[Suiton] Finishing Suiton with Rōck Lee

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I went over your thread with Akasha and its obvious you're just looking to get the training over with so I won't be 'RPing' during this session. I will explain the jutsu and I want you to perform it with detail and list the advantages/disadvantages that come with using it. Do you have any questions before we proceed?
 

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source



You will gather Suiton chakra and channel it into the ground beneath your opponent. Once that's done, you will cause the water to burst out beneath him and then quickly shape said water into a condensed sphere that will trap your opponent inside.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After waving the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals, the user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.



You will perform the necessary handseals while kneading Suiton chakra in your gut. Upon completing the handseals, you will release a big jet of water through your mouth.
 

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I gather a pool of my suiton chakra to my feet and expel it beneath the ground so I could move it towards the area that my opponent stands. I then manipulate the chakra to surge to the surface and then manifest itself into a body of water that will cover all sides of my opponent. I then finish off the jutsu by using shape manipulation to form the water into a sphere that will keep my opponent completely imprisoned.

Question: Does the sphere contain water to drown my opponent, or is it completely shallow?

Advantages:

*The jutsu doesn't require an existing water source which is a nice plus.

*You can still use other elemental techniques while your opponent is trapped(Please correct me on this if I'm wrong because I don't know if they mean I could only use regular non elemental attacks, or any attack in my arsenal.)

Disadvantages:

*None since supplementary techs rarely carry any disadvantages.



I begin this next jutsu by weaving the 3 required hand seals and then gather some of my suiton chakra to my gut. I press my palms upward on my stomach while exhaling to emphasize the force of the water that is about to expel from my gut through my mouth. I jerk my head forward and release the water as I use shape manipulation to keep the blast of water narrow so it maintains its blunt impact.

Advantages:

* Great move to use if you want to escape upwards by utilizing the continuous force of the water pushing against the ground.


Disadvantages:

*It's just another generic continuous water attack that is made worst because it requires hand seals.

*It's a continuous attack which means you mean you're left open to attacks you can't defend from unless you cancel the technique.
 

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Question: Yes it does, its essentially an upgrade of the Water Prison technique.

I'm honestly not sure about that, I've seen quite a few people follow up with Earth jutsus and stuff but, I find it hard to believe that this sphere maintains itself when you're using other elemental attacks. I'll speak to someone about it so till then, only use freeform attacks (stab with sword, etc. lol) to be on the safe side.

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.



After gathering your chakra, you will slam your hands on the ground which will allow you to summon a large amount of water above your opponent. Now to be able to push down on your opponent and halt his movement, the water needs to be summoned atleast 10 meters him but, you could summon it lower than that if you just want to wet him and follow up with a Lightning jutsu.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then blend in with a water source to be undetected by the enemy for a short period of time. However Sensory Ninja and Doujutsu users can find the enemy easily within the water source.



When standing on a water source, you will release your Suiton chakra into the water whilst entering it which will allow you to blend into it. This will make you undetectable to a ninja without any sensory or Dojutsu skills and enables you to perform sneak attacks.
 

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I gather my suiton chakra and then proceed to kneel down on my right knee as I slam my right palm towards the ground. I then focus my attention to the sky, 10 meters above the ground to be exact, and envision a large volume of water forming out of thin air waiting for my command to drop towards the ground to crush any object or being that stands beneath it. However, I elected to cancel the jutsu and evaporate the water as it is unnecessary to go any further as I already showed that I am capable of performing the jutsu

Advantages:

*Can be canceled at any moment in case you need to make a quick audible to get the upper hand mid battle.

*Very quick and could catch your opponent off guard especially if choose to wet your opponent with the move so you caould catch him an raiton technique.

Disadvantages:

*Water have to be 10 meters high for any kind of damage to take place.


I walk over to the nearby lake and stop as I reach to the edge of it. I take a second to gauge how deep the lake is and proceed to walk in it until the water reached my shins. I did this instead of walking on it because I wanted to get a "feel" for the water before the perform this next technique. I gather and spread my suiton chakra throughout my body as I envision myself becoming one with the lake until I finally immerse myself within it. I move through the lake effortlessly in my liquid state and was able to see the lake underwater surroundings. I came out the water back in my physical state after taking an extra few minutes to enjoy the aquatic life that live within the lake and was ready to learn more techniques from my suiton teacher.

Question: Can I use other suiton techs while in this liquid state?

Advantages:

*Great stealth tech that you use to pop up on a fool when he least expect it.

*Can also be used to dodge an incoming jutsu.

Disadvantages:

*Can easily lose a fight if you use this jutsu verses a sensory/doujutsu user by him just using a raiton jutsu to electrocute you too death.
 

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Q: Nah, you can't.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.



After performing the Snake handseal, you will expel a massive amount of water from your mouth towards the ground that will lift you into the air. You can choose to ride on the wave towards your opponent and attack him. The cool thing about this jutsu is that it creates so much water, you can use it for jutsus which require a water, summonings, etc.

Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (-50 per turn while trapped in the vortex of waves)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Dog hand seal and release his chakra into the atmosphere which will then create an accumulation of large storm clouds in the sky, which in turn produces rain. The large amount of rain falling all around can then be turned into a large wave of water which sweeps the enemy off their feet while wrapping around him and binding him in the flow of water around him. While the targets are trapped in the water, their chakra will slowly be drained away. The water vortex can be sustained and controlled for up to two turns as long as the user keeps the dog hand seal made.



You will perform the Dog handseal and release your chakra into the sky, causing a build up of storm clouds which produces large amounts of rain. Using the rain that falls as a water source, you can turn it into a wave that will trap your opponent within it, restricting his movement and draining his chakra at the same time. This can be maintained for two turns as long as you keep the handseal in place.
 

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I performed the Snake hand seal and gathered a massive amount suiton chakra and expel it from my mouth in the form of water. The water was large in volume and jetted out my mouth towards the ground with so much force that it lifted my body off the ground while creating a small ocean of water. After the last bits of water exited my mouth, I quickly used my shape manipulation skills to form a wave beneath me so I could ride around the ocean I created at high speeds.

Advantages:

*Great jutsu to use to evade incoming attacks.

*Can be used as a source for other suiton jutsus.

*The wave allows you to move around the surrounding area quicker than if you would to travel by foot.

Disadvantages:

*You leave yourself open for an attack while you're releasing the water towards the ground.


I performed the Dog hand seal and channeled my suiton chakra throughout my body. I then release said chakra towards the sky where it takes the form dark stormy clouds that begins pouring rain throughout the area. While still maintaining the Dog hand seal, I was able to manipulate the rain and accumulate enough to create a giant wave that I can use to constrict any living being and rob them of their chakra.

Advantages:

*Could use the wave to constrict many targets, such as shadow clones or animal summons, and sap their chakra away until they die/disperse.

Disadvantages:

*Can"t utilize any other jutsus while maintaining the wave of water to sap the target's chakra.
 

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user jumps into the air and then stabs his sword into the ground, where he causes water to burst up around him and creating a pillar of water to rise up in the air repelling the enemy.



You will leap into the air and channel Suiton chakra into your sword. As you're descending towards the ground, point your sword downwards so once you land, the sword will be thrust into the ground and release the chakra. This will cause a pillar of water to burst up all around you to repel any enemies within a few feet of you.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.



You will gather Suiton chakra in both your hands and point them forward to release spiraling torrents of water. Simple.
 

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I grabbed one of my swords and immediately lunged forward in a slight arc. During my decent, I channeled some of my suiton chakra to my sword and then pointed my sword towards to the ground with a downward grip. As I finally touched ground, I released my chakra within the earth's surface and manipulate it to create a circle around me so I can manifest it into a pillar of water that will protrude from the ground around me.

Advantages:

*You can use the jump part of the jutsu to dodge an incoming jutsu.

Disadvantages:

*The pillar will block your vision from your target.


I got into an orthodox stance with my left leg leading my right and with both knees sightly bent. I placed the end of my two palms together and bent my hands backwards as I brought them back to the right side of my waist. As I stood in this stance, I gathered my suiton chakra to my hands and began slowly saying the name of the jutsu while I build up my chakra. I then simultaneously screamed and dragged on the last syllable of the jutsu and thrust my palms forward to release the spiraling torrent of water in an overly animated and dramatic way.

"You like that senpai?" ;)

Advantages:

*Quick and requires no hand seals.

Disadvantages:

*It's a stream attack, so it leaves you valuable to attacks.

*Generic water jutsu that can only reach to mid range.
 

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I'm not entirely sure you can use the jump to evade incoming jutsu even though it states you have to jump in the description. I mean you're not exactly jumping to the sky lol.

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Using their skills with water release, the user creates an orb of water in their hand which they can then release in the form of multiple spearing streams, that they can use to attack their enemy from multiple directions or in spirals.



Gather Suiton chakra in your hand and create an orb of water. Once you've created the orb, you can make several spiraling streams of water burst forth from it to attack your opponent from multiple directions.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents in front of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.



You will gather Suiton chakra in your hands and swing them in an arc whilst releasing water from them. This movement will cause the blades of water to follow that arcing movement and attack your opponent. Alternatively you can twirl around while releasing the water to attack opponents approaching you from various angles.
 

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I gather some of my suiton chakra to my right hand, and calmly focused on creating an orb of water above my palm. After creating the orb, I divided it into 3 spiraling streams that will attack in three different directions; one to the north, and the other two to the west and east respectively.

Advantages:

~Could be used to attack multiple targets from around you.


Disadvantages:

~None I could think of.


I gather suiton chakra to my right forearm and move my arm from left to right to release water in the shape of a crescent blades towards the tree ahead of me. I then try using the jutsu to attack from all directions my by twirling clockwise and continuously releasing projectiles of sharp water blades throughout the area.

Advantages:

~Could be used to attack multiple targets.

~Quick and requires no hand seals.

Disadvantages:

~None.
 

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Just so you know, a little bit of RP doesn't kill.

Entering the rather lonesome training grounds, it was a strange feeling. I didn't know who would be my student would be and all I was told that he would be someone fairly experienced with what I'm training him.
After mere seconds, I spot a figure right ahead.
"Hello. This is Kaene, so you're my student heh?"
 

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Just so you know, a little bit of RP doesn't kill.

Entering the rather lonesome training grounds, it was a strange feeling. I didn't know who would be my student would be and all I was told that he would be someone fairly experienced with what I'm training him.
After mere seconds, I spot a figure right ahead.
"Hello. This is Kaene, so you're my student heh?"
I beg to differ.
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After waiting for many hours for his sensei, Franky finally heard a voice from behind him and turn around to greet his new sensei. "Yes, I'm your new student, so when do we get started?"
 

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LOL WHAT xD

"Yosh! You seem to be very enthusiastic. I like it I like it"

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"So show me what you have learnt last from your previous senpai"
 
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