That is correct. Everything in your description looks real good by the way. Keep it up mate. Again ask questions if you need to.
( Tsumu Hensei no Jutsu ) Spindle Formation Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user has his bugs attack the target in a spiraling motion to confuse the target.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
( Mushi Jamingu no Jutsu ) Wicked Insect Folk Tools Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user utilizes a large amount of their destruction bugs and has them spread over a wide area around the user. The bugs then emit a small amount of the their host's respective chakra that they usually feed on. This confuses sensor-type ninjas' chakra-sensing ability, as the insects' irregular distribution and large grouping of the bugs result in the creation of numerous 'false images', making it more difficult to distinguish the user's exact and actual location.
Note: Can only be used by a member of the Aburame clan.
( Hijutsu: Mushidama ) Secret Technique: Insect Sphere
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By using the destruction bugs, members of the Aburame clan release their bugs into the air. Once the bugs sense an enemy presence, they will all gather on the enemy and cover him completely, and begin draining his chakra. This technique is very hard to avoid at short range.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
( Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu ) Destruction Bug Hail Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will release thousands of destruction bugs from his body into the air. On their Command, the insects attack the opponent in 5 waves. The insects, in turn, coalesce into large clouds and rain down on the opponent causing tremendous damage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
( Kikaichu kasui no Jutsu ) Destruction Bug Stream technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
description: The user will raise their arms to release a torrent of destruction bugs that combine into two spear like forms that spiral towards the target lifting them into the air, where they brutally feed on the targets chakra. ( 3x the average within Short Range and 2x the average within Mid Range ).
Note: Must be a Member of the Aburame clan.
( Aburame no Jutsu: Kuchisaki ) Insect Technique: Proboscis
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-90 to the opponent)
Damage: 60
Description: The user will manipulate a great swarm of insects and form them into a large beam. The beam can be made as thin or as wide as the user requires, up to a maximum of 5 meters radius, though with one particularity that sets it aside from other insect techniques. Every insect in the swarm will synchronize it's wing motion, instead of chaotically fly around. In rhythm, the bugs will beat their wings in a wave pattern, initiated in the front and following through the back, which will displace the air around the beam. As the bugs contact a target, they will naturally drain their chakra, and the synchronized motion will allow them to drain more chakra than normal, as the very motion of the swarm will pump chakra faster. This allows the technique to steal 3 times more chakra than the average insect technique.
Note: Useable four times per battle, with a three-turn cooldown in between uses.
Note: Courtesy of Panthalassa
( Aburame no Jutsu: Hagiri ) Insect Technique: Tesserae
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate his insects into producing a swarm that will arrange itself in an unorthodox fashion. As the swarm moves, it will concentrically spin around itself, each fly revolving and spiraling like the multiple bores of a drill, while outwardly flashing their teeth, which will much increase the slicing and shredding capabilities of the swarm. The user will shoot this swarm as a stream or a projectile, which will allow the user to impale or viciously mangle a target, while draining their chakra, before the swarm collapses upon a target to wrap around them. The drill can be as wide as a 2,5 meters diameter, for a more spread out, shredding damage, or as thin as blade for focused, impaling damage.
An Alternative usage of this technique is, instead of spending the full amount of chakra, the user can merely spend 10 chakra, allowing the internal re-arranging of the insects to happen over the course of 3 turns. While this does not give any bonus in damage to any Aburame technique used while Tesserae is active, it does allow the user to manipulate his insects with chakra-costing Kenjutsu techniques, which are basically raw-chakra projections of a slash, allowing more flexibility for the user. To do this, the user will send the necessary chakra and the flies will then recreate the description of the technique. The way it works is that only the cutting edge is recreated, as the swarm will form a makeshift blade to carry on the cuts and slash that pertain to the description, they do not form into a blade that the user wields.
Note: Useable four times per battle.
Note: Courtesy of Panthalassa
Thanks Teno, also apologies if I seem too impatient, I don't mean to be, I just get quite eager to finish things is all haha
( Tsumu Hensei no Jutsu ) Spindle Formation Technique
As this technique is quite vague, it leaves it open for various descriptions, such as: Sending the bugs spiraling forward toward the opponent like the projectile jutsu, or make their bugs spiral upwards around the target from below. Could also be used with a combination of another bug technique and then have the bugs that were used (if successful in hitting their target) to spiral again and harm the opponent, leaving little reaction time.
( Mushi Jamingu no Jutsu ) Wicked Insect Folk Tools Technique
This is a good technique for a more Roleplay situation then in combat I find. It useful and such but in combat if you have enough time or enough space to go hide yourself and then use this to try and disorient a foe, you or either your foe are already defeated, at least in this day and age and with the amount of jutsu at hand.
( Hijutsu: Mushidama ) Secret Technique: Insect Sphere
Call upon the swarm and sap an opponents chakra. Simple to understand and have various methods to which apply it. Also, not sure about the part where it states it is hard to aviod in short range, with speed and tracking calculations to take into consideration, but I assume that if I were to use this short range, then my opponent will need to deal with it first or suffer. Not much else to say really haha
( Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu ) Destruction Bug Hail Technique
I like this technique, especially the 5 waves rushing at the opponent, but I can see this being misinterpreted as well, that you would be able to divide the waves over several turns. Which I think would be an interesting concept to apply, making the clouds last multiple turns with a max of 5 uses until it is finished. That would make a little more sense, otherwise your saying im sending 5 waves at you, one from abover, and the other 4 spiral to the 4 sides of you and pincer assault you from all directions.
( Kikaichu kasui no Jutsu ) Destruction Bug Stream technique
Another easy to grasp technique, I enjoy seeing that some techniques can utilise the natural abilities of the bugs more such like this technique absorbing more chakra then it normally should. AT thss rank they would absorb 90 chakra at short range and 60 at mid range. Going by this they would absorb normal chakra at long range if that wasd a range they could be used for.
( Aburame no Jutsu: Kuchisaki ) Insect Technique: Proboscis
Essentially this technique is the projectile jutsu at higher rank and an explanation of how it absorbs more chakra then normal for the rank. It's fine and easy to understand, the name threw me if im honest, I had to google Proboscis to understand the reasoning of the name, and sure it makes sense but the only thing that does make sense to me is the reference of it being a beam like made from energy. Unless they used the definition of the platform beam like a plank of wood. Small amount of confusion around semantics of the tech but as a technique its easy to understand its usage.
( Aburame no Jutsu: Hagiri ) Insect Technique: Tesserae
This one took me a couple of read throughs to fully understand what it was trying to do. It is technically two techniques in one. The first being the drill based usage, easy enough. I dont know if there are different forms of damage like shredding or impaling, so I am not sure if this technique will actually impale someone in a fight unless its a more RP type fight? But yeah, drill or spear, shred or impale and then enclose the bugs around them for the first part.
This additional use part feels like it should have been its own technique to be honest. Its doesnt really have much relation to the first half besides taking a shape to attack. It essentially makes some kenjutsu techniques long range and have chakra absorbing abilities thanks to being used with the bugs. And as part of an A-rank jutsu, you just have to spend 10 chakra to have long range kenjutsu for 3 turns and can use it 4 times a battle. Not gonna lie, this technique actually kind of annoys me, cause why use the full chakra when you can use it for a third of the cost and get more effect out of it. Like honestly it should have been made into 2 separate techniques. but thats just me.