[Raiton] Electrifying People With Souji

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After senpai hands me the paper, I look at it for a while so that I understand the Lightning concept better and after a while I prepare to perform my next jutsu and put into use what I learned

I begin by raising my right hand in front of me at a 90 degree angle. I then start gathering my chakra in my right arm, I add a bit more chakra before I start turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra through nature transformation, as I start moulding my raw chakra into Raiton chakra, my hands starts to glow a pale yellow color. Once my chakra is moulded properly , I begin releasing it through my hand in the form of lightning bolts, as I release it I use shape manipulation to make the Raiton take the form of horns that's expand as it heads towards my targets

ADVANTAGES

• Allows you to hit multiple targets
• They horns expand as they move forward so you have more of a chance of hitting your target because it gives him less space to try and counter you

DISADVANTAGES

• As you gather your Raiton chakra, your hand starts to turn a pale yellow which would alert your opponent you are gathering chakra in your hand

CREATIVE USES

• Before you use this technique, I would firstly mess my opponent with water and then perform this jutsu as it would enhance the paralyzing effect

COUNTERS

• I would use a Fuuton jutsu of the same rank to blow away the horns
 

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(Here is a useful thread regarding elemental interactions for your reference. )

Aigis tossed a sheathed sword to her student, who catches it. It's a standard Katana; nothing special.

"I'm sure you've handled a sword before?"

"This jutsu has you channeling your lightning chakra through that sword. Your sword will almost... glow, like some sort of 'saber of light'. With this infused chakra into the sword, the strength of its cutting power will drastically increase. When you've done that, use your chakra to make it levitate. Remember to keep your focus on it; you won't be able to perform other techniques while levitating the sword."

"You'll then use your chakra to form two physical copies of your sword. So basically, you'll have three levitating swords in front of you. Make them spin around rapidly, and use hand gestures to cause them to fly around and cut up your targets. You can control how they fly."

"I like this technique because it gives you a lot of control over how you perform it."

"And... begin."


( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.
 

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Sorry about my previous reply and I'm sure you are getting irritated teaching me but Raiton is really hard to master so I ask you to please bare with me as I'm starting to get the hang of it

I've actually just started Ken training with Shinta sensei


I remove my sword that is on my back and hold it in my right hand. I then start gathering chakra into my right hand, once I've gathered enough chakra I begin using nature transformation to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. I then begin releasing my Raiton chakra through my right hand and into my sword to infuse it with my Raiton chakra. Once it is infused with my Raiton chakra, I focus my chakra to make it levitate in front of me. I then use more chakra to create to physical copies of my sword and I continue focusing my chakra to make the 3 swords spin rapidly as I send it towards my target, I guide it using hand gestures

ADVANTAGES

• You are able to control exactly where your swords go
• Since there 3 swords, you could hit multiple targets

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to continue focusing on controlling the swords and cannot perform any hand seals or jutsus while doing this
• It takes 5 chakra points every turn that it is active

CREATIVE USES

• I would personally make the swords move in different directions and different height so that your opponent would find it very difficult to avoid

COUNTERS

• I would use a C-Rank Fuuton jutsu that invloves sending a gust of wind over a wide area at your opponent so that it would counter the swords coming in different directions
 

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"As we move along, don't be surprised if I ask YOU questions, alright? But you're doing quite well."

"We are almost done with the C-rank Lightning techniques. Can you feel it? The power you are gaining? Remember to never lose your way, no matter how powerful you eventually become. I can see great things in you, my student."
she gave a reassuring smile.

"Our final C-rank technique has you channeling Lightning chakra through your dominant hand. You'll then slam your palm into the ground, channeling the energy around you in a small area, discharging it as bolts around you in short range. A good area attack in short range."

"Try it on those targets, please."


She pointed at a set of targets standing in a circle.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.
 
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Thank you senpai, I am prepared for any questions you may ask me in the future

I will never change no matter how strong I become because I will always remember that I never got strong on my own, I will have had help from great people(you included) who put in hours of their own time to teach me and I would be disappointing every1 of them if I become some1 who I'm not. If I could become strong while being myself, why would I need to change

As I am surrounded by the targets, I put my right hand in front of me and begin gathering chakra into it. I add more chakra before I begin using nature transformation to change my raw chakra into high vibration Raiton chakra, once my Raiton chakra is moulded properly, I proceed to slam my right hand on the ground and begin releasing my Raiton chakra onto the Earth, shocking the targets around me

ADVANTAGES

• Allows you to shock multiple targets that are within 5 meters of you
• Doesn't require any hand seals so is therefore quick to perform and considering that most of the targets are within 5 meters of you, this technique is very helpful

DISADVANTAGES

• The range is only 5 meters which means that the most likely target you are going to hit is some1 who enjoys Taijutsu or Kenjutsu
• Even if the targets are within range, this technique isn't going to severely injure them but more or less slow them down

CREATIVE USES

• I would leap into the air(more as a bluff to make my opponent think I'm using another element) and come down with a speen and slam my hand on the ground, catching them unaware

COUNTERS

• I would leap into the air and (use a Fuuton jutsu) that pushes me away from me opponent by blowing it on the ground to my left or right
 

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Her student's conviction was impressive. Aigis smiled warmly; contrasting her typical professional, sometimes even cold, disposition. She could see that her student spoke from his heart. Shinobi like him were a dying breed. With a growing bond between the two, Aigis resolved to make sure that students like him would excel in the future. It was her duty as a teacher.

"If you use a wind technique to push yourself up in the air, remember that you should have a plan to deal with possible counters from your opponent in mid-air."

"Lightning is strong and chaotic. It can't really be used defensively. But our next jutsu is an exception to the rule. Perform the Ox hand seal and put both of your arms out. Apply nature and shape manipulation to create a wall of lightning energy in front of you. It can even shock targets in close range, and if something touches it, it will be

"Now, I have some questions. What can this technique defend from, ninjutsu and elements-wise? Be specific with ranks. What counters would defeat this? Again, specific with ranks."

"Alright, let's see how you deal with the B-ranks."
She said, crossing her arms and observing.

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.
 

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Thank you senpai

After hearing senpais words, I quickly perform the Ox hand seal and put both my hands in front of me, I then begin gathering chakra in both my hands. Once I have gathered enough chakra, I begin using nature transformation to turn my raw chakra into high vibration Raiton chakra. Once my chakra is moulded properly, I begin releasing it through my hands and by using shape manipilation I make it take the form of a wall that is made if lightning

ADVANTAGES

• Doesn't allow any1 to get close to you as it would shock them
• Requires only 1 hand seal

DISADVANTAGES

• Its only meant for a short range defence which means if your opponent is at mid-long range then this wouldn't harm him in any way
• You have to hold out your hands in front of you which would let your opponent know you are about to perform a jutsu

ABLE TO DEFEND AGAINST

• NINJUTSU - A RANK AND BELOW
• DOTON - A RANK AND BELOW
• SUITON - A RANK AND BELOW
• FUUTON - D RANK
• KATON - B RANK AND BELOW

COUNTERS

• NINJUTSU - S RANK
• DOTON - S RANK
• SUITON - S RANK
• FUUTON - C RANK AND HIGHER
• KATON - A RANK AND ABOVE
 

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"Typically, when elements are neutral to one another, they need to be at least the same rank in order to cancel each other out. I don't think the Lightning wall can defend against neutral elements of higher rank. Basically, hit it overwhelming force."

"Fire and Lightning will most often phase through each other; it's a fascinating interaction that I've seen a couple of times."


Setting up targets at short range from her student, Aigis turned to him.

"Now, this next technique has you creating a half-dome made of your lightning chakra. You'll then use your chakra control to push it forward like a 'wave' of lightning. It can paralyze, shock, and push. In terms of creative uses, I can even see this type of technique as a defensive one in proper situations. Also remember that you must maintain focus while pushing the half-dome, so that could possibly be a disadvantage."

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.
 

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After hearing senpais instructions, I begin gathering my chakra throughout my body, I continue adding my chakra until I begin changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by using nature transformtion. I mould my Raiton chakra a bit more before I begin releasing it from multiple points in my body in the form of a half dome by using shape manipulation, I continue focusing my chakra as I then use my chakra control to push the dome forward like a shield to shock and paralyze the targets

ADVANTAGES

• Can be used to defend as well as attack
• It protects you from incoming attacks from in front of you
• You are able to push it outwards which would cover a wider range

DISADVANTAGES

• Can only be used for short range
• You have to keep using your chakra to maintain the dome

CREATIVE USES

• Pretend you want to fight in Taijutsu so you can get close and then use this technique, because Raiton is fast it would be hard to avoid
• I would create clones to make it a much larger area that is covered with lightning

COUNTER

• Stay out of range
• Use a C rank or higher Fuuton jutsu that invloves sending a gust of wind towards your opponent
• Create a clone that runs at your opponent in an arc until he is behind him and since he has to focus on this jutsu, he won't be able to defend himself
 

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"Yes, good insight on using a clone to run around in an arc. If you can break the focus of your opponent, you'll be able to avoid and stop a multitude of techniques. This jutsu is also very large and easy to read, and it travels in a linear trajectory, making it predictable."

Poof. A Shadow Clone.

"You may have some pent-up anger you want to release, don't you? Well, this is your chance. I want you to engage my clone in taijutsu; beat her up as much as you want. This leads up to a combination with the next jutsu, where you'll gather lightning chakra in the fist of your choice. A sphere of lightning will form around it with nature and shape manipulation. With a final blow, defeat my clone and create an electrical explosion!"

The clone rushed up to Aigis's student and started punching and kicking him.

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.
 

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As I stand there at my spot, senpais clone runs up to me aand starts hitting me. At 1st I think its a joke but she starts hitting me harder and harder, I finally snap and give her a kick that sends her to the ground as I then begin gathering chakra into my right hand, I gather enough chakra until I start changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by using nature transformation. After I have changed my chakra completely into Raiton chakra, I begin releasing it through my palm as I use shape manipulation to make it form a sphere of lightning around my fist, as senpais clone stands up, I punch her in her face with my right hand and the lightning causes an electrical explosion that kills her(poof of smoke)

ADVANTAGES

• Because you are close, your opponent doesn't have a lot of spave to counter or block
• Your opponent would be caught unaware as he would think you are just using Taijutsu because you would be right in front of him

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to be at close range to perform this jutsu
• If you opponent is already at close range, its hard to gather your chakra and then turn it into Raiton chakra, also you have to use shape manipulation which is difficult if he's close to you

CREATIVE USES

• Let you opponent hit you to the ground so you can gather your chakra and then wake up and whip some ...

COUNTER

• Stay out of range
• Always keep attacking your opponent so he doesn't have time to gather chakra

I hit a girl against my will XD
 

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"How very noble of you! But even if you're fighting against a really pretty girl, don't hold back, or she might beat you!" Aigis said, chuckling at her student's chivalry. He was a nice guy.

"Occasionally, I'll teach you two jutsus at once, so that we can spice and speed up training up a bit. Now is one of those times."

"For the first technique, you'll raise your hand or a weapon of your choice, like a sword, into the air. Send electricity generated from your Raiton chakra into the clouds. You'll then create lightning strikes that can hit wherever you desire, within range, of course. Make sure you focus on where you want to hit the target. This is a fast technique, so be aware of that so you don't get caught off guard."

"Hit these targets..."


Aigis set up four training dummies around the area her student was, one in front of him, one to the left, one to the right, and one behind him, all mid range distance away.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

"Once you have completed that, come to where I am."

Aigis walked over to another area, a little away from her student, while he was performing the first technique.

"The second jutsu will have you performing the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals. By releasing lightning chakra into the ground, You'll cause the Earth to rise in four pillars around your target. These pillars will then proceed to fire off lightning bolts, basically shocking and electrocuting whatever is inside the area of attack of the four pillars."

"I like this technique because it can even handle large summoning animals, and is very useful for controlling larger battles."


She created another Shadow Clone for her student to perform this technique on.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.
 

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After hearing senpais instructions, I lift my right hand up above my head and begin gathering chakra into my hand, I continue adding chakra until I start changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by using nature transformation. Once my Raiton chakra is moulded, I release it through the palm of my right hand in the form of a lightning bolt straight into the clouds that are in the sky, as it goes into the clouds, the clouds start to get darker and soon after several lightning bolts start shooting down from the sky right where senpais clones are located and hit them

ADVANTAGES

• You could hit multiple targets
• The bolts come down so fast that your opponent doesn't have a lot of time to react

DISADVANTAGES

• You cannot determine when the lightning should shoot down
• It would be hard to hit a target that is constantly moving

CREATIVE USES

• You could raise your hand as if you are going to give up and then *BZZZZZZ* you shock your opponent XD

COUNTER

• Always keep moving around so its hard to hit you

My creative uses are unusual but creative XD your opponent wouldn't even see it coming, that fool xD



After performing the 1st jutsu, I walk over to senpai and listen to her instructions. I then perform the Ram->Boar->Dog->Bird->Hare hands seals and start gathering chakra in both my hands. I gather enough chakra before I begin changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by using nature manipulation. Once my Raiton chakra is moulded properly, I proceed to slam my hands on the ground and release my Raiton chakra into the ground, causing 4 pillars made of Earth to rise up and surround senpais clone, the pillars the shoot out several bolts of lightning at senpais clone and hit her

ADVANTAGES

• Could be used for short-long range battles
• Could trap several targets inside and shock them
• Your opponent would be surprised by it because they would just think its a Doton attack and wouldn't know its a Raiton attack unless they have a Dojutsu

DISADVANTAGES

• Requires 5 hand seals to perform
• By slamming your hands on the ground, your opponent will be expecting something to happen involiving the Earth

CREATIVE USES

• You could wet your opponent with a Suiton attack before performing this so it increases the shocking effect

COUNTER

• Use a Raiton attack to crack the ground so the pillars wouldn't be able to form
 

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(I lol'ed at some parts of your analysis xD)

"For the first jutsu, you actually CAN determine where the lightning will strike, you just have to focus. Remember to read the descriptions carefully."

"Let's continue with two techniques per round. That way, we can speed up training a little. But I still expect good analyses from you, alright?"

"For our next technique, perform the hand seals Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat, and generate lightning in an unfocused wave. Or, you can also channel it through conductive material like a sword, for example. If you combine it with a water technique, you can increase the damage of the water technique. Remember that you can't use two elements at the same time, unless you have Yin/Yang training or a clone to help you out."

"Try the unfocused version, and then, use a sword to try the focused version, and give me an analysis of both."


(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.

"Once you've finished that, the second jutsu has you clapping your hands together and mold your electrical energy and chakra around you. When you slam your hands on the ground, an electric current will surge through the earth, and when it reaches your target, the lightning current will erupt from the ground and turn into multiple tendrils (tentacles) which can attack your target from multiple angles."

"Both of these jutsus have great range. Try them on my clones."


Aigis created two Shadow Clones, each one to be fodderized by each individual technique.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
 

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Lol senpai I know that you can control where the 1st jutsu hits, I said you can't determine when. Meaning that it shoots down as soon as your lightning bolts goes into the cloud. I meant you can't delay it or prepare it beforehand, I did read the description and then gave my answer xD

Sorry I couldn't use a Suiton jutsu because I've only just finished D-Rank



1ST JUTSU

UNFOCUSED VERSION

After receiving instructions from senpai, I perform the Rabbit->Dog->Boar-Ram->Rat hand seals and begin gathering chakra in my hands. I continue gathering chakra before I begin turning my raw chakra into Raiton chakra using nature transformation. Once I've moulded my Raiton chakra properly, I begin releasing it through my hands as an unfocused wave of lightning that I direct at senpais clone, hitting him and shocking him until he poofs into smoke

ADVANTAGES

• Has a great range so it doesn't give your opponent a lot of space to avoid this jutsu
• That fact that's its unfocused makes its hard for your enemy to predict where it will move
• Can be used in conjunction with a Suiton jutsu to enhance the lightnings effect

DISADVANTAGES

• Since its unfocused it would also be hard to control
• Requires 5 hand seals to perform
• Since it is a stream, you won't be able to see directly in front of you so your vision is blocked which gives your opponent an opportunity to counter without your knowing

CREATIVE USES

• You could create several clones to shoot water at your opponent so it would increase the power of the lightning jutsu
• I personally would make my clone perform the Raiton jutsu so I don't have to perform the hand seals and would be aware of my surroundings

COUNTERS

• Use a C-Rank or higher Fuuton jutsu that blows a gust of wind but covers a wide area

FOCUSED VERSION

After performing the 1st version of the jutsu, I get ready to perform the variation. I begin by performing the Rabbit->Dog->Boar-Ram->Rat hand seals and gathering chakra in my hands, once I gather enough chakra, I remove my sword from my back and I begin using nature transformation to change my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Once I've moulded my Raiton chakra properly, I begin releasing it through my hands in the form of lightning but I use my sword as a medium to focus where I want to direct my lightning, I then point the sword at senpais clone and release it via my sword staright at him, hitting him and making him disappear into a poof of smoke

ADVANTAGES

• Allows you to focus your lightning and gives you more accuracy
• Even though its focused, the jutsu still has a great range and is even more dangerous than the 1st variation

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to perform 5 hand seals and still remove your sword which takes a lot of time
• Because its more focused, your opponent just has to avoid being in line with your sword to avoid it

CREATIVE USES

• Create 2 clones so that 1 can throw several kunai at your opponent to distract him while you and the other clone hit him with this jutsu

COUNTERS

• Stay out of line with the sword
• If you are within short range, your opponent wouldn't be able to perform the hand seals and can't perform the jutsu



2ND JUTSU

Once I've performed both the variations of the 1st jutsu, I get ready for the 2nd jutsu. I begin by clapping both my hands together and I start to gather chakra around me, I continue gathering chakra before I begin changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra using nature transformation. Once I have gathered enough Raiton chakra, I slam both my hands on the ground and send an electrical current through the earth and straight at senpais clone. Once it reaches senpais clone, it erupts as several tentacles of lightning that attack him from several different angles

ADVANTAGES

• Has a great range for short-long distance attacks
• Allows you to hit multiple targets
• Doesn't require any hand seals
• You could also shock a target that is underground

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to slam your hands on the ground which makes your opponent aware
• If you were wet before performing this jutsu, there's a chance you could be electrocuted as well

CREATIVE USES

• I would try to use this after I wet my opponent with a Suiton jutsu

COUNTERS

• Use a Doton jutsu that would create a pillar to launch you into the air
 

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(Ah, I re-read your post. I'm sorry, that was a reading error on my part :sweat: )




"Well done. I have no further pointers as you efficiently covered them all."

"Now, this next jutsu is relatively simple. You'll raise both hands in the air and charge lightning using your chakra. Then, you'll throw down the lightning at your enemy, and it'll become a lightning bolt that will hit them. Nothing out of the ordinary."

"I have a question. If you were to counter this, when would be the best time to act?"


(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.

"The second technique in this set will have you channeling and molding lightning chakra through your palms. You'll form something that's similar to a 'whip'. I want you to give it a few swings and hit some targets. You can even electrocute what you hit! In your analysis, tell me what a whip can be used for, combat-wise."

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.

"As usual, ask questions if you have any."
 

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Lol its okay senpai, we all make mistakes



1ST JUTSU

After receiving instructions from senpai, I raise both my hands to the air and begin gathering chakra, I continue gathering chakra until I begin changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. I continue molding my Raiton chakra until it is prepared for my jutsu, once I am done with that, I begin releasing my Raiton chakra through my hands in the form of lightning bolts as I direct it at my target (you forgot to make clones xD)

ADVANTAGES

• Doesn't require any hand seals
• Since it is shot at the opponent, I doubt he will have a lot of time to avoid it

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to raise your hands which would alert your opponent you are planning something
• You shoot just a single lightning bolt so you have to be very accurate with it

CREATIVE USES

• Create a water source at your opponents feet and shoot the lightning bolt there so it would electrocute him and have more of an effect

COUNTER

• Use a C-Rank Fuuton jutsu or higher that blows a gust of wind and since its just a single bolt, it would cancel out the bolt and still continue towards your opponent

My answer to your question : I would try and counter as soon as I see him raise his hands so he wouldn't have time to gather chakra



2ND JUTSU

After performing the 1st jutsu, I walk next to senpai as I prepare for the 2nd jutsu. I begin by gathering chakra in my palms, as I continue gathering chakra, I begin using nature transformation to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Once my Raiton chakra is molded, I begin releasing it through the palms of my hands in the form of a thin long whip by using shape manipulation, I swing it a couple times before hitting a couple of trees with it

ADVANTAGES

• Can be used for attack or defence
• No hand seals required
• You could cover a wide range if you swing the whip completely in front of you

DISADVANTAGES

• You are attached to the whip while it is still active which means if you touch a water source with it, you would get electrocuted
• It wouldn't be very fast as you have to swing your hand to make it move so it can only move as fast as you can which would be bad against an opponent that is faster than you

CREATIVE USES

• Create a clone and make him do the same thing, then swing it at your opponent from opposite directions but also at different heights so he can't escape

COUNTER

• I would shoot water at my opponent to electrocute him

Whip Uses : You could use it to bind an opponent and shock him at the same time. Also you could use it to hit away small prjectiles that are thrown at you eg, kunai or mudshots
 

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"Yes. The first technique is relatively straightforward and therefore easy to predict, in terms of movements. As for the second technique, it may be harder to see where attacks are coming from due to the nature of the whip's movements, but it's slower and easier to react to. There's a very distinct difference."

"For our next set, the first jutsu has you channeling your lightning chakra through your dominant hand. An aura will radiate from your hand, forming a stream of lightning. Apply your shape manipulation into the stream and allow the end of it to transform into a dog. You'll remain attached to it by the stream, a lot like a leash of sorts. You can control where the dog runs and attacks, but you'll have to keep your focus on it. Try it, this jutsu is quite aesthetically pleasing..."


Aigis's voice strayed for a moment as she remembered a dog from her own life: a little white one that was owned by a good friend of hers. It had red eyes, and wore a collar with cute little angel wings as decorations. She smiled a little. Good times.

(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.

"The second jutsu is by far one of the best lightning techniques in this category. You'll knead lightning chakra in your mouth, and open it up, releasing a lightning spear from your mouth. This spear of lightning can be maintained through your focus, and you can even split it up into smaller spears to hit multiple targets. Fast, no handseals... elegant and efficient. Try it on those targets over there!"

"One question for you. If I split the spears, what rank will each individual spear be? So, for example, if I split the B-rank technique into two spears, what rank will each spear be?"


(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
 

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1ST JUTSU

I begin gathering chakra in my right hand, I continue gathering chakra until I begin using nature transformation to turn my raw chakra into Raiton chakra. Once my Raiton chakra is properly molded, I begin releasing it through my right hand as a stream of lightning while using shape manipulation to make the end of the lightning stream take the shape of a dog while the the rest of the lightning is still attached to my hand like a cable while maintaining my focus on controlling where the dog moves

ADVANTAGES

• You should be able to perform it quite fast since it doesn't require any hand seals
• You have complete control of where it moves as long as you maintain focus

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to focus on it at all times or else it would disperse
• If your opponent uses a Suiton attack that hits the dog, you would get electrocuted because you are still attached to it

CREATIVE USES

• Create a clone to perform the jutsu so you can focus on your opponent while your clone handles the dog and even if he gets electrocuted,it wouldn't affect you

COUNTER

• Stay out of range of the dog and use a Suiton attack so your opponent would get shocked and lose focus



2ND JUTSU

I begin gathering chakra in my mouth, I continue gathering chakra until I begin changing my raw chakra into Raiton chakra by using nature transformation. After molding my Raiton chakra completely, I begin releasing it through my mouth in the form of a spear that I split into 2 to hit the targets senpai set up for me while maintaining my focus

ADVANTAGES

• You could split it into multiple spears to hit multiple targets
• Doesn't require any hand seals so it should be quick to perform
• Has a great range which allows you to use for short-long range attacks

DISADVANTAGES

• You have to focus on the stream which leaves you open to an attack from behind
• By staying connected to the spear, you are in a desperate situation if your oppnent uses a Suiton attack

CREATIVE USES

• Create several clones to perform it at once so you could hit your oppnent from multiple angles or potentially hit more targets

COUNTER

• Shoot Suiton bullets at your opponent so you have no contact with the spear while he will get shocked and he will lose focus and the spear would go away

My answer to your question: I think it would be 2 C-Rank spears
 

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"Good, yes, it would be 2 C-ranked spears."

"This next jutsu is simple. Lightning Clones! Clones are a great strategy to use in battle. Be aware that these lightning clones can perform ONLY lightning jutsus, up to B-rank. When they are defeated, they will release a small lightning shock that may hit your opponent if they're in short range."

"For this one, instead of giving me a usual analysis, just tell me what you know about clones."

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
Aigis tossed a sheathed sword to her student.

"Give that sword a few swings, and channel lightning chakra through it. It'll become something like... a 'saber of light'. Its cutting power and vibrating frequency can be quite lethal."

"Cut up this watermelon and don't hold back!"


Aigis placed a large watermelon in front of her student.
(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
 
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