[Adventure] Dear Me,

Waindo

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Hey little kid where did you go!?
Out there with no jacket or boots in the snow!
Is it because you're so dumb,
Have you really been that numb?

Do you not feel your feet and your hands,
Why do you see everything as barren lands?
What is wrong with your head?
Pay more attention or you'll end up dead.

Do you not feel the ice on your face,
Or is this the feeling you want to embrace?
How come you don't shiver or your teeth chatter,
Got any clue, or it doesn't matter?

Where did you run when you vanished away?
You didn't grab anything in which to play!
You don't need nothing when you run so fast,
You really think that you can outrun your past?

Why must you fear of what's left behind,
Are you afraid of what you may find?
I can't believe you can't feel the wind on your heart!
Was life that bad for your soul to depart?

Please just stop and stare deep into my eyes,
I have to see trough life's horrible lies.
What has left your heart so dried?
"Because I can still see that kid inside!"
 

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I also want to be free like a little child.:yayy:

OT:- Last three stanzas were da bomb.:cool: just touched the heart dude. That beautiful end.:) Much lighter in than few of your previous works.:). Giving an superb optimistic advice in the end.:)

Awesome dude. This one was excellent :).
 

Waindo

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Thank you bro! :) Glad you loved it.
 

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The end got me sentimental XD
 

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This has got to be one of the best written by you. I love the ending.
 
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