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Title-Dragonball z Sayains return
Chapter 3- Zeldoks decioun
Coras: Zeldok you are my brother and are a legendary super sayain join me in the royal family your all I have for family father doesn’t exsits he was so determind and strong willed they killed him and mother now they do not exsist now what is it going to be join me or oppose me and feel my pain Nissan.
Zeldok- Nissa…..Niss….Nissan….. mom and dad they……don’t exsist…what?...why?...how?…when?….(lip bitting,fists clutching)…i….i will…. Join yooo…huh
Goku-No you are lieing i didn’t go to hell yet I am a sayain.
Coras- Oh the kais dog ….son goku or should I call you kakarot… who beytayed his own people he didn’t even know any of this was going on when he was in heaven he betrayed us and also he help the kais to defeat buu when buu was a punishment to them by the father of babidi the greatest wizard of all time he used to be a kai…..
But because he wasn’t as handsome as of the kais and he was stronger then them they got jealous of him and thought why is there a disgusting creature a kai he is nothing like a kai…when in fact he was of the same race but he just didn’t have the look i.e. the supreme kai look of beauty so they betrayed him and tossed him and his title of east supream kai they stripped him of his powers but he still possed the knowledge of creating buu and magic so that was his revenge but that back fired and it went crazy that kid buu was a mass of hatred waiting to burn everything.
That is the reality of it all… join me Nissan.
Zeldok: Ni….nis…nissa….nisaan I will join yo……
Goku: He will not join…..i haven’t a clue what is going on but you have pain and hatred and it has given you the drive to become god I do not know what is going on but I will stop you and find you your justice mark my words.
Zeldok: Son-goku…….yees….thank you….you heard what he said Nissan we will help you…find your justice in another way I promise on our lives no…on our existence.
Coras: I was afraid you would say that well then…end transmission.
Zeldok: What a day….. I finnaly find vegeta and then my brother and the sayain race and my planet returns and he has a god idiolegy what has happened.
Vegeta: I will tell you what has happened those kais are afraid of our power so they did this to us I was almost sent to hell when I sacrificed myself and tried to kill buu king yamma thought of putting me to that inner hell I even heard him say it, but then sent me to another the upper hell.
Lets go to those stupid kais kakarot and yes even you zeldok.
Zeldok: Why do you want to help me aren’t you angry.
Vegeta: hell no...you just showed me how weak I am, it is like a super sayain compared to a human I am excited to get even stronger but I need to get my tails back maybe we can ask on the way kakarot use you instant transmission I think it is going to get more intresting.
Goku: You really on top of things vegeta I am impressed…gohan you are stronger than a super sayain 3 maybe near a super sayain 4 if there is one you definitely must come…oh yh uub I’m sorry for forgetting about you I will train you when this is all over so go back to your village satans money will coever your village
Uub: Oh not a problem you must be a strong hero thank you when this is over I will be stronger I promise I will train as hard as I can.
Goku: Good to here it buu
Gohan: Finally I can find out whats happing lets go.
Goten and trunks: We are coming as well.
Zeldok: Thank you guys but it doesn’t concern you.
Goku: We are sayains of course it concerns us.
Zeldok: uh……that is true … you know son goku the stories I have heard that you defeated frezza I really wanted to meet you…. you have no idea how many beings have been saved and the effect you had on them.
Goku: Not really frezza just need his ass kicked so I did ahahha.
Everybody: Ahahahahahahaha
Vegeta: So let’s find out what is going on.
Goku: hold on…(instant transmission)
(They go to supream kais planet)
Supream kai: Goku I knew you would arrive.
Goku: What the hell is going on why are all the sayains in hell including the good ones what happended to babdis father what the hell is going on with the kais?.......uhhh…….hey why is every kai on your planet supream kai?
Supreame kai: Goku I am sorry we are preparing for war.
Other kais: they are sayains …omg he has two tails.
Supream kai: theses sayains are the savers of the universe they saved us from buu be grateful….huh….goku I am sorry elder kai capture them
Note: When supream kai is talking about how goku and his friends saved the universe from buu hhe suddenly changes heart instantly.
Elder kai :You boy… you are zeldok… the son of king xavi….
Zeldok: Yes how do you…. What the what are you…aha….
(Elder kai has done a spell which makes zeldok feel like there are chains upon him)
Goku: what are you doing elder kai?
Elder kai: he is an original sayain they are born with two tails and die with two tails if that happens it means you must go to hell no matter what they have done because of there strength. And since you are not dead but yet are still here doesn’t matter you are near a kai this is why you are meant to be in hell you are not to be near us die you vermin.
Zeldok: So because I am strong you didn’t want to be near me because know I can defeat you and yet you want me in hell you bastard.arent you meant to be my creator?
Elder kai: ofcourse not we are kais not gods fools..
Zeldok: What the hell…..
Goku: What the hell they are born with it… wait is that why me or my sons or vegete are infact are not in hell because we have not got tails at all….you son of a b....
Vegeta:Big bang attack
Gohan: what the hell…..
Goku: every one grab hold
(Goku grabs everyone and disappers behind vegeta who was launching a big bang attack from the sky and disappers and end up on earth.)
Goku: My god it is true 100% the sayains are destined to hell at birth if they die with two tails, I cant understand why……
Zeldok:They are the kais they can do what they like and can find us in a flash so we must go now some where different lets go straight to my brother and..
Vegeta: Lets join him he is of my blood and a strong opponent that I will soon fight plus I want two tails back and I want to become stronger and nobody will tell me otherwise…plus we can stop him if we are spys and if we get stronger when we find out how to get two tails.
Goku: vegeta you are right but we can’t… we will be risking our families and friends.
Gohan: well this has to do with all of creation my job can wait I have an idea …we take the earths dragonballs with us go to a distant planet and use the dragonballs to make us or the earth unnoticeable and also we will try to get stronger and build up battle ideas to stop this war.
Zeldok: That is right but lets use earth I can use this instant transmission that you must of learnt from the yadrats I have been there they told me about you…so I will make earth disappear by me placing my hand upon it and making it disappear then use the dragon and wish it unnoticeable and I will train you because this planet is sacred you have no idea.
Vegeta: Can I just ask you zeldok why was my son and kakrots sons born with one tail?
Zeldok: Your father did foolish things his second tail was removed and he had no way of getting it back so was the other crimanals with him, at the time they landed on planet tuffle they were weak until they discovered how to become apes that is , knew they wouldn’t get that tail or power again so they just made sure you guys didn’t either so you where weaker than them.
Your father and the others agreed to make the younger generation weaker than them because they didn’t want any rebellion or overthrowing so they got an idea to remove your second tail at birth by cutting it off and spraying a substance on it so it doesn’t grow and your children’s and their childrens etc will never get it but one tail
Only one child got two tails at birth and had a battle power of 10,000 a normal power slightly weaker than a normal child born with two tails on plante zeo his name was broly the legendary super sayain they wanted to kill him when they found out so the got a knife cut his tail off and stabed and threw him and his father out, I met his father when my brother died and saved me I he protected me than I ran away that’s another tale thought.
Everybody:0_0 (Speachless)
Vegeta: (Vegeta talking in his mind)
Father you ……COWARD!!!!!.... unforgivable I could of defeated frezza, no our toddlers could have if they had two tails.
I had to live with frezza and die by his hands you foolish man you have no idea what you have done to my life….but no matter I am still excited I can still get it and then become the strongest in the universe NO….. of all the universe NO!!!.....of creation….ahhhahahahah…
Vegeta:No wonder broly was so messed up and strong anyway.
So what you are saying is we cannot get it back even with training no you have to wish the dragon to get it back I think.
Goku: I will get the dragon balls now it is with dende he has them all in case someone used it for something bad or If another buu came out randomly we could counter it somehow.
(Zeldok uses instant transmission and the planet is sent to a distant universe and goku has the dragon balls and have wished earth to be unnoticeable to the kais and then he gathers them once again to gain the two tails.)
Goku:Shenron you okay I haven’t seen you in a long…
Shenron:0_0 It was literally 3 days ago…..god isn’t there anyone that doesn’t find me oh well what’s your damn wish?
Vegeta: shenron make us the sayains and half sayains in frount of you right now make us our original form i.e. bring our tails back…..
Shenron: That is a simple wish I will just destroy the antibodie that us preventing you body from growing two tails.
Wish granted,shenron is gone.
Vegeta: The where hell is my tails I just have my one tail?
Zeldok: It is very difficult to get it to sprout out and fully work that even happens to us when we are born it comes out then goes back in to hide you hidden strength when you are about 12, otherwise you would die if your body isn’t in a level to control it i.e. you have one tail now go and transform to a super sayain 3 and go beyond it. Then you will have your second tail to come out and then you must try and become super sayian which is unbelievably tuff it took me decades to become.
Vegeta: Well that is easy to become super sayain 3 seen as I am one now ahah
Zeldok: are you sure transform into a super sayain now let’s see what happens.
(Vegeta trys to transforms into a super sayain but doesn’t and just suddenly drops to the ground in agony and in pain and he reverts back.)
Vegeta: What the hell just happened?
Zeldok: Well I told you it is difficult the moment you become super sayain with a tail your body will weight 10000x your normal weight and the feeling of pain will be rapidly getting stronger in you body and it takes about a year two reach just an ultra sayain so imagine a super sayain 3?
Vegeta: Perfect this is traning in its self….ahahahah…..who said my training was easy right trunks?
Trunks: yeh dad…ahhahaha….oh man zeldok we are only on super sayian form can we fuse and become gotenks and then become super sayain 3 then with our tails …acutely we would have two tails goten get ready.
(Goten and trunks fuse and are just gotenks not super sayain)
Zeldok: fuse?.....what the hell are you talking about?
Gotenks: See look I have two tails and I feel great and freeking strong I am going to become a super sayain 3 with these tails.
Zeldok: What the hell noo don’t you will….
(Gotenks ignores zeldok and transforms into a super sayain form in such a different look his hair is firery red and his aura is pure fire and his eyes are just red and he screams but the oddest thing is his body is covered with cracks like he is craking and light is coming out from it)
Gotenks: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA........
Zeldok :He will rip half the universe with that much power coming out of him or them, when I was super sayian I could of destroyed the planet just from pure aura I had to supress it but he isn’t and It’s going to bring a lot of attention stop him now goku.
Goku: gotenks stoop you fooool.
(Zeldok dashes at gotenks and punches him out of the fusion and goten and trunks split straight out and are caught by gohan and goku they are injured too much power meant the fusion had less then 20 seconds and when it became super sayain 3 it had 5 seconds only that had no time to make it fully transform plus they were dieng.)
Zeldok: I can’t believe it that was amazing and that we are still unnoticed by the kais even with that ki overflowing out we are surely lucky.
Vegeta: foolish children they could have died.
(Zeldok grabs trunks and goten and heals them but notices they both have two tails?)
Next chapter 4- Who side are you on?
Little intro-The kais make their own broadcast using telepathy just like king kai does so they living beings can hear and understand with their ears and also see them with their eyes
Supream kai: People of the north of the west of the east and south hear my plea to war we will not let those murderous sayains get what they want because I am justice and I will take care of zeldok inhabitant of hell he is lying he just doesn’t like hell who doesn’t join me or be an enemy to the peace of creation because I am JUCTICE!!!!!
Chapter 3- Zeldoks decioun
Coras: Zeldok you are my brother and are a legendary super sayain join me in the royal family your all I have for family father doesn’t exsits he was so determind and strong willed they killed him and mother now they do not exsist now what is it going to be join me or oppose me and feel my pain Nissan.
Zeldok- Nissa…..Niss….Nissan….. mom and dad they……don’t exsist…what?...why?...how?…when?….(lip bitting,fists clutching)…i….i will…. Join yooo…huh
Goku-No you are lieing i didn’t go to hell yet I am a sayain.
Coras- Oh the kais dog ….son goku or should I call you kakarot… who beytayed his own people he didn’t even know any of this was going on when he was in heaven he betrayed us and also he help the kais to defeat buu when buu was a punishment to them by the father of babidi the greatest wizard of all time he used to be a kai…..
But because he wasn’t as handsome as of the kais and he was stronger then them they got jealous of him and thought why is there a disgusting creature a kai he is nothing like a kai…when in fact he was of the same race but he just didn’t have the look i.e. the supreme kai look of beauty so they betrayed him and tossed him and his title of east supream kai they stripped him of his powers but he still possed the knowledge of creating buu and magic so that was his revenge but that back fired and it went crazy that kid buu was a mass of hatred waiting to burn everything.
That is the reality of it all… join me Nissan.
Zeldok: Ni….nis…nissa….nisaan I will join yo……
Goku: He will not join…..i haven’t a clue what is going on but you have pain and hatred and it has given you the drive to become god I do not know what is going on but I will stop you and find you your justice mark my words.
Zeldok: Son-goku…….yees….thank you….you heard what he said Nissan we will help you…find your justice in another way I promise on our lives no…on our existence.
Coras: I was afraid you would say that well then…end transmission.
Zeldok: What a day….. I finnaly find vegeta and then my brother and the sayain race and my planet returns and he has a god idiolegy what has happened.
Vegeta: I will tell you what has happened those kais are afraid of our power so they did this to us I was almost sent to hell when I sacrificed myself and tried to kill buu king yamma thought of putting me to that inner hell I even heard him say it, but then sent me to another the upper hell.
Lets go to those stupid kais kakarot and yes even you zeldok.
Zeldok: Why do you want to help me aren’t you angry.
Vegeta: hell no...you just showed me how weak I am, it is like a super sayain compared to a human I am excited to get even stronger but I need to get my tails back maybe we can ask on the way kakarot use you instant transmission I think it is going to get more intresting.
Goku: You really on top of things vegeta I am impressed…gohan you are stronger than a super sayain 3 maybe near a super sayain 4 if there is one you definitely must come…oh yh uub I’m sorry for forgetting about you I will train you when this is all over so go back to your village satans money will coever your village
Uub: Oh not a problem you must be a strong hero thank you when this is over I will be stronger I promise I will train as hard as I can.
Goku: Good to here it buu
Gohan: Finally I can find out whats happing lets go.
Goten and trunks: We are coming as well.
Zeldok: Thank you guys but it doesn’t concern you.
Goku: We are sayains of course it concerns us.
Zeldok: uh……that is true … you know son goku the stories I have heard that you defeated frezza I really wanted to meet you…. you have no idea how many beings have been saved and the effect you had on them.
Goku: Not really frezza just need his ass kicked so I did ahahha.
Everybody: Ahahahahahahaha
Vegeta: So let’s find out what is going on.
Goku: hold on…(instant transmission)
(They go to supream kais planet)
Supream kai: Goku I knew you would arrive.
Goku: What the hell is going on why are all the sayains in hell including the good ones what happended to babdis father what the hell is going on with the kais?.......uhhh…….hey why is every kai on your planet supream kai?
Supreame kai: Goku I am sorry we are preparing for war.
Other kais: they are sayains …omg he has two tails.
Supream kai: theses sayains are the savers of the universe they saved us from buu be grateful….huh….goku I am sorry elder kai capture them
Note: When supream kai is talking about how goku and his friends saved the universe from buu hhe suddenly changes heart instantly.
Elder kai :You boy… you are zeldok… the son of king xavi….
Zeldok: Yes how do you…. What the what are you…aha….
(Elder kai has done a spell which makes zeldok feel like there are chains upon him)
Goku: what are you doing elder kai?
Elder kai: he is an original sayain they are born with two tails and die with two tails if that happens it means you must go to hell no matter what they have done because of there strength. And since you are not dead but yet are still here doesn’t matter you are near a kai this is why you are meant to be in hell you are not to be near us die you vermin.
Zeldok: So because I am strong you didn’t want to be near me because know I can defeat you and yet you want me in hell you bastard.arent you meant to be my creator?
Elder kai: ofcourse not we are kais not gods fools..
Zeldok: What the hell…..
Goku: What the hell they are born with it… wait is that why me or my sons or vegete are infact are not in hell because we have not got tails at all….you son of a b....
Vegeta:Big bang attack
Gohan: what the hell…..
Goku: every one grab hold
(Goku grabs everyone and disappers behind vegeta who was launching a big bang attack from the sky and disappers and end up on earth.)
Goku: My god it is true 100% the sayains are destined to hell at birth if they die with two tails, I cant understand why……
Zeldok:They are the kais they can do what they like and can find us in a flash so we must go now some where different lets go straight to my brother and..
Vegeta: Lets join him he is of my blood and a strong opponent that I will soon fight plus I want two tails back and I want to become stronger and nobody will tell me otherwise…plus we can stop him if we are spys and if we get stronger when we find out how to get two tails.
Goku: vegeta you are right but we can’t… we will be risking our families and friends.
Gohan: well this has to do with all of creation my job can wait I have an idea …we take the earths dragonballs with us go to a distant planet and use the dragonballs to make us or the earth unnoticeable and also we will try to get stronger and build up battle ideas to stop this war.
Zeldok: That is right but lets use earth I can use this instant transmission that you must of learnt from the yadrats I have been there they told me about you…so I will make earth disappear by me placing my hand upon it and making it disappear then use the dragon and wish it unnoticeable and I will train you because this planet is sacred you have no idea.
Vegeta: Can I just ask you zeldok why was my son and kakrots sons born with one tail?
Zeldok: Your father did foolish things his second tail was removed and he had no way of getting it back so was the other crimanals with him, at the time they landed on planet tuffle they were weak until they discovered how to become apes that is , knew they wouldn’t get that tail or power again so they just made sure you guys didn’t either so you where weaker than them.
Your father and the others agreed to make the younger generation weaker than them because they didn’t want any rebellion or overthrowing so they got an idea to remove your second tail at birth by cutting it off and spraying a substance on it so it doesn’t grow and your children’s and their childrens etc will never get it but one tail
Only one child got two tails at birth and had a battle power of 10,000 a normal power slightly weaker than a normal child born with two tails on plante zeo his name was broly the legendary super sayain they wanted to kill him when they found out so the got a knife cut his tail off and stabed and threw him and his father out, I met his father when my brother died and saved me I he protected me than I ran away that’s another tale thought.
Everybody:0_0 (Speachless)
Vegeta: (Vegeta talking in his mind)
Father you ……COWARD!!!!!.... unforgivable I could of defeated frezza, no our toddlers could have if they had two tails.
I had to live with frezza and die by his hands you foolish man you have no idea what you have done to my life….but no matter I am still excited I can still get it and then become the strongest in the universe NO….. of all the universe NO!!!.....of creation….ahhhahahahah…
Vegeta:No wonder broly was so messed up and strong anyway.
So what you are saying is we cannot get it back even with training no you have to wish the dragon to get it back I think.
Goku: I will get the dragon balls now it is with dende he has them all in case someone used it for something bad or If another buu came out randomly we could counter it somehow.
(Zeldok uses instant transmission and the planet is sent to a distant universe and goku has the dragon balls and have wished earth to be unnoticeable to the kais and then he gathers them once again to gain the two tails.)
Goku:Shenron you okay I haven’t seen you in a long…
Shenron:0_0 It was literally 3 days ago…..god isn’t there anyone that doesn’t find me oh well what’s your damn wish?
Vegeta: shenron make us the sayains and half sayains in frount of you right now make us our original form i.e. bring our tails back…..
Shenron: That is a simple wish I will just destroy the antibodie that us preventing you body from growing two tails.
Wish granted,shenron is gone.
Vegeta: The where hell is my tails I just have my one tail?
Zeldok: It is very difficult to get it to sprout out and fully work that even happens to us when we are born it comes out then goes back in to hide you hidden strength when you are about 12, otherwise you would die if your body isn’t in a level to control it i.e. you have one tail now go and transform to a super sayain 3 and go beyond it. Then you will have your second tail to come out and then you must try and become super sayian which is unbelievably tuff it took me decades to become.
Vegeta: Well that is easy to become super sayain 3 seen as I am one now ahah
Zeldok: are you sure transform into a super sayain now let’s see what happens.
(Vegeta trys to transforms into a super sayain but doesn’t and just suddenly drops to the ground in agony and in pain and he reverts back.)
Vegeta: What the hell just happened?
Zeldok: Well I told you it is difficult the moment you become super sayain with a tail your body will weight 10000x your normal weight and the feeling of pain will be rapidly getting stronger in you body and it takes about a year two reach just an ultra sayain so imagine a super sayain 3?
Vegeta: Perfect this is traning in its self….ahahahah…..who said my training was easy right trunks?
Trunks: yeh dad…ahhahaha….oh man zeldok we are only on super sayian form can we fuse and become gotenks and then become super sayain 3 then with our tails …acutely we would have two tails goten get ready.
(Goten and trunks fuse and are just gotenks not super sayain)
Zeldok: fuse?.....what the hell are you talking about?
Gotenks: See look I have two tails and I feel great and freeking strong I am going to become a super sayain 3 with these tails.
Zeldok: What the hell noo don’t you will….
(Gotenks ignores zeldok and transforms into a super sayain form in such a different look his hair is firery red and his aura is pure fire and his eyes are just red and he screams but the oddest thing is his body is covered with cracks like he is craking and light is coming out from it)
Gotenks: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA........
Zeldok :He will rip half the universe with that much power coming out of him or them, when I was super sayian I could of destroyed the planet just from pure aura I had to supress it but he isn’t and It’s going to bring a lot of attention stop him now goku.
Goku: gotenks stoop you fooool.
(Zeldok dashes at gotenks and punches him out of the fusion and goten and trunks split straight out and are caught by gohan and goku they are injured too much power meant the fusion had less then 20 seconds and when it became super sayain 3 it had 5 seconds only that had no time to make it fully transform plus they were dieng.)
Zeldok: I can’t believe it that was amazing and that we are still unnoticed by the kais even with that ki overflowing out we are surely lucky.
Vegeta: foolish children they could have died.
(Zeldok grabs trunks and goten and heals them but notices they both have two tails?)
Next chapter 4- Who side are you on?
Little intro-The kais make their own broadcast using telepathy just like king kai does so they living beings can hear and understand with their ears and also see them with their eyes
Supream kai: People of the north of the west of the east and south hear my plea to war we will not let those murderous sayains get what they want because I am justice and I will take care of zeldok inhabitant of hell he is lying he just doesn’t like hell who doesn’t join me or be an enemy to the peace of creation because I am JUCTICE!!!!!
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