[Doton] Doton with Toku Sensei !!

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Kladara slowly started to think about a big tremor shaking the whole training field . This made him more cautious , and more confident on mastering Doton . He then slowly started to focus chakra on his both palms . When he felt he added a fair amount , he quickly slammed his palms on the ground and released the chakra on the ground . After a few seconds , the ground shaked a little , then shaked more and more , until the clone lost balance and fell down .
 

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Okay .

As Kladara performs the technique , the ground shakes , and so the clone unbalances and is barely standing . He then gathered earth charka , focused it on his hands and slammed them in the ground . Beneath the unbalanced opponent , some deadly spikes were slowly growing . They crushed the clone's legs , resulting his disapparance ... !

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
 

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Okay , to defend against this I'd like to show two variants .

The first one

Kladara as he notices the the clone performs the technique , quickly creatas a decent pillar with a fair amount of chakra which would help him to jump . (This most likely is unacceptable imo)

The 2nd one .

Kladara as soon as he sees the clone performing the tech , quickly slams his palms on the ground , focusing and releasing the same amount of chakra every time . Doing this , the tremors of the opponent were quickly being neutralized .
 

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The first one Kladara as he notices the the clone performs the technique , quickly creatas a decent pillar with a fair amount of chakra which would help him to jump . (This most likely is unacceptable imo) The 2nd one . Kladara as soon as he sees the clone performing the tech , quickly slams his palms on the ground , focusing and releasing the same amount of chakra every time . Doing this , the tremors of the opponent
 

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So we meet again y_U

Guess the defense will be my weakness forever . I know i need Raiton chakra to somehow neutralize it , but i haven't learned yet to control Raiton ...
 

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Well in my Raiton training , I have started to do a lighting bolt , but I think that's not enough . I think I need a lot of Raiton chakra to actually rival a C-Rank Doton .

Katon - none yet
Fuuton - Currently learning to control the wind chakra
Suiton - None yet
 

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then try using earth...you can always fall forward and slam your hands down raising a pillar to raise you up away from danger then follow it up with an attack...
 

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Kladara weaved through handseals and performed the jutsu to create 3 pillars from the surface of the earth . One pillar 1 m , the other 3 m and the other 5 m . By this he would have it more easy to jump high . He released a high amount of chakra on them , just becuse to make sure from the tremors their chakra not to get disturbed . As soon as the clone performed the jutsu of tremors , Kladara quickly jumped on the three of them and jumped very high , which where he would have time to perform another jutsu to throw many rocks on the clone and damage him , thus making him lose controll . By this , the tremors stopped and he killed the clone .




(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

( Doton: Iwa Rendan ) - Earth Release: Rock Barrage
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their arm and then release their chakra creating a ring of rocks that are then flung at the opponent.
 

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great. moving on...

(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

...for this technique gather your earth chakra into your mouth and release it as a globule of mud...

One/three advantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
 

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One/three advantages:

1. If you aim correctly , you can damage the foe badly .
2. Can be used on short mid range , which usually these ranges are mostly used .
3. Can be used on any terren , and you can also create patches of earths if there isn't any earth source .

One/three disadvantages:

1. Lacks rong range
2. If you cannot aim correctly , you cannot react to the opponent attacks .
3. It can be dodged with a little effort .
 

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After coming up with an idea , Kladara slammed his palms and created few spikes beneath his opponent . This made the latter , not only get distracted , but not to have enough time to react too . Benefitting from this , while running , Kladara gathered enough chakra on his mouth and forcibly released his focused chakra in the form of a globule , which severely damaged the clone's face .

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.
 

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After Toku creating the next clone , Kladara quickly jumped back , just to make sure his range between the new clone and him is a long one . The clone immediately started to focus chakra , and Kladara was gathering chakra too . When the clone started running while still focusing the chakra on hsi mouth , Kladara quickly slammed his hands on the ground and released his focused chakra onto it . After a few moments , a few tremors shaked the training field , making the clone lose focus and letting his chakra get out of controll , thus exploding on his mouth and killing him .


(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
 

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**it wouldn't explode in his mouth but you could make him lose balance and mess up his aim...xDlol

moving on...

(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A (up to 60)
Descripton: The user will do one hand seal and cause nearby earth structures (either natural occurring ones on the field (such as cave ceilings, cliffs, etc), man made (buildings, etc) or jutsu made (up to C-Rank active structures)) to collapse and fall. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock and dislodge any vulnerable or sensitive spots, causing the structure to collapse. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside. The damage depends on the size of the cavern or rock lodging above or nearby the target and not on the amount of chakra used which doesn't need to be high. A large cave with a thick ceiling can easily do the physical damage equivalent to an A-Rank technique but due to the damage not being focused or chakra fueled, its also easily defendable.

...for this technique gather your earth chakra and release it into an already formed structure and dislodge any weak points it has to crush a target...

One/three advantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
 
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