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ok i like to write essay style and not llike everybod else


sasuke: hi
naruto: sup

so how would i be like he's saying something or the narrators saying something how would i do that in essay form
 
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You mean NOT a convo's style like that. (taking extract from Micheal's S3)

Jugo: Later.

Narrator: Sasuke stood up from the rock he sat on as Jugo and Suigetsu both parted each their ways. Sasuke looked up at the skies for a moment, before he turned around and started heading towards Iwa.

Sasuke *Thinking*: Damn that Madara, where on earth can he be?

Narrator: As Sasuke closed in on Iwa, he noticed a large group of birds flying in the opposite direction.

Sasuke *Thinking*: What's up with all those birds? Why are they all flying away from Iwa at the same time? Don't tell me...

Narrator: Sensing danger, Sasuke picked up his pace. As he got closer and closer to the main gate, he noticed a black smoke coming from the same direction.

Sasuke *Thinking*: Smoke?!... What's going on?

Narrator: Suddenly he saw a man running towards him, crying out for help.

Civilian: Hey you! I need your help at once!

Sasuke: What's going on? Something happened?

Civilian: It's terrible! Iwa has been attacked by a large group of unknown shinobies!

Sasuke: What?!

Civilian: You must help!

Sasuke: I'll head there right away, don't worry. Just take it easy and be careful alright?

Civilian: Right.

Narrator: As Sasuke was just about to head for Iwa the man shouted at him.

Civilian: Hey I forgot to ask your name!

Sasuke: It's Uchiha... Uchiha Sasuke...

Narrator: As Sasuke disappeared from the man's sight, the man stumbled upon the name.

I usually just write the sentences without mentioning "Narrator" part although it's convo-style in my FF.

By essay-style, you mean summarized and paragraphing style or novel-style writing like (taking it from Sunny's DFIV)

“Naruto!!!” Sasuke yelled out loud. From where he stands, he could see Naruto going down on his knees. His eyes closed, and pain could be seen all over his face. He dashed toward him in a hurry and placed his hand on Naruto’s shoulder
.
“Huh?!” Sasuke’s eyes widened as he behold the figure in front of him.

Hovering behind Minato is a figure that’s like five times taller than he is. Clad in a cream-white robe that covers down to his feet, floating about a meter above the ground. Its white thick hair ruffled around his head like a lion’s mane and flowed down to the front, beyond his shoulders. A knife was held in his mouth and his long white hair suspended the summoner’s soul.

“D-death God?!” Sasuke clenched his fist in horror but held and maintained his proud composure. In result, his eyes flared in rage while he witnessed the death god’s hand buried into Naruto’s abdomen. Fixing his eyes on Minato, he gathered lightning charges in his right hand and as soon as his chidori was ready, he leaped high up from the ground and thrust it on to Minato.

“Saa-su-kee! Nooo!!!” Naruto, straining to speak cried out for Sasuke to stop. But Sasuke ignored his call and thrust his chidori to Minato while he was off guard concentrating with the Death God summoning technique. The death god vanished in a smoke and when the smoke cleared out, what stood before them was none other than Shin.

Shin stared back at Sasuke and pushed him with a wind technique that she manipulated from her palms. Thrown back to where Naruto is, Sasuke immediately grabbed Naruto close to him and whispered into his ear. Wide eyed, Naruto agreed with a nod.

“Yosh! Let’s do this, Sasuke!”

With that, Sasuke gathered up his chakra and released a huge burst of fire fireball.

“Katon! Zukokku”
 

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You mean NOT a convo's style like that. (taking extract from Micheal's S3)

Jugo: Later.

Narrator: Sasuke stood up from the rock he sat on as Jugo and Suigetsu both parted each their ways. Sasuke looked up at the skies for a moment, before he turned around and started heading towards Iwa.

Sasuke *Thinking*: Damn that Madara, where on earth can he be?

Narrator: As Sasuke closed in on Iwa, he noticed a large group of birds flying in the opposite direction.

Sasuke *Thinking*: What's up with all those birds? Why are they all flying away from Iwa at the same time? Don't tell me...

Narrator: Sensing danger, Sasuke picked up his pace. As he got closer and closer to the main gate, he noticed a black smoke coming from the same direction.

Sasuke *Thinking*: Smoke?!... What's going on?

Narrator: Suddenly he saw a man running towards him, crying out for help.

Civilian: Hey you! I need your help at once!

Sasuke: What's going on? Something happened?

Civilian: It's terrible! Iwa has been attacked by a large group of unknown shinobies!

Sasuke: What?!

Civilian: You must help!

Sasuke: I'll head there right away, don't worry. Just take it easy and be careful alright?

Civilian: Right.

Narrator: As Sasuke was just about to head for Iwa the man shouted at him.

Civilian: Hey I forgot to ask your name!

Sasuke: It's Uchiha... Uchiha Sasuke...

Narrator: As Sasuke disappeared from the man's sight, the man stumbled upon the name.

I usually just write the sentences without mentioning "Narrator" part although it's convo-style in my FF.

By essay-style, you mean summarized and paragraphing style or novel-style writing like (taking it from Sunny's DFIV)

“Naruto!!!” Sasuke yelled out loud. From where he stands, he could see Naruto going down on his knees. His eyes closed, and pain could be seen all over his face. He dashed toward him in a hurry and placed his hand on Naruto’s shoulder
.
“Huh?!” Sasuke’s eyes widened as he behold the figure in front of him.

Hovering behind Minato is a figure that’s like five times taller than he is. Clad in a cream-white robe that covers down to his feet, floating about a meter above the ground. Its white thick hair ruffled around his head like a lion’s mane and flowed down to the front, beyond his shoulders. A knife was held in his mouth and his long white hair suspended the summoner’s soul.

“D-death God?!” Sasuke clenched his fist in horror but held and maintained his proud composure. In result, his eyes flared in rage while he witnessed the death god’s hand buried into Naruto’s abdomen. Fixing his eyes on Minato, he gathered lightning charges in his right hand and as soon as his chidori was ready, he leaped high up from the ground and thrust it on to Minato.

“Saa-su-kee! Nooo!!!” Naruto, straining to speak cried out for Sasuke to stop. But Sasuke ignored his call and thrust his chidori to Minato while he was off guard concentrating with the Death God summoning technique. The death god vanished in a smoke and when the smoke cleared out, what stood before them was none other than Shin.

Shin stared back at Sasuke and pushed him with a wind technique that she manipulated from her palms. Thrown back to where Naruto is, Sasuke immediately grabbed Naruto close to him and whispered into his ear. Wide eyed, Naruto agreed with a nod.

“Yosh! Let’s do this, Sasuke!”

With that, Sasuke gathered up his chakra and released a huge burst of fire fireball.

“Katon! Zukokku”
xd sometimes I do both
 

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Narration can come in two forms; one of which is a viewpoint of a character within the story or a person who tells the story as if he/she were speaking to an audience. It all depends on how your story is being portrayed.

'All narrators present their story from one of the following perspectives (called narrative modes): first-person, or third-person limited or omniscient. Generally, a first-person narrator brings greater focus on the feelings, opinions, and perceptions of a particular character in a story, and on how the character views the world and the views of other characters. If the writer's intention is to get inside the world of a character, then it is a good choice, although a third-person limited narrator is an alternative that does not require the writer to reveal all that a first-person character would know. By contrast, a third-person omniscient narrator gives a panoramic view of the world of the story, looking into many characters and into the broader background of a story. A third-person omniscient narrator can tell feelings of every character. For stories in which the context and the views of many characters are important, a third-person narrator is a better choice. However, a third-person narrator does not need to be an omnipresent guide, but instead may merely be the protagonist referring to himself in the third person (also known as third person limited narrator).' from wikipedia.

So the way to implement a narrator to your story is to write as if he/she was actually talking to you in order to tell the story.
 

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o ok cause i write alot of stories but dont know how to like say he's thinking something in his mind how would i write that since i write in essay form
 
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