[Raiton] ~ Finishing up Raiton ~ W/ Rock Lee

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Having read through your previous thread with Adachi, its safe to say this is last jutsu you learned.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.



Okay so the next jutsu is the parent technique of the Chidori, known as the Raikiri. Having already learned Chidori, you should be familiar with the concept of the Raikiri seeing as it is similar in most areas, though with a few differences such as the need to have better chakra control due to it being stronger and requiring more concentration than Chidori.

Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.



Anyway, you begin by weaving the Ox » Rabbit » Monkey handseals, having done this, you then gather a sufficient amount of Raiton chakra in the palm of your dominant hand. While maintaining your concentration, you then release the built up chakra from your palm as a surge of electricity while simultaneously manipulating its shape to coat your hand with the electric current which can be used to pierce through most obstacles.

Key Points: There are none.
 

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Having read through your previous thread with Adachi, its safe to say this is last jutsu you learned.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.



Okay so the next jutsu is the parent technique of the Chidori, known as the Raikiri. Having already learned Chidori, you should be familiar with the concept of the Raikiri seeing as it is similar in most areas, though with a few differences such as the need to have better chakra control due to it being stronger and requiring more concentration than Chidori.

Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.



Anyway, you begin by weaving the Ox » Rabbit » Monkey handseals, having done this, you then gather a sufficient amount of Raiton chakra in the palm of your dominant hand. While maintaining your concentration, you then release the built up chakra from your palm as a surge of electricity while simultaneously manipulating its shape to coat your hand with the electric current which can be used to pierce through most obstacles.

Key Points: There are none.
Both easy enough. How does your training go btw fam?
 

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Having read through your previous thread with Adachi, its safe to say this is last jutsu you learned.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.



Okay so the next jutsu is the parent technique of the Chidori, known as the Raikiri. Having already learned Chidori, you should be familiar with the concept of the Raikiri seeing as it is similar in most areas, though with a few differences such as the need to have better chakra control due to it being stronger and requiring more concentration than Chidori.

Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.



Anyway, you begin by weaving the Ox » Rabbit » Monkey handseals, having done this, you then gather a sufficient amount of Raiton chakra in the palm of your dominant hand. While maintaining your concentration, you then release the built up chakra from your palm as a surge of electricity while simultaneously manipulating its shape to coat your hand with the electric current which can be used to pierce through most obstacles.

Key Points: There are none.
Wolfgang Grimmer
Grimmer widened his stance, knees slightly bent forward, Grimmer quickly performed the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals, then centered his right arm between the gap. He closed his eyes, simultaneously imagining his chakra turning into lightning, his insides crackled with excitement, he could feel the electricity lingering throughout his body. from his stomach, upward into his right arm. He gripped his right hand with his left, the power was great, but he would beat this..!

Grimmer opened his eyes, staring directly at his hand, it was tingling, he surged the built up chakra within his hand, then it happened! A jolt of lightning had emerged engulfing the majority of his right hand, his eyes widened, and a smile passed over his emotionless face, he had done it! He had performed Raikiri!​
 

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.



That was good. Now whilst maintaining the Raikiri, bring both of your hands together in front of you so that your palms are pressing against each other and redirect your chakra, half to be exact, to your left hand so that both your both hands will be covered with a Raikiri.

Key Points: Once you split the Raikiri in 2, the power is halved (40 per Raikiri).
 

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Concentrating, and focusing on the currently conjured Raikiri, I bring both my hands together, I split the lightning chakra from my dominant hand, into my recessive, halving the overall striking power, but increasing the lethality in numbers.

Pretty simple. XD
 

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.



You will gather Raiton chakra in both your hands and release it, covering them in Lightning, basically creating a Chidori in each hand. Once both hands are covered in Lighting, you will clap them together in front of you to create a thunderbolt that will be directed at your opponent.

Key Points: There are none. (Read jutsu properly to understand)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns



You will form the Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger handseals whilst simultaneously gathering Raiton chakra throughout your body. Upon completion of the handseals, you will release the chakra from all over your body to create a blinding light which will leave your opponent unable to see if he looks at you.

Key Points: There are none.
 

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.




Key Points: There are none. (Read jutsu properly to understand)
Manipulating the already concentrated Raiton chakra throughout my hands, I slowly, but sternly tighten them, readying them for the initial impact soon to come. With that, I hastily bring them together in a clapping motion, springing forth a large bolt of lightning whizzing away hitting a nearby tree.

You said:
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns




You will form the Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger handseals whilst simultaneously gathering Raiton chakra throughout your body. Upon completion of the handseals, you will release the chakra from all over your body to create a blinding light which will leave your opponent unable to see if he looks at you.

Key Points: There are none.

Further manipulating the left over lightning chakra, I perform a series of handseals Ram - Horse - Snake - Tiger, gathering, and redistributing the lightning chakra all around my body. Quickly I release it causing a bright glow to emerge blinding anyone, and anything in the vicinity who looks at me.
 

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Don't rush the training, you have to redo them both, properly. There is a difference between Chidori and Raikiri.

The second jutsu isn't done like that, you release the chakra from your body and blind your opponent, not spread it out.
 

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Don't rush the training, you have to redo them both, properly. There is a difference between Chidori and Raikiri.

The second jutsu isn't done like that, you release the chakra from your body and blind your opponent, not spread it out.
My fault fam.

Performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey handseals, bringing my hands to together, then evenly dividing the chakra between the two. Bringing them away from each other I had essentially conjured two Chidori; one in each hand. With that, I vigorously swing my hands forward, slapping them together in a clapping motion - Instantly a large bolt of lightning roared forward whizzing in a linear motion hitting, then destroying a nearby boulder.

Did I do it right by applying the initial handseals for Chidori? Or?

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Bringing my hands together, completely focusing myself, I concentrate my lightning chakra all around my body. I could feel the energy surging to break forward onto the surface - I continued to mold the tingling chakra several seconds more until the pent of energy became too dense, too perfect to suppress any longer. Releasing the lightning chakra from my body, I began to glow, a gold-white aura engulfed my entirety.
 

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Its all good fam.
Nah you don't have to perform the handseals.

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.



You will gather Raiton chakra into your dominant hand and release it, shaping out around your hand to create a Chidori. Once the Chidori is formed, raise your hand so its facing your target and release the chakra once again but, in the form of a large blast of lightning that spreads as it moves forward.

Key Points: There are none.

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.



You will form a Chidori in your favored hand while running towards your target. Once you reach your opponent and strike him with the Chidori, you will shape it into a spear of lightning that will impale him and push him further away from you before the tip of the spear explodes.

Key Points: There are none.
 

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I guess we'll start by you finishing up the previous two jutsu by performing them and analyzing them with their strengths, weaknesses and a situation where you would use them
 

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I guess we'll start by you finishing up the previous two jutsu by performing them and analyzing them with their strengths, weaknesses and a situation where you would use them

Itama Senju - (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm

Itama began to gather raiton chakra into his right hand, carefully conjuring a Chidori, in which was needed to perform the technique his mentor had instructed. Concentrating the potent chakra within his palm, he jutted it forward, to his 12 o'clock, allowing the chakra to explode, not holding back anything. Lightning rushed forward in a vast area of coverage dying out several meters away.

Strengths

Area of Effect - Lack of Handseals - Multi-Directional.

Weaknesses

Possible loss of LoS (Line of Sight) - Leaves your 9 o'clock open - Spreads, leaving gaps in your frontal.

Usage

I'd rarely use this technique to be very honest, it just isn't something I'd induct into my arsenal. However, if I had to use it, I'd use this technique when say my enemy has mad several clones, and they're rushing at me, this would undoubtedly wipe them out.

Or.

Say my opponent is closing in, and I need coverage, and the element of surprise. I'd use this technique to cause an explosion on the surface (if an earthen surface), causing the ground to explode, while clouds of debris flooded the battlefield.

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Itama Senju - (Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear

Itama created a simple clone, opposite to him, giving it orders to position itself several feet away. Doing so, Itama then recreated the Chidori, but this time manipulated the raiton chakra so that a small spear would form itself over the deadly parenting technique.

Getting his running start, Itama surged forward pulling his right hand behind his back slightly, then jutting it forward with immense force, piecing his clone. Before the clone could vanish, Itama raised it within the air releasing a surge of raiton chakra causing an explosion, and sending his clone back onto the ground, then vanishing in a cloud of smoke.

Strengths

Chidori -> Chidori Spear transition can a deadly surprise vs unexpected enemies attempting to get up close, and personal.

Weaknesses

Blunt usage (straight forward), at attempts of striking the opponent from the get go with it, is a no go. This is a typically bland technique if used as it says, and is very much predictable, and counter-able.

Usage

How I'd use this technique is by baiting my opponent to attempt CQC with me, fake a Chidori jab - Then transition it from a simple Chidori, to a Chidori spear, slicing it horizontally to whichever way my opponent dodged, hitting them, and giving me the advantage.​
 

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no problem bro, and i like how you set up your replies. our next training session should be more fun
Don't you just hate messy ass replies? I'm OCD as f*ck. If my shit doesn't look clean, I can't post it. Swear lmao. Yeah let's make it lit.

I see you with that Adlet bio. Adlet is a savage. Especially with his usage of so many tricks, and gimmicks man. I love characters that fight like that.
 
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