Enter the Actor

TheSiege

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Shakespeare once said that all the worlds a stage
Well when I was little I had stage fright.
I was shy and scared throughout the day
And terrified by night.
I had no confidence to interact
With the other players in the show
The costumes never fit me
Because I was unsure of my own role.
Was I to be the gallant knight?
That saved the maidens fair?
Or was I a devilish tricky sprite?
Or a rebel without a care?
As time went on, I became
More accustomed to the game
I learned the rules of how to play
The special tricks behind my trade.
For a true actor contains many roles
Based on what the audience wants to see
I have mastered all these roles
And these roles have slowly become me.
Some people have said that I've gained confidence
But this is such a lie
I merely try to please my audience
And show a confident guise
When they need a knight so strong and brave
I pick up my shield and sword
I'll grapple any foe and take
The devil by his horns
But when the curtain calls and my mask falls
A new one takes its place
Because an actors work is never done
When all the worlds a stage.
 
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Dope as usual siege!! I always throw comparisons at you when you spit so today will be no different=D I dunno if you watch much ufc, but gsp is their welter weight champ. He's very well respected and very good at what he does. One thing that people love about him most is he doesn't shy away from talking about where he's vulnerable. If he's afraid of something he comes right out and admits it. If someone got the better of him in a situation or hurts him with an attack he says so.

what I'm getting at is this rap reminded me of him. A great champion speaking about what he fears and not shying away from it at all. You also had great imagery with the references to theater and the types of characters there are in plays. All in all this was super dope, and I know this is gonna make for a great song when you finish. A+ verse good sir. But hell....what else is new=D
 

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bro, there's a lot of open mic gigs in chicago and maybe in your home town where you live. You should recite this outloud, I'm really digging this, compared to your other works this is better bro. well, the one where you rip the paper in half was even better, lmao, but this is one of the best that you let me read. Hey, I wouldn't mind being on a track with you either xd, lmao, imagine, the siege and narutawesome, lmao,
but anyway, good shit bro, it has all of the literacy elements it needs and it tells a story:cool:, and you didn't give it away so fast the the listeners has to pay attention
 
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