drawing My Style

[Hazure]

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I did this drawing today during D.E.A.R (Drop Everything And Read) at school! In my eyes eyes it bears a small resemblence to Ichigo Kurasaki from Bleach, but thats just me

Tell me what you think! Anything that could help me improve it would be appreciated ^_^ (and i don't need advice on how to take the pic, i am sorry if it did turn out tiltedish.......hehehe)

 

[Caliburn]

Not bad, but you could turn the picture next timexd.

You should draw more shades, that gives more life to the picture. Also you need to draw more hair or go a couple of times over the same hair, like you did with the rest of the drawing.
It seems you jusd did one pencil stroke with those 'sharkfin'-like hair locks and it doesn't fit with the rest of the drawing, just go over them multiple times just like you did with the rest.

 

[Lara]

lol i dont think i can add anything else to what caliburn said XD

anyways it's pretty good ^^ keep exercising

 

[Ryu-kun]

You hv improve much i can say ^^ the best part is around the lower part of the eyes *thumbs up*,you need to improv for natural hairflow,shading and the eyes(i kno its hard,even i took a while to get it done,altho i stil havent masterd side profile)