Finishing taijutsu with Better

[Rayder]

Its harder to describe the simple ones in detail. :erm:

I run quickly towards your clone before stopping a small distance in front of him and then jumping towards the clone whilst spinning slowly to put your clone off before clenching my fist and then swinging my right arm around in a wide arc to connect with his temple.

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I stretch my legs ready to perform the attack and then suddenly sprint towards your clone and stop right next to him before springing my leg out at a high angle to send him into the air. I then concentrate chakra in my feet and jump up to be level with him and then I bombard him with a variety of kicks from different angles and aimed at different body parts before bringing my leg up and crashing it down against his back to send him falling down.

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I run towards your clone using the same technique as last time and kick him into the air with my right leg. I then gather chakra in my feet and jump, stopping just below him and then kicking him higher again. I repeat this one more time until we're high enough before grabbing his shoulders and bringing crashing into the ground and using his body to cushion my landing.

 

[Better]

YAMCHA!

( Rōga Shōken ) - Wolf Fang Rising Fist
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20 (+5 used with Chakra Enhanced Trench Knives)
Description: A series of punches and slashes finishing with a rising uppercut lifting the opponent into the air.

*tosses you a trench knife (asuma's blades)*

I want you to mix it up and hit my clone with a bunch of punches and slashes with the trench knifes. Remember to describe how you punch and slash each time you do. Then Finish off with a rising uppercut.

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(Konoha Dairetsukū) – Leaf Great Violent Sky
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user runs at the opponent, then kicking them into the stomach, following up with a spinning kick to the chest and punching multiple times to the upper body then follows up with a punch hitting the opponent into the sky. Once in the Air the user performs a spinning kick hitting the opponent into the ground where finally, they poses by raising their arms and bringing their legs together.
Run up at my clone and kick him in the stomach. Quickly follow up with a spinning to the chest. Then start punching a bunch of times in his upper body then follow up with another punch into the sky. After that jump and send it back down with a spin kick, and finish with a pose with your hand up in the air and legs together.

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(Kōsa Hō) – Intersection method
Rank: B
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: With this jutsu, the user is able to intercept and counter an oncoming taijutsu technique by raising the knee, and driving the elbow downwards at the same time. This catches the attacking limb between his two limbs, and drives the elbow down with great force, effectively shattering the bone.

Simple jutsu, perform it and give me some advantages.

 

[Rayder]

I catch the trench knifes and put one on each hand, slotting my fingers into the holes then using my hand to grab the handle. I then run towards the clone and punch his right shoulder with left fist pushing him back and then I drag the blade across his shoulder to slash him before bringing my right fist up to collide with his chest and then doing the same and dragging it down across his stomach to cut him again. I then uppercut him with my left knuckles to send him into the air.

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I run to your clone and fly kick him in the stomach pushing him back a few meters and then jump towards him while spinning to close the distance between us before stretching out my leg to connect with his arm. I grab him before he can fall to bring him closer to me and then proceed to punch him in different parts of his body with each fist picking up a rhythm and then uppercutting him into the sky. I then gather chakra into my feet and then jump up to be above him before smashing my foot back down on his skull to send him back down.

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I walk towards your clone and stand in front of him waiting for him to attack. Once he does in to punch me I suddenly bring my knee up, not blocking his attack but stopping under where the fist will connect, and then suddenly bring my elbow down to crush his arm between my knee and elbow.

Adv- Useful against simple freeform tai.
Dis- Not very versatile.

 

[Better]

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(Konoha Kaiganshō) - Leaf Rock Destroying Rise
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: short - mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: A taijutsu technique where the user smashes their elbow into their opponent using the other arm as support. It deals a powerful blow to the target and as the name suggests, is even strong enough to destroy rock formations.

(creates clone)

A strong elbow to the back of my clone. Use your other hand for support.

Konoha Daisenkō) - Leaf Great Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Charka cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: Similar to Tsunade’s Sky leg but the user user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send their opponent flying away.

Charge at my clone and when you reach him unleash a powerful lateral kick aimed at his head that will poof my clone. In actuality to a real shinobi it would send him flying.

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(Raijin) - Zeus
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

Basically an uppercut palm with some lightning infused with it.

(Konoha Gōriki Senpū ) - Leaf Strong Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 20
Description: A taijutsu using a combination of speed and power. The essence of this technique is concentrated in a spinning back kick, with such speed that makes it hard to follow the user's movement, smashing his enemy with overwhelming strength. This is a more Powerful leaf great whirlwind.

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This a both fast and powerful. I want you to do a spinning back kick. This is both a fast kick and a powerful, dealing great damage with hard to track speed

 

[Rayder]

I run towards your clone and fold my arm aiming my elbow at your clones face but just before the moment of contact I put my other hand on my fist to strengthen the elbow jab and use the arm to actually push my elbow into your clones face making it disperse.

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I run up to your clone and then start to run when I get to mid range of him and leap forwards as I pull my leg in and then spring it out a meter away from the clones head, smashing against the side of its skull and making it disperse.

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I run towards your clone and channel my raiton chakra through my arm slowly, so as it is only mildly infused with the electricity and not completely charged, and then use my palm to uppercut the clone into the air and electrocute him at the same time.

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I turn around away from your clone and listen carefully until I hear his footsteps pounding towards me. I wait until there is only 2 meters separating us and then leap into the air while spinning backwards so that my left leg collides into his face with incredible speed.

 

[Better]

Good, better descriptions for these last ones

(Toripuru Dainamikku Entorii) -Triple Dynamic Entry
Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user uses Dynamic Entry on the opponent and then appears behind them to use it again. They are blasted into the air where they use a third Dynamic Entry to knock the enemy to the ground with great force and speed

Dynamic entry three times with the last one knocking them to the ground.

(Senkō Jūjiki) -Flash Cross Sever
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user delivers multiple punches to the foe before he slashes them with his chakra blades in a cross-style.

you first hit my clone with a bunch of punches. Afterwards take out a kunai or a sword and run chakra through it. Slash my clone up cross style.

Do these together in a combo. It's pretty basic, I want to see your wording.

(Konoha Shippūdan) - Leaf Hurricane Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will launch a succession of high and low kicks dealing a several continuous kicks to the chest region alternating between both legs.

(Doroppu Kikku) - Drop Kick
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 35
Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.

 

[Rayder]

I run towards the clone and leap into the air while stretching my left leg out and it collides with its cheek sending it backwards. I then appear behind the opponent as it flies in my direction I run in the air this time aiming the kick at an angle so it sends it into the air. I wait until the clone is at its peak height and then gather chakra in my feet and jump into the air, directly above it, and slam my right foot into its chest sending it flying back into the ground.

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I run at your clone and clench both fists before swinging my right arm across my body and my fists collide with the clones nose and the momentum from the sprint pushing the clone back. Before the clone can be pushed back however I uppercut its stomach with my left hand stopping him from flying and leaving him winded and then punch him again harder lifting him off his feet a few centimeters. I pull out a kunai and channel my chakra through it and slash the clones chest in a perfect X pattern.

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I run towards the clone going full Sanji mode and pushing myself forward with my left leg I slam my right leg into the opponents chest and then fall backwards using my hands to push myself off the ground and slam both feet into the clones abdomen and then jump upwards using my left leg again to kick him into the air. I then channel chakra through my feet and jump above the clone, stretching my leg out and using the momentum to slam it into the clone.

 

[Better]

( Konoha Toppū ) - Leaf Gust
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 40
Description:
Using simple, yet effective movement when performing a counter attack or a freeform hand attack, the user will manage to spin rapidly and performs a strong rotative high kick to hit the opponent. The technique can be triggered in many ways and more than one kick can be delivered if the user manages to gather enough momentum.

This is very useful. What do you think about it? Perform and and give me some advantages.

 

[Rayder]

As your clone reaches out to touch me I jump a little into the air ad then spin rapidly pushing my leg outwards and kicking the opponents arm with my right leg, preventing the clone from nearing me. I then spin around again this time rotating around and I stretch my leg out and spin so that it collides with the clones shoulder and sends them sprawling on the floor.

Adv- Would be useful to stop freeform attacks and also weaker taijutsu attacks that are combos.

 

[Better]

Were done with Taijutsu

 

[Rayder]

Thanks for the training. U_U