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[Better]

Awesome, do you not like training?

I'm guessing you don't know ninjutsu yet?

(Doton: Hokoriheki no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Dust Wall Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the ground and with a wave of their arm or through the application of a weapon can cause a small wall of dust particles and sand to rise up from the ground and thrusting forwards. This technique can be used to push back enemy targets or defend against thrown projectiles.

I want you to manipulate your chakra and release it into the ground, then wave your arm and manipulate to form a small wall of gust up and send it towards my clone.

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( Doton: Rokkuhanmā ) - Earth Release: Rock Hammer
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and creates a huge rock from the ground that will rise up, hammering the opponent by slamming it down from above them.

I want you to manipulate your chakra and create a huge rock from the ground that rises up, and then hammer it on my clone that you just distracted with the dust.

(creates clone

 

[Yveltal]

Its not that i don't like training , its just that its sooooo long and I procrastinate a lot .__. and yes i havent learned any ninjutsu

*I gather my doton chakra and then channel it into the earth beneath me. i then concentrate and wave my arms upawards causing dust particles to rise from the ground. I then manipulate the dust particles; shaping it into a wall. I with another hand gesture, I send the dust wall at your clone.*

*As your clone is distracted by my dust wall. I gather my doton chakra and channel it into the ground. I then manipulate the earth and mold pieces of it to create a large rock. I then lift the large rock into the air above your clone and hammer it down onto your clone*

 

[Better]

You are right it is long ._. lol Well hopefully we will finish soon xD

( Doton: Iwa Dangan ) - Earth Release: Rock Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulating their chakra creates and sends a huge rock at the opponent, causing them to fall back.

I want you to manipulate your chakra and create and send a huge rock at my clone, this will hit him and send him back.

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( Doton: Jōshō Iwa ) - Earth Release: Rising Rocks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user claps their hands together and then unleashes two huge rocks from the ground on either side of the enemy to send the opponent flying backwards.

I want you to clap your hands together and then unleash two giant rocks from the ground on either side of my clone, you choose. Then hit them with it to send them flying backwards.

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( Doton: Gizagiza no Iwajin ) - Earth Release: Jagged Rock Formation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and stomps the ground. By doing so, he causes small fractures to rip through the ground, which will then force fragments of earth and rock to rise up from the ground like protruding rock formations to then deal blunt force damage to the opponent and raising them up into the air.

I want you to manipulate your chakra and then stomp the ground. Then the ground will start having small fractures to through the ground, which will make bits and pieces of earth and rock rise up like protruding rock formations to then hit my clone with blunt force and then causing my clone to raise into the air.

 

[Yveltal]

O__O how many until B-rank?

*I concentrate and gather my doton chakra and then channel it into the earth beneath me. I then manipulate the particles of the earth and combine it to form a huge rock. I then launch the rock straight at your clone. The rock hits your clone in the chest and sends him flying back.*

* I start by gathering my doton chakra and then channeling it into the ground. I then clap my hands to together and cause the earth to combine and form two large rocks, one on each side of your clone. I then cause the first rock on the right side of your clone to strike him him sending him towards the other rock. I then cause that one to strike your clone, thus redirecting your clone back to the right side.*

* I concentrate and gather up my doton chakra and then channel it into my right foot. I then lift up my right feet and stomp onto the ground releasing all that built up chakra into the earth. This causes fractures in the earth and particles from the earth to come out. I then manipulate the earth particles to fly towards your clone. The particles continually strike your clone in the chest, sending him flying. With a hand gesture i cause the particles to strike your clone into the air.*

 

[Better]

B ranks

(Doton: Iwa Bunshin) - Earth Release: Rock Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates their clone out of stone. Unlike other types of clones the rock clones don’t disappear after being defeated but rather crumble like rubble. These clones can also be used to create a clone of other people than themselves but do not take on the abilities of the copied person.

I want to use the stones and create a clone of you, this clone can't use any techniques it can only do free form fighting.

 

[Yveltal]

YOSH!!!

*I begin by concentrating and picturing myself in my head. I then channel doton chakra into the earth. I then manipulate the rocks in the earth to rise and form together. I then shape it into a an exact replica of myself.*

 

[Better]

Oi, Oi, Oi four lines ~_~

(Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.

I want you to release your earth chakra and create a shelter where you can take in for protection and can be used for observation.


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(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user creates a dome of earth, which protects them from external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls. That creates a half face dome.

I want you to the same thing as before but this time make it a dome.

 

[Yveltal]

Well I pretty much BS my through this technique

*I begin by gathering my doton chakra and then channeling it into the surrounding earth infront. I then manipulate different sections of the earth to protrude out multiple square shaped walls to surround me. I then create a few openings to view my whats in front of me.*

*I concentrate and begin by gathering my doton chakra and then channeling it into the surrounding earth. I then concentrate and manipulate the surrounding earth to move out place from the ground and rise a few feet into the air and curve above me and back into the ground, forming a sturdy dome like structure.*

 

[Better]

these are b ranks, should be a lot easier.

(Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40
Description: This jutsu is basically a widespread version of the Mudshot Technique; allowing the user to fire at multiple targets.

simple, do mudshot, and then do it multiple times xD

(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

Form the handseals, and create and ride a wave of earth, this tech can manipulate the terrain and trap the target.

 

[Yveltal]

Teach me those earth CJs please!!! Also how come you didn't submit the other one, the one where the user turns the earth into liquid earth, was that one bad?

* I start by concentrating and gathering my doton chakra, then channeling it. into my throat. I then begin to mold the properties of the chakra, giving it shape, form, and texture, thus turning it into mud. I then begin to rapidly spit out multiple shots of mud one by on at nearby trees.*

* I begin by gathering my doton chakra and then channeling it into the surrounding earth. I then perform the following hand seals, Rat → Snake → Tiger. Once the hand seals are performed, I cause sections of the earth to rise up, picking me up into the air. I then manipulate the earth to cruise through the area as if it where a wave,*

 

[Better]

No i want to submit my own cjs xD lol Plus it didn't fit my taste lol

I will teach you obviously when they are approved.

(Doton: Doro Ookami) - Earth Release: Mud Wolves
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per reformed wolf)
Damage points: 10 damage per wolf attack
Description: A trap technique in which the user will place somewhere and is activated upon contact with the opponent's chakra. The user uses a scroll to lay the trap in which releases mud that forms into the shape of wolves that will attack the enemy target/s. Despite being damaged the wolves can reform which can keep the enemy occupied to allow the enemy make a getaway. (Can only create a maximum of 3 mud wolves)
Note: Takes one turn to set the trap up and wolves only last two turns

take this scroll *throws scroll* and then when my clone triggers it and it will release mud that forms into wolves taht will attack my clone.

(creates clone)

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(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

I want you to focus your chakra and manipulate the stones around you coat your self in a stone armor.

 

[Yveltal]

Kobe :leaf: sike nah, i dont even watch basketball <.<

*I set the scroll and cover it with dirt. I then hide behind some trees and wait for your clone to trigger it. As your clone steps on the scroll, I use my doton chakra to cause the scroll to start releasing mud that then form 3 wolves. The wolves then pounce on your clone biting different parts of his body.*

I think I did that wrong o__o

*I concentrate and gather my doton chakra and then channel it into the ground. I then cause particles of the ground to protrude out the ground. I then control the particles to begin coating me head to toe, thus forming an armor made of earth*

Q: Is there a technique that allows you to where the armor and then skate on the ground and tackle your opponent?

 

[Better]

you did it right

i don't think so, this is the tech

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Doton Kekkai: Dorō Dōmu) - Earth Style Barrier: Earth Prison of Magnificent Nothingness
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (+10 chakra each turn the opponent is inside the dome)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user overturns the earth, causing it to rise up around his opponent(s). Then, by placing his/her hands against the dome, the user is able to drain out the chakra from the people trapped inside and absorb it into their own body. At the same time, the user will use their own chakra to spread throughout the dome. This allows the user to repair any damage their opponent(s) manage to inflict on the inside.

Slam your hands on the ground, release your doton chakra into it and cause the earth to overturn itself and rise up around my clone. Then put your hands on the dome and drain out the chakra from my clone. If you remember that Sound 4 guy did this to the Sasuke retrieval team. (big dude orange hair <_<)

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(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

Form the snake hand seal, and channel your chakra throughout your body, this will harden your skin to steel like quality. Remember Kakazu tech when his arm and face turned black? This is it. Bad thing tho, you become more susceptible to Raiton.

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(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.

Slam your hands onto the ground, release your gathered doton chakra and have rocks rise up and jag my clone from underneath.

(Creates Clone)

 

[Yveltal]

*I start by gathering my doton chakra and then slamming my hands onto the ground; thus channeling doton chakra into the earth. I then cause the earth around your clone to overturn itself and rise from the ground forming a dome like structure, trapping your clone inside. I then place my right arm onto the dome, and drain the chakra inside your clone, causing him to disperse.*

* I concentrate and gather my doton chakra and then channel it throughout my body. I then perform the Snake hand seal, causing the chakra inside my body to effect the physical property of my body, thus hardening and turning my skin black.*

* I gather my doton chakra and then slam my hand onto the ground, thus releasing my doton chakra into the ground. I then manipulate the rocks on earth and underneath your clone to rise up and jag your clone all around his body, the sharp edges of some of the rocks cutting him.*

 

[Better]

(Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

focus your chakra and create an opening in the sky, in it you will cause a large amount of mud to fall down and cover my clone.

(creates clone)

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(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

I want you to summon a large lid high up in the sky, remember this lid isn't flat, it's more concave the a lid, so it won't squish your opponent just trap them inside.

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(Doton: KageBunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a shadow clone made of mud of the user. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mould itself back to its original shape. After reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place. The user can create upto three clones. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

Create a clone of yourself like you did before, but do this one better, since this one is made of mud, you use mud instead of stone. Remember it can only use up to C rank Earth.