[Declined] My very first bio :D

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BASIC INFO
Name: Suki Uchiha
Nickname: Suchi
Gender: Male
Age:20
Clane: Uchiha

LOOKS
Height: '5 ''4
Hair: Shoulder length, black, and covers one eye.
Clothing: Cut off black tee, with uchiha clan symbol on
the front, and cut off pants made to look
like shorts.

PERSONALITY
Pretty calm and collected, but at times
can also be super energenic. Seeking
for love, but acts very shut off to the
world.

VILLIAGE INFO
Villiage of birth: Konaha
Villiage of Alliance: None, Rouge ninja

RANK//CHAKRA INFO
Ninja Rank: Chunin/Rouge
Speciality: Taijutsu
Elements: Fire and Water
Your Ninjutsu's: Fire ball jutsu, Fire clap jutsu, water style flash flood jutsu
and water style water choke jutsu.

BACKGROUND INFO
History: Departed from family at the age of 16, due to family abuse.
Delt with physical abuse by father and mother ignored my
crys. And dealing with that abuse I seen that any family/ organized
civilization as a upbringing of pain and greaf. So not only
leaving the family, I left my caln and my viliage to seek my
own family. I grew up on the road, as a rouge ninja, stealing
food and killing any animal that i could also. After 2 years of
being on my own i met a girl rouge name merari, she was
pretty and also very skilled. She tought me a lot, and also
opened my eyes to a lot. But as soon as i turened 20 she was
killed by a tracker ninja from her villiage, and before she died,
she asked me to take revenge on her villiage and to destroy
everyone. So now im roaming the land looking for a sensi
who will give me the skills so i can take revenge for her and
than I can go take revenge on my own.

-Declined-
 
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Re: My very first bio :D

You cant be Uchiha without 1500 posts.
You should put in more detail and make it look better also no jutsus yet unless you have been trained
Not bad for your first bio
 

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Re: My very first bio :D

It doesnt matter if it wasn't meant to be or not, you said it so your intentions were clear and people will class you as a liar, if that was me i would transform into Gluttony and eat you >=3.

unshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Those are your basic jutsu,replace them with the ones you have now.
 

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Re: My very first bio :D

You cant be Uchiha without 1500 posts.
You should put in more detail and make it look better also no jutsus yet unless you have been trained
Not bad for your first bio
Nice, but needs more. Try Pictures.
are you both serious? give him the template first and show him the rules O_O ... you guys are really shit .... take this as an offence or anything.. i dont care... help those who need help...

To the bio guy:

Read This Before Posting and VM me for info :))




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Re: My very first bio :D

Check our so you know what characters and abilities you can have or not^^
 
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