Ending Water with Better

[~Yubel~]

I don't like fairy tail but that line has gotten comedic.xD
(Suiton: Seisuiryū) - Water Release: Azure Water Stream
I put my right hand on my sword that is on my left hip, unsheathing my sword of the darkness flame(my cw, cool name for a sword with no abilities ) whereas i then gather my chakra to increase my chakra reserves, once i do that i send my chakra to my feet and turn it into water natured chakra to create a body of water beneath me that lifts me up and carries me towards your clone where i slice the clone with multiple quick sword strikes as i travel past him.

(Suiton: Nagareru no Muchi) - Water Release: Flowing Whip
I focus chakra in my mouth where i turn it into water chakra, i gather more chakra and turn that into water chakra, as the water start overflowing i put my blessed hand over my mouth in which i shape the chakra into a water whip while bringing it out of my mouth, i then run at you clone and starting lashing like the good old days lol(just kidding )

(Suiton: Shawā) - Water Release: Showers
I concentrate my chakra and channel it outside of me as i send it above your clone and mold it into water vapor that i condense into needles and gather chakra into my arm and make it into water chakra while swinging it, sending water projectiles at your clone as the needles assault from above.

 

[Better]

(Suiton: Daibakuryuu) - Water Release: Great Exploding Current
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: User creates a whirlpool that sucks any opponent in range underwater.
Note: Must be performed on a water source

create a whirlpool by sending your chakra into the lake and manipulating the water to suck in my clone.

(creates clone)

 

[~Yubel~]

(Suiton: Daibakuryuu) - Water Release: Great Exploding Current
I concentrate my water chakra and increase the surge of chakra as i prepare myself to use this techinique, i channel chakra to my feet where i go over to a body of water nearby and stand infront of your clone at mid range, i send the chakra through the water and then change its nature to water chakra before visualizing a whirlpool while manipulating my chakra to go under your clone and makes a whirlpool that suck him in.

 

[Better]

gooody

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

Form the hand seals ,and create a water vortex in your palm of your dominate hand, then blast it forward at my clone

(creates clone)

 

[~Yubel~]

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
I concentrate my chakra to have enough reserves for what i plan to do, then i perform the handseals Boar → Dog → Ram as instructed and gather chakra in my hand that turns into water chakra as water begins to form and i use focus to shape the water into a vortex in my palm that i spiral using my chakra and blast it forward from my hand towards your clone to make him disperse.

 

[Better]

goood

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.

I want you to form the hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird a bunch of time, so you can have it memorized. Afterwards you will shape a ton of water into a water dragon and have it attack my clone.

Unless you have a water affinity in the future, i don't recommend this technique xD

(creates clone)

 

[~Yubel~]

....:|
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(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
As instructed i practice on using the handseals well before i can use the actual technique and i do so 3 to 4 times. Once i've gotten the hang of it i start focusing my chakra and perform Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird handseals and create a large dragon from the lake i'm standing on that moves and attacks your clone.

 

[Better]

yea..

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(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.

i want you to perform the tiger hand seal, you create an orb of water then have several sharp whips of water emerge. Then send them towards my clone.

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(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.

form 1 hand seal had gather water in your mouth and then spit a large sphere of rotating water. If you want to shoot 3 bullets you can. They won't be as strong as the big one, but they will be faster.

 

[~Yubel~]

(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
I perform the tiger handseal as i concentrate my chakra and send outside of my body to create an orb of water that i manipulate to create several whips of water coming out of it to assault your clone that i direct them against to impale him.

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
I perform one handseal to gather chakra in my stomach and use nature mainpulaton to turn the chakra into water element chakra that which i then rotate as i bring it up using chakra control ot exhale a large rotating sphere of water that i shoot at you

Idk how to write more except for including bs extra paragraphs of me breathing, mental focus and that stuff. I'll try to make 3 lines for each technique atleast from now.

 

[Better]

Alright, although i don't see anything wrong with that.

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.

form the tiger hand seal and then create a fast moving jet of water and make it run through the ground at that rock.

if you do it correctly, it should slice it.

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(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

form the Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon hand seals and then generate a spinning column of water and then use shape manipulation to form it into a snake with an open jaw. Send it at my clone and have it swallow it.

 

[~Yubel~]

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
I concentrate my chakra as i build it up in my body and increase my chakra flow, i then perform the tiger handseal while using my chakra control to channel it through the ground where i turn it into water chakra through nature manipulation and shape it to form a slicing jet of water that is running through the ground at the rock Better pointed at, the jet of water moves fast and slices through the rock.

(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
I concentrate my chakra to create enough chakra reserves for the technique that was just demonstrated to me, once i feel i have enough chakra for this i concentrate on molding my chakra and turn it into water natured chakra in my body before performing the Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon hand seals and generate a spinning column of water that takes the shape of a giant snake with an open jaw that i send at your clone to get swallowed by it.

 

[Better]

Awesome warya

(Suiton: Suikō Teppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shark Gun Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: An advanced version of Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough in which the user can summon up to three sharks at once rapidly to advance on the target, and can cause severe internal injuries.
Note: Requires a water source

Remember Water Shark Breakthrough do that again, but this time add more chakra and summon 3 sharks at once and have been rapidly kill my clone.

(creates clone)

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(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Very cool technique, you can create and manipulate water underneath my clone and then have the water rise up super quickly and trap him in a sphere of water. Unlike the c rank version, you don't have to keep your hand inside the orb.

 

[~Yubel~]

(Suiton: Suikō Teppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shark Gun Technique
I walk over to a lake and focus lots of chakra, gather it and build it up in my body, then i change the chakra into water chakra using nature manipulation as i release it into the lake and mold it to take the shape of a shark made out of water, as i'm forming the shark, i think of all its features,fin, galls, fangs, everything that is a shark and focus some more to have 3 sharks rapidly jump out of the water as they kill your clone.

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
I focus my chakra and use my chakra control to channel my chakra to my feet before releasing it into the ground and molding it into water natured chakra as i send the chakra under your clone, once a field of water has formed under him, i control the water to have it immediately rise up and form into a sphere that traps your clone, restrict its movement and makes it unable to breathe.

 

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Warya, thats is good. Gooda job

(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After waving the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals, the user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.

Focus your chakra and form the given hand seals, then i want you to release that chakra from your mouth and create a big jet of water. Simple really, yet very effective.
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(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

Another good one, i'm sure you know this one. Slam your hand on to the ground and summon a massive amount of water from the sky. Anything below 10 feet of summoning the water makes it ineffective.
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(Suiton: Mizugakure no jutsu) - Water Release Hidden Amongst Water Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then blend in with a water source to be undetected by the enemy for a short period of time. However Sensory Ninja and Doujutsu users can find the enemy easily within the water source.

After summoning all that water just now, manipulate your chakra and blend with the water and become it. Basically hiding like a mole but in water. Except you can't sense anyone in it.

 

[~Yubel~]

(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
I concentrate my chakra and build it up before performing the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals and gathering chakra in my stomach to turn it into water natured chakra where i then use my chakra control to bring up the water to my mouth and use shape manipulation before releasing it out of my mouth to have it shoot as a jet of water that travels with speed and hits your clone

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
I focus my chakra in my body before sending it into the sky, once i've done that i use nature manipulation to turn it into water chakra before slamming my hands on the ground to mold the water so massive amounts get summoned from 10 metres above your clone that crushes the water into him, prevents movement and drowns him so he disperses.

(Suiton: Mizugakure no jutsu) - Water Release Hidden Amongst Water Technique
I then focus my chakra to become water chakra as i spread it throughout my body and channel it to the water i just created, connecting with the water through the water chakra, i then visualize taking the properties of water and remember my training when i did the water replacement to succesfully become one with the body of water.

 

[Better]

anything new happening for you rp wise man?

(Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.

Kisame technique he used the FIRST TIME Kisame and Gai fight. Form the snake hand seal and spill out a large volume of water from your mouth to the ground, you will be risen up with the water and ride the wave to the forest.

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(Suiton: Goshokuzame) - Water Style: 5 feeding sharks
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will create 5 sharks of water to attack his opponent(s) by putting his hand on a water source. While being in a water source, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy. However, if the user severe his connection with the water, the sharks will disperse.
Note: Requires water source to use.

After riding the wave and it stopping, i want you to manipulate your the water and create 5 sharks by placing you hand on the water and releasing you chakra. You sharks can reform from the water source over and over again as long as you have your hand on the water.

 

[~Yubel~]

Things are building up, once i master base 5 i'll grow quickly lol.

(Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
I focus my chakra in my body and concentrate hard on building up large amounts, i then take a deep breath as i mold the chakra into water chakra and gather it in my stomach, once i've done that i condense and compress it alot before bringing it up my stomach and through my mouth as i release it from my mouth to create waves that rises me up while i ride it to the forest having made a small ocean worth of water in the location.

(Suiton: Goshokuzame) - Water Style: 5 feeding sharks
Once the wave has stopped i jump down on the water and concentrate my chakra in my palm as i place it on the water and release it to create five sharks that emerge from the chakra released my each of my 5 fingers. I keep my hand on the water, emiting chakra to the sharks so they keep reforming if they get injured from a hit and i control their movements and actions in the water.

 

[Better]

That's really what all ya need xD

(Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (-15 per turn the target remains in the water)
Description: The user will first perform Dog hand seal and then the user create a large storm cloud, which in turn produces rain. The large amount of rain then turns into a large wave of water and sweeps the enemy off their feet. While the targets are trapped in the water, their chakra will slowly be drained away. Chakra draining properties last for two turns.

First I want to form the dog hand seal and then release your chakra to form a large black storm cloud in the air. This cloud will then produce a large amount of rain that will accumulate into a wave of water that sweeps my cloud of their feet

It also has chakra draining ability so my clone should disperse.

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( Suiton: Suishinshū ) - Water Release: Water Quaking Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user jumps into the air and then stabs his sword intothe ground, where he causes water to burst up around him and creating a pillar of water to rise up in the air repelling the enemy.

You got a sword? If not, here catch *Gin throws Shinso*

I want you to jump into the air and then stab your sword into the ground. After doing that release your water chakra and water should burst up around you creating a pillar to repel your surroundings.

( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

Very simple, Focus your chakra in your hands and release a spiraling torrent form them.

 

[~Yubel~]

You need more then just base 5 to get to that 'next level' if you would, i'll be the sage of overkill, need to be op.xD

(Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique
I concentrate on my chakra and channel it outside of me as i send it into the sky above your clone, then using the Dog handseal i create a cloud that is mixed with my chakra, i compress the chakra in the cloud and form it into water natured chakra before the cloud starts pouring rain mixed with my chakra that i form into a wave of water that sweeps your clone while draining its chakra for it to disperse.

( Suiton: Suishinshū ) - Water Release: Water Quaking Pillar
I catch the sword gin threw and saw that it was his famed blade shinso, honored to hold this sword i unsheathe it while jumping up and focusing water chakra through it as i descend back on the ground with the tip of shinso's blade pointing downwards before stabbing the ground and releasing all the water chakra into the ground to burst water around me as a trigger, the water then gets molded into a pillar around me to repel enemies(i have a sword actually xD).

( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
I concentrate my chakra and use my chakra control to gather it in my hands, i then use nature manipulation to turn the chakra gathered in my hands into water affinity and proceed to release a spiralling torrent of water from my hands that i molded when i released the water.

 

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Meh, OP is too mainstream and if you had a sword why didn't you use it? ._. everyone is a fan of shinso lol

( Suiton: Shizuka Yari ) - Water Release: Droplet Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Using their skills with water release, the user creates an orb of water in their hand which they can then release in the form of multiple spearing streams, that they can use to attack their enemy from multiple directions or in spirals.

Focus your water chakra and create an orb of water in your dominate hand. Then release the the orb of water into multiple streams of water spears.

(creates clone)

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( Suiton: Nagareru no Yari ) - Water Release: Flowing Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents infront of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.

Focus your chakra and release crescent shaped blades water (think Getsuga tensho cept without the sword and water ~_~) The blades go along with your hand movement. This is only as you release it, I don't think you can control it afterwards tho.