Death

[Shinobi Train]

I long for your cold embrace,
Your heartless touch,
May your descent be swift,
Let me go with grace.

The end is nigh,
In my mind I wonder,
Reflecting on my sins,
Before taking my last sigh.

The cruelty of this world hath no end,
My love of sweet bliss,
What lay beyond this gate,
Maybe I can pretend…

Will I see you there?

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I don't do poetry...so don't ask me why I wrote this. -_-

 

[Never]

o.o
woah...pretty good Boss.

 

[-Carnage-]

why did you write this?...JK

its a cool "poem"

 

[YowYan]

well done. kudos

 

[Dickey Mouse]

why did you write this?...JK

its a cool "poem"

Why not write it? If your hand is shakin', I say that the world will starta shakin' less you begin usin that shaken bacon for some real talent, but would you understand? I think you could if you really try nicely and quietly...

 

[YowYan]

Why not write it? If your hand is shakin', I say that the world will starta shakin' less you begin usin that shaken bacon for some real talent, but would you understand? I think you could if you really try nicely and quietly...

lmao where have you been??

 

[King Cobra]

Great poem S.Train

Why not write it? If your hand is shakin', I say that the world will starta shakin' less you begin usin that shaken bacon for some real talent, but would you understand? I think you could if you really try nicely and quietly...

this guy I love this guy

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Cool dude.

 

[Tsuki]

*scary yamato face* Why did you write this! O__O
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It's good-ttebayo :naruto:

 

[Valen]

Is this your vision on death

Or u just randomly wrote something?

 

[Shinobi Train]

*scary yamato face* Why did you write this! O__O
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It's good-ttebayo :naruto:

I don't know...that's why I said don't ask. xd ^_^

Is this your vision on death

Or u just randomly wrote something?

Random...I did go to sleep one night with it in my head though...so I figured it should be written down.

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

this is really really really good!!!! :ice:

i like this part a lot :

I long for your cold embrace,
Your heartless touch,
May your descent be swift,
Let me go with grace.

i could relate on this one!
the irony of things we want :rofl:

:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug:

 

[Shinobi Train]

this is really really really good!!!! :ice:

i like this part a lot :

I long for your cold embrace,
Your heartless touch,
May your descent be swift,
Let me go with grace.

i could relate on this one!
the irony of things we want :rofl:

:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug:

I'm glad you liked it! ^_^ :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :glomp^^

 

[SeriouslyNO]

Excellent, i enjoyed it =)

 

[Shinobi Train]

Thanks! ^_^

 

[〜Angel Reborn〜]

Awesome dude