[Finishing up]-Dm1202

[Wakizashi]

great job,

(Doton: Chōkeijūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Release: Super Light-Weight Rock Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage poitns: N/A
Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Light-Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically decreases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. The user if using this technique on a incoming object would still be affected by the momentum of the force but will not gain full damage due to drastically decreasing the weight.
Note: The Initial effects last for 1 turn before the weight of the mass is returned to normal.

(Doton: Chō Kajūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Super Added Weight Rock Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Added Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically increases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. Under certain circumstances, the technique can be used to increase the force behind attacks.
Note: Note: The Initial effects last for 1 turn before the weight of the mass is returned to normal.

Again, disadvantages and Advantages over their weaker versions. Also what are the differences? Why would you use one and not the other?

Adv-Can make you or an ally faster
Doesn't require handseals

Disadv-Reduces the damage you can do
The effect only lasts 1 turn

super added weight rock
Adv-Can be used to give your attacks greater force
No handseals required

Disadv-Effect only lasts one turn
Short range only

the effects of each is multiplied greater than the original. if you want to go a lot faster then super light weight would be the way to go

if you want to hit many times harder than super added weight is the way to go.

 

[Better]

cool man, We're done with Earth.

Fire next right?

 

[Wakizashi]

cool man, We're done with Earth.

Fire next right?

yes! yeS! YES!!!

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[Better]

Nvm, you're almost done with Cobalt xD


you have less then 10 jutsus lol

good job tho

 

[Wakizashi]

hes gonna take forever. with you i can master the basic five before the end of the week.

 

[Better]

nahh, trust me on this one

 

[Wakizashi]

fine. thanks a lot! better sempai. you deserve the title.

 

[Better]

oi, that looks weird coming from you lol

Better

 

[Better]

Post your last fire technique and perform it

 

[Wakizashi]

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

i Gather my chakra then stomp on the ground as I release the chakra into the earth. I Manipulate the chakra to separate a section underground, creating a tunnel between me and your clone. Once the tunnel is complete, I gather my katon chakra then mold it so that it becomes super heated. I Release a stream of fire from my mouth into the tunnel, the fire would follow the path of the tunnel, altering the earth as it travels, forming lava. It would then erupt beneath the clone, engulfing him in lava.

 

[Better]

alright, lets begin

Katon: Hokori Tenka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dust Ignition Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first ignites a flame of fire across the ground infront of them and then they will enhance that fire with a gust of wind to extend the range of the fire

I want you release a flame of fire across the ground infront of you, then use our wind techniques to extend the fires range.

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(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

I want you to manipulate your fire chakra and breath out a ton of it from your mouth into a giant fire ball that travels to my clone. Once it hits it, it will burst into a storm of flames.

 

[Wakizashi]

*For this technique I begin by concentrating my Katon chakra and then channel it to my lungs from my gut. I then start to build it up, quickly amassing a sufficient amount for this technique. I then focus the chakra out of my mouth while simultaneously using nature manipulation to change the chakra into flames. I expel this fire onto the ground in front of me, I then quickly follow up by using a wind jutsu to spread the fire out wider and longer so it engulfs your clone.*

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*For this technique I start by concentrating my Katon chakra and then channeling it into my lungs. There I begin to build it up, pushing huge amounts of chakra into my lungs until I have a amassed a significant amount which should be enough for this technique. I then focus the chakra out of my mouth, spitting it out and as it leaves my mouth I simultaneously use nature and shape manipulation to create a large, superhot fireball that races towards your clone. As it reaches your clone it explodes into inferno which decimates your clone and the surrounding area.*

 

[Better]

( Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

I want to knead some fire chakra and then release it into the ground by stomping into the ground. This will cause three pillars of fire to come up from under wherever you want. You can put one right under my clone, and just in case he wants to go backwards, you can put on behind and in front of him. You can put these three pillars anywhere you want, make sure you be specific and detail when you use it.

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(Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.

I want you to form the tiger hand seal, and then release fire attack, before you release it tho, manipulate it's shape and turn it into dragon heads, make sure you add a bunch more chakra then you did for all the other fire dragons, because these are stronger and more deadly.

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(Katon Renkeijutsu: Karura) - Fire Release Co-Operation Technique: Garuda
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Shadow Clone Technique and creating two shadow clones and then by performing the required sequence of hand seals Dog → Rat → Tiger and the user and the two shadow clones release a long flame of intense fire from their mouths which combine to form a flaming dragon.
Note: Requires 2 shadow clones before use.

Perform the shadow clone technique and bring out two shadow clones. Afterwards perform the hand seals Dog → Rat → Tiger, and then you and your clones release a long intense stream of fire from your mouths. The should all combine and form a large flaming dragon.

 

[Wakizashi]

*First I concentrate my Katon chakra and I begin to channel it into my right leg. There I begin to build it un, pushing more and more chakra into my leg until i have amassed a significant amount, which should ve more than enough for this technique. I then simultaneously stomp and focus the chakra out of my leg, emitting it into the earth. As it leaves my leg I use nature manipulation to change it to flames, the flames than shoot out of the ground in the form of several tall pillars. These pillars protect me from your summon as they roast her before she can reach me.*

*I turn to the final group of remaining dummies, and beginning channeling my Katon chakra. After building up the chakra in my lungs, i use shape manipulation to mold it in side of my body, expelling the chakra as three dragons composed of flames. The flames are so condensed they gain a degree of solid properties, dealing impact damage to the trees along with severely burning them on contact. The dragons cause the flames to become widespread amongst the trees in an instant, destroying the remaining forested area for quite a distance.*

I then perform the clone handseal, creating two clones, one to my right and the other to my left. Then as me and my clones perform the handseals Dog → Rat → Tiger the three of us utilize katon chakra throughout our bodies and then breath in, focusing the previously utilized chakra within our lungs, molding it as we channel the chakra up to our mouth and then exhale. Both me and the clones exhale a long flame of intense fire from our mouths, which as it travels combines with eachother, forming a flaming dragon

 

[Better]

S ranks :hyper:

(Katon: Bakuryūgeki) - Fire Release: Exploding Dragon Strike
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user through use of one their scrolls will summon a large flame dragon that is directed towards the enemy target and explodes upon impact.

Catch this Scroll, *throws scroll* Now i want you to focus your fire chakra into and then summon a large flame dragon and send it at my clone, it should kill it easily lol.

(Katon Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hitora Bakufu) - Fire Release Summoning Technique: Fire Tiger Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user summons a tiger made of flames from a scroll, directing it towards the target, and attaching itself onto the target and explode causing massive damage on detonation making it similar to a paper bomb.

Same thing, Here's another scroll, focus your fire chakra into it and summon a tiger this time made out of flame. Send it at my clone and make it go away

Creates clones.

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(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after combining Fire Release: Intense pain and Wind Release: Pressure Damage at the same time. This creates a blast that is so intense that a standard water technique (ex : Water Release: Water Encampment Wall) can only at most soften of the impact. It was successsfully stopped by Yamato and Naruto's Typhoon water vortex.

you need to do Intelligent Work and then Combine it with Pressure damage, If you do it by yourself you need to do it one at a time, but it still counts as one technique. If in the future you use a clone, it can be done together, still only counts as one technique.

 

[Wakizashi]

*Removing a seal from my ninja scroll, i write a summoning formula on the scrolls and begin imbuing my Katon chakra into the scroll. I then turn to a group of dummies and release the katon chakra, summoning a large dragon composed of flames which speeds towards another group of dummies, detonating like an immense paper explosion.*

*Like with the last technique, i perform the same procedure. Removing a scroll from my ninja pouch, i write a summoning formula on the scrolls and begin imbuing my Katon chakra into the scroll. I then turn to a group of dummies and release the katon chakra, summoning a large tiger composed of flames which latches onto one of the dummies, and detonating itself similar to that of a paper bomb explosion, but on a much higher scale.*

I first began by gathering alot of fire chakra within my lungs, I then perform the hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger. After forming the final hand seal I release from my mouth a small compressed fireball which upon contact with a surface erupts into a giant fire-storm causing widespread destruction. Before making contact with the surface i then Perform Wind Release: Pressure Damage(i'd actually do this if i could find it in the jutsu list )Fusing the two Jutsu making the wind feed the fire oxygen making it stronger.

 

[Better]

Awesome,

(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

Strongest Fire attack beside the one that combines with wind, Make the horse hand seal and focus chakra inside your body and then release inot large massive wall of intense flames, which covers a large range going up and going across. It's pretty hard to just dodge it.

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(Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.

Focus your fire chakra and expell it from your mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. Pretty simple for this one just give me a combo.

 

[Wakizashi]

After taking a short break I stand up and begin gathering a large amount of fire chakra within my lungs, I then take a deep breath and perform the Horse hand seal(horse. [insert eye twitch here] I figure'd it be Tiger like normal katon) and expel from my mouth a stream of fire, I then use shape manipulation to form it into massive wall of intense flames covering a wide range both horizontally and vertically.

i start by gathering a large amount of chakra. after gathering a large amount of chakra i then change the nature of that chakra to katon. after changing the nature of the chakra to katon I then take a deep breath. after taking a deep breath i then expel from my mouth a stream of fire. as i expel the large stream of fire it consumes everything in its path, violently burn everything and quickly disentigrating tree leaves and grass into nothing

 

[Better]

Form the rasengan

 

[Wakizashi]

i gather chakra into the right hand. while i gather my chakra i cause the chakra to spiral making the spin to the right at very high speeds. the speed of the spiralling chakra causes the chakra to take the of a sphere in my right hand. when the sphere is formed i then try to compress the spiraling sphere my clenching my hand while mantaining the spiraling motion of the chakra.