Death

Shinobi Train

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I long for your cold embrace,
Your heartless touch,
May your descent be swift,
Let me go with grace.

The end is nigh,
In my mind I wonder,
Reflecting on my sins,
Before taking my last sigh.

The cruelty of this world hath no end,
My love of sweet bliss,
What lay beyond this gate,
Maybe I can pretend…

Will I see you there?

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I don't do poetry...so don't ask me why I wrote this. -_-
 

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woah...pretty good Boss.
 

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well done. kudos
 

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why did you write this?...JK

its a cool "poem":D

Why not write it? If your hand is shakin', I say that the world will starta shakin' less you begin usin that shaken bacon for some real talent, but would you understand? I think you could if you really try nicely and quietly...
 

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Why not write it? If your hand is shakin', I say that the world will starta shakin' less you begin usin that shaken bacon for some real talent, but would you understand? I think you could if you really try nicely and quietly...

lmao where have you been??
 

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Great poem S.Train

Why not write it? If your hand is shakin', I say that the world will starta shakin' less you begin usin that shaken bacon for some real talent, but would you understand? I think you could if you really try nicely and quietly...

this guy I love this guy
 

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*scary yamato face* Why did you write this! O__O
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It's good-ttebayo :naruto:
 

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Is this your vision on death

Or u just randomly wrote something? :)
 

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*scary yamato face* Why did you write this! O__O
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It's good-ttebayo :naruto:

I don't know...that's why I said don't ask. :p xd ^_^

Is this your vision on death

Or u just randomly wrote something? :)

Random...I did go to sleep one night with it in my head though...so I figured it should be written down.
 

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this is really really really good!!!! :overjoy: :ice:

i like this part a lot :

I long for your cold embrace,
Your heartless touch,
May your descent be swift,
Let me go with grace.

i could relate on this one! :lmao:
the irony of things we want :rofl:

:hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp:
 

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this is really really really good!!!! :overjoy: :ice:

i like this part a lot :

I long for your cold embrace,
Your heartless touch,
May your descent be swift,
Let me go with grace.

i could relate on this one! :lmao:
the irony of things we want :rofl:

:hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp:

I'm glad you liked it! ^_^ :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :glomp^^
 
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