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Hey senpai, haven't seen you in a while, you must be really busy

1ST JUTSU

I begin by gathering chakra throughout my by, I continue gathering chakra until I apply nature tranformation to my raw chakra to turn it into Raiton chakra. Once my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I begin releasing it from my body while using shape manipulation to make the chakra form a clone of me that I could use to attack the enemy

Well I know clones are usually used to gain an advantage over you opponent by adding more numbers to your side however clones can also be used as distractions and also for gathering information because whatever a clone learns, once it is despersed, the intel is sent back to the original. Clones are also great to use for combination attacks.



2ND JUTSU

After sanpai hands me the sword, I swing it a few times in front of me before I begin gathering chakra into my hands, I continue gathering chakra before I use nature transformation to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. After molding my Raiton chakra completely, I begin releasing my Raiton chakra through my hands and into the sword. As I release my Raiton chakra into the sword, the sword begins to glow because of the chakra. I walk up to the watermelon and begin slicing it with the sword as the sword just glides through it because of its increased cutting power from my Raiton chakra

ADVANTAGES
• Great to use for close combat as it delas more damage then a regular sword
• It doesn't take a long time to infuse your sword with chakra so you will be able to use this even if your opponent is close to you

DISADVANTAGES
• Once you infuse your Raiton chakra into the sword, it begins to glow so your opponent would be more careful and try harder to avoid your attacks
• Can only be used for short-range so if you are more of a long-range then this would propably useless to you

CREATIVE USES
• You could poke it into the ground to send an electrical charge at your opponent

COUNTER
• Since it is quite visible I would avoid being close to my opponent or if I had to fight at close-range then I would infuse my sword with Fuuton chakra
 

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(Sorry the delays recently, I had exams and stuff, I'll try to be more consistent now that summer is here :) )

"I believe stabbing the lightning sword through the ground and allowing an electrical surge to happen isn't possible. Although, I believe there's a technique later on that does exactly that. Kind of strange. Some jutsus are very strict in their usage, but others have some leeway. Something to think about."

"Once more, another set. Remember to ask questions if you have any. Keep up the good work!"

"Perform the ram hand seal and raise your hand to the sky, sending Raiton chara up to the clouds. An electrical discharge will build up and will be triggered, shocking your target. Remember to aim properly; this is a pretty fast technique, which is a good and bad thing."


Aigis pointed to a training dummy that her student would have to hit with this technique.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

"This next one is quite cool. You'll use two shuriken, or two large windmill shuriken, your choice. Channel your lightning chakra through them, and you'll throw these shuriken at your opponent, pinning them down. You'll have to maintain your focus on this technique, because the shuriken are attached to lightning tethers, something like cables, made out of your chakra. If you do manage to hit your opponent and channel your chakra successfully, they'll be numbed, leaving them incredibly vulnerable."

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.
 

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No need to apologize senpai, I understand things are hectic xd

1ST JUTSU

I perform the Ram hand seal and begin gathering chakra in my right hand, I gather a bit more before using nature transformation to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Once my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I raise my right hand and release my Raiton chakra though my hand and into the clouds, causing an electrical discharge which shocks my opponent

ADVANTAGES
• Its fairly quick to perform
• Since it is quick, if you are able to direct it properly then your opponent has little chance of avoiding it
• Can be used for both short-long range attacks

DISADVANTAGES
• You have to be precise with your direction or you could miss your target completely
• You have to raise your hand after performing the hand seal which pretty much alerts your opponent to what you are doing

CREATIVE USES
• I would use the Suiton jutsu which messes your opponent with that sticky stuff and then use it so his movements would be restricted

COUNTER
• As soon as I see my opponent raise his hand, I would move around while movings towards him so it is hard to hit me



2ND JUTSU

I remove 2 giant shuriken and hold them in each hand, I start gathering chakra in my hands, once I have gathered enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. I release my Raiton chakra through the palms of my hands while using shape manipulation to make my chakra into a thin thread that is attached to the shuriken. Once I have completed this, I throw both shuriken in opposite directions and different heights at my opponent so he doesn't have a lot of time or space to dodge it while focus on controlling the threads

ADVANTAGES
• You are able to control where the shuriken go as long as you maintain focus
• Sonce your Raiton cahkra is connested to the shuriken, if you hit your opponent then he will be shocked badly

DISADVANTAGES
• You have to have your Raiton chakra connected to the shuriken which is dangerous if your opponent is on water or if he uses a Suiton jutsu
• While you are controlling the shuriken, you aren't able to perform any jutsus

CREATIVE USES
• You could create a clone to perform the jutsu so you could try to hit your opponent with a Suiton attack to paralyze him even more

COUNTER
• You could create an A-Rank Doton wall which would probably stop it or you could use a Fuuton jutsu would creates a huge gust of wind to blow away the shuriken and cancel out the Raiton chakra
 

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(For that second technique, be sure to be extra descriptive in battle. You can't just say "the shurikens come from all angles" or something like that. Be specific. The tighter and better your descriptions are, the harder it will be for your opponent to counter properly. Remember that ^^)

"Good as usual. We're almost done with the B-ranks, so I'll simply give you the rest of them to perform and analyze. Make sure you put in the same level of effort for each technique!"

"Then, after that, we'll continue with the A-ranks."

"The first one has you releasing purple lightning from your hands, allowing to damage and push your enemy away. This is good for close-range fights or to stop taijutsu users in their tracks. As such, the range of this technique is pretty limited."


Aigis created a Shadow Clone that charged at her student and started attacking him at close range with some free-form taijutsu.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

"Then, the second technique will have you create a lightning shield that looks like plasma in front of you, protecting from frontal attacks. You'll have to maintain your focus to keep this technique running, so that might be a disadvantage in faster battles. However, it lasts a couple of turns... if you don't want it to be used for all that time, you can simply discharge the lightning as a wave that will hit your enemy at a short range."

"Defend from my second clone as she tries to attack you. Then, release the wave as a burst to defeat her."


Aigis's second clone runs up to her student, throwing a barrage of kunais and shurikens, and charging behind them to attack him afterwards, with some Taijutsu again.

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

"And finally, the last B-rank jutsu I can teach you. Please create an orb of lightning chakra in your hands. Raise your hands and release it into the air. It will remain in the air for some time, and then suddenly release lightning bolts, from the 'explosion' of the orb. These continuous lightning strikes will hit most targets within mid-range, making it a nice area attack."

"Just be careful not to hit me, alright?"
she chuckled a little.

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.

"If you have questions, I have answers!"
 
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Lol I put in my best effort for every jutsu, my responses are limited because I use my phone so I can't type longer replies xd

1ST JUTSU

As senpais clone charges at me, I begin gathering chakra into my hands, I gather enough chakra before applying nature transformation to it to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra, senpais clone suddenly starts hitting me, I complete molding my Raiton chakra and release it through my hands as purple lightning which hits senpais clone, shocking it and sending it backwards

ADVANTAGES
• Requires no hand seals and is quick to perform
• Great surprise attack in a close range fight

DISADVANTAGES
• Well its range is pretty bad even though its a powerful jutsu
• The purple lightning is visible so your opponent will be aware and try to maintain a distance

CREATIVE USES
• I would create a clone and after using this jutsu to push back my opponent and shock them, I would make my clone attack them as they would be at short-range or you could make the clone use a Suiton jutsu for a awesome combo

COUNTER
• I quick Fuuton jutsu of C-Rank or higher that requires no hand seals and is quick to perform would cancel it out



2ND JUTSU

As senpais second clone begins charging at me, I quickly start gathering chakra throughout my body, once I have gathered enough chakra, I begin changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra through nature manipulation. Once I have molded my Raiton chakra properly and senpais clones weapons are almost by me, I release my Raiton chakra from my body in front of me while using shape manipulation to form a shield that protects me from the weapons and shocks senpais clone as it approaches me while I continue focusing on the jutsu

ADVANTAGES
• It lasts for 3 turns and if you don't need it that long, you could use it as an attack by discharging the lightning to shock your opponent
• Requires no hand seals and is quick to perform

DISADVANTAGES
• The range in this jutsu is also pretty limited
• You have to maintain focus and this protects you from just frontal attacks so you are open to an attack from above, the sides or behind

CREATIVE USES
• You could charge at your opponent and use Kenjutsu against him while your are protected so he basically can't touch you

COUNTER
• I would use a C-Rank or above Fuuton jutsu



I would never hit a lady unless I absolutely have to xd and technically, I wouldn't be hitting you, the lightning will be :snick:

3RD JUTSU

I begin gathering chakra in my hands, once I have gathered enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to it to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. After properly molding my Raiton chakra, I release it from the palms of my hands while using shape manipulation to form an orb, once this is done, I raise my hands and send the orb into the air. It remains there for a while before suddenly it makes a noise and lightning bolts come shooting down from it, hitting anything in its way but somehow missing senpai xd

ADVANTAGES
• You can hit multiple targets with this jutsu
• Requires no hand seals so its fast to perform and the range isn't bad

DISADVANTAGES
• You release it into the air so your opponent knows what you are doing
• Well it remains in the air for a while so your opponent has time to counter

CREATIVE USES
• I would use the Suiton jutsu that messes your opponent with that sticky stuff and then use this so he can't move freely and has less of a chance to escape

COUNTER
• I would use a Fuuton jutsu the moment I see my opponent send the orb into the air

Question : Do you ceate the orb between your hands and then send it into the sky or do your use shape manipulation while releasing your chakra into the sky to form the orb?
 

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(Haha, I see what you did there ;) and replying from your phone? That takes a lot of dedication, nice work U_U my phone is good for replies but it would be a nightmare for me to do something like that hahaha)

"To answer your question, I believe you must create the orb close to you, so you can have it hovering in front of you if you want. It's only after you form the orb when you release it into the air."

Taking a short stretch and water break, Aigis looked at her student's progress. He had come quite a long way. His growth was quite substantial, too; he gave better replies, performed the techniques well... this growth was always one of the most rewarding aspects of teaching.

"We're in the home stretch. Let's finish strong!" she said, looking determined.

"Now, for the A-ranks! The very first jutsu on our list will have you forming the Monkey, Ox, Boar, and Tiger hand seals. Release a discharge of lightning from your hands, and apply your shape manipulation to form lightning disks... something like 'Destructo Disks'. You can then throw them at your targets. Very fast and hard to dodge or counter, although be careful to aim properly."

"Hit the targets over there."


More targets were set up at their usual spots, three in total.

( Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.

Upon looking at the next jutsu, Aigis realized just how far they had come. She turned to her student.

"Now, it's time to learn the legendary Chidori. I really shouldn't have to explain this to you, right? This will just be the regular variant, the most basic form. Be very descriptive when you form it. We will explore the other variations further along."

"Remember to ask questions if you have any."


(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals
 

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Lol yeah when I signed up for training, I knew I'd have to use my phone and that it will be difficult but I'm here to learn, no matter the effort, practice makes perfect so I'm practicing under your guidance xd I know my descriptions get boring most of the time but I don't want to try something to flashy and end up messing up the jutsu

Thank you for giving me a chance and I hope I'm making you proud of me :yayy:

1ST JUTSU

I quickly perform the Monkey->Ox->Boar->Tiger hand seals and start focusing chakra into my hands, once I have enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. After my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I begin releasing it from my hands in the form of lightning and apply shape manipulation to it, forming 3 compressed disks of lightning. Once the disks are formed, I then focus on my targets as I shoot the disks at them, 1 to my right, 1 straight ahead of me and another to my left, the disks move at high speeds and in no time, reach my targets, hitting them and and cutting through them

ADVANTAGES
• The speed of the disks is a great asset when you want to give your opponent less time to react
• You are able to hit multiple targets at once if you focus on your targets

DISADVANTAGES
• You are required to perform 4 hand seals which kind of cancels out the fact that the jutsu is fast as your opponent is alerted before your can form the disks
• Well since the range is quite limited and you have to perform 4 hand seals, this jutsu is probably most useful from mid range because if you use it at short range, you leave yourself open to an attack while performing the hand seals

CREATIVE USES
• I would probably bind my opponent with a jutsu before using this as he doesn't have a lot of time before the discs reach him

COUNTER
• I would use a B-Rank or higher Fuuton jutsu which requires no hand seals so you can counter before the discs reach you



I've never used this jutsu but I feel as if it will become 1 of my favorites

Damn that's a lot of hand seals xd

2ND JUTSU

I quickly(as fast as I can, though I'd probably be dead xd) perform the Ox->Rabbit->Monkey->Dragon->Rat->Bird->Ox->Snake->Dog->Tiger->Monkey and start gathering chakra into the palm of my right hand. After gathering enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to it, changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Once my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I begin releasing it from the palm of my hand as lightning while focusing on it to keep is as compact as I can. I then charge at my opponent and as he swings his hand at me, I duck under it and thrust my hand through his torso, with my hand going straight through because of the force and power of the jutsu

ADVANTAGES
• The piercing force is strong enough to cut through almost any defence
• The speed at which you are able to hit your target is amazing as it would be hard to come up with a defence that can block it

DISADVANTAGES
• xd it requires 11 damn hand seals
• Its only meant for short range and considering you have to perform 11 hands seals, well you'd probably be dead before you can finish the hand seals

CREATIVE USES
• I would day the best time to use it is after binding your opponent with an earth prison of some sort and then strike as you would be able to pierce through the earth and still hit your target

COUNTER
• I would use a Fuuton jutsu of B-Rank or higher that is both quick to perform and blows a huge gust of wind
 

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(You are a hardworking student, of course I'm proud of you U_U I don't see any errors with your performance and analyses, but perhaps try to think a little out of the box sometimes, it doesn't hurt :) )

"Remember, the Chidori is fast, but one of the best ways to read the attack is that the user almost always runs in a straight line, making it predictable and easy to counter."

"Our first jutsu in the next set is one of the many variants of the Chidori: the Nagashi. You will apply the same principles of the Chidori, except you'll release the molded lightning chakra throughout your entire body. It creates a short-ranged, non-focused, burst of electricity that travels in all directions, shocking, paralyzing, and numbing whatever it comes into contact with."

"There is also another variation to the Nagashi: for that one, you'll need a sword. If you create a chidori in your hand and channel it through the sword, it will be a concentrated attack that can shock smaller areas and targets. It's smaller, but it reaches up to mid-range."

"You can stop the formation of weak Earth techniques, but nothing too large, like the Swamp of the Underworld. Basically, any Earth technique that is within the Chidori should be able to be cancelled, but larger-scale techniques will only have been damaged in the area of the Chidori and simply weakened."

"One of the best things about this jutsu is its ability to dispel Genjutsus of up to the same rank... because it's a full body surge that disrupts your entire chakra system and expels foreign chakra!"


(sorry for the long explanation, this is one of the most misused jutsu in the RP, so I wanted to clarify most of the points :sweat: )

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty

Aigis took a deep breath after explaining the first technique, having said all that in almost one breath.

"The second jutsu has you performing three hand seals, and after that, place your hand on the ground, channeling lightning chakra through the ground. Use your shape manipulation to then create a bolt of lightning that sticks up from the ground... it should look like a small pyramid. You can control where the lightning bolt goes, but for that, you have to maintain your focus on the technique. But it can destroy almost anything in its path, so it's pretty powerful."

"I've set up some targets in a zig-zag pattern in front of you. Use this jutsu to hit them all, controlling the path of the lightning bolt."


(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of 3 hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
 

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Okay thanks senpai and I don't mind the explanation, my friend used it incorrectly during the war and died because of it XD

1ST JUTSU

I begin focusing chakra throughout my body, after gathering enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Once my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I begin releasing it from my entire body as an unfocused surge of lightning that hits anything within short range of me

ADVANTAGES
• It requires no hand seals and is quick to perform
• You are able to break out of Genjutsus of the same rank or lower

DISADVANTAGES
• It can only hit targets within a short range
• Against lightning specialists, this jutsu is almost useless

CREATIVE USES
• I would use this jutsu to paralyze my opponent as a set up for my next jutsu

COUNTER
• Since the lightning is quite visible, staying out of range is good as you are able to see it but a B-Rank or higher Fuuton jutsu that is quick to perform would be more useful. Also since your opponent would be surrounded by lightning, you could use a Suiton jutsu to shock him because of the lightning

Question : Is is a streaming jutsu and are you able to move while releasing the surge of lightning?



2ND JUTSU

I quickly perform the 3 required hand seals and begin focusing chakra into my right hand, once I have gathered enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. After properly molding my Raiton chakra, I place my right hand on the ground and start channeling my chakra into it, I continue focusing my chakra and turn it into lightning, I then use shape manipulation to make my chakra form a small triangle that pops out of the ground as I continuously focus on mmy chakra. I then manipulate the lightning to move towards my targets, heading towards my 1st target that is straight ahead, after hitting my 1st target, I manipulate the lightning to move in a 45 degree angle to the left, hitting my second target, I then manipulate the lightning to move in a 45 degree angle to the right, hitting my 3rd target while I continue focusing on the lightning

ADVANTAGES
• You can control the lightning to hit multiple targets
• The speed of the jutsu is helpful and you can cancel out incoming earth attacks

DISADVANTAGES
• You are required to perform 3 hand seals
• You have to continuously focus on the stream of lightning while your hand is placed on the floor which leaves your completely open to attacks from any direction except the front

CREATIVE USES
• I would use an earth jutsu to imprison my opponent before using this as it would be able to break through the earth jutsu and still hit your opponent

COUNTER
• I would create an earth pillar to launce me into the air or use a Fuuton jutsu to push me upwards while canceling out the Raiton attack
 

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(I had the same experience in a village tournament XD)

"Answering your question... the way it was depicted by its users such as Sasuke Uchiha... you would need to stay in one place to use it. And yes, it is a streaming jutsu that requires constant chakra input until you've achieved the desired effect."

"I really wish Lightning was more... varied. This next jutsu is yet ANOTHER Chidori variant. Create a Chidori, once again, and point it at your target. You'll apply your shape manipulation to fire a barrage of senbon-shaped attacks. These are incredibly fast and hard to avoid. Very accurate, too. Just be aware this jutsu still has the properties of a Chidori, so base your analysis on that fact."


(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.

"And the second one is AT LEAST something different. Concentrate your lightning chakra into your hand and create a 'bubble' of electricity that surrounds it. Compress it and contain its energy. Then, by thrusting your hand forward in a punching motion, you'll release the ball, and upon contact with something, it will expand and explode in a massive lightning explosion."

"Try it on that tree over there; you should be able to burn it to a crisp."


Aigis pointed to a good-sized tree mid-range from student and teacher.

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand, compressing it into a ball of lightning energy. The user can then hurl it at the enemy or trust it forward in a melee attack. Once the ball hits the target, it expands into a massive lightning explosion.
 

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Lol seems every1 has a problem with it, that's why I ask you that question. So I don't mess up during a fight XD

1ST JUTSU

I quickly perform the Ram->Tiger hand seals before gathering chakra into my lungs, once I have gathered enough chakra, I apply my Suiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Suiton chakra. After properly molding my Suiton chakra, I release it through my mouth in the form of a sticky syrup which messes my opponent and slows down his movements while covering the entire battlefield in the syrup. While my opponents movements are slowed down, I begin focusing chakra into my right hand, having gathered enough chakra, I turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by nature manipulation. I then begin releasing my Raiton chakra through my palm as a lightning current which is compact as I continuously focus on my chakra. I then raise my right hand towards my opponent and start firing thin, sharp senbon shaped lightning at my opponent which I was able to do by using shape manipulation

ADVANTAGES
• The speed and accuracy are 2 great advantages and you require no hand seals to perform this jutsu
• You will be able to hit multiple targets

DISADVANTAGES
• The range isn't to great
• The senbons will move in a straight line so its a bit easier to judge

Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.


Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.



Question : Do you have to post the chidori jutsu before using this jutsu or is apart of this jutsu?



Lol for this 1 I didn't use the above template because I have to hit a tree XD let me know if the way I did the above jutsu is suitable or not

2ND JUTSU

I begin focusing chakra into my right hand, once I have gathered enough chakra, I apply my Raiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. I then begin releasing my Raiton chakra around my palm to form an electric ball that is compressed by using shape manipulation and focusing on my chakra. I then clench my fist and punch forward, releasing the ball of compressed electricity which hits the tree and expands before exploding, burning the tree completely

ADVANTAGES
• Requires no hand seals so its fairly quick to perform
• The speed of the ball is only limited to the speed at which you thrust you hand forward

DISADVANTAGES
• The ball of lightning is fairly visible so your opponent is aware of it
• It would move straight so it would be easy to avoid if you use the proper counter

CREATIVE USES
• I would create a clone to standby and throw several weapons at my opponent while I use this jutsu so he can't easily defend

COUNTER
• I would use a B-Rank or above streaming Fuuton jutsu that's quick to perform so it would explode before it could reach me
 

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"The Chidori senbon and future chidori variants only take up one technique out of the three. There isn't a need to waste a move in activating the chidori. For your future reference."

"That combination was quite refreshing! Let's take a break from the analyses for now... you've been doing a lot of them and I'm sure that can get quite tiring, if not even boring. So, until we finish the A-ranks, let's have you perform combination moves with these next techniques. However, you will only be allowed to use the jutsus you've learned from all your senseis."

"Alright, moving right along. Perform the Rat, Monkey, Horse, and Tiger hand seal. You'll channel your chakra through the ground... what makes this technique unique is that it has elements of Doton, but isn't actually doton. The lightning pillars are composed of your Raiton chakra, and you'll make sixteen in total. This will surround your enemy in a cube-shaped 'oven' of sorts. When used by Konoha's ANBU, they used Earth Release: Mud Fall to immobilize the target, and once they trapped the target, Fire Release: Firing Biscuit to roast and harden the mud."

"If you don't have those techniques, try a different alternative... or otherwise, tell me what you would do for a follow-up jutsu."


Aigis created yet another Shadow Clone for her student to try the jutsu on.

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind. Using this technique, the user creates sixteen giant pillars by using his lightning chakra to shape the ground into a multitude of pillars, which then form a giant cubic oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

"This second one is a Chidori variant, once again. You apply shape manipulation to your chidori to turn it into something like a Katana, which can even extend to mid-length; 10 meters. The cutting power of the jutsu increases... and you can even split the blade into multiple pieces, making it more lethal."

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
 

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Lol I wouldn't use a jutsu I haven't learned, it would be stupid of me because if I misuse it then I look like a dummy xd

1ST JUTSU

I don't know the Mud Fall jutsu yet so I tried something different

I quickly perform the Rat->Horse->Dog->Snake hand seals and start focusing chakra throughout my body before applying my Doton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Doton chakra. Having properly molded my Doton chakra, I release it from the bottom of my feet and into the ground, I then manipulate my chakra infused with the ground to make several pillars of rock shoot out from the ground and surround senpais clone

Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.



Once my senpais clone is trapped, I quickly perform the Rat->Monkey->Horse->Tiger hand seals and start focusing chakra throughout my body before changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by using nature transformation. Once my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I begin releasing it from the bottom of my feet and into the ground, then manipulate my chakra in the earth, causing 16 pillars to rise from the ground before forming an oven, trapping senpais clone

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind. Using this technique, the user creates sixteen giant pillars by using his lightning chakra to shape the ground into a multitude of pillars, which then form a giant cubic oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.



After trapping senpais clone inside the oven, its time to cook her :snick: I quickly perform the Rat->Dragon->Boar hand seals and start gathering chakra into my lungs, I then apply my Katon affinity to my raw chakra, turning it into super heated Katon chakra. I then release my chakra through my mouth by enhaling it into the oven in the form of flames, burning senpais clone

Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind





2ND JUTSU

Damn this Chidori has so many variations, I really liked the idea of this combo so I hope its right

I start gathering chakra into my lungs before applying my Doton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Doton chakra. Having properly molded my Doton chakra, I release it through my mouth as mud and upon releasing it, I manipulate my chakra to turn the mud into rock while using shape manipulation to make it look like me to create a clone of myself made of rock

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates their clone out of stone that he spits from his mouth. Unlike other types of clones the rock clones don’t disappear after being defeated but rather crumble like rubble. These clones can also be used to create a clone of other people than themselves but do not take on the abilities of the copied person. They can use up to C-Rank Earth techniques and are very resistant to physical damage such as that from Taijutsu which they can endure up to B-Rank.



Once my clone is created, i give him instructions, he then performs the Tiger hand seal and starts focusing chakra throughout his body before changing his raw chakra into Doton chakra by using nature transformation. Once he has properly molded his Doton chakra, he releases it through his feet and into the ground, once he has infused his chakra with the earth, he manipulates his chakra to make the earth under our opponent turn into mud but instead of carrying our opponent away from us, I instructed him to make our opponent come towards us

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal (Tiger), the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and carries them away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.



After giving my clone instructions, I start focusing chakra into the palm of my right hand before applying my Raiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Having properly molded my Raiton chakra, I begin releasing it from the palm of my hand as a current of lightning that surrounds my hand while focusing on condensing my chakra, I then use shape manipulation to make the lightning into a sword of lightning which reaches 10 meters in length. As my clone brings our opponent closer, I manipulate the lightning sword and stab it through his chest as the mud brings him towards us

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.

 

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Aigis watched as her student performed the combination attacks. It was at this moment, she believed he would be someone who would become a good shinobi in the future, combat wise. But...

"Your first combination was well-thought out. When you learn the Mud Fall, technique, that would be the best way to use this set of jutsus. Furthermore, when you learn Shadow Clones, use them the turn before, and have them perform these jutsus with you, simultaneously, to speed it up. When Konoha's ANBU used these techniques to bind Pein's summons, they did it as a three-man team. I'm sure an individual could do the same, but it would be slower and give your opponent more time to react and defend against the initial attack."

"And as for your second combination, I, too, liked the idea. However, there is one major error I see here. How would your rock clone cause the mud river to pull your opponent in? If anything, you would have to first order your clone to go behind your opponent, so that the formation of the mud river is such that it flows towards you, pushing the opponent into the Chidori Sharp Spear that you create."

"Now, if I were to try this, I would use a weak paralysis/confusion genjutsu, maybe about D or C rank, to temporarily distract the enemy. And while they're trying to break free of the genjutsu, I'd finish them off with the Chidori attack to impale them. Remember, elements are not the only types of jutsus that are viable with each other."

"These are the last two A-ranks I can teach you! Excited yet? We're in the home stretch."


Aigis gave a nice smile to her student. Oh, how much he had grown since they had started. She felt a bond growing between student and teacher. For a moment, she wondered if he felt it, too.

But now wasn't the time to wax nostalgic. More techniques!

"We will continue with the 'combinations' exercises for these last two."

"The first of the last A-rank techniques will have you manipulating your Raiton chakra to form a vortex of electricity that surrounds you. Then, apply your shape manipulation to form a Dragon's head that shoots forward and attacks the area in front of it. Residual electricity can even jump out of the vortex to hit targets not directly where the dragon went."


Aigis creates one Shadow Clone for the combination.

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Poof, a second Shadow clone appeared.

"I'm tired of being cannon fodder for our student..." Aigis's clone said, pouting.

"Deal with it." Aigis said, unusually coldly, but in a funny way.

"The final A-rank. String the hand seals Rabbit, Rat, Horse, and Ram hand seals while molding a ton of Raiton chakra. It will travel through the ground and pool at the feet of your opponent. This pool will then erupt into a lightning column that will trap and severely electrocute whatever's caught in it. You can control the size of the pillar depending on how much chakra you put into it."

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.
 

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Thanks senpai and I know I made a few mistakes but that's because I'm still learning the jutsus , you have helped me more than I can imagine so thank you for that also :yayy: Battling and planning strategies has always been my strength so I hope I can do the same here xd

Lol I would have loved to use a Genjutsu and I definitely would have but I only started it 3 days ago with Adachi sensei so I'm still on the basics for now

Last 2 A-Ranks? :yayy: S-Ranks on the way *moonwalks all around the training ground* spins *can't touch this*

1ST JUTSU

I begin focusing chakra throughout my body and apply my Suiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Suiton chakra. I then form the Tiger hand seal and begin releasing my Suiton chakra from my body while manipulating my chakra I use shape manipulation to create a clone of myself that is made from water

Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.



Upon making a clone of myself, I instruct him to perform a certain jutsu. He starts gathering chakra in his lungs before changing his raw chakra into Suiton chakra by using nature transformation, he then performs the Ram->Tiger hand seals and begins releasing a chakra infused sticky substance from his mouth that hits our opponent and slows down her movements

Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.



As my clone performs the 2 hand seals, I start focusing chakra throughout my body before applying my Raiton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. I then release my Raiton chakra around my body to form a vortex of lightning and as my clone releases the sticky substance and messes senpais clone with it, I apply shape manipulation to the vortex of lightning to take the shape of a dragon's head that I send at senpais clone who can't move properly, hitting her and shocking her into a poof of smoke

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.





2ND JUTSU

I focus chakra throughout my body before applying my Doton affinity to it, turning my raw chakra into Doton chakra. After properly molding my chakra, I release it from my body and while manipulating my chakra, I use shape manipulation to make it look like me to create a Doton clone of myself.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates their clone out of stone that he spits from his mouth. Unlike other types of clones the rock clones don’t disappear after being defeated but rather crumble like rubble. These clones can also be used to create a clone of other people than themselves but do not take on the abilities of the copied person. They can use up to C-Rank Earth techniques and are very resistant to physical damage such as that from Taijutsu which they can endure up to B-Rank.



I give my clone instructions to perform a certain jutsu when I give him the signal. I begin focusing chakra throughout my body before changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. I then perform the Rabbit->Rat->Horse->Ram hand seals and slam my hands on the ground, releasing my Raiton chakra into the ground, once my Raiton chakra is infused in the ground, I manipulate it to move under my opponent and gather there before making it erupt from under her as a column of lightning *signals clone* that traps her and electrocutes her severely

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.



Having signaled my clone, he begins focusing chakra in his right hand before applying his Doton affinity to it, he then performs the Snake hand followed by the Seal of Confrontation and begins releasing his Doton chakra around his hand, he then manipulates his chakra to cover his hand with rock and as I release my Raiton jutsu with my opponent paralyzed and unable to move, my clone charges at her and punches her with his rock encased hand as hard as he can, knocking her into a poof of smoke

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.



Is the Raiton jutsu a streaming technique?
 

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"Yes, the Telegram Flash is a streaming technique. You can control the size of the erupting lightning pillar."

They were finally here. This was it.

"S-ranks. These are the pinnacle of Lightning release techniques... most of them are unlike you've ever seen, but rather, heard in the stories of famous shinobi in the past."

"You've proven yourself to be nothing but a hard worker. So, in this home stretch, simply perform the jutsus; I don't require your opinions on it anymore. It's a nice break from it all. However, I may still ask you the occasional questions and still give you tips. Let's finish strong."

"The very first S-rank Raiton technique is powerful, fast, and all around, one of the best standard techniques in existence. After performing the Snake hand seal, you'll fire a lightning spear from either your hands or mouth. This has such high piercing potential, it can punch through any earth technique like nothing. It's incredibly fast and difficult to evade. In fact, you would need really strong wind techniques or equal ranked Raiton to even stop this."

"Destroy that huge boulder, pierce through it and break it apart."

"I do have one question here. You can also split the spears into multiple parts, but each one will be individually weaker. So, doing the math, we can have one S-rank spear, two A-rank spears... I would like you to finish the rest for me, please."


(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

"The second jutsu is the Raikiri. Kakashi Hatake's signature technique. It's legendary for its usage and feared for its strength. I shouldn't really have to explain it to you; other than the fact that it's a Chidori with more chakra control required, and higher strength and power in general."

"I want you to apply everything you've learned about description, chakra, lightning, and types of manipulation, as you form the Raikiri. Show me how far we've come."


(Basically, just be very descriptive when forming the Raikiri :) )

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

"And once you've created the Raikiri, split it into two, evenly distributing the chakra content between both your hands. This makes the Raikiri a powerful melee variant."

"I want you to pulverize that target over there, and be detailed in how you destroy the poor sap."


(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.
 

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Sorry about the late response but my birthday was on Saturday so I was kind of hungover XD

Okay senpai S-Ranks, awesome

As Ryu stands in the training grounds with his eyes closed, he thinks to himself how far he has come since starting his training and begins to smile by the thought of his progression, well let me show senpai how far I have come with my actions. Ryu then open his eyes and looks at the rock that he is supposed to destroy, with his eyes locked on it with his steely determination, he performs the Snake hand seal and begins gathering a vast amount of chakra into his lungs, he then closes his eyes as he begins imagining what lightning is like, which is raw energy that travels very fast and has a lot of destructive power, he applies these properties to his chakra by manipulating it, turning his raw chakra into Raiton chakra which has high vibrations which gives it its destructive power. Once he has gathered enough Raiton chakra, he opens his mouth and begins releasing it through his mouth as a stream of lightning but as he is releasing it, he pictures a thin, long, compact beam of lightning and applies this shape to the stream of lightning so it is focused and controlled while still maintaining its destructive capabilities, as he completes this in time, the beam of lightning shoots through the rock which causes it to crumble into pieces

Answer : 4 spears = B-Rank | 8 spears = C-Rank | 16 spears = D-Rank



After performing the 1st jutsu, Ryu is tired after using up quite a bit of chakra but he shakes it off as he prepares for the 2nd and 3rd jutsu by closing his eyes while he focuses. With his eyes closed, Ryu performs the OX->Rabbit->Monkey hand seals and begins focusing quite a lot of chakra into his right hand, once he has gathered enough chakra into his hand, he imagines the fast, raw destructive power of lightning and applies it to his chakra, turning it into Raiton chakra by applying these properties to it to give it its power. After he has gathered enough Raiton chakra, he begins releasing it from the palm of his hand as a stream of lightning that covers the palm of his hand. Once the unfocused stream of lightning surrounds his palm, Ryu begins picturing the lightning in a condensed form that covers his palm like a shield but also sharp enough to cut through almost anything, he applies this shape to it and as it crackles, he puts his hands together while focusing on his chakra, he begins distributing chakra from his right palm into his left until they are equal, surrounding both his palms with lightning. With both his palms coated with lightning, Ryu dashes towards his oppnent and as he approaches, his opponent swings his right arm at Ryu's head, Ryu ducks under it and as he appears behind the man, he waits till the man turns around and thrusts his right palm into the mans stomach which causes his hand to go through the man, Ryu pulls back his right hand and as the man falls to his knees, Ryu lands the final blow by kneeling down on his left knee before thrusting his left palm in an upward arc, cutting through the mans chin all the way up through his head

I combined the 2nd and 3rd jutsu so I hope you don't mind. Also I hope these were good enough descriptions
 

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(Perfect on the spear question, and great performances :T_T: brutal Taijutsu, I liked it :snick: )

Aigis looked on, proud of Ryu. Nothing more needed to be said or done; he had exceeded her expectations in every way.

"I expect performances of that caliber to be consistent."

"This set is particularly challenging, but with your strength, I trust you can do it."
Aigis had implicitly placed her trust in her student.

"For the first one, you will form two Chidoris in your hands, one for each. Clap your hands together, and this burst of two energy sources will cause a massive thunderbolt that will be linearly directed at your target. Incredibly powerful and it can leave a massive crater from the impact of the jutsu. Unfortunately, using this in short range is impossible, lest you suffer friendly fire."

"One thing here. This jutsu is best done from high ground. So, walk over to the edge of this hill we're standing on, and fire the ThunderClap at the ground below us, at the trees below. I want you to observe its destructive capabilities."


(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

"This next technique is a little different. Perform the Ram, Horse, Snake, and Tiger hand seals, and release Raiton chakra throughout your body. However, instead of using this lightning to attack, instead, allow it to flow as a wide, uncontrolled current, and form a blinding light. This will blind anyone that sees it, bar the most experienced dojutsu users."

"The blinding aspect is a great supplement to any combination, but ideally, you can use it as a cover to place a target under a genjutsu. I won't have you using a genjutsu to follow up with this, because you'd have to cast that illusion on me, being the only other target around. Just try the jutsu."

"I'll be closing my eyes and covering them, of course. I don't want to become blind just yet."


Aigis closed her eyes and covered them with her gloved hands, waiting for Ryu to finish.

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

"You'll like this final one." she said.

Molding Katon chakra in her mouth and performing a single handseal, Aigis opened her mouth and applied shape manipulation to turn the fire building up in her mouth into dragon-shaped fireballs. Looking up towards to the sky, she spewed out these fireballs, which caused the otherwise clear skies to begin to get cloudy due to the extreme heat. The alteration of the local weather meant only one thing...


Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.




"Kirin."

"I've taken the liberty to helping you set up for this legendary technique. As the thunderclouds and natural lightning begin to form, perform a Chidori and use it to control the lightning that starts striking, applying the highest levels of shape and nature manipulation to literally tame lightning. It requires two moves on the turn you use Kirin, so be aware of that."

"This is one of the most powerful techniques in existence. If you manage to pull it off in a battle, it's almost considered an instant win."

"For this, so that we don't get fried, direct the Kirin towards that nearby hill over there, a safe distance from our own hill. But even at that distance, we'll feel the aftershocks. I fully expect the hill to be completely obliterated. A testament to its frightening power."


Aigis braced herself as she watched Ryu.

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.
 

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Lol I figured it was about time I showed you some good descriptions of mine O_O

I'm glad I made you proud of me :p

Ryu looks to his senpai and speaks "well senpai, it seems as if our time together is drawing ever closer so I will perform to the best of my abilities and hopefully that will be enough to make you proud to have taught me and not feel as though you have wasted your time on me". Ryu then looks down to the bottom of the hill they were standing on before closing his eyes and hearing the wind whistle through the trees and the birds chirping "soothing". With his hands at his sides, Ryu raises them slightly to about the height of his waist with them in front of him, he begins focusing a huge amount of chakra into both his hands. Once he has amassed enough chakra, he pictures the fast moving nature of lightning along with its raw destructive power, he then applies these properties to his raw chakra to change it into Raiton chakra. Having gathered enough Raiton chakra, Ryu begins releasing it through the palms of his hands, he then pictures the lightning being condensed while maintaining its sharpness and cutting power and applies it to the lightning surrounding his palms. With both his palms covered in lightning, Ryu opens his eyes and claps his hands together while pointing them at a 45 degree angle downwards, by clapping his hands together, the result of the 2 sources of lightning clashing is a huge thunderbolt being fired at extremely high speed towards all the trees below them, destroying the tress completely, sending broken trees flying everywhere with a huge crater in the earth where the trees used to be



Having performed a jutsu that consumes a lot of chakra, Ryu takes a 5 minute break before he performs the next jutsu ........(5 minutes later). Having replenished some of his chakra, Ryu stands up and closes his eyes once more. He performs the Ram->Horse->Snake->Tiger hand seals and begins focusing a large amount of chakra flowing throughout his entire body, while gathering his chakra, he pictures the color of the lightning, a bright whitish blue light that is so nice to look at yet so destructive and dangerous. With these images still in his head, he applies these qualities to his raw chakra, changing it into Raiton chakra. Having gathered enough Raiton chakra, Ryu crouches down ever so slightly and begins releasing his Raiton chakra from his entire body as an unfocused surge of lightning, because of the lightning covering his entire body, it looks as if he is glowing which would blind almost any1 looking at him, allowing him to use it to his advantage by casting a Genjutsu on them



Having used 2 chakra consuming jutsus, Ryu watches as his senpai launches several dragon shaped fireballs into the sky so he takes a break while the weather changes so he can perform his next jutsu .............(20 minutes later). Once he has gained some of his chakra back, he stands up and looks into the clouds, they were now dark and looked as if there was about to be a storm. Ryu then puts his head back down to look at the hill he is supposed to destroy before closing his eyes to focus. He then performs the Ox->Rabbit->Monkey->Dragon->Rat->Bird->Ox->Snake->Dog->Tiger->Monkey hand seals and puts out his right hand in front of him and starts focusing a vast amount of chakra into it. He then visualizes the raw destructive pwer and speed of lightning and applies those properties to his raw chakra, changing it into Raiton chakra. Once he has gathered enough Raiton chakra, he begins releasing it through the palm of his hand as a stream of lightning, before it can lose control and misfire, he condenses the lightning around his palm by using shape manipulation to coat his palm with the lightning. Having complete control of the lightning, Ryu raises his right hand that is covered with the lightning as if he were linking his chakra with the lightning in the clouds, he then brings his hand down in arc, pointing at the hill across them which makes the lightning that had gathered in the clouds instantly hit the hill, completely destroying it, leaving nothing but dust and rubble while the aftershock of the explosion makes everything shake and Ryu and his senpai lose balance but not fall to the ground
 

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(THIS IS IT, THIS IS IT!!! Last two techniques in Raiton. The rest can only be used by special biographies, or special conditions like Shadow Clones. But after this, you will be "complete" with lightning. :T_T: )

Aigis couldn't help but feel sad. Ryu had grown so much in such a short time. But at the same time, she was happy. Happy that she had helped pass on her knowledge to the new generation; a generation that would, in time, surpass all those who came before. To her, this was the most rewarding part of her position.

"Ryu-kun, these final two techniques are Chidori variants. Simple and effective, but quite versatile nonetheless. For such moves, forming the chidori doesn't count as a move, so be aware of that."

"For this first one, form a chidori and point your palm forward; the one where you formed the Chidori. Release the chakra in a blast of lightning. The formation of the angle is enough to create a spreading attack that pushes forward. Fast and efficient; it can tear through any Earth technique, and serve as a lethal offensive attack."

"Hit those targets over there. The last ones I've got for you."


The last set of targets rested quietly, waiting for their inevitable demise.

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.

Aigis took a deep breath and reached the end of the scroll. She created her final Shadow Clone for the training session. Clone and senpai looked at each other for a moment.

"And FINALLY, the final Raiton technique I can teach you has you forming a Chidori and running up to your opponent-in case, my clone. Strike her, and once you do, apply your shape manipulation to extend your chidori into a long lightning spear that impales and pushes your opponent. The tip of the spear will explode, just to add more injury to injury."

"Go ahead, Ryu-kun."


Aigis silently observed.

( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
 
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