narutodrama
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Hello all this is my first FF ill try my best that it look's good.
Title: Star Wars the end of a saga chapter 1
(all names or event's are made up and do not have any connection to the original story)
(this star wars story takes place around 2000 year's after the original saga)
Long long ago in a far away galaxy ......
Unknown planet: hurry hurry your wife gives birth ...
Unknown man: (name will be revelead later) NOW OMG wh-aath shall i do??
Seneka: ugh dont worry just sit down and wait...
UM-unknown man: o ok ok
14 hours later...
UM: why does it take so long is my wife alright is she ok???
Seneka: (crying) umm i most tell you something plz sit down
UM: NOOO what happend are they alright i want to see my wife
Seneka: i am so sorry (UM) she died from intense child birth we couldnt do anything to help her
UM: (crying) why how could this happen she had a happy face when she left to give birth.... is the baby dead?
Seneka: no he is born and is healthy his look's just like his mother
UM: so it's a he my son .... the last remaining of my dear wife i will make sure he learnes everything about his mother....
UM2: zzzzzzzz (light saber noise) give me that child or all of you will die....
Seneka: look out run UM take the child.
UM2: zummzim (senekas head flys away) that now to you the father of this kid give it to me or she is not the last one that died here....
UM: begins to run to his child to save it from this misterios man.
UM2: run behind with a powerfull misterios saber that glow's and screams like 1000 bird's
He strikes UM in the back and he fall's on the ground heavaly wounded
UM2: takes the baby and disapears never to be seen again
UM: has been found almost death he has been took to hospital where he is getting healed.
Couple of days later:
Hello my name is hando min i am sent from the jedi order to investigate this, i heard that a misterios man has abduct your child he had something similar like an light saber?
UM: (with a sad and empty face) why why couldn't i protect the only important in my life first my wife and now my son... why would somebody abduct my son he is just a innocent baby that just saw the world for the first time with his eyes.....
Hando min: uhm (with a sad face to) i most say you that it may be possible that a jedi or even a sith has abduct your child!
UM: what a sith that is inpossible the last sith where killed thousands of years ago and even if why would they be intrested in my child?
Hando min: uhm i do not know but i have few questions ... that might lead me to the misterios man and your child
UM: you think you could find it?? Ill answer all your questions if it means i can get my child back
Hando min: alright then let's begin
Hours later: the conversation has end and hando min promises to bring the child back.
Tython (the home world of the first jedi and now the capital of the jedi)
The jedi council:
Brantak (jedi council member): very disturbing new's you have master hando min if this is true then the entier galaxy is in danger we most find and kill this sith lord or he will destroy us and the balance of the force we cannot make the same mistakes the jedi have done thousands of years ago we beraly have recovered from the thousand year darknes.
Hulu man sun (supreme jedi master): i agree we most find him it's the up most priority ill send jedi masters accross the galaxy to find this sith lord.
Year's later
Hando min returns to the misterios man that lost his child by the sith lord.
UM: go away
Hando: i most speak with you it's about your child we think we found it.
UM: i dont belive you, you promised me to bring me my child back and look 19 years have passed and no sign of him i hate you and i hate the man that took my child away i want to kill him for the suffer he done to me.
Hando: dont let the dark side to take over you, you know how strong your bloodline is your son is alive and well come with me i will need your help to get him back to the ...
UM: to the what??? What happend??? Dont tell me that he is ...
Hando: yes the misterios man manipulated him and trained him in the skills of the dark side couple of days ago ...
Couple of day's ago on a planet in the outer rim:
You are arressted and will be brought to the high jedi council for trial we cannot let sith to egsist
A misterios man pull's an sword that is dark ...
Jedi master: uhm hmm that sword has no chance against an light saber
MM (misterios man) the air around begins to blow and get restless the sword is gloing red from heat.... then suddenly the sword transforms into a thunder sword (MM uses his force to make the normal looking sword to an even more powerfull light saber) the sword screams and glows
Jedi master: impressive (takes his light saber) this will be decided with light sabers and i will win
MM: you jedi are to confident never underestimate your opponent.
Suddenly MM rushes to to the jedi with his glowing blue and screaming sword......
Jedi master: your first action is a mistake
Zzumm zimmm pufff zoaam
2 min later after an intense fight
Jedi master (sweaty and tired from the battle) now i have you then suddenly MM goes PUFF and disapears and reapers behind the jedi master he attacks him he get's split in two and dies
Padawan of this jedi master has been watching the battle from the distance and is shocked and send's an emergency transmision to the jedi council ..... but in the middle of the transmision he get's stabed and dies while the jedi council sees all and is shocked....
Hulu man sun: quick establish an force of our best knight's and send them to that planet we most get them.....
UM: i am sorry for your fallen comrades but i want to see me son...
Hando: that's why i am here i am taking you there right now the other jedi are waiting for us 2 let's go
UM: right
On the outer rim planet:
Great force master:
My student you have developed fast and are now more powerfull then me... the day has come it's time to destroy the jedi and the cause of the suffer of bilions of people we most elliminate all pest of the force so it can envelop the entier universe and bring eternal peace and happines to all.
Quin: yes my master
Great force master:
The never ending battle bettwen the good and dark side will end TODAY and the true and prime force will prevail our powers are bigger then of anybody in this galaxy by using the good and dark side we have reach perfect simbiosm with the force, let the force lead you and teach you.
Quin: yes master
Later that day a force of 5 most powerfull jedi knights landed on the planet in search for the „sith lord“ lords.
2 shadow siluets apear with blue screaming sword's in their arms walking toward's the jedi
The force master and his youngling apear and rush towards the jedi.... they pull their light saber's and an epic battle begins light saber against force sword min pass and the force master show their force they use telentic to rip the light saber's from the jedi then they use a wall of thunder and push it on the jedi, the jedi are trown away over 50 metars, stuned and wounded the force master jumps high in the air and uses his hand to do something
Jedi: ughhh hmmm uhmm my powers they they disapear the force cant feel it anymore ..... me too what are that powers of this sith ugghhh
Force master: now quin finish them off they have lost all their abilitys.
Quin: yes my master
Will continue.,.......
I hope you enjoyed it, the first part was just about knowing the characters and the begin of the story.
also sorry for any spell errors i dont speak english native
Title: Star Wars the end of a saga chapter 1
(all names or event's are made up and do not have any connection to the original story)
(this star wars story takes place around 2000 year's after the original saga)
Long long ago in a far away galaxy ......
Unknown planet: hurry hurry your wife gives birth ...
Unknown man: (name will be revelead later) NOW OMG wh-aath shall i do??
Seneka: ugh dont worry just sit down and wait...
UM-unknown man: o ok ok
14 hours later...
UM: why does it take so long is my wife alright is she ok???
Seneka: (crying) umm i most tell you something plz sit down
UM: NOOO what happend are they alright i want to see my wife
Seneka: i am so sorry (UM) she died from intense child birth we couldnt do anything to help her
UM: (crying) why how could this happen she had a happy face when she left to give birth.... is the baby dead?
Seneka: no he is born and is healthy his look's just like his mother
UM: so it's a he my son .... the last remaining of my dear wife i will make sure he learnes everything about his mother....
UM2: zzzzzzzz (light saber noise) give me that child or all of you will die....
Seneka: look out run UM take the child.
UM2: zummzim (senekas head flys away) that now to you the father of this kid give it to me or she is not the last one that died here....
UM: begins to run to his child to save it from this misterios man.
UM2: run behind with a powerfull misterios saber that glow's and screams like 1000 bird's
He strikes UM in the back and he fall's on the ground heavaly wounded
UM2: takes the baby and disapears never to be seen again
UM: has been found almost death he has been took to hospital where he is getting healed.
Couple of days later:
Hello my name is hando min i am sent from the jedi order to investigate this, i heard that a misterios man has abduct your child he had something similar like an light saber?
UM: (with a sad and empty face) why why couldn't i protect the only important in my life first my wife and now my son... why would somebody abduct my son he is just a innocent baby that just saw the world for the first time with his eyes.....
Hando min: uhm (with a sad face to) i most say you that it may be possible that a jedi or even a sith has abduct your child!
UM: what a sith that is inpossible the last sith where killed thousands of years ago and even if why would they be intrested in my child?
Hando min: uhm i do not know but i have few questions ... that might lead me to the misterios man and your child
UM: you think you could find it?? Ill answer all your questions if it means i can get my child back
Hando min: alright then let's begin
Hours later: the conversation has end and hando min promises to bring the child back.
Tython (the home world of the first jedi and now the capital of the jedi)
The jedi council:
Brantak (jedi council member): very disturbing new's you have master hando min if this is true then the entier galaxy is in danger we most find and kill this sith lord or he will destroy us and the balance of the force we cannot make the same mistakes the jedi have done thousands of years ago we beraly have recovered from the thousand year darknes.
Hulu man sun (supreme jedi master): i agree we most find him it's the up most priority ill send jedi masters accross the galaxy to find this sith lord.
Year's later
Hando min returns to the misterios man that lost his child by the sith lord.
UM: go away
Hando: i most speak with you it's about your child we think we found it.
UM: i dont belive you, you promised me to bring me my child back and look 19 years have passed and no sign of him i hate you and i hate the man that took my child away i want to kill him for the suffer he done to me.
Hando: dont let the dark side to take over you, you know how strong your bloodline is your son is alive and well come with me i will need your help to get him back to the ...
UM: to the what??? What happend??? Dont tell me that he is ...
Hando: yes the misterios man manipulated him and trained him in the skills of the dark side couple of days ago ...
Couple of day's ago on a planet in the outer rim:
You are arressted and will be brought to the high jedi council for trial we cannot let sith to egsist
A misterios man pull's an sword that is dark ...
Jedi master: uhm hmm that sword has no chance against an light saber
MM (misterios man) the air around begins to blow and get restless the sword is gloing red from heat.... then suddenly the sword transforms into a thunder sword (MM uses his force to make the normal looking sword to an even more powerfull light saber) the sword screams and glows
Jedi master: impressive (takes his light saber) this will be decided with light sabers and i will win
MM: you jedi are to confident never underestimate your opponent.
Suddenly MM rushes to to the jedi with his glowing blue and screaming sword......
Jedi master: your first action is a mistake
Zzumm zimmm pufff zoaam
2 min later after an intense fight
Jedi master (sweaty and tired from the battle) now i have you then suddenly MM goes PUFF and disapears and reapers behind the jedi master he attacks him he get's split in two and dies
Padawan of this jedi master has been watching the battle from the distance and is shocked and send's an emergency transmision to the jedi council ..... but in the middle of the transmision he get's stabed and dies while the jedi council sees all and is shocked....
Hulu man sun: quick establish an force of our best knight's and send them to that planet we most get them.....
UM: i am sorry for your fallen comrades but i want to see me son...
Hando: that's why i am here i am taking you there right now the other jedi are waiting for us 2 let's go
UM: right
On the outer rim planet:
Great force master:
My student you have developed fast and are now more powerfull then me... the day has come it's time to destroy the jedi and the cause of the suffer of bilions of people we most elliminate all pest of the force so it can envelop the entier universe and bring eternal peace and happines to all.
Quin: yes my master
Great force master:
The never ending battle bettwen the good and dark side will end TODAY and the true and prime force will prevail our powers are bigger then of anybody in this galaxy by using the good and dark side we have reach perfect simbiosm with the force, let the force lead you and teach you.
Quin: yes master
Later that day a force of 5 most powerfull jedi knights landed on the planet in search for the „sith lord“ lords.
2 shadow siluets apear with blue screaming sword's in their arms walking toward's the jedi
The force master and his youngling apear and rush towards the jedi.... they pull their light saber's and an epic battle begins light saber against force sword min pass and the force master show their force they use telentic to rip the light saber's from the jedi then they use a wall of thunder and push it on the jedi, the jedi are trown away over 50 metars, stuned and wounded the force master jumps high in the air and uses his hand to do something
Jedi: ughhh hmmm uhmm my powers they they disapear the force cant feel it anymore ..... me too what are that powers of this sith ugghhh
Force master: now quin finish them off they have lost all their abilitys.
Quin: yes my master
Will continue.,.......
I hope you enjoyed it, the first part was just about knowing the characters and the begin of the story.
also sorry for any spell errors i dont speak english native