Desire

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Play this, it makes it more emotional ^^



This is my novel entitled:
Desire
Chapter 1: Alone
It started when Neji was shopping, he noticed someone who was looking at him. That girl walked up to him Neji and asked for his name. He Neji ignored her, and went home.
After some while he was walking, he saw the girl again, and she asked for his name.
?Im Neji? he answered. She said ?I?m Sakura, nice to meet you Neji? ?You are in my way Sakura?. With a sad face Sakura let Neji pass. The reason Neji did this, was because he saw Sakura laughing and talking bad about him, in a caf?. You might think, its Nejis fault all along, but is it his fault, he wants to be alone? And not interested in relationships?

Chapter 2: Bitch
Neji was eating in a ramen shop with a friend, and Sakura came in with her friends. ?Is that the one?? Shikamaru asked. ?Yes it is?, said Neji. Sakura heard that and started talking bad about Neji again: ?Hah, he doesn?t shower, and doesn?t brush his teeth? Neji ignored that, and went home. When he got home, he went straight to bed. Started crying, because one of Sakura?s friends, Temari, was the one Neji was in love with. Knowing that it would never happen he fell a sleep

Chapter 3: Relief
At school, the word spread fast about Neji not showering and not brushing his teeth, which was ridiculous of course. He tried to talk to Temari, but she walked straight past him. Depressed, went to his classes and went straight home. When he arrived home he got a message: ?I don?t want to hurt you, I just follow Sakura.? It was from Temari. That made Neji very glad. And he had hope now

Chapter 4: Breakdown
Tomorrow is prom night. Neji wanted to ask Temari, but didn?t dare do to it. And you can gues what happens now. Sasuke was asking Temari, and Neji dropped everything he had in his hands and ran over to those two. ?Temari, I want to go-? ?To late, Neji, Sasuke asked me first? Neji, was crushed on the inside. He just went out of school (During class) and walked in the city. Then, two police officers noticed Neji. ?What are you doing here, at noon? When you are supposed be in school?? ?I have to bring some medicin to my grandma? ?Fair enough, continue, sir?. Arriving home, he sat on his bed. The entire night, crying. He was imagining Temari in a prom dress, and then the image of Sasuke came in. He was so angry he banged his fist on the wall, till it was bleeding.

Chapter 6: Everlasting Sadness
After talking to eachother the whole night, Neji?s parents decided to leave the neighbourhood because the school was over, and they found a much nicer place to live. Neji, who was very sad about this, said:?I wont leave! Ill even live on the streets! But I wont leave!? Neji?s father replied by punching Neji in the face. ?You ungrateful bastard! You are coming with us, whether you want it or not! ?Neji, shocked because of what his father did, ran outside and immediately went to Temari?s house. ?Temari, it?s terrible? ?What is? Neji? ?I am leaving tomorrow, to another city. I won?t be able to see you anymore Temari. But I love you! I want to be with you forever! But I can?t do anything about it.? ?Neji, that?s terrible news! I don?t want you to leave! You have to stay!? ?Temari, I can?t stay. My father won?t only punch me if I refuse again.? ?Punch you?! That asshole!? ?Temari, I know.? They both started crying and holding each other.

Chapter 7: Goodbye
Temari in fron of neji?s house: ?Neji!! Stay here with me!! I can?t go on without you!?.?Neji screamed back: ?Temari!!! I cant come outside! My afther locked me up in my room!? ?But I want to hold you Neji!?. Neji jumped out of the window, breaking his right arm. ?Temari, I love you!? Temari totally shocked says:?Neji!? You love me so much, you risk your life to hold me??. ?Ofcourse I will! But Temari, unless I gain the strength to overcome my dad?s im forced to go. I just cant do anything to stay?. Temari:?I don?t want you to leave? ?Me to, but I don?t have a choice.?

Nejis father came outside with the last boxes: ?Neji get in? He said. Neji kissed Temari for the last time and got in. Temari, with the saddest face walked back home, constantly looking back, until Neji was out ofsight.
Neji, cried for a week. Didn?t speak to anyone. After that, he slowly got better.
Neji, has no clue what happened to Temari.

The end

Id like to thank Ino_Yamanaka to inspire me to write this story on here
 
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it's like a part of real life... And the song make the story more sad. Maybe they have a chance in a future?
Nope,
Neji, didnt know what happened to temari, Years later..

Note:
I made this entirely myself.
Unlike some of the stories here.


IM Writing Part 2 right now
It goes from Chapter 8 until - Dont know yet
 
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