Dreams

[Vayne]

Under the starlit moon
Gazing upon the stars
Dreams seem so close yet so far
Un-attainable like stars in the sky
Reachable only by sacrifice
Gainable only by betrayal*

Give me your opinion

 

[Punk Hazard]

its ok

 

[Vayne]

Thanks rate it please

 

[Scooby Doo]

Shouldnt you take more time to write these?

 

[Vayne]

Shouldnt you take more time to write these?

Why I am a bit inspires right now

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Under the starlit moon
Gazing upon the stars
Dreams seem so close yet so far
Un-attainable like stars in the sky
Reachable only by sacrifice
Gainable only by betrayal*

Give me your opinion

As one who also enjoys reading and wrighting short poetry i have to say your pretty good I think your gonna get alot of rep from me haha.+Rep

 

[Scooby Doo]

Why I am a bit inspires right now

Ok then just maybe if you take more time you'll make them even better

 

[Vayne]

Well I am always open for crritiscm