[Horror] Dissolve

[Waindo]

Panic, it grips my chest so tight,
I'm trying to breath with all my might.
Body is rigid, muscles are taut,
All this fighting seems for naught.

Heart is racing fast as can be.
I want to escape, I want to flee.
What's going on I need to know,
My demons rushing to and trough.

My thoughts confused and muddled too.
I'm scared and frightened, but of who?
I close my eyes and wish with all my resolve;
To cease to be, perhaps dissolve. ​

 

[Jɑégar]

Classic! I haven't seen/read your poems since quite a time tho. Good as always. Keep it up

 

[YowYan]

This poem reminds me of a nightmare. Being stuck in a underground coffin, buried alive, barely any space to move. The epitome of claustrophobia ._. Just the mere thought of it makes my heartbeat race.

 

[Mikeuhsomething36]

Nice poem man the meaning is there and you didn't impede your message. Reminds me of the saying "the only thing to fear is fear itself" but what if fear is myself so I would be afraid of myself? The poem made me think that anyway haha

 

[Waindo]

Classic! I haven't seen/read your poems since quite a time tho. Good as always. Keep it up

Thanks man!

This poem reminds me of a nightmare. Being stuck in a underground coffin, buried alive, barely any space to move. The epitome of claustrophobia ._. Just the mere thought of it makes my heartbeat race.

Wow glad it made an impact like that. It should have, it's a horror poem afterall

Nice poem man the meaning is there and you didn't impede your message. Reminds me of the saying "the only thing to fear is fear itself" but what if fear is myself so I would be afraid of myself? The poem made me think that anyway haha

Heheh, glad you've enjoyed the read and that it got you thinking.

 

[Luciform]

nice poems <3

 

[Waindo]

nice poems <3

Thx a lot Tata!