Dragon Ball Z: A Saiyans Pride Chapter 1

[-Broly-]

*senses ss3 gohan*
Lol this is gonna be awesome I can't wait to see what you do with Vegeta and Goku

 

[Zatanna]

First, Best opening every. Most amazing music.

Second I tried to read the narrators voice as himself. he was awesome.

And awesome story! was actually cool, and funny as well XD. Cant wait for the next bit!

 

[BlacKing]

To be honest dude that was the one thing holding up my posting xD I literally sat there looking over old Vegeta quotes to gain an understanding of what he would probably say. I tried my best though. Btw thanks for the criticism I will try to post pictures of them in my next chapter, or even edit this one a bit to add the pics.

It has to be that name >_< Be prepared for more plot twists in the next chapter

Vegeta:

*arms folded* Why... isn't it yet another over powered cotton candy freak and his sidekick gargoyle.

*Places his left arm on his right shoulder while moving it up and down as if stretching* I've grown quite tired of the peace and quite these past few years anyway.

*Alternating arms and shoulders, Vegeta looks at Gohan out the corner of his eyes* I can tell just by looking at you that instead of training you've had your head in books again. Your current skill and power level is barely above that of Trunks, and the boy's eight.


^ That is Vegeta. U_U

 

[Shinta]

OMG @_@

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Pretty much this ^


Dude, the characters so far seems pretty accurate. The story is compelling and I can't wait to see where you are going with the story :crazy: