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This was my last Jutsu

(Doton: Doro Ookami) - Earth Release: Mud Wolves
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per reformed wolf)
Damage points: 10 damage per wolf attack
Description: A trap technique in which the user will place somewhere and is activated upon contact with the opponent's chakra. The user uses a scroll to lay the trap in which releases mud that forms into the shape of wolves that will attack the enemy target/s. Despite being damaged the wolves can reform which can keep the enemy occupied to allow the enemy make a getaway. (Can only create a maximum of 3 mud wolves)
Note: Takes one turn to set the trap up and wolves only last two turns



I performed it as well:

-I gather some chakra and mould it into some dense doton chakra. I channel the chakra through my body, then flow it into a scroll from my pouch. I place enough inside to create 3 mud wolves that will reform. I then place the scroll back in my ninja pouch for future use.-
 

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Okay, I will be using Azazel format of training I would like are training to be interactive so feel free to question me. :)

I would like you to use this template every time you reply to a technique.
Try to be as detailed/descriptive as possible. All you have to do is copy the PHP code.

PHP:
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[B]Weak points[/B]

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[B]Combinations-strategies[/B]

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Also, I will post how all of the techniques work. I want you then, in your own words, to describe to me what you are doing to get the desired result.

Now I would like you to perform the Mud Wolves technique using this template.


Also if you any question regarding Earth element or any of the techniques please ask me now, I may end up asking sudden question to you now and then.
 

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Alright cool, I'll do my best and will be sure to ask Questions.

Strong points

  • can be stored in a scroll before a battle
  • Can be used as a trap
  • good jutsu for a distraction
Weak points

  • Only 3 wolves
  • 10 chakra every time they reform
  • can't really be adequately used in a normal battle
Combinations-strategies

You could use these wolves as a distraction, while you attack the opponent.

Ways to counter:

I would use a big lightning jutsu to kill all the wolves at once, and then attack the user while they reform.

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Also, I will post how all of the techniques work. I want you then, in your own words, to describe to me what you are doing to get the desired result.


I think you forgot this part.
 

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-I gather some chakra and mould it into some dense doton chakra. I channel the chakra through my body, then flow it into a scroll from my pouch. I place enough inside to create 3 mud wolves that will reform. I then place the scroll back in my ninja pouch for future use.-

Like that? By the way, that was in the OP :3
 

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I don't understand the OP reference?

A little more detail will be highly appreciated.

Okay now, let us start.

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.


Now this technique is really useful in my opinion as it does not require hand seal, This technique can be used very efficiently in a taijutsu battle, This technique follows the elemental chart, this can also be very effective when fighting in arid condition's, you can basically use it to cover your entire body so there is no loss of water of course it has some drawback attached to it which being that it reduces the speed of the user
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:rolleyes: OP means Opening Post xD

- I quickly channel my earth chakra, and channel it into the ground around us. I then cause several stones to come near by body and I become coated in earth and stone to protect me from harm. The earth however weighs me down and makes my attacks way slower. However, in addition I gain a lot more power to my taijutsu attacks.-

Strong points

  • Immunity to A rank and below ninjutsu
  • +10 to taijutsu
  • Can change appearence, so you could walk into battle wearing the armor and no one would know.
Weak points

  • more vulnerable to raiton jutsu
  • slows down the user
  • makes taijutsu way slower
Combinations-strategies

I would use this along with some taijutsu. I would first get close then use this jutsu. I would then increases the power of my taijutsu and hit the opponent hard causing lots of damage.

Ways to counter:

If the opponent got close to me using this jutsu, I would use a nagashi since he is more vulnerable to lightning. If he was far away, I would use chidori spear to pierce through the armor.

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Few things that I will like to clear out.

You don't need to channel you chakra in earth and then manipulate that earth to cover you, instead you just use your chakra with nature transformation and expel it out from your chakra pores and coat yourself with it.

please be more creative with your pros and cons as these are quite obvious, although I did like your 3 pros.

Nagashi is not the answer to every earth technique xD.

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Ok, i will try my best.

But can I have some examples of a good pro/con for this jutsu?

So this is a little like Gaara's sand armor, except with earth?
 

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Ok, i will try my best.

But can I have some examples of a good pro/con for this jutsu?


Pro
- No hand seal, if you play smartly with this technique your opponent will probably not even know that you have it active, now go on and indulge him a close range fight and say SURPRISE SURPRISE !!

Con.
Just the opposite of pro, it is actually very hard to deduce if your opponent already have it pre-activated or not[at the very start of the battle] or when his body is fully covered with clothing.


So this is a little like Gaara's sand armor, except with earth?

Yes, you can say that


Any more questions?
 

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Great :)

(Doton Kekkai: Dorō Dōmu) - Earth Style Barrier: Earth Prison of Magnificent Nothingness
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (+10 chakra each turn the opponent is inside the dome)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user overturns the earth, causing it to rise up around his opponent(s). Then, by placing his/her hands against the dome, the user is able to drain out the chakra from the people trapped inside and absorb it into their own body. At the same time, the user will use their own chakra to spread throughout the dome. This allows the user to repair any damage their opponent(s) manage to inflict on the inside.

It was used by Jirobo, one of ninja which was sent to kidnap sasuke by orochmiaru. This technique is initiated by stomping the ground and inserting your chakra in it, then using that chakra you manipulate the earth near your opponent/opponents and create a dome out of it, this dome can hold multiple people at one time [ If I remember right 4 people were within when it was used], then you put your hand on the outer part of dome and start to absorb your opponent/opponents chakra and the same time you pass some of your own chakra to recover which caused to the damage from within.

Of course the dome can be destroyed by an appropriate jutsu, though I would leave it to you to decide which jutsu can serve this purpose?
 

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-I channel earth chakra and strike the ground with my hands. The earth is then overturned and it rises up around your clone in the form of a huge dome. I pour chakra into the dome so that it reforms from damage, at the same time chakra is coming into me from your clone. After a while your clone disperses from the lack of chakra.-

Strong points

  • Traps multiple enemies
  • You can regain chakra, which will be useful in a war.
  • The barrier will repair damage inflicted on it up to a certain point.
Weak points

  • You must keep your hand on the dome
  • The dome is weaker on the opposite side that I have my hands on (it's the reason Naruto and the gang broke out)
  • You can't tell what's happening inside the barrier. So your opponent could be doing something inside and you would not notice.
Combinations-strategies

Not really practical in battle as you leave yourself vulnerable. One could use this in a team battle to try to incapacitate one of the enemies, or to delay them.

Ways to counter:

A nice chidori nagashi would be able to break through the walls. Otherwise, one could use hiding like a mole to go underground. This would be a good strategy because the opponent wouldn't notice. You could appear right behind him, and attack him like that.

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Nice work, I like the idea of using hiding like a mole , though you did forget to mention in your description of as to how you perform the technique that you will have to place your hand on the dome so do keel it in mind while using it in a battle.

A sudden out burst of lightning is also a good way to counter it, like you said your opponent will only be able to hear it and that too at the very last moment, the lightning will not only break the dome but will also leave him stunned/paralyzed.

Moving on.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

Now this technique was used by Kakazu, This is much like the armor technique only but there are 2 main differences, first it requires you to use the snake hand seal and second it is very good as it allows you to coat certain part's individually as well, I still remember Riku once used it against me, he used it on his belly and turned it into a steel and thanks to his clothing I was unaware of it and I was going to land a punch on him which I did because I would have stooped than it would have been god-modding which is not fun, I ended up hurting my hand in the process u.u.

Of course the change in the body is noticeable but like I said you can hide it using your clothing and other things.

Also it doe's not effect your speed like the armor technique does.
 

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-I make the snake handseal, and concentrate doton chakra. I focus the chakra through my entire body, and cause it to condense. This coats me in a diamond-hard armor to protect me. It also makes my taijutsu attacks stronger than normal and increases my base strength while not slowing me down.-

Strong points

  • Increases hardness of body parts to steel-like levels
  • Can be hidden with clothes
  • Increases taijutsu, but doesen't decrease speed
Weak points

  • Makes user vulnerable to lightning
  • Opponent can hide it with clothing
  • Can power up an opponent's taijutsu (deadly if they are taijutsu masters)
Combinations-strategies

Use this during your first move underneath clothing, and do it as you talk. Thus, the opponent would not be able to tell you had it on. You could also use it in close quarters battles for obvious reasons.

Ways to counter:

A chidori would be able to easily pierce through this technique. You could also use the super vibrating lightning blade to cut through. You could use some kenjutsu techniques to attack.

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Any questions, you can ask me questions any time you want.

(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.

A very simple technique, simply slam your hand on the ground and several rocks burst outward hitting your opponent, the only thing to take in account is that it only works in mid range.
 

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-I concentrate earth chakra into the palms of my hand. I then lift them above my ahead, and slam them into the ground. I let the chakra flow from my palms into the ground. I then use shape transformation, and mould the chakra into the shape of spikes. The spikes shoot upwards towards your opponent, and impale your clone and cause him to disperse.-

Strong points

  • Travels through the ground
  • Makes many giant rocks in between me and the opponent
  • Rocks can inhibit the opponent's sight of me
Weak points

  • Rocks can inhibit your vision of the opponent
  • Must place your hands on the ground
  • -Insert Information-
Combinations-strategies

I would use this jutsu, then quickly use another. The rocks would block the opponent's view of the second jutsu, and they would be surprised by it.

Ways to counter:

I would use a chidori that travels through the ground. The lightning would destroy the jagged rocks before they could do any damage to me.

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