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(Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death
Rank:E
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and explosives separately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and force able punches it into the enemy's behind.

I slowly sneak behind your clone and edge around him step by step. I then crouch down as I exit the clones peripheral vision and am behind him. I move a little closer until I'm directly behind him before concentrating my chakra in my hands and making the tiger hand seal and slamming it up his ass.
 

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Alright give me your fighting stance. When you do, turn to the dummy next to you and extend a forward strong punch with your dominate hand to his chest. Remember to be descriptive.
 

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I turn to the dummy next to me and put my right foot forward as I try to distance my feet evenly from each other and I bring my arms out in front of me. I turn to the right slightly and then I step forward pushing against my left foot as I stretch my right hand out and strike its chest.
 

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Good. You've just done


(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest

Now I want you to back and get a running start. Run towards the wooden dummy and jump up off the ground, extend your leg and deliver a flying kick breaking the wooden dummy head off.

[video=youtube;PDOZ_hyu7Lo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PDOZ_hyu7Lo[/video]
 

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Sorry for the wait. From now on I'll respond on the same day you post or on the next. U_U

I take some steps back until I'm a considerable distance away from the dummy and then start to suddenly sprint forward and when I'm a few meters away I push my feet off the ground leaping into the air while stretching out my leg to send the dummies head flying.
 

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no problem

(Konoha Reppū) - Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:10
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

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A spinning rear low kick, knocking my clone upside down and follow up with this

(Konoha Senpū) - Leaf Hurricane
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 10
Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark connecting to the rib cage area. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.

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Which is you hitting my clone higher with higher kicks and different versions of low kicks. Some of your kicks may be evaded so you can change it up with the kicks you do. Make sure you take time and describe really well. What hand, what arm, what leg what foot and everything.
 

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As your clone runs towards me I bend my legs before slowly crouching and just as he is about to reach out for me I drop fully down while spinning my right leg knocking your clone off his feet as he goes upside down. I then jump up while stretching out my left leg and making connection just on the clones left shoulder and then feinting another high kick instead I switch legs using my right leg again to smash into the clones stomach sending them flying
 

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Good Moving on,

(Konoha Shōfū) – Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: This technique uses the entire body as a spring, by amassing power through taking a posture where the back of the body falls down. With this powerful taijutsu, the user kicks just above the head. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.

Using your entire body as a spring, kick above your head with your back pointing towards the ground. Do this a couple times and keep practicing till you do it with power. Than do it on my clone sending him high into the sky.

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I stretch my legs before putting my left leg behind my right one and then pushing against my left foot so my right foot goes straight up into the air with my back pointing towards the ground. I try this a few more times trying to get my foot higher each time before attempting it on your clone, and propelling my right leg straight up into your clones chin sending him flying.
 

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Awesome, love the description. Alright i'm going to give you three techs and you make a combo out of all of them.

Asshō) - Pressure Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes their opponent with a downwards thrust striking them to the floor.

(Shōgekishō) - Upwards Attacking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes their opponent with an upwards thrust into the abdomen lifting them into the air.

(Hōshō) - Crumbling Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes the opponent with a forwarding palm thrust.
 

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I run up to your clone and pull my left arm backwards before shooting it out, smashing my palm against the clones chest sending him backwards then before he can recover I uppercut his abdomen with my open palm sending him a few meters into the air and I channel my chakra through my feet and jump into the air above your clones body and swing downwards with my palm and it crushes its back before sending it hurtling into the ground.
 

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Good,

(Dainamikku Akushon) - Dynamic Action
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description: The user flips towards the opponent and attacks with a series of punches and kicks equalling 7 attacks.

Flip towards my clone, and do a series of punches and kicks. The places and the order you do it in is up to you. The total attacks though must 7. Make you identify which hands or legs you're using and describe how you do your movements.

[video=youtube;O_1247etcLE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O_1247etcLE[/video]
 

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I concentrate my chakra into my feet and flip forward bring my left fist crashing down into the clones shoulder and then kicking the opponents head with right foot to stop him from falling down and then proceed to punch him in the stomach twice with each fist and then swings his left arm around so his fist smashes into the opponents jaw making them turn before sending them flying with a forceful kick.
 

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Nice Keep that up

(Kage Buyō) - Shadow of the Dancing Leaf
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 5
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.

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Remember Lee doing this to Sasuke? I want you to run up Kick my clone into the air then when he's vunerable in the air do this

[video=youtube;1UHSMBP9ZAw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1UHSMBP9ZAw[/video]

(Shishi Rendan) - Lions Barrage
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:15
Description: A variant technique of the Front Lotus, It is an ultra-fast combo attack that requires an advanced physical condition and a certain knack for it. The opponent is first kicked into the air and shadowed with the Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Upon inflicting a blow, one takes advantage of said opponent's counterattack to spin around and rise again for further assaults. Since the fall is increased in velocity with each blow, the damage when one is eventually struck to the ground is inconceivable. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest.

Lion's barrage. Hit him with a kick, and then as he blocks it, counter that attack and spin around and continue the assault. What you do in the air to him doesn't matter in terms of hits but keep sending him to the ground. At the end when he's most vulnerable, hit him with one big kick that slams him to the ground.
 

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I run towards your clone and crouch before sending my right foot into his chin with a great deal of force sending him into the air and then I concentrate chakra into my feet and suddenly appear behind the disorientated clone mirroring his movements perfectly as he falls. I then swing my left leg around in full view of your clone so he is able to block it with ease before assaulting his blind spot with a right punch and then spin him around to punch him in the abdomen a few more times before finally slamming my foot into his chest and pushing against it to send him flying down to the ground.
 

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Awesome, keep that up.

(Konoha Daisenpū) - Leaf Great Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:15
Description: This technique is a series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks.

I want you to perform a series of kicks at my clone, start of low and then follow up into a middle and high kick and then finish off with a heel drop. Here's a video for more understanding. Remember every move you make needs to be detailed. I need to be able to visualize your move

[video=youtube;9Ns43890eEo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Ns43890eEo[/video]

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(Rakanken) - Nirvana Fist
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description: A powerful shoulder smash followed by a strong punch.

I want you to turn to my clone. Then I want you to run at it and throw a powerful shoulder block hitting him, then followe up with a strong punch.

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(Naruto Rendan) - Naruto Barrage
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:After making 4 clones they attack with kicks that launch the foe into the sky and the original hits the enemy on the shoulder sending them flying back to the ground.

Make four clone and kick your launch my clone into the sky. Than the original jumps off the clones and hits my clone on the shoulder sending him back to the ground.

 

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I run at your clone and jump forward stretching out my right leg to kick his shin and then use my left leg to kick his stomach while preventing him from falling and pushing him back up before kicking him in the right side of his head with my right leg again and then smashing my right heel into his face to send him sprawling.


I turn to face your other clone and then run at him at a steady pace before all-out sprinting at him before turning at the last second so my shoulder connects with his chin and before he is sent backwards I bring my right fist swinging round and it connects with the back of his head to send him crashing into the floor.


I concentrate my chakra and make four other clones which make a formation circling around you. One clone then runs to you and punches you with his right fist to leave your clone distracted, while I then jump on the clones back to propel myself into the air with my leg out in front of me, and then the other 3 clones surround him before kicking him into the air where my leg crashes into the top of his head as I'm falling.
 

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Don't slack on the descriptions.

(Konoha Raiken) - Leaf Thunder Fist
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user jumps into the air while spinning forward, delivering a powerful punch.

Jump into the air and start spinning forward. When you reach my clone hit with a powerful right hand.

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Konoha Arashi) - Leaf Tempest
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 25
Description: The user will deliver a spinning kick to knock the enemy into the air and continue with spinning around in mid air rising upwards and bombarding the target multiple times before they fall to the ground again.

Run up my clone and deliver a spinning kick to knock my clone into the air and then jump into the air and while rising up with the clone, bombard him with kicks a lot of time and send him to the ground.

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( Konoha Kanransha ) - Leaf Ferris Wheel
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 25
Description: The user kicks the enemy into the air then kicks them again higher and jumps on their shoulders and spins the enemy into the ground.

Kick my clone up into the air. Then kick them again higher. After that jump on my clones shoulders and spin him into the ground.
 
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