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Perform the technique:I begin sending my doton chakra intothe ground , breaking the earth down into sediments that ,making myself sink into the earth as I go down , into the earth. I start traveling through the earth towards your clone , silently & quickly no earth is moving at all , I then travel straight upwards right under neath your clone as I take a step back to appear behind your clone when i come up , I then come up from the earth as i come up behind your clone as I put your clone in a chokehold.
Creative uses/strengths:Good way to evade techniques , & also a very good way sneak up on an un expecting enemy.
Drawbacks/counters:Uhm , cant sensors sense you underground ?
 

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Perform the technique:I begin sending my doton chakra intothe ground , breaking the earth down into sediments that ,making myself sink into the earth as I go down , into the earth. I start traveling through the earth towards your clone , silently & quickly no earth is moving at all , I then travel straight upwards right under neath your clone as I take a step back to appear behind your clone when i come up , I then come up from the earth as i come up behind your clone as I put your clone in a chokehold.
Creative uses/strengths:Good way to evade techniques , & also a very good way sneak up on an un expecting enemy.
Drawbacks/counters:Uhm , cant sensors sense you underground ?
Yes, they can. A nice strategy is if you use this when there's a huge technique coming your way (fire, wind or water) and scream. While you scream, you use the technique to hide a little by little into the ground, causing a echo that will make your opponent think you're dying slowly.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

Quite the easy one, self-exploration.
 

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Perform the technique:Aya begins sending her earth chakra through the ground as she uses shape manipulation to create medium sized stone spikes that slowly start rising from the earth due , to aya not being use to this technique , she concentrates as she sends the spikes inward to meet at a point
Creative uses/strengths:goood way to distract a opponenet while you use another jutsu in the mean time.
Drawbacks/counters:can be easily avoided by a c rank wind attack or a d rank lightning
 

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Perform the technique:Aya begins sending her earth chakra through the ground as she uses shape manipulation to create medium sized stone spikes that slowly start rising from the earth due , to aya not being use to this technique , she concentrates as she sends the spikes inward to meet at a point
Creative uses/strengths:goood way to distract a opponenet while you use another jutsu in the mean time.
Drawbacks/counters:can be easily avoided by a c rank wind attack or a d rank lightning
It's hard to read, try to use the '''' and stuff, or just copy paste the template, unless you're on your phone :p

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

If you have any questions on the technique's, then please do ask them.
 

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[B]Perform the technique:[/B]
[B]Creative uses/strengths:[/B]
[B]Drawbacks/counters:[/B]

Perform the technique:Aya places her hand on the ground as she sends her chakra through the earth , she sends more & more , Disrupting the balance and causing it to crack & break apart , it also causes a small earthquake , shaking it back & forth
Creative uses/strengths:Good to stop a technique that you cant block & overall a good technique to use its quick & easy
Drawbacks/counters:Uhm , setting yourself up for lightning based attacks that can go through the ground
 
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I'd actually want you to use this template, please;
  • Brief description of how you perform the technique;
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);
  • Limitations of the technique;
  • How to counter the technique;
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[list][*]Brief description of how you perform the technique;

[*]How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);

[*]Limitations of the technique;

[*]How to counter the technique;[/list]
MORE DESCRIPTION! You can negate this technique by simply letting lightning chakra run trough your complete body that'll eventually also travel trough the ground negating the chakra that's causing the magnitude.

(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.
 

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Brief description of how you perform the technique; Aya begins by sending earth chakra from her stomach to her mouth as she mixes the chakra inside her body so that its a liquid when performing the technique , She then spits out a liquid of mud towards a clone that gets in there eyes , and gets on the ground making it very sticky.
How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc); Its good to use as a distraction technique , or to get you out a tough situation
Limitations of the technique;it only goes to mid range unfortunately
How to counter the technique;Having lightning chakra around you should do it , or block it with a equivalent wind attack
 

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Brief description of how you perform the technique; Aya begins by sending earth chakra from her stomach to her mouth as she mixes the chakra inside her body so that its a liquid when performing the technique , She then spits out a liquid of mud towards a clone that gets in there eyes , and gets on the ground making it very sticky.
How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc); Its good to use as a distraction technique , or to get you out a tough situation
Limitations of the technique;it only goes to mid range unfortunately
How to counter the technique;Having lightning chakra around you should do it , or block it with a equivalent wind attack
Or, use wind to redirect it at your opponent. Nice, your putting more effort into it, nice! Try using wikia, to see the technique's picture or description, or see in which episode/chapter it get's used to get the hang of it, but don't copy paste!;

(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.
 

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[*]Brief description of how you perform the technique;
Aya sends doton chakra through out her right arm ending up in her palms as she touches a cliff surface , Sending her chakra throught the whole cliff she uses her chakra to sculpt out rocks from there stand still spot to loosen them so that they fall from there place in a wild & uncontrollable manner.

[*]How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);Good to use to make a barrier while you perform a long handseal jutsu or just in general of catching an opponent offguard forcing them to block the rocks
[*]Limitations of the technique; only works with rocks that are high like a cliff or a caves ceiling etc
[*]How to counter the technique;You can simply use a strong wind attack to blow the rocks away from you or use lightning to obstruct the rocks by cutting them
 

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[*]Brief description of how you perform the technique;
Aya sends doton chakra through out her right arm ending up in her palms as she touches a cliff surface , Sending her chakra throught the whole cliff she uses her chakra to sculpt out rocks from there stand still spot to loosen them so that they fall from there place in a wild & uncontrollable manner.

[*]How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);Good to use to make a barrier while you perform a long handseal jutsu or just in general of catching an opponent offguard forcing them to block the rocks
[*]Limitations of the technique; only works with rocks that are high like a cliff or a caves ceiling etc
[*]How to counter the technique;You can simply use a strong wind attack to blow the rocks away from you or use lightning to obstruct the rocks by cutting them
Alright. Now with the technique's you've used, I want you to make a combination. Use three earth technique's that you've learned so far. Be descriptive and post the technique's. Just post an actual move like you're in a battle.
 

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Alright. Now with the technique's you've used, I want you to make a combination. Use three earth technique's that you've learned so far. Be descriptive and post the technique's. Just post an actual move like you're in a battle.
Note:Terrain Cave
Aya Starts molding Earth chakra into her stomach as she forces it upwards , she then emits a sticky stream of mud which she aims towards her enemies face covering there eyes
Doton: Dorosandan
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

Upon being blinded by the thick mud aya slams her hands on the ground forcing the rocks from above to fall upon her enemy as she quickly
Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.
as she quickly places her hand back on the ground to send stone spikes to come up stabbing her opponent as the rocks fall on them aswell
Doton: Ganchūsō
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
 

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Note:Terrain Cave
Aya Starts molding Earth chakra into her stomach as she forces it upwards , she then emits a sticky stream of mud which she aims towards her enemies face covering there eyes
Doton: Dorosandan
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

Upon being blinded by the thick mud aya slams her hands on the ground forcing the rocks from above to fall upon her enemy as she quickly
Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.
as she quickly places her hand back on the ground to send stone spikes to come up stabbing her opponent as the rocks fall on them aswell
Doton: Ganchūsō
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
Alright, let me clear something up for ya, see if this is short, strong, but yet understandable. If not, then say so please.

Upon approaching my opponent, I start with focusing chakra into my stomach which I eventually will spit out into a thick globule of mud which will distract, and block my opponents vision. Whilst my opponent is trying to counter attack the mud I previously sent; I rapidly continue with using the terrain we're on as an advantage forcing the rocks from above you to start trembling, and eventually causing them to fall upon you the moment I stomped both my hands upon the ground. Now that there are technique's coming towards you from above and the front, I finish it off with a technique that comes from underneath you, and from the back, causing earthen spikes to strike you from underneath you and behind which you won't hear nor notice because of the earth that comes falling down upon you making a annoying noise whom takes my attention; creating a combination which is un-avoidable.

Use logic's. Write down what will happen exactly if the things you create occur. Take advantage of the sounds that are being made and take advantage into your surroundings. The more details you describe the harder it is for your opponent to avoid because of the clues he have to find out behind the whole combination you just tried to perform. e.g. is the noise, the distraction etc.

Understood?
 

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Seems like the one you just learned got updated. Here's the new one;

(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A (up to 60)
Descripton: The user will do one hand seal and cause nearby earth structures (either natural occurring ones on the field (such as cave ceilings, cliffs, etc), man made (buildings, etc) or jutsu made (up to C-Rank active structures)) to collapse and fall. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock and dislodge any vulnerable or sensitive spots, causing the structure to collapse. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside. The damage depends on the size of the cavern or rock lodging above or nearby the target and not on the amount of chakra used which doesn't need to be high. A large cave with a thick ceiling can easily do the physical damage equivalent to an A-Rank technique but due to the damage not being focused or chakra fueled, its also easily defendable.

Alright, let's continue to the next one;

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal (Tiger), the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and carries them away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.

Start with performing the tiger handseal and try to shape the ground from underneath my clone over their into a river of mud. Once done, try to take him off balance by the sheer strength of the mud that carries him back and forth. Use the template and perform it.

Make's a clone.
 

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[*]Brief description of how you perform the technique; Aya begins making her handseal as she walks towards a old building , Aya then places her hand on the building sending her earth chakra through it to find a weak spot , she then finds one & sends her earth chakra through the weak spot forcing the earth & cement from the building to weaken and collapse on its self
[*]How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);good to use in NW for infultrating breaching, & such .Would be cool to finish some one with that.
[*]Limitations of the technique;uhm ,must be in a area where rocks & or buildings are at.
[*]How to counter the technique; simple block the rocks or whats falling .


My phone wont let me paste the template again but ill follow it

Aya begins with the tiger handseal , while staring at her senseis clone , She then concentrates on the earth beneath him , as she makes the dirt finer & finer , eventually adding moisture , as the mud begins forming it starts to slide down like aa river , she then adds more chakra into it making the mud a dense liquid , as it carries the clone away in a river of mud.

Good to distract the enemy & its quick & effective

The limitations of this technique are it only goes mid range from the user ? Pressuming the enemy does the same

A strong water based defence can protect the user from being ingulfed in the mud river
 

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[*]Brief description of how you perform the technique; Aya begins making her handseal as she walks towards a old building , Aya then places her hand on the building sending her earth chakra through it to find a weak spot , she then finds one & sends her earth chakra through the weak spot forcing the earth & cement from the building to weaken and collapse on its self
[*]How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);good to use in NW for infultrating breaching, & such .Would be cool to finish some one with that.
[*]Limitations of the technique;uhm ,must be in a area where rocks & or buildings are at.
[*]How to counter the technique; simple block the rocks or whats falling .


My phone wont let me paste the template again but ill follow it

Aya begins with the tiger handseal , while staring at her senseis clone , She then concentrates on the earth beneath him , as she makes the dirt finer & finer , eventually adding moisture , as the mud begins forming it starts to slide down like aa river , she then adds more chakra into it making the mud a dense liquid , as it carries the clone away in a river of mud.

Good to distract the enemy & its quick & effective

The limitations of this technique are it only goes mid range from the user ? Pressuming the enemy does the same

A strong water based defence can protect the user from being ingulfed in the mud river

Alright, good. Now I want you to perform the Ram, horse and then dragon handseal and keep focusing upon the river of mud. When you do so, then please do shape the mud into a dragon that will emit from the river, when the dragon emits, then try to let it shoot mud bullets from it. Keep in mind that you can also use this if there are other mud sources available.

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head that fires concentrated mud bullets at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent. The dragon can be created from other mud techniques as along as a mud source is available.
 

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[*]Brief description of how you perform the technique;Aya performs the Ram >Horse>Dragon handseal as she concentrates her chakra through the previous used technique , She then uses shape manipulation to form a dragons head & neck to come from the river as it rises up like a snake , Aya then adds more chakra into the Dragon forcing it to spit out Mud bullets everywhere.
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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);Uhm , Good to use to shoot down flying summonings etc.
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Limitations of the technique;Assuming that the dragon doesnt go long range but the bullets do ?
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How to counter the technique;Simply stop the dragon or destroy the mud its coming from , with A fire technique
 

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[*]Brief description of how you perform the technique;Aya performs the Ram >Horse>Dragon handseal as she concentrates her chakra through the previous used technique , She then uses shape manipulation to form a dragons head & neck to come from the river as it rises up like a snake , Aya then adds more chakra into the Dragon forcing it to spit out Mud bullets everywhere.
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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc);Uhm , Good to use to shoot down flying summonings etc.
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Limitations of the technique;Assuming that the dragon doesnt go long range but the bullets do ?
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How to counter the technique;Simply stop the dragon or destroy the mud its coming from , with A fire technique
Yes, or harden the mud with the A-Ranked earth technique, or harden the dragon itself by using superior chakra than your opponent, rendering it useless. I at-least need some more effort from you, you're kage after all... :p

(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.

Description says it all. How would you use it? Combinations? What would you use after your opponent is stuck? Give it some more effort!
 
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