump) that an opponent can get good aim at you and a good strike at you in turn. The fact that you are off the ground actually means you will take more damage, as you are not sturdy on the ground where it is harder to get knocked down, if you are going to be hit, you are going to fall no matter what, and hard, considering you are high in the air.
What is more, is the technique only produces a few small fireballs. Is this going to do much damage in the first place ? Maybe if the opponent was an idiot and remained stationary, but realistically, he is going to avoid the full gist of the attack unless you had injured him to the extent he couldn't move or had him a situation where he couldn't (surrounded) and even then, why would you finish him off with this technique ? To be honest, this technique seems too much of a risk than it actually is worth.
Oh and what's more, it is short ranged.

Sigh, I had really gone overboard with my evaluation this time ..

My stomach was tingly as usual, and I knew then that it was time to perform the technique.

( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.

I eye my Senpai and proceed to run at him. It reminds me so much of Taijutsu training. I run until my judgement tells me it is time to jump. Just prior to takeoff, I begin to channel my fire chakra towards my mouth.
I push of the ground with my right foot hard and feel the chakra passing through my throat, which I superheat. When I am near the peak of my jump, and relatively close to Senpai, my fire chakra had collected in my mouth, and I convert it to fore using Nature manipulation. At the peak of my jump, when I am well above Senpai's head, I exhale the fire and use shape manipulation to form a few fire shoots that rain down on him.

As they do, my Senpai yells,

( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

Pushes his hand's up in the direction of my fire shots and creates a swirling torrent of water. My fire shots strike this water and easily are extinguished.

I land right down in front of my Senpai, and if he wanted to, he could have killed me there and then.

"Senpai, this technique truly sucks."


I note in my head that the technique was pretty slow due to the requirements of a run up and jump, and the delay as to when you actually release the fire shots.
 
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