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Chapter 14 coming soon!
[size=+2] Chapter 13: Beast Awakening
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As Naruto rushed towards Keotsu, and he started to block his kunai, Keotsu's shattered in his hands due to the enormous strength from the Red Cloak. "Ugh...What is that power?" asked Keotsu. Just as an answer to his question, a strange thing happened to Naruto.
Naruto roared. Keotsu looked at Naruto and saw what looked like a fourth tail appear. Then, Naruto's flesh started to rip away. "What is going on here?!" yelled Keotsu to Naruto with no response. "Light style: Solar Burst!" yelled Keotsu. In no time at all Naruto had dodged the blast and was standing in front of Keotsu. He could smell boiling blood...
Keotsu saw a large, red hand come out of nowhere and it hit him. It felt like a house had smashed into his rib cage. He smashed into a rock and nearly fell uncouncious; blood was pouring from his chest. "Naruto! Stop!" yelled the old man who had just appeared. Naruto roared. "Ugh..." said the old man has he took out a slip of paper. He placed it in his hand and then said, "Rasengan!" as he launched towards Naruto.
By this time, Naruto had already formed a large Rasengan with a red aura around it. He deflected the old man's technique easily and then four of the hands smashed into his chest. The slip of paper flew into the air. Keotsu saw a figure in a tattered brown cloak catch the slip and force it on Naruto's head, expertly dodging each attack. Keotsu fell unconscious.
Jiraiya awoke quickly and looked around. Naruto was sleeping soundly, his wounds being healed by the strange man. The boy he reckognized as Keotsu was sitting up against the wall asleep with blood-stained bandages striped across his chest. He looked at his own chest and saw he was the own way. "Don't. Your not fully healed yet..." said the strange man, wearing and ANBU mask, without looking up. "Who are you?" asked Jiraiya.
"Who are you?" asked the old man as Keotsu awoke. "Your awake, I see..." said the man. "HERO?" asked Keotsu. (HERO means: Hidden Espionage and Reconnaissance Organization; the Twilight's equivalent of ANBU) "Yes." he replied and then turned back to healing Naruto.
After a few hours of resting Keotsu finally started to talk to the strange man now that the old man was asleep. "Who is he?" he asked. "The old man is Jiraiya, a Sannin, and the boy is Naruto Uzamaki." said the man. "Naruto... Sir, may I ask you a question?" asked Keotsu. "The answer is yes. I already know what your going to ask. You want me to come back to Konoha." said the man.
"If I may...Who are you?" asked Keotsu. "I'm disappointed... I was hoping you would recognize me by my voice..." the man said as he took off his mask.
Keotsu gasped. "Dad!"
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