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Well Scorps said so,that's why he's there o_o
And yes it was a compliment.Very rare when coming from me.
Everything seems in order,just remember the opponent always needs to finish his first move,before you can counter it by the time frame rules.
One more thing,from now on,if my counter is wrong,I want you to post one that you think is valid.
Next,a technique to which there is much less than the name suggests.
( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

Mold your chakra in your body so it becomes"fire chakra"and then begin channeling it towards your mouth.As you do so,super-heat it and then as it enters your mouth,use nature manipulation to convert the previously molded chakra into fire and then exhale it.Use shape manipulation to make it form a stream of fire,that,when it hits me,wraps around me,burning me.

As this technique comes at me,I also exhale a stream of fire that collides with yours,before the flames wrap around me.
( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.
 

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Sorry, I know I was suppose to go back to 1 reply per day, but I came home late again ~_~

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<_< where >_>
:scorps:

Well, I am honored.
Sweet as, I 'think' I understand.
Sure, sounds manageable.
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Next,a technique to which there is much less than the name suggests.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

Mold your chakra in your body so it becomes"fire chakra"and then begin channeling it towards your mouth.As you do so,super-heat it and then as it enters your mouth,use nature manipulation to convert the previously molded chakra into fire and then exhale it.Use shape manipulation to make it form a stream of fire,that,when it hits me,wraps around me,burning me.


I nod at my Senpai, before pacing a good distance from him and stopping facing him. I begin to gather my chakra into my stomach, and begin to mold this chakra so that it becomes fire chakra. As I do this, I think over the technique.

L what were some advantages of this technique ...

The fact that the technique converges on your opponent (so splits apart so that some of the flame goes around the opponent one way and the other the opposite way) it makes the attack a lot more difficult to dodge/avoid. It also makes the technique slightly harder to anticipate so it becomes harder to counter. What's more, it makes it harder for an opponent to escape the technique once struck by it.
Additionally, the different directions means that it strikes the opponent in different areas of the body. This as a result causes more damage as it targets multiple areas and not just one. It also makes it easier to completely ignite the opponent as well as makes it faster to completely wrap the opponent in fire as the converging of the flame means that it only has to travel half the distance it would have to if there were only one flame and it didn't converge into two. (you may not get what I mean haha)
What's more, is you can perform the technique from short and middle range, making it a more flexible technique. It also doesn't require hand seals so you can expect this technique to be relatively fast.

That was all I could think of, but what were some disadvantages ...

I guess there wasn't too many disadvantages for this technique. But one out of the box idea I could kind of think of, would be you wouldn't want to use this technique if the opponent had something on them that you wanted, as you risk burning them. i.e They may have stolen some kind of scroll, so you wouldn't want to use this technique as you'd probably burn it. Additionally, if you wanted to capture the opponent to get intel from them, you wouldn't want to use this technique as you could burn them to the extent that they become incapable of talking for a while.
There is also the risk that your own comrade was standing too close to the enemy when you performed this technique, and as a result you struck them with it instead of/or as well as the enemy.

Argh.. that was all for that .. maybe Senpai had some better ideas ..
:sweat:

In the meantime it was time to perform the technique. Well, according to my tingling stomach.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

I channel the freshly molded fire chakra from my stomach to my mouth. As it passes through my throat I superheat it the fire chakra so that when it enters my mouth, it is ready to be converted into fire using nature manipulation. Once this is done, I proceed to exhale the fire , and using shape manipulation, I make this fire travel towards Senpai as a stream of fire. I am ready to further use shape manipulation, so that when it hits Senpai, I can make the flames converge so that one part of the fire goes one way and the other another way so that they wrap around him and burn him.

As the stream of flame travels towards Senpai, he yells,

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

He then releases a small short flame that travels towards my flame stream.

This was an interesting counter. I had no idea whether this would work or not. I still had a lot to learn, I didn't quite understand whether fire on fire would cancel one another out or whether one fire technique would continue onwards. But being the same rank , this made it a tough call as to which technique would actually win/continue onwards. Personally, my choice of counter for the technique would have been,

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

But it appeared Senpai had other ideas. I would see if his technique worked, so I would stand back and watch. Too bad if it didn't, I was in no hurry to redirect my flames so that it didn't strike him, I was ready to make them wrap around him !
:snick:

As the flames are about the meet, I note the technique was fast, due to having no hand seals or giant prep time. It could be performed quickly and suddenly if you wanted to.

*The flames strike one another and I watch in awe, to see what would happen.*
 

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I wrote a reply and it got deleted >_<
The streams collide,and as they are similar in size they continue clashing for a short while and then cancel each other out.Watch out with that Water Replacement as it is a really bad counter against fire techniques as if the fire is hot and strong enough it will evaporate you from existance.
Next,the last C rank,the first long range fire technique you got,I believe:
( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.
Focus and mold your chakra in your lungs so it becomes Katon chakra,once done channel it towards your mouth and on the way there,super-heat it.Once it enters the mouth use nature manipulation to conver it into fire.Then exhale the fire while using shape manipulation to form a small,bright xD fireball that burns the opponent upon impact(I don't say o-o)
As this one comes at me I create a exhale a huge sphere of fast wind at your fireball.Disregard the rank.
(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
 

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That sucks. If that happened to me, I would probably not reply for like a few days in rage xD

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I watch as the flames cancel one another out and I note that in my head. I am then told by Senpai that the water replacement technique was really bad, and it actually makes a lot of sense. I had no idea what I was thinking ! I definitely absorb that information inside my head, I couldn't imagine being erased from existence !

Next,the last C rank,the first long range fire technique you got,I believe:

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

Focus and mold your chakra in your lungs so it becomes Katon chakra,once done channel it towards your mouth and on the way there,super-heat it.Once it enters the mouth use nature manipulation to convert it into fire.Then exhale the fire while using shape manipulation to form a small,bright, fireball that burns the opponent upon impact(I don't say o-o)


I raise an eyebrow. Now this was a rather random technique.

I run away from Senpai until I am long range from him and turn to face him. I then begin to gather up my chakra in my stomach and mold it into fire chakra. As I do this, I evaluate the technique.

Argh, what were some advantages for the technique ...

It appeared that an obvious advantage was the fact that it was flexible in terms of range. You could perform the technique when in short , mid or long range from an opponent which means you could perform the technique in various situations.
Another advantage would be it requires no hand seals or anything like that, which means the technique can be performed quickly if need be.
Now, what does it mean by bright ? If it means really bright, then would this be enough to limit/affect the opponents vision for a short time or long enough so that he didn't know what was happening and as a result had not enough time to form a counter/dodge/avoid the technique? Or escape it as he couldn't see it coming ? or maybe not .. ._.
Oh and one last obvious advantage, was it burns the opponent upon impact !
:hint:

And that is all I got .. please enlighten me if you have anymore.. :|

Now L, what were some disadvantages ..


Well, an obvious disadvantage was the fact that it was a small, single fireball. One fireball is easy to anticipate and as a result, form a counter for, dodge, avoid or escape. Being a small fireball, it won't do so much damage as it would only strike one area of the body and has a low chance of actually igniting an opponent. Therefore, it wouldn't really disable the opponent much or make it so that you had some crazy sudden high advantage over him. It could potentially stun him momentarily allowing you to gain the upper hand to some degree or escape (this is an advantage) but it overall wouldn't do much to better your chances of winning in a fight.

And that was all I had for disadvantages. It may be my sleepy mind atm, or maybe just the fact that technique was so simplistic it was hard to deduct much conclusions about it xD Hopefully Senpai had something to add.

As usual, my stomach was numb so I guess it was time to perform the technique.

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

I channel the fire chakra I had molded from my stomach to my mouth. As this chakra goes through my throat, I superheat it so that is rather hot when it gathers into my mouth. As it gathers there, I use nature manipulation to convert the chakra to fire and once I do this, I exhale the fire from my mouth, using shape manipulation to make this fire a shape of a small, bright fireball which I sent hurtling towards my Senpai.

As it travels towards him, Senpai yells,


(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

I watch as Senpai performs the Ram hand seal and blows out a huge blast of wind at my fireball.

I sigh. I know that fire is strong against wind as it makes it 'stronger'. But I am pretty sure that is only in some cases, when the fire happens to be relatively large. I am watching my measly fireball and Senpai's giant, huge, fast, wind blast that levels anything in its path and I know for a fact that this was not one of those cases. My little fire ball should be extinguished as the wind strikes it. Like blowing a candle out on a cake.

Who knows maybe I could be wrong, I guess we'll see.

I watch what I believe will be the last images of my little fireball and note that it was a fast technique as it required no prep time to perform and being a solo fireball was shot out fast.
 

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I imagine it is bright because fire is bright o‿o"

Ok,as you have finished C ranks,I will now attack you O_O,you have to defend properly with only your fire training or else..Also disregard if I use techniques that can't be done with my bio.But as you have never been in a battle I will just use wind this time.Mid range.Regard rank in this one.

As we start I exhale a stream of wind into the ground,lifting the sand and dust and dirt from the ground around me so you loose sight of me.I then slam my hands to the ground while releasing wind chakra from them in such an angle so it propels me towards you at great speeds.As I'm flying towards you,I make sharp wind spiral around my body,so when I reach you,you get cut up badly.
(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.
(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.
(Futon: Kazekama no Yori) - Wind Release: Wind Sickle Armor
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per turn activated)
Damage points: (40 if opponent comes into direct contact)
Description: Temari will manipulate her wind chakra and create a armor of cutting wind to spin around her body. The armor itself has the capability to deflect incoming projectiles and weapons aswell as being capable of fending off taijutsu based attacks and causing damage to enemies who come into direct contact with the wind.
Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
 

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Hey bro, I have tried to reply to the thread for an hour, and I cannot come up with anything feasible as of yet.

I have been thinking, in training I learn what is a good and what is a bad counter for a technique, but I don't actually learn what would be an ideal situation to use the technique in battle, what combinations I could use it with (fire in particular) and what kind of techniques against.

I am always attacking you, but you never attack me, so I guess I struggle when we come to this stage. What makes it worse is I can only defend myself with fire techniques.

Maybe, to help us out, you have to start defending yourself against my techniques using only fire techniques or something, so that it better prepares me for this stage. Or maybe you can give me a little description on when the best time to use the technique is , what sort of techniques against and with what other fire jutsu. I know this will be a lot more work on your side, but I am just trying to find a solution
Or you could make me think about these things and then you just check whether it is passable or not, and if not, then you write what is the right answer. o_O

Or maybe, when we get to this stage when we end the Ranks, you can give me little hints and ideas on how to use the techniques in the situation - obviously subtle little hints xD - you know, just so I learn I guess O_O

But anyway, would the wall of flame technique work for this ?
 
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That mean I no good teacher? D:
For the most part it falls under battle training not under elemental training.And it should be done by more experienced members than myself as I can post you a single valid counter because here you only need to worry about the nature of the techniques and speed.While in a battle there is timing,time frame,ranks,speed,natures,effects of combinations,multiple techniques attacking and other stuff.So I think I might not be the best choice to teach you that.But if you want I can try.
What we can do are the combinations and against what type techniques it would be the best to use them.Altho most fire techniques are mainstream and work against the same things.But this will somewhat prolong your training.

@Your edit:I don't think so,altho it would stop the wind at some point,the wind would still have enough strength to punch the user unharmed through the fire even if it is canceled itself.

A combination of the fire wall and another fire technique(preferably some fire stream or fireball)would be better,it would punch through the wind and burn me.
 

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Haha you are a great teacher, hence why I ask you questions and propose suggestions as I know you are more than capable of answering and finding solutions that are actually good xD

Thanks for the info btw ^^ I guess I won't burden you with my terrible battle skills, I should probably get someone else to teach me xD

And okay I see. I guess I wouldn't mind longer training if it means I will gain a better understanding of the jutsu I am learning. However, it is entirely up to you, you are the one who also has to put more time in as well :(
Or maybe I just need someone to explain the possibilities of what could happen when fire comes into contact with each element.
What happens when fire strikes wind - I know it can increase the flames but what else? You said the fire can punch through the wind, I never knew that, I thought my flames wouldn't be able to?
When water strikes fire, it extinguishes the fire, but fire can also cause water to be evaporated. So when will water win and fire not win ?
-get what I mean? o_o

Oh yeah, well I was initially going to use,

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

And with the flame wall technique, so I guess if I hadn't doubted myself, and posted that I would have been correct.
( I was under the impression that the wind would deflect the fireballs (-__- ) )

Training life lesson 1 : Don't doubt yourself haha xD

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btw I shall become inactive for a few days due to school. I will be back round friday I think o_o Then we can kick start our B Rank jutsu xD
 
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Ok,then we shall cover that in our future replies,the techniques we learned so far are basic and I don't think there is a need to go back to them,of course if you are interested in some of them in particular we will come back to them at the end.

Ok,this is a pretty useful technique:
( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.
Forming a dragon:
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Gather and mold your chakra in your stomack so it becomes fire chakra and while you do so perform the hand seals:Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger.Upon finishing the sequence stream the fire chakra through your lungs and throat towards your mouth while super-heating it.As it enters the mouth use nature manipulation to form convert it into fire and shape manipulation to first form a big fire dragon which then splits into three streams,one goes to the targets right,the other one left and the third one to the front.

I personally wouldn't use this to counter anything,just attack.It can counter some techniques but there are much better techniques for countering amongst the B ranks.
Also it would be hard to use this one in a combination because it splits as it is created.But you could make something like this:Use some,probably,earth base technique like the Swamp of the Underworld or some spikes to attack from bellow and/or some earth/water technique(droping lid,mud water)from above so you attack from all directions in one move,you can use some techniques to attack from the back as well.

As this comes at me I create a sphere of water around me for protection.
(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.
 

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Hey bro, I am so sorry about this late reply. My internet data ran out late Tuesday - early Wednesday, sometime around them and I couldn't come online until the first of June when the internet came back. Also why I am here, I won't be able to reply this coming Wednesday until Friday possibly even Saturday. I am going on camp.

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Yay, I am liking the new training layout I might add :)

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Ok,this is a pretty useful technique:

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

Gather and mold your chakra in your stomack so it becomes fire chakra and while you do so perform the hand seals:Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger.Upon finishing the sequence stream the fire chakra through your lungs and throat towards your mouth while super-heating it.As it enters the mouth use nature manipulation to form convert it into fire and shape manipulation to first form a big fire dragon which then splits into three streams,one goes to the targets right,the other one left and the third one to the front.

I personally wouldn't use this to counter anything,just attack.It can counter some techniques but there are much better techniques for countering amongst the B ranks.
Also it would be hard to use this one in a combination because it splits as it is created.But you could make something like this:Use some,probably,earth base technique like the Swamp of the Underworld or some spikes to attack from bellow and/or some earth/water technique(droping lid,mud water)from above so you attack from all directions in one move,you can use some techniques to attack from the back as well.



I pace midrange from my senpai and turn and face him. I begin to gather my chakra up in my stomach and as I do so, I analyze the technique.

It appeared that an obvious advantage for the technique was that it could attack an opponent from various directions. This makes it harder for an opponent to be able to dodge/avoid the technique and in turn has a higher likelihood of being struck by it. It also seems to really consume an opponent upon contact, embracing them in a fiery hug which of course wull do quite a bit of damage.
Additionally, another advantage for the technique is it seemed to consume the target quickly as indicated in the description as it turns your opponent to ash in a number of seconds. This proves especially useful as one, you get rid of a threat quickly, two, if you have more than one opponent to deal with, you can cut their numbers down fast. Thirdly, if you are a nice shinobi, you will be comforted by the fact that their suffering is over fast.
I guess this technique proves beneficial in a fight where you are aiming to slaughter your opponent.
Also, as you stated, it could be used in combination with other jutsu so that these jutsu attack the spots this technique is unable to.

Now that was all the advantages I could come up with .. now what were some disadvantages ..

Now a clear disadvantage for the technique was that the flames actually split into 3 as it is created. Because it splits as it is coming towards your opponent, this gives them time to anticipate the flames and in turn give them a slight opportunity to counter the technique.
Furthermore, the technique has some delay as it requires several hand seals. This slight delay once again allows an opponent to anticipate an attack.
Also, another disadvantage for the technique is you couldn't use this technique if you wanted to merely capture or wound your opponent, as there is no doubt that upon striking an opponent, they will burn to death.
The technique only strikes the sides and front of your opponent, this technique alone, does not prevent an opponent escaping by going below, above or behind.

That was all the disadvantages that my mind could muster. Now it was time to perform the technique.. according to my stomach which was bloating with chakra.

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

I begin to mold the chakra I had gathered in my stomach into fire chakra. As I do so, I perform the seven required Hand seals.

First was Ram.
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Second was Horse.
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Third was Snake.
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Fourth was Dragon.
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Afterwhich came Rat.
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Followed by Ox.
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And finally, Tiger.
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Upon finishing the sequence, I channel the fire chakra from my stomach to my mouth. As it passes through my throat, I superheat it. As it collects into my mouth, I use nature manipulation to convert this chakra into fire. As I exhale this fire, I use shape manipulation to make it form a huge fiery dragon before using shape manipulation further to make it split into 3 fiery streams which target Senpai's left and right sides and his front.

As these streams travel towards Senpai, I note that the actual flames were fast, however the prep time required, like the hand seals and the fact that you had to form a dragon before it split into 3 streams of flames slowed the overall technique down. So in the end I would rank it medium speed.

The streams edge ever so closer to Senpai, and soon enough he yells,

(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

Performs 5 hand seals and releases water from his mouth which completely surrounds him.

My flames strike this defensive circle, the heat evaporating it somewhat, but this water is replaced with more water as it disappears. The water wall outlasts my technique as I wasn't able to keep replacing my flames.

As my flames disappear, Senpai lets his water wall splash to the ground.

"Okay, anything to improve on Senpai?" I ask.
 

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Nope,I don't have anything to add,perfect.
I don't suppose you have Sage Mode,right? xD
Next up then is:
( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.
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Ok,for this one gather and mold your chakra in your stomack so you convert it into Katon chakra,once done stream the molded chakra towards your hands.Make the chakra compressed and ready to burst outwards in a split second.As the chakra is near your hands,push them forward and as you do so,release the chakra from them,while using nature manipulation to form compressed fire and shape manipulation to make a few fireballs from it.As they hit the opponent,they explode,causing damage.

Also I don't think much can be countered with this one,as these are just a few medium sized exploding fireballs,actually I think it would be best against earth,so it blows it up.
Same goes with the combinations,fireballs that aren't huge are generally hard to use in combos,but they can be perhaps used with some wind balls or mud shots etc.You should mainly focus on helping it hit.For example distract him from the other side with some jutsu or make the ground shake,his vison scured or something like that.

As these fireballs head towards me,I use a technique that allows me to shot out a single ball of mud from my mouth,that collides with your fire technique.What happens?
(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.
 

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Awesome, and lol no ofc I don't have sage mode xD
Btw you are giving me awesome tips ^_^
Oh also, which Bio of yours is training me o_O
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Senpai nods his approval before proceeding with the next technique.

Next up then is:

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Ok,for this one gather and mold your chakra in your stomack so you convert it into Katon chakra,once done stream the molded chakra towards your hands.Make the chakra compressed and ready to burst outwards in a split second.As the chakra is near your hands,push them forward and as you do so,release the chakra from them,while using nature manipulation to form compressed fire and shape manipulation to make a few fireballs from it.As they hit the opponent,they explode,causing damage.

Also I don't think much can be countered with this one,as these are just a few medium sized exploding fireballs,actually I think it would be best against earth,so it blows it up.
Same goes with the combinations,fireballs that aren't huge are generally hard to use in combos,but they can be perhaps used with some wind balls or mud shots etc.You should mainly focus on helping it hit.For example distract him from the other side with some jutsu or make the ground shake,his vision scured or something like that.


"Okay Senpai, you better watch out, I have a relatively good aim."

I stroll midrange from where Senpai had placed his clone and face him. I size him up as I gather my chakra into my stomach and mold this chakra into fire chakra. As I do so, I evaluate the technique.

It appeared that an advantage for the technique is the obvious one, it explodes upon impact with an object. This means it can cause some damage exploding on your opponent.
It also is a technique which requires no hand seals which is further beneficial as it can be quickly used when need be.
Additionally, another advantage for the technique is it enables the user to shoot multiple fire shots from the hand. More is better than one as it increases the likelihood of you actually striking your target. It also means more damage. What's more, is these fire shots released in quick succession of one another make it harder for an opponent to dodge/avoid and form a counter for. Also their movements are less predictable, making it harder for an opponent to anticipate an attack.
Also, these small fireballs can be rather useful when it comes to wanting to use a technique as a diversion.

Now that was all the advantages I had, now what were some disadvantages?


A rather obvious disadvantage for this technique was it was limited to mid range. Although mid range is a good distance, it is still not a very versatile technique as opposed to a lot of others which can usually be used in multiple ranges.
Another disadvantage was it explodes upon contact with any object. This is a disadvantage as all it would only take a barrage of shuriken for example, thrown towards them to destroy them.
Also, the flames don't ignite an opponent, so it is unlikely you would use this technique if you wanted to end the fight there and then.
The flames in general seem just so sensitive. It shouldn't be too hard to counter them.

And that was all the disadvantages I had ..

My stomach was now bubbling with fire chakra, I know it is time to get performing the technique. I stream this chakra towards my hands, compressing it along the way so that it feels as though the chakra is about explode from me. As the chakra nears my wrists, I suddenly push the chakra into my hands, and release the chakra from them. Upon its release I use nature manipulation to transform the chakra into compressed fire and shape manipulation to transform this fire into a few fireballs which soar towards Senpai in quick succession of one another.

As the travel towards him he yells,

(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

And he spits out a single ball of mud from his mouth which hurtles towards my fire balls.

It collides with one of my fireballs within moments. Upon impact there is an explosion,

-BOOM-

And with that both my fireball and his mudball are gone. However, my other fireballs still continue towards him.

I raise an eyebrow, a better counter for my technique would have been,

(Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40
Description: This jutsu is basically a widespread version of the Mudshot Technique; allowing the user to fire at multiple targets.


As it would have dealt with all my fireballs, making them explode before they reached Senpai. One shot would be enough for one, but I had quite a few fireballs.

I watch, interested, to see how Senpai was going to avoid my fireballs that were still coming towards him, while noting that the technique was a rather fast technique to perform as it required no crazy prep time such as Hand seals and travelled through the air rather fast towards Senpai.
 

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Thanks,as I don't like my current bio's,let's pretend that I'm using Tyki Mikk from D.Gray-Man if you have seen that anime,he is my favorite character of all anime's now.
*Does nothing to counter them*
I agree perhaps one or two fireballs that were near the explosion would blow up,but those from the back would prevail and continue towards me.
Another disadvantage is that,if the opponent manages to place a counter near the user,the explosion could hurt the user as well.

Next up,same as the Great Fireball Technique:
( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.
Gather and mold your chakra in your stomach(thanks for teaching me how to write that word,one word I could never learn how to spell I always thought it was:"stomack" XD)so it becomes fire chakra.Once done,channel it towards your mouth and on the way there super-heat the fire chakra.As it enters your mouth use nature manipulation to convert the chakra into actual fire and then exhale the fire,while using shape manipulation to form a very big fireball that travels a short distance from you before it disappears from it.

As it is a very big fireball,it would be good countering some techniques,especially because it is very fast to perform.It is good for countering most up to A rank wind techniques.It could evaporate most up to C rank water techiques,it can counter fire,and as it is large and hot it can counter earth as well.I wouldn't try to counter many lightning techniques with it tho.
This one can be use in combinations,you can use it with wind/fire to make it stronger,it is very strong so you can use it to evaporate water or heat it,so it forms hot steam/water.It can also melt some earth,creating mud and lava.However,keep in mind that when you use this technique in combination with some other,make sure that,that second technique is very fast to perform,because this fireball,last for a very short time.

As it heads towards me,I form a shark of water that I direct at your fireball,what happens?
(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a water shark to jump into the air and bolt towards the opponent, striking them.
Note: Requires a water source.
 

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Haha okay then, I like to address my Senpai in my training , as their name, not just Senpai xD I have been meaning to ask for a while now. And yes, I noticed your strange way of spelling stomach, I assumed that was the way to spell it wherever you lived lol xD

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I nod as my Senpai gives me some additional tips before proceeding.

Next up,same as the Great Fireball Technique:

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

Gather and mold your chakra in your stomach so it becomes fire chakra.Once done,channel it towards your mouth and on the way there super-heat the fire chakra.As it enters your mouth use nature manipulation to convert the chakra into actual fire and then exhale the fire,while using shape manipulation to form a very big fireball that travels a short distance from you before it disappears from it.

As it is a very big fireball,it would be good countering some techniques,especially because it is very fast to perform.It is good for countering most up to A rank wind techniques.It could evaporate most up to C rank water techiques,it can counter fire,and as it is large and hot it can counter earth as well.I wouldn't try to counter many lightning techniques with it tho.

This one can be use in combinations,you can use it with wind/fire to make it stronger,it is very strong so you can use it to evaporate water or heat it,so it forms hot steam/water.It can also melt some earth,creating mud and lava.However,keep in mind that when you use this technique in combination with some other,make sure that,that second technique is very fast to perform,because this fireball,last for a very short time.


These techniques seemed so repetitive. I think to myself, before walking from midrange to short range from Tyki. I eye him out while evaluating the technique and gathering chakra in my stomach and molding it to fire chakra.

What were some advantages for the technique?

Well firstly, some obvious advantages were the fact that this technique requires no hand seals. Also, you seemed to simply provide me with some obvious ones yourself. Firstly, you tell me it is good for countering techniques as it is fast to perform, which means that it is harder to anticipate and find a counter for in time or dodge/avoid and second, you pretty much tell me that it is good at countering a range of elements such as up to A Rank wind techniques, C Rank water techniques and even earth techniques ! LOL

Okay, you even pretty much explain to me that this technique works well in combinations with wind, water and earth elements, yet another advantage !

However, another advantage for the technique is it produces a large fireball. The large size makes it harder for an opponent to dodge/avoid and also causes more destruction.

Now I believe that is all the advantages for this technique, with the help of Tyki, I figured them out a lot quicker than usual. Now what were some disadvantages?

It appeared that an obvious disadvantage for the technique was that it was restricted to use short range. It also seems like the fireball disappears just as fast as it travels. It is there , then it is gone.
Also, although it seems hard to dodge/escape by going left and right, you could escape down or up relatively easily if you are a skilled ninja and are able to anticipate the technique quick enough.

And that was all the disadvantages I could come up with. Now time to perform the technique.

My stomach now bloated with fire chakra, was relieved when I begin to stream this chakra to my mouth. As the fire chakra passes through my throat I superheat it. As the superheated chakra spills into my mouth, I use nature manipulation to convert this chakra into fire. As I proceed to exhale this fire, I use shape manipulation to convert this fire into a large fire ball which I send flying at Tyki .

I am surprised that Tyki has any time to react and yell,

(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a water shark to jump into the air and bolt towards the opponent, striking them.
Note: Requires a water source.

And forms a shark which springs towards my fireball. This being as the technique in my eyes was a rather fast technique to perform, it required no prep time and could be called upon instantly pretty much and traveled through the air fast. A very useful technique to be honest. But then again Tyki anticipated the technique, he knew what I was about to perform, so that would be my excuse. u_u
I also raised my eyebrow, and scanned around, wondering where the water source was.
:what:

I watch as the shark and the fireball collide. Judging from previous information from Tyki, the fireball should be able to evaporate most C Rank water techniques. If the fireball is as big as it is being described, I believe that the fireball should be able to evaporate the shark and continue towards Tyki, however, if the shark and the fireball are somewhat evenly sized, I believe that the fireball shall evaporate the shark, but also disappear itself.

I watch and wonder what the result would be ...
 

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Pretty much,correct.Another disadvantage is that you can't see through fire duh!

Next up:
( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
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Once again,mold your chakra in your stomach so it becomes Katon chakra as you do so perform the hand seals:Horse → Tiger and once done,then stream it towards your mouth.On the way there super-heat it and then,as it enters your mouth use nature manipulation to convert it into fire which you then exhale while using shape manipulation to create a huge ball of fire.

For the most part it is same as the previous one,it just requires hand seals and it is long ranged,so the uses are the same.It is also pretty bigger than the previous one.

As it heads towards me,I turn my body into water.
(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.
 
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Sorry about the late reply. I had so many exams recently. Today, I have a free day, but next week is just as congested :/

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Next up:

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

Once again,mold your chakra in your stomach so it becomes Katon chakra as you do so perform the hand seals:Horse → Tiger and once done,then stream it towards your mouth.On the way there super-heat it and then,as it enters your mouth use nature manipulation to convert it into fire which you then exhale while using shape manipulation to create a huge ball of fire.

For the most part it is same as the previous one,it just requires hand seals and it is long ranged,so the uses are the same.It is also pretty bigger than the previous one.



I distance myself long range from Tyki and begin to mold my chakra in my stomach. As I do so, I ponder over the technique.


What were some advantages ?

It appeared that there were a few obvious advantages. Firstly, some very obvious advantages include the fact that you can use the technique over varying ranges. For example, you can use the technique from across long - short range. Also another advantage is this technique only requires two hand seals. Furthermore, the fact that it carries your opponent away is another advantage, as this can prove useful when you are in a sticky situation and need to distance yourself as far away as possible from your enemy. Also, because the technique causes a massive explosion upon impact, an advantage would be the fact that it would cause optimum damage to your opponent if he is caught up in it. This proves very beneficial as it can be used to seriously wound an enemy (if that's your aim) or even kill him, getting rid of the threat he poses to you.
Also, it is a large, powerful attack which has the capability of striking multiple opponents in one shot.
It also seems a hard technique to avoid. Your opponent would be forced to think of a counter technique on the spot, however the fact that it explodes upon impact would mean that an opponent would have to counter it with a technique from far enough away to avoid them getting caught up in the explosion regardless.

And that was all I had for now .. what were some disadvantages ..


Even though 2 hand seals is a rather small number of hand seals in comparison to other techniques, it still means prep time is required, slowing down your overall performance of the technique and therefore is a disadvantage.
Further yet, upon releasing the technique, it creates a huge giant ball of fire which makes it impossible to keep an eye on your opponent as well as causes a huge explosion, which can also obstruct your vision. Unbeknownst to you, your opponent could have escaped and be sneaking up behind you.

And that is all I have time to think of for now haha !

My stomach, now bloated with chakra indicates that it is time to get attacking my opponent. I begin to mold the chakra in my stomach to katon chakra, as I do so, performing the following required hand seals,

First was horse,
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And last was Tiger,
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Upon finishing the sequence, my fire chakra was circulating nicely in my stomach. I send this chakra into my mouth, as it passes through my throat, I superheat it. As it spills into my mouth, I use nature manipulation to turn this chakra into fire which I proceed to exhale. At the same time I do this, I use shape manipulation to transform this fire into the shape of a large fire ball which I sent hurtling towards Tyki.

As it hurtles towards him, I note that it is a relatively fast technique as despite the 2 hand seals, it was a technique which was quickly produced and travelled quite fast. Obviously not the fastest technique out there, but it wasn't a slow technique.

As my fireball approaches him ever so closer, I watch as Tyki yells,

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

:what:

I watch in horror ! Not the best technique to be using as a counter, Tyki would get evaporated !

Since he is long distance away he could have performed a more successful counter such as Water Style: Giant Water Vortex Technique, despite the large amount of hand seals it requires.

I don't know, we'll see how he escapes this technique now though, I hoped he would to be honest ..
 

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So it is mid speed? o_o
*Survives anyway!*

Ok,this was all good.

Next up:
( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
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Gather and mold your chakra in your stomach,so it becomes fire chakra and as you do so jump high into the air and once you reach the peak of your "flight" stream the fire chakra while super-heating in into your mouth.Once there use nature manipulation to convert it into fire and as you exhale it use shape manipulation to form three giant bullets of fire which you send towards your opponent.As they hit the ground they will burst upwards as geysers of fire.

Well,this is pretty self use.But you can use some wide range wind techniques to boost it I guess.Also you can use some water/earth techniques to supplement this one,give it a higher chance of sucesfully hitting the target.With some earth techniques you can as you know alter the ground so perhaps you can make some pillars rise behind the opponent and then you can send fire at that,so when it hits,the fire burst onto him.

As for the countering properties anything that can be overcome/evaporated/destroyed by three giant fireballs can be countered.

As they come at me,I create three mid sized flame bullets and send them at your fireballs.
( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.
 

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Thanks for having patience with me btw :)

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( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

Gather and mold your chakra in your stomach,so it becomes fire chakra and as you do so jump high into the air and once you reach the peak of your "flight" stream the fire chakra while super-heating in into your mouth.Once there use nature manipulation to convert it into fire and as you exhale it use shape manipulation to form three giant bullets of fire which you send towards your opponent.As they hit the ground they will burst upwards as geysers of fire.

Well,this is pretty self use.But you can use some wide range wind techniques to boost it I guess.Also you can use some water/earth techniques to supplement this one,give it a higher chance of sucesfully hitting the target.With some earth techniques you can as you know alter the ground so perhaps you can make some pillars rise behind the opponent and then you can send fire at that,so when it hits,the fire burst onto him.

As for the countering properties anything that can be overcome/evaporated/destroyed by three giant fireballs can be countered.


This did sound a useful and epic technique. I really wonder how Tyki would even have a chance of surviving this one.

I stretch a little bit and stay where I am, long range from Tyki. I then begin hastily gathering my chakra into my stomach and ponder over the technique.

What were some advantages ?
It appeared that the biggest advantage of the technique was the obvious fact that it struck your opponent from above. What this means is it is harder for the opponent to avoid as it is coming down on top of them. Going left and right has a slim chance of them escaping it, and going up is obviously a bad idea, and down could mean they are struck anyway, as it appears this technique has the ability to penetrate the earth.
The fact that upon contact with the ground they burst upwards into geysers of fire is another advantage for the technique. This is because it means it makes it even more unlikely for an opponent to be able to avoid and also means the technique can damage areas it had not initially damaged upon landing.
Also the nature of the technique means you could use it to take out a large number of enemies at a time.
Further yet, firing from above means you have gravity on your side, this makes it a lot harder for an opponent to send a counter at the technique upwards or form some kind of barrier over them which will provide some kind of protection as the technique's power is enlarged due to it being accompanied by gravity as it hurtles downwards.
Also, because the technique means you fire 3 large fireballs, you can expect this overall technique to cover a vast area.
There is also no need for hand seals or prep time that will significantly slow down your technique, another benefit.
This technique would be especially useful if your aim was to destroy a village or some kind of asset to the enemy or if you wanted to kill a large amount of enemies.
Also, as you stated, it can be used in conjunction with a number of elements to increase its likelihood of striking someone.

Now what were some disadvantages for the technique ..

It appeared that the biggest disadvantage of the technique was the fact that you are in the air for a moment of two. Although a brief moment, you are left unprotected and not on the offensive from the moment you leave the ground until the peak of your ascent. This leaves you vulnerable and an opponent can easily take advantage of your vulnerability and strike at you. This also goes on your way down.
Another disadvantage, is there is a possibility that you fall straight into the chaos you created if you performed this technique in short range. For example, just below you, you create a raging inferno, you have a huge chance of falling straight into this inferno.
You also wouldn't want to use this technique if your allies were nearby, as there is a huge chance they will get caught up in this technique as well, as it covers a large area.
If your mission was to capture, you'd also avoid using this technique as there is a high chance that you would accidentally kill the target instead.
Further yet, you lose sight of your opponent due to the fire and smoke created. This means you have no idea whether they escaped the technique or not, and if they had, this leaves you unexpecting and wide open to an attack.

That was all I had for now .. I wanted to get performing this technique.

I mold the chakra I had gathered in my stomach into fire chakra, as I do so, I leap high into the air. As I approach the peak of my ascent, I begin to stream my fire chakra towards my mouth, as it passes through my throat, I super heat it.
By the peak of my ascent, the chakra is spilling into my mouth and I use nature manipulation to convert this chakra into fire, which I then proceed to exhale from my mouth. As it is doing this, I use shape manipulation to turn this exhaled fire into 3 large fireballs which I send hurtling towards Tyki.

I note this was a rather fast technique to perform, and I watch as my 3 fireballs travel towards Tyki on an angle from above.

As they travel towards him, Tyki yells,

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

I am pretty sure that my giant fireballs will just tear straight through his little fire shots. They were not solid enough to make my fire balls explode into fiery geysers and their explosions would do little to phase my larger fireballs. That was just my opinion anyway, if I were to counter the technique I would have used some sort of water defence technique, preferably B- A Rank. Ah well, as I float towards the ground, I wonder what will happen.
 

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Really good,as always.
Sorry for the late reply.
I was busy,kinda.

Next up,something sorta different:
( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.
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Gather your chakra in your body and mold it so it becomes Katon chakra.As you do so perform these hand seals*shows you them*.Once done,stream the chkara towards your mouth and super-heat it on the way.As it enters your mouth use state manipulation to convert the chakra into very hot ash and then exhale the ash while using shape manipulation so the ash forms a cloud around the opponent,then click your teeth,causing and explosion.

I blow the ash back at you.
(Fūton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa) - Wind Style: Infinte Sand Great Break Through
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Originally Gaara's technique, for other characters the user will have to gather the dust or sand of the environment around him and then combine it with his elemental wind affinity. A large wind gust with dust or sand will get created capable to push away the opponent or medium sized objects.
 

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Hey there ! So sorry about the late reply :) I am stuck at home all week so I should be able to reply pretty consistently. The only thing which shall be stopping me would be my tonne of holiday homework -.- Anyway, thanks for the patience, we can resume training ! :-D

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Tyki nods his approval and informs me that it was good as always.
:blush:

Before proceeding with the next technique,

Next up,something sorta different:

( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

Gather your chakra in your body and mold it so it becomes Katon chakra.As you do so perform these hand seals*shows you them*.Once done,stream the chkara towards your mouth and super-heat it on the way.As it enters your mouth use state manipulation to convert the chakra into very hot ash and then exhale the ash while using shape manipulation so the ash forms a cloud around the opponent,then click your teeth,causing and explosion.


I raise an eyebrow.
:what:

Spitting ash from my mouth did not sound very appealing what so ever. I pictured myself choking on the ash, the taste of the ash on my tongue, and worse, whenever I picture ash, I think cremated dead people so at that thought I nearly vomited. I walked mid range from Tyki and hesitated.

Tyki noticed my reluctance to perform the technique and also noticed my sick face. He told me to toughen up and threatened to hit me with the technique if I didn't hurry up. He also said a few insulting things among this, insulting things which were enough to get me fired up and want to strike him.

With my new motivation I gathered my chakra up inside my body at the same time thinking over the techniques strengths and weaknesses.

Now what were some advantages of this technique L?

It appeared that the most obvious advantage of the technique is the fact that it can cover a lot of area, being ash. What I mean by this is it can completely surround the victim and as a result cause harm to all areas of the victim. Because it surrounds your opponent as well, this makes it harder for an opponent to avoid/dodge or escape the attack.
The technique also can be used to obstruct the enemies view. This is beneficial if you want to escape or want to form some kind of surprise attack. The fact that you can ignite the ash further enables you to escape or obstruct the enemies vision.
The technique seems pretty beneficial anyway as it can pretty much cause severe injury and even death. And furthermore, the ash can actually affect multiple people at once, so you can injure/kill more people with one technique then some other techniques.
Your opponent will also probably inhale the ash which will work as a type of poison, slowly suffocating your victim making it even harder for them to counter/escape the technique as their thinking will become unclear.
The fact that you can ignite the ash with a simple click or your teeth is another advantage as your opponent won't even really realize what is going on. For instance, if you ignite something you'd assume you'd do so with a match or a fire technique, your opponent would be looking out for signs that you'd do that, (so looking for a hand seal, a change of body posture etc not a simple tooth click) therefore, they will not be expecting the ignition of the ash and as a result be caught of guard and well .. still inside the ash cloud.
Also, the fact that the technique is somewhat flexible in terms of range. It can be performed either from mid or short range. It is particularly useful to use from mid range as, as it travels towards the opponent, it covers a lot of area along the way, meaning the technique can cover a fair amount of area before reaching the initial target. This makes it easier for you to escape as it puts more distance between you.

Now that was all I could think of for advantages, now for disadvantages ..

As for disadvantages, one of the major ones that I can see is that the ash not only obstructs your vision, but also yours. You have no idea whether your opponent has managed to escape and therefore, you are left vulnerable. What if he had escaped ? He could sneak up behind you and attack you ! Or he could be forming a large counter within the cloud that you are very unaware of.
Also the ash cloud is kind of easy to spot coming. I mean it is a big black ash cloud. This makes it easy for an opponent to anticipate and therefore, it makes it easier for an opponent to think of a counter, avoid or escape the technique.
Also, because the technique covers a fair bit of area, you have a large likelihood of unintentionally capturing your own allies inside the technique.
The technique can also be escaped with a simple up or down motion. For instance you could leap out of the cloud, or more conveniently use a technique such as an earth pillar to uplift yourself up and out, far above the cloud, or use an earth technique to have you go beneath the ground and escape from the cloud that way.
The four hand seals are also an inconvenience. They slow the technique down.
Further yet, the technique can also be used against you. For instance, a wind technique could be used to blow it back towards you and an opponent can ignite it using a fire technique.
The technique in general is also not very good for your respiratory system and also contributes to air pollution, so a very unhealthy technique to use ;)

And that is all the disadvantages I have for now ! It is time to get performing the technique.

The chakra I had gathered in my body had gathered there for quite long enough. I began to mold this chakra into fire chakra at the same time, performing the 4 hand seals that Tyki had shown me earlier. Once I had done this, I channel my freshly molded fire chakra to my mouth, super heating it as it passes through my throat. As my chakra enters my mouth, I use state manipulation to convert this chakra into ash which is very hot. I try my best not to acknowledge the terrible taste of the ash on my tongue as I use shape upon exhaling the ash from my mouth towards Tyki to form a cloud around him.

As this cloud is forming, I am still able to just make out Tyki form some type of counter.

He yells,

(Fūton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa) - Wind Style: Infinte Sand Great Break Through

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Originally Gaara's technique, for other characters the user will have to gather the dust or sand of the environment around him and then combine it with his elemental wind affinity. A large wind gust with dust or sand will get created capable to push away the opponent or medium sized objects.

Confirming to me what it is.

He should be able to propel the ash cloud back at me .. unless, I prevent him from doing so first.

I watch as Tyki gathers dust from around the surrounding environment, and I watch with a smirk how among this dust, he actually is sucking the ash cloud closer around him than it had been. It is now becoming a rather dense ash cloud around him and it is he who is making it so !

But I knew that any moment now, he could throw this cloud back at me. The only way I could prevent this from happening .. is if I just clicked my teeth.

"click"

This sound was followed by a,

"boom"

As the ash cloud ignited around Tyki and exploded.

I watched in awe as the fire caused by the explosion produced an incredible amount of smoke which billowed up into the sky from the fire which seemed to have completely consumed Tyki. There was too much smoke and debris and dust uplifted as a result of the explosion to see Tyki's fate, but I waited with anticipation, knowing my evasive senpai would have made it out alive.

As I wait, I note the technique was medium speed as a result of the 4 hand seals prior and the fact that the ash cloud had to kind of take on the shape of a cloud. It couldn't just straight wipe over Tyki.

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Okay, well I think my inactivity should be forgiven. This reply took me 1hr and a half xD
 
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