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WARNING!!: This is a long one,with only a little dialogue.
Samuel: Let us end this now!
Rodrick: Yes, let us end this useless chit-chat and get on to what we came here to do.
The three warriors rushed towards each other and their fist met in a semi-circle and created a shock wave that was visible air.Each jumped back effortless nearly 300 feet. Channeling their chakra each formed a strange seal in the palm of their hands. Small spheres of solar,lunar,and in Samuel's case twilight, chakra formed above the seals.Then, brilliant spiraling beams of gold, purple, and Grey chakra shot from their hands. They met with a thunderous boom and a large disturbance where they met as the rest of the blasts continued to move towards their finally destination. After the shock wave dissipated, Rodrick drew his katana,simultaneously Samuel drew his sword and Joseph drew a large kunai knife about the length of a saber. Rodrick was the first to act launching great waves of energy in all directions with each swing of the blade. Samuel blocked with energy burst of his own, while Joseph easily dodged the attacks with his great speed.
(words in italics are thought not spoken)
Samuel:I can already tell that at this rate, this battle will never end. Let us hold back no longer! We came here to fight to the death, and that is what I intend to do!!
Rodrick: Yes,yes,YES! I was hoping it would come to this.
Joseph: Its been well nigh a millennium since these techniques were used.
Each man pulled a small scroll from his pocket. Each one of them bit their thumbs and drew them across the faded parchment. With a long and complicated chain of hand signs that would seem strange to modern day shinobi, they executed the Summonings of Twilight. Thrusting their hands into the air above their heads the summonings were completed.(to put it into perspective, these summonings are larger than Kyuubi) Rodrick summoned a large purple griffin energy spewing from the orbs inlaid upon its shoulders. Joseph summoned a Great Phoenix, gold in color with energy pouring from every fiber of its being. Samuel summoned a large,wingless, silver dragon, with gold and black symbols and lines intricately weaving across its body to a crystal embedded into its forehead. The griffin roared and the phoenix shrieked, while the dragon remained totally silent.
Rodrick: Yolcian, show them the power of the Lunar Guardian!
Joseph: Voltarmous, bathe them in the might of the Living Star!
Samuel: Ventus, do nothing yet. They are caught in the trill of the moment, blinded by their own blood lust. Wait until they tire each other out before you fight. Until then, just try to dodge the attacks.
Ventus: Yes. Understood. If Voltarmous and Yolcian are here I see the time has finally come...
Samuel: Yes. Remember what I said, I on the other hand am going back to the fight.
Releasing incredible amounts of energy every time they collided the beasts began to fight along side their masters. Samuel rushed back into the fighting with a yell that gave a glimpse at the determination in his soul. He released another beam of chakra towards them, which they dodged and promptly returned with their own. Dodging one and splitting one down the middle with his sword he rejoined the battle.
The soldiers below were captivated by what they saw and forgot totally why they were fighting, instead turning to cheer for their respective leader. A few even quietly cheered for Samuel.
Rodrick managed a slice that connected with Joseph's right arm. He returned the action with a mighty kick to the side of his head. Their beast responded in pain. With a mighty swing Samuel sent a giant shock wave towards the two fighters, who had momentarily forgotten that he was there. The three resumed the battle, with explosions rippling through the air as common as a breath was taken.
As their fighting intensified, so did their beasts'. Voltarmous released a great breath of fire and Yolcian countered with a blast of pulsating waves. Ventus remained totally still.
Samuel drew his blade quickly behind him to block Joseph's saber. With a spinning motion, he executed a slash that caught both across the chest, at the price of taking to blast at close range. Each man separated and jumped back several hundred feet towards their Summoning.
Voltarmous and Yolcian roared.
Rodrick: It's time....
Joseph: That we step this up a notch!!
Ventus: Is this why you had me stay out of the fight?
Samuel: Yes, for this reason exactly.
The beasts and their masters started to glow white as they began to move towards each other....and merge into one being, never to be separated. The last move of a desperate ninja in war.
Rodrick altered his form when he merged with Yolcian. His helmet resembled that of a screeching eagle and his arms and legs became more heavily armored, long claws graceing the ends of his fist and feet.
Joseph's formed changed as well. His wings and body burst into brilliantly bright flames as well as overlapping armor plates formed on his arms, legs, and chest and a closed helm resembling Voltrarmous' head formed around his.
Samuel's transformation was spectacular. Gauntlets formed on his arms while the rest of his body was encased in a suit of armor that shone and sparkled. At the joints, was reinforced chain mail. This armor would not restrict his movements. His physical form did not alter as much, because he and Ventus fused their consciousness', not their bodies. An advantage neither Joseph or Rodrick knew about.
Samuel: This will be the last pause in our battle, I suspect.
Joseph: Your right.
Rodrick: Let us end this fight!
Each man rushed toward the other with their swords raised. This scene would be painted and talked about many times in the Village of Twilight throughout history.
Their blades connected with a giant explosion, showing their new found strength, and sending a shower of billions of sparks down below to earth; the three had unconsciously wandered to the outer reaches of the atmosphere, and were beginning there descent during the battle.Each man yelled and stuck the other, with only one thought in mind: Finish the battle. With a millisecond pause, each man channeled all his power into his blade and released it upon impact with the others. The blast knocked all three of them semi-conscious and sent them all hurling back to Earth. They landed with a bone shattering crunch. Each man stood in the deserted battle field; the soldiers had left, this battle had taken place for nearly five hours.
Joseph: I...won't....die.... not will there is still a battle to be fought...
Rodrick: As....long...as you live...I won't...give up....
Samuel: Let us rest in peace....brothers.
Joseph and Rodrick: Hmm?
Joseph: You....don't...intend...
Rodrick: To use... that jutsu...do you?
Samuel: Yes....yes, I do.
Joseph and Rodrick just sat down, knowing that none of them would walk away from this battle alive.
Samuel made a slight cut in each of his palms and then threw his sword in the middle of the three of them. It landed straight up.
He slowly began a long and complicated set of 1,000 hand signs. Each man simply talking about the old days.
Rodrick: Remember, when Joey fell off the Bank and we found him four floors down, hanging by his underwear? (laughs)
Joseph: Hey, you had your own embarrassing moments to if I re-call. Didn't you get talked in to trying on clothes for your girlfriend when she broke her foot and you had to try on a bathing suit??
(They all laughed at this)
Rodrick: Little Sammy over there...(chuckles)
Joseph: Yeah...(laughs). You were setting off fire works and accidentally burned all your hair off back when you were 16. Now that was hilarious.
Samuel ran his hand through his now bloodstained white hair.
Samuel: Yeah...I remember that.
Each man laughed. Joseph and Rodrick closed their eyes.
Rodrick: Go ahead. I'm ready.
Joseph: Me too.
Samuel: Okay.... Hey. Thanks for making this last moment like the old days.
Joseph and Rodrick just smiled.
Samuel:... Twilight style: Ultimate Desolation.
An incredibly large octagonal seal formed around the three brothers. Each one was encased in a pillar of light shooting from the circle formed around them. Normally a Desolation would only effect the enemies and not the user and his allies. This was the ultimate Desolation though. The last resort Jutsu.
A blinding pillar of light shot down from the eclipsed sun... After the blast, stood a crater. In the middle of the crater was the only surviving objects: Samuel's sword,and three necklaces that when put together formed a perfect circle with one phrase engraved in the center: Cherish you brothers, son.
Keotsu woke up from the dream. It was about the history of the battle that ended up forming the Twilight village. It was always so vivid. He collected his things, payed the tab and walked out of the Inn.
End of Prologue.
Tell me what you think. I'll start on chapter 1 soon.
(P.S. I'm not sure yet, but I might call the main story Eclipse of Legends. So if Dusking Eclipse doesn't reappear, it'll be under that name.)
Samuel: Let us end this now!
Rodrick: Yes, let us end this useless chit-chat and get on to what we came here to do.
The three warriors rushed towards each other and their fist met in a semi-circle and created a shock wave that was visible air.Each jumped back effortless nearly 300 feet. Channeling their chakra each formed a strange seal in the palm of their hands. Small spheres of solar,lunar,and in Samuel's case twilight, chakra formed above the seals.Then, brilliant spiraling beams of gold, purple, and Grey chakra shot from their hands. They met with a thunderous boom and a large disturbance where they met as the rest of the blasts continued to move towards their finally destination. After the shock wave dissipated, Rodrick drew his katana,simultaneously Samuel drew his sword and Joseph drew a large kunai knife about the length of a saber. Rodrick was the first to act launching great waves of energy in all directions with each swing of the blade. Samuel blocked with energy burst of his own, while Joseph easily dodged the attacks with his great speed.
(words in italics are thought not spoken)
Samuel:I can already tell that at this rate, this battle will never end. Let us hold back no longer! We came here to fight to the death, and that is what I intend to do!!
Rodrick: Yes,yes,YES! I was hoping it would come to this.
Joseph: Its been well nigh a millennium since these techniques were used.
Each man pulled a small scroll from his pocket. Each one of them bit their thumbs and drew them across the faded parchment. With a long and complicated chain of hand signs that would seem strange to modern day shinobi, they executed the Summonings of Twilight. Thrusting their hands into the air above their heads the summonings were completed.(to put it into perspective, these summonings are larger than Kyuubi) Rodrick summoned a large purple griffin energy spewing from the orbs inlaid upon its shoulders. Joseph summoned a Great Phoenix, gold in color with energy pouring from every fiber of its being. Samuel summoned a large,wingless, silver dragon, with gold and black symbols and lines intricately weaving across its body to a crystal embedded into its forehead. The griffin roared and the phoenix shrieked, while the dragon remained totally silent.
Rodrick: Yolcian, show them the power of the Lunar Guardian!
Joseph: Voltarmous, bathe them in the might of the Living Star!
Samuel: Ventus, do nothing yet. They are caught in the trill of the moment, blinded by their own blood lust. Wait until they tire each other out before you fight. Until then, just try to dodge the attacks.
Ventus: Yes. Understood. If Voltarmous and Yolcian are here I see the time has finally come...
Samuel: Yes. Remember what I said, I on the other hand am going back to the fight.
Releasing incredible amounts of energy every time they collided the beasts began to fight along side their masters. Samuel rushed back into the fighting with a yell that gave a glimpse at the determination in his soul. He released another beam of chakra towards them, which they dodged and promptly returned with their own. Dodging one and splitting one down the middle with his sword he rejoined the battle.
The soldiers below were captivated by what they saw and forgot totally why they were fighting, instead turning to cheer for their respective leader. A few even quietly cheered for Samuel.
Rodrick managed a slice that connected with Joseph's right arm. He returned the action with a mighty kick to the side of his head. Their beast responded in pain. With a mighty swing Samuel sent a giant shock wave towards the two fighters, who had momentarily forgotten that he was there. The three resumed the battle, with explosions rippling through the air as common as a breath was taken.
As their fighting intensified, so did their beasts'. Voltarmous released a great breath of fire and Yolcian countered with a blast of pulsating waves. Ventus remained totally still.
Samuel drew his blade quickly behind him to block Joseph's saber. With a spinning motion, he executed a slash that caught both across the chest, at the price of taking to blast at close range. Each man separated and jumped back several hundred feet towards their Summoning.
Voltarmous and Yolcian roared.
Rodrick: It's time....
Joseph: That we step this up a notch!!
Ventus: Is this why you had me stay out of the fight?
Samuel: Yes, for this reason exactly.
The beasts and their masters started to glow white as they began to move towards each other....and merge into one being, never to be separated. The last move of a desperate ninja in war.
Rodrick altered his form when he merged with Yolcian. His helmet resembled that of a screeching eagle and his arms and legs became more heavily armored, long claws graceing the ends of his fist and feet.
Joseph's formed changed as well. His wings and body burst into brilliantly bright flames as well as overlapping armor plates formed on his arms, legs, and chest and a closed helm resembling Voltrarmous' head formed around his.
Samuel's transformation was spectacular. Gauntlets formed on his arms while the rest of his body was encased in a suit of armor that shone and sparkled. At the joints, was reinforced chain mail. This armor would not restrict his movements. His physical form did not alter as much, because he and Ventus fused their consciousness', not their bodies. An advantage neither Joseph or Rodrick knew about.
Samuel: This will be the last pause in our battle, I suspect.
Joseph: Your right.
Rodrick: Let us end this fight!
Each man rushed toward the other with their swords raised. This scene would be painted and talked about many times in the Village of Twilight throughout history.
Their blades connected with a giant explosion, showing their new found strength, and sending a shower of billions of sparks down below to earth; the three had unconsciously wandered to the outer reaches of the atmosphere, and were beginning there descent during the battle.Each man yelled and stuck the other, with only one thought in mind: Finish the battle. With a millisecond pause, each man channeled all his power into his blade and released it upon impact with the others. The blast knocked all three of them semi-conscious and sent them all hurling back to Earth. They landed with a bone shattering crunch. Each man stood in the deserted battle field; the soldiers had left, this battle had taken place for nearly five hours.
Joseph: I...won't....die.... not will there is still a battle to be fought...
Rodrick: As....long...as you live...I won't...give up....
Samuel: Let us rest in peace....brothers.
Joseph and Rodrick: Hmm?
Joseph: You....don't...intend...
Rodrick: To use... that jutsu...do you?
Samuel: Yes....yes, I do.
Joseph and Rodrick just sat down, knowing that none of them would walk away from this battle alive.
Samuel made a slight cut in each of his palms and then threw his sword in the middle of the three of them. It landed straight up.
He slowly began a long and complicated set of 1,000 hand signs. Each man simply talking about the old days.
Rodrick: Remember, when Joey fell off the Bank and we found him four floors down, hanging by his underwear? (laughs)
Joseph: Hey, you had your own embarrassing moments to if I re-call. Didn't you get talked in to trying on clothes for your girlfriend when she broke her foot and you had to try on a bathing suit??
(They all laughed at this)
Rodrick: Little Sammy over there...(chuckles)
Joseph: Yeah...(laughs). You were setting off fire works and accidentally burned all your hair off back when you were 16. Now that was hilarious.
Samuel ran his hand through his now bloodstained white hair.
Samuel: Yeah...I remember that.
Each man laughed. Joseph and Rodrick closed their eyes.
Rodrick: Go ahead. I'm ready.
Joseph: Me too.
Samuel: Okay.... Hey. Thanks for making this last moment like the old days.
Joseph and Rodrick just smiled.
Samuel:... Twilight style: Ultimate Desolation.
An incredibly large octagonal seal formed around the three brothers. Each one was encased in a pillar of light shooting from the circle formed around them. Normally a Desolation would only effect the enemies and not the user and his allies. This was the ultimate Desolation though. The last resort Jutsu.
A blinding pillar of light shot down from the eclipsed sun... After the blast, stood a crater. In the middle of the crater was the only surviving objects: Samuel's sword,and three necklaces that when put together formed a perfect circle with one phrase engraved in the center: Cherish you brothers, son.
Keotsu woke up from the dream. It was about the history of the battle that ended up forming the Twilight village. It was always so vivid. He collected his things, payed the tab and walked out of the Inn.
End of Prologue.
Tell me what you think. I'll start on chapter 1 soon.
(P.S. I'm not sure yet, but I might call the main story Eclipse of Legends. So if Dusking Eclipse doesn't reappear, it'll be under that name.)
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