This is my first fanfic and I do not think it will be good or plan on making a chapter 2 to
this, and I am not doing my best at all, in fact it is all being written on the spot, and really I
am just typing whatever I might think is interesting for a story like this one. So here it is. I
will try to make some of it as if its a movie, like with a camera or something, and make other
"Scenes" with no camera, so you can use your imagination a little.
The year is 2050, and it is raining heavily outside, as the dark clouds cover the sky,
blocking out the sun, making everything about the city dark and eerie even. Whenever
lightning strikes, the city lights up for a couple seconds, as if the sun has finally shown itself
to the face of the earth again, but it doesnt, and it wont. The sun has not shown since 2023,
when pollution had effected the city so much, that a ninja named the grasshopper decided
that until pollution problems were fixed, he had created clouds in the sky that would block
out the sun until all pollution had come to a complete stop or he had died, or released the
jutsu, in which it hasn't and in most peoples eyes, it wont.
He lives in secrecy now, and no person has seen him since 2024, when he had been
announced- to be killed. But this story is not about that ninja. It is about the few ninja that
have to survive the "Enforcers" rules and regulations which had been stated by them in 2028.
Them being that any person that can perform jutsu, or is called a ninja, must be killed, or
arrested because they might do something similar, or worse than the grasshopper.
Of course any person could perform jutsu, but because in this time, jutsu is never needed
anymore, it has been forgotten by almost everybody. Although there are as I the narrator
have already stated, the few people that call themselves ninja.
The camera is looking at the futuristic and dark city named kedumaru high in the air. The
camera then pans down while turning itself downwards to then zoom in towards the ground
until it finally reaches the ground and focusing on a skinny boy wearing all black clothes,
being jeans, a hoodie with the hood on, and a t-shirt underneath, walking on a sidewalk in
the middle of the city. The road by the sidewalk is a one way street, and its a 5 lane street.
The boy is headed in the same direction as the cars, towards a large building. The cars would
have to turn left or right, but the 17 year old boy would not. He would go to the building
and stand next to it for a couple minutes to analyze the wall he would be climbing.
Boy: Hmm.. It seems that the wall is completely straight and will work for
my new technique. Its too bad its raining though or this would be so much easier. This is
supposably one of the tallest buildings in the city.
The building is extremely large and has blue colored walls, that is made of some sort of
Plexiglas that can most likely get hit by a hurricane and it wouldn't break. The boy then
steps a couple feet away from the building, tensing up.
Boy: Why the f*** am I doing this to myself!?
He then runs towards the building and jumping before hitting the building, but still making
contact by angling his feet towards the building. He sticks to the building wall for a couple
seconds while pulling on the strings that make his hood stay on his head, and is crouched,
about 7 feet off the ground, and begins to slide.
Boy: Uh oh... Guess I gotta start running. Crap.
The boy stands as straight as possible, and then begins to run. He continues to run for about 2
and a half hours, beginning to slow down, almost to the top.
Boy: Almost... there..
He makes it to the top, but slips on the wall before he can get on the roof of the building, and
hangs onto the edge of the roof, one arm hanging on to the edge. His hood that had been on
his head the entire time, somehow, had finally come off, and his short brown hair had
popped out from the hoodie and his blue eyes showed more color, without having a shadow
cast over them from the hoodie. His face was young, yet tired because of stressing his chakra
limits. He then closes his eyes, ready to fall to his death, but his arm is grabbed by someone,
and the boy is pulled to the roof of the building. The boy then falls into unconsciousness.
Boy: *Wakes up* What the heck just happened?
The boy is in a dark square shaped room. He is laying in a small bed about as big as he was-
about 6.1 feet tall and its 5 feet off the ground. He looks around, and to his left was just a
wall right there beside him, in front of him was mostly just books and machines, but once
spotting it, particularly the door to his right, about 15 feet away that he could easily sprint
to in 3 seconds, he was about to do just that. Until a man appeared from no-where in front of
the door.
Boy: Hey, your a ninja! But, no, wait... Who are you and why am I in this
place?
???: Who I am does not concern you. Why you are here is because I saved
you.
The older looking man says in a raspy, yet serious and low voice.
???: You tried to run up this building, but you failed. You are lucky I
saved such a weakling as yourself. I normally would not.
Boy:
I am no weakling! I would destroy you in a fight!
???: And that is why. You believe that strength lies only in your fists.
This is not true. This is why you are weak. But at least you believe you are strong.
Boy: :| *Runs to the man and does a right handed punch*
???: *Catches the punch with his left hand with ease.* Hmmm. *Throws
the boy through the door without moving his body except for his arm*
There is no contact or anything, he just flies right through the door as if there was not one
there. Steven is now back outside and its still raining.
Boy: *Falls to the ground* What the heck! There was a- *Looks at where the
square shaped room would be, but there is nothing there. The boy gets up* How! Impossible!
???: *Appears out of nowhere again, a couple feet in front of the boy*
Not impossible, yet quite the opposite. You just aren't powerful enough to see it yet. So. What
do you call yourself, boy?
Boy: My name is Steven!
???: Of what clan?
Steven: I dont know.. but that does not matter! I am going to kick your a** and then make you
eat your own throw-up caused from having to see the best jutsus ever! *Concentrates chakra*
Because steven is now out of the dark room, he can see that the man is quite old, and is
wearing a black coat, with red clouds on them. He has long black hair, and is not moving at
all.
???: Hmm.. a lightning element user. This might be entertaining.
Steven: Graaah! *Slams right hand to the ground*
(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Creating electricity across the ground towards the old man, but its bigger and faster because
of the rain.
???: Hmm.. *Jumps in the air to dodge the attack from steven, and
does-*
(Suiton: Teppōdama no Jutsu) - Water Release: Bullet Technique
Creating a growing ball of water towards steven.
Steven: Water! *Jumps to the side and avoids the water ball, which splashes
hard into the roof of the building* Dang!
The man lands on the ground.
???: You cannot beat me. I am too powerful. Admit defeat and we can
talk about getting you a place in our organization, named-
The man stops talking, staring at something in his line of sight, to the right of steven.
Steven: *Looks to right and sees a person, but cannot quite see the persons
bodily features* Who is that?
Well, I guess thats it.. so If some people like it then maybe ill do another chapter or something.
I saw on some other fanfics that other members were on other members fanfics, which is cool,
but I dont really know how that works so if someone could explain that... plz do. I would like
some members in this fanfic if its they think its good. It does not look that great to me though.
But correct me on some things I did wrong, or could do better.
Also just remember I made this up as I went so yes I know the story part of this aint that
great. :| Oh and for that water jutsu the old man did, yeah I know that gamabunta or
whatever that giant frogs name is originally did it, but this guy can too but its smaller.:|
this, and I am not doing my best at all, in fact it is all being written on the spot, and really I
am just typing whatever I might think is interesting for a story like this one. So here it is. I
will try to make some of it as if its a movie, like with a camera or something, and make other
"Scenes" with no camera, so you can use your imagination a little.
The year is 2050, and it is raining heavily outside, as the dark clouds cover the sky,
blocking out the sun, making everything about the city dark and eerie even. Whenever
lightning strikes, the city lights up for a couple seconds, as if the sun has finally shown itself
to the face of the earth again, but it doesnt, and it wont. The sun has not shown since 2023,
when pollution had effected the city so much, that a ninja named the grasshopper decided
that until pollution problems were fixed, he had created clouds in the sky that would block
out the sun until all pollution had come to a complete stop or he had died, or released the
jutsu, in which it hasn't and in most peoples eyes, it wont.
He lives in secrecy now, and no person has seen him since 2024, when he had been
announced- to be killed. But this story is not about that ninja. It is about the few ninja that
have to survive the "Enforcers" rules and regulations which had been stated by them in 2028.
Them being that any person that can perform jutsu, or is called a ninja, must be killed, or
arrested because they might do something similar, or worse than the grasshopper.
Of course any person could perform jutsu, but because in this time, jutsu is never needed
anymore, it has been forgotten by almost everybody. Although there are as I the narrator
have already stated, the few people that call themselves ninja.
The camera is looking at the futuristic and dark city named kedumaru high in the air. The
camera then pans down while turning itself downwards to then zoom in towards the ground
until it finally reaches the ground and focusing on a skinny boy wearing all black clothes,
being jeans, a hoodie with the hood on, and a t-shirt underneath, walking on a sidewalk in
the middle of the city. The road by the sidewalk is a one way street, and its a 5 lane street.
The boy is headed in the same direction as the cars, towards a large building. The cars would
have to turn left or right, but the 17 year old boy would not. He would go to the building
and stand next to it for a couple minutes to analyze the wall he would be climbing.
Boy: Hmm.. It seems that the wall is completely straight and will work for
my new technique. Its too bad its raining though or this would be so much easier. This is
supposably one of the tallest buildings in the city.
The building is extremely large and has blue colored walls, that is made of some sort of
Plexiglas that can most likely get hit by a hurricane and it wouldn't break. The boy then
steps a couple feet away from the building, tensing up.
Boy: Why the f*** am I doing this to myself!?
He then runs towards the building and jumping before hitting the building, but still making
contact by angling his feet towards the building. He sticks to the building wall for a couple
seconds while pulling on the strings that make his hood stay on his head, and is crouched,
about 7 feet off the ground, and begins to slide.
Boy: Uh oh... Guess I gotta start running. Crap.
The boy stands as straight as possible, and then begins to run. He continues to run for about 2
and a half hours, beginning to slow down, almost to the top.
Boy: Almost... there..
He makes it to the top, but slips on the wall before he can get on the roof of the building, and
hangs onto the edge of the roof, one arm hanging on to the edge. His hood that had been on
his head the entire time, somehow, had finally come off, and his short brown hair had
popped out from the hoodie and his blue eyes showed more color, without having a shadow
cast over them from the hoodie. His face was young, yet tired because of stressing his chakra
limits. He then closes his eyes, ready to fall to his death, but his arm is grabbed by someone,
and the boy is pulled to the roof of the building. The boy then falls into unconsciousness.
Boy: *Wakes up* What the heck just happened?
The boy is in a dark square shaped room. He is laying in a small bed about as big as he was-
about 6.1 feet tall and its 5 feet off the ground. He looks around, and to his left was just a
wall right there beside him, in front of him was mostly just books and machines, but once
spotting it, particularly the door to his right, about 15 feet away that he could easily sprint
to in 3 seconds, he was about to do just that. Until a man appeared from no-where in front of
the door.
Boy: Hey, your a ninja! But, no, wait... Who are you and why am I in this
place?
???: Who I am does not concern you. Why you are here is because I saved
you.
The older looking man says in a raspy, yet serious and low voice.
???: You tried to run up this building, but you failed. You are lucky I
saved such a weakling as yourself. I normally would not.
Boy:
I am no weakling! I would destroy you in a fight!???: And that is why. You believe that strength lies only in your fists.
This is not true. This is why you are weak. But at least you believe you are strong.
Boy: :| *Runs to the man and does a right handed punch*
???: *Catches the punch with his left hand with ease.* Hmmm. *Throws
the boy through the door without moving his body except for his arm*
There is no contact or anything, he just flies right through the door as if there was not one
there. Steven is now back outside and its still raining.
Boy: *Falls to the ground* What the heck! There was a- *Looks at where the
square shaped room would be, but there is nothing there. The boy gets up* How! Impossible!
???: *Appears out of nowhere again, a couple feet in front of the boy*
Not impossible, yet quite the opposite. You just aren't powerful enough to see it yet. So. What
do you call yourself, boy?
Boy: My name is Steven!
???: Of what clan?
Steven: I dont know.. but that does not matter! I am going to kick your a** and then make you
eat your own throw-up caused from having to see the best jutsus ever! *Concentrates chakra*
Because steven is now out of the dark room, he can see that the man is quite old, and is
wearing a black coat, with red clouds on them. He has long black hair, and is not moving at
all.
???: Hmm.. a lightning element user. This might be entertaining.
Steven: Graaah! *Slams right hand to the ground*
(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Creating electricity across the ground towards the old man, but its bigger and faster because
of the rain.
???: Hmm.. *Jumps in the air to dodge the attack from steven, and
does-*
(Suiton: Teppōdama no Jutsu) - Water Release: Bullet Technique
Creating a growing ball of water towards steven.
Steven: Water! *Jumps to the side and avoids the water ball, which splashes
hard into the roof of the building* Dang!
The man lands on the ground.
???: You cannot beat me. I am too powerful. Admit defeat and we can
talk about getting you a place in our organization, named-
The man stops talking, staring at something in his line of sight, to the right of steven.
Steven: *Looks to right and sees a person, but cannot quite see the persons
bodily features* Who is that?
Well, I guess thats it.. so If some people like it then maybe ill do another chapter or something.
I saw on some other fanfics that other members were on other members fanfics, which is cool,
but I dont really know how that works so if someone could explain that... plz do. I would like
some members in this fanfic if its they think its good. It does not look that great to me though.
But correct me on some things I did wrong, or could do better.
Also just remember I made this up as I went so yes I know the story part of this aint that
great. :| Oh and for that water jutsu the old man did, yeah I know that gamabunta or
whatever that giant frogs name is originally did it, but this guy can too but its smaller.:|
