Dawn of The Cliffraiders
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Oh I really like this! I find fanfics so much more enjoyable to read when they use English properly and have few to no grammatical errors, so I loved reading this! You use wonderful vocabulary, and your imagery is superb =D
As everyone said with the dialogue, you need to spread it out, but that doesn't make it any less of a great beginning to a story! I can't wait to read more =D
As everyone said with the dialogue, you need to spread it out, but that doesn't make it any less of a great beginning to a story! I can't wait to read more =D
Honestly, your imagery is amazing. I could imagine the interactions between the characters, and to be honest, I thought for a moment that you might have characterized Ethan after yourself.
And fantasy, eh? Looking forward to the epic plot twist and battles.
And fantasy, eh? Looking forward to the epic plot twist and battles.
Thanks... No problem
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I was worried no-one would like it.
It is longer don't worry.. =D
Thanks a lot
I just hope you keep enjoying it... Thanks,
I try to capture the moments and display them appropriately... Yea, it is fantasy... To be honest I didn't even think of catagory/genre when it came to me. Oh yes, I try to be as creative as possible without overdoing it; but you can expect a lot of unique things to happen. =D I really hope you enjoy the rest of the journey.. O_O
Alice in Noodleland
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Good Job ND! I honestly Enjoyed reading it.
Bravo! Okay..Dont forget to send me the link for the upcoming Chapters okay.
Bravo! Okay..Dont forget to send me the link for the upcoming Chapters okay.
Lili-Chwan
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I like your descriptions, but I'm unsure of what the story is... You began by describing something that made me thing of a dirt and sand cliff, like the Grand-Canyon, and then you started speaking of snow-suits and the Everest and digging. Is it that they found a different world underneath the Everest?
